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PART 3:
Early in the morning Angad wakes up and dress up. He takes his car and quickly goes to Anita.
Ding DOng!!!
Anita opens the doors. She looked very sleepy.
A: Ahh!! What?
Angad was very excited and had a big smile in his face.
Ang: Aren't we  going to meet Kripa today?
Anita looked at him very strangely.
Ang: Why are you looking at me like this?
Anita looked at the clock.
Anita: It s 6:00 am.
Ang: So
And Anita screamed:
Anita: Come on. YOu serious!! We were suppose to meet her at 12 pm. Are you ok mentally?
Ang: 12 pm. Oops. I made a mistake.
Angad very sadly went toward his car and Anita stopped and asked to stay with her till 12pm. 

At 12 pm:
Angad and Anita were in a restaurant waiting for Kripa. Suddently, she came. She looked extremly beautiful. Angad had his eyes open BIG.
Ang: Oh my god. WOW.
Kripa came to their table.
K; hey guys.
Very shyly, Angad said:
Ang: Hey Kripa.
He was again all red and also, Kripa too.
Suddently as planned, Anita got a call and she had to go. So, she went away and let Angad and Kripa alone.
For the first 5 minutes, they both were very shy. All they did was waiting for the orders and looked down at the table.  Then, Angad broke the ice.
Very slowly and shyly he said:
Ang: What are you doing as work?
Kripa was surprise that a discussion started between them.
K: Me... I am a doctor.
Then, again, there was a big silence between them, and then, Kripa talked.
K: And you what are doing?
Ang: Me... uhhh... I am an engineer.
Angad felt bad to lie for his love.
K; That s good.
Without knowing what he was saying, Angad said:
Ang: Do you have a boyfriend?
Kripa looked strangely, and Angad was like Oops, what did I say?
K: ..... No.... I dont have.
Angad was very happy inside of him and wanted to jump.
And very excitly, he said:
Ang: I dont have any girlfriend.
Kripa laughed.
That s when  they started to feel less shy toward each other.
After eating, they went to a walk. While walking, they had a lot of discussions like discussions like about their friends, what they like and etc.
When they reached in front of the house of Kripa, it was time to say good bye. K: I must go.
She didnt wanted to go , but she had to.
Ang: Uh... ok. Do you have any free date so that we can meet?
K: I will see. Give your phone number. I will call you when I can.
And he gave his phone number.
Sudently because of a cat, Angad falls on Kripa.
http://img.youtube.com/vi/0ZI1kYyGXG8/0.jpg
They were very close to each other and looked at each other on the eyes. They could hear each other s hearts.
Then, they realise that they have to go. So Angad, stand very slowly.
Ang: Man, that cat.
K: It s okay.
They said bye to each other and left.


When Kripa entered her house her parents were waiting for her.
They had a smile in their face.
Papa: Who is he?
K: A friend.
Papa: Only a friend?
He said that with a smile.
Kripa: Ya.
papa: What is he doing?
Kripa: Stop this papa.
Very shyly, she run to her bedroom.
Her parents were very happy cuz she finally fell in love.





Edited by yeah_cool - 10 July 2008 at 4:45pm

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Posted: 10 July 2008 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Comment plz.
Did you like the part?

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Posted: 10 July 2008 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
lmao!! ahah continue soon angad and shy...its hard to take in but i love it!!! Embarrassed Embarrassed

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Originally posted by Mimi_Rani

lmao!! ahah continue soon angad and shy...its hard to take in but i love it!!! Embarrassed Embarrassed

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Posted: 11 July 2008 at 8:58am | IP Logged
nice part and cont soon.

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Posted: 11 July 2008 at 9:11am | IP Logged
gr8 update
continue soon

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Posted: 11 July 2008 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by stars_shine*

gr8 update
continue soon

I will try to post the 4th part today.

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Posted: 11 July 2008 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
like both of your fan fics

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