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As I have read all the 12 entries, I wish to convey my comments to the writers through this… hope modz this is allowed or else do edit !
Entry1: 'Woh bheege pal'… the whole garden swing, and the feel of rain was so very well described felt as if watching it in front. Tthe best part of the story was the little twist in the last segment.. and I think it was well written. I would love the other way as well, where Karan is waiting and thinks about Shilpa and has illusions as well…lol..
Entry2: '2days of rain' I loved the title. It's well written surely and there r certain segments in the story which made me smile. The way he says "tumne kuch jyada hi jaldi boldiya" made me smile and laugh.. it ws really cute part…
Entry3: 'The rain dance' The story unfolds with each side recollecting and later combines their thoughts; the last part was very cute… It's a thoughtful story line and really wish we could read a longer part on this… Story line was superb I must say… I loved reading and it took me into their lives… end if more bits were added would make us more emotional I felt.. anyway it was really good…
Entry4:'The drop of hope' Well written and the title has a lot of likeability, as it suits to the story and fits perfectly. I wish he lived in this world for long and give her the reply when she would say I love you.. he would say, 'As if Sara I didn't knew this… I know… I am the lucky one' …nicely written…
Entry5: 'Paigaam- message' Firstly I like the song..hehhe After going through this story there is one thing I want to do is taking my camera and trying to click a rainbow picture soon.. lol
Entry6: 'Kuch lamhe pyaar key' nicely written and the way the start goes it was so beautiful and the entry of Irfan was just pretty good… the conversation and the last segment was nice and interesting surely…
Entry7: 'Runaway love' oh with the title I could feel the story, and yup the stories last segment was so nice.. the cupid crying..aww.. good work.
Entry8: 'Seperation' a different feel but surely the story last line by the author ws interesting.. and I did agree to it. Trust patience always make the love to sound and feel it is too strong and can face any strom in life. Seperation by distance not by heart…
Entry9: 'You are Special' The whole start and the radio bits was cute and nice way to bring up the storyline. The suspense thrill element in between as she enter the orphanage was done well. Nice cute story and happy ending.. fun reading it.
Entry10: 'Struggling to survive' I liked the story and felt nice reading it as well as the title was good. The last couple of lines really made me feel patriotic about my land as well. Also, feel for people who live under terror.
Entry11: 'Coming Home honey' it was such a cute story and I enjoyed reading.. Oh Angad and Kripa hehe.. I could feel the story right as it progressed and a nice cute story and finish.
Entry12: 'Rainy Love' The story was cute and so much fun fillend I loved the way he thought about her and his crush for her… it was ncie how the story unfolded and the nice segment was the last part, the lines were cute and the way she felt the secret admirer was he.. the story overall was cute and nice.
I had couple of choice for the same title of best this n that... oh it ws so so difficult to choose ... but lovely entries enjoyed reading all of them!
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