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nice part palchin.......continue sooon....

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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hp_2006

nice part palchin.......continue sooon....
 
Thank you very much...and by the way, I love your fanfic Tumse HI....
Its great.....Love ya.
 
Palchin

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PART 2

(RECAP:P: Good morning baby.....

K: Kissiko daraana ho toh aap se sikhe....(a little angry and tensed)..

P: Kya hua...?Kis ka phone tha....

K: Woh travel agent ka....hum jis fligh se jaa rahe the uss me sirf teen log jaa sakte hai....

P: WHAT???? )

P: Aasa kaise ho sakta hai?....Maine toh 4 tickets book ki thi....

K: Plane me ek handicap person ko lee jaa rahe hai....toh unko seat ki zaroorat hai....

P: Par hum hi kyu.....

K: Ab joh bhi hai....aap mom aur dad ke saath chale jaiye mai doosri flight pakad ke aati hu.....

P: Ms. Buddhu.....PAAGAL HOGAYI HO KYA(yells at her)?

K: What???(a little confused)

P: Mai.....aur tumhe.....akele aane du......NEVER(he ordered her).....

K: Oh come on bhaiya.....mai kya bacchi hu joh akele nahi aa sakti.....

P: Mere liye bacchi ho......and Y O U A R E N O T G O I N G A L O N E .....

K: Y E S I A M......

They started arguing and their yelling was heard all the way to their parent's room downstairs where Purvi and Purvish were busying packing and getting ready to leave. They heard them fighting.(Pv-Purvi)(Ph-Purvish)

Ph: Lo phir se ladne lage.....

Pv: Pata nahi kab sudhrenge.....

Ph: Chalo dekhte hai....

They both head upstairs to stop their fight. They reach Krishna's room and find their kids yelling at each other.

P: TUM AKELE NAHI JAOGI!!!!!

K: MAI JAONGI!!!!!!

Pv: Arre kya hua?....

Prem and Krishna both look at their parents. Krishna walks up to Purvish's side and Prem goes up to Purvi's side, both angry.

P: Mom isse kehiya ke meri baat maane....dekho kitni behees kar rahi hai....

K:Dad inhe kahiye ke mai abhi bacchi nahi hu....akele jaa sakti hu...

Ph: Par kaha.....baat kya hai....

P: Dad hum jis plane me jaa rahe hai, ussme sirf 3 seat khali hai.....aur yeh keh rahi hai ke hum teen chale jaye aur yeh baad me aayegi....can you imagine her going alone....

K: But why not?....

Pv: Arre issme behees ki kya baat hai....theek hi toh keh rahi hai yeh...

Ph: Arre kya theek keh rahi hai! MAI ISSE AKELE KAISE JAANE DU?

Pv: Kyu?.....

K: Dad please....mujhe aap ke saath aane me koi harz nahi hai.... par bhaiya ko court me raat ko jaa kar sab dekhna hai....aur mujhe parso....

P: Koi farak nahi padta.....

K: Mujhe farak padta hai.....Aap ka apni office dekhni hai aur woh bhi aaj hi...Try and understand...mujhe koi jadli nahi hai.

Pv: Kyu naa mai baad me aao...

Ph: Nahi mai baad me aaoga....

K&P: NO!!!!! Aap pelhe jaayenge....

K: Please bhaiya....please....

Ph: Prem...aggar yeh keh rahi hai ke yeh apna khayal rakhegi toh isse baad me aane do...

P: Par....

K: Please bhaiya.....dekho mai kissi ajnabi se baat nahi karoongi....nahi hi deer se jaongi.....aur aap ko phone karti rahungi....HAPPY?...

Prem looks at his parents and then at Krishna's innocent face. He at last gives in.

P: Fine...but you better call me ok.

K: Ok...

Purvi ad Purvish smile at each other and start geeting ready to leave. Prem hugs Krishna and then orders a ticket for the next flight which would be at 6:00 pm.( Prem and his parents are going in the 2:30 pm flight).

P: Krishna.....Next flight che(6) baje ki hai....

K: Theek hai....

Purvi calls Prem from downstairs.

Pv: Prem.........do baj gaye hai.... jaldi kar beta.

Prem was still a little sad. He wentto his room and got ready.He wore a black jacket as it was quiet cold, a white undershirt, and dark blue jeans.

Something like this....

He picked up his bags and went downstairs with Krishna following behind him. He found his Mom wearing a preety maroon sari with a magalsutra, a red bracelet, and her hair open. This is the sari.

Maroon%20Faux%20Georgette%20Saree%20with%20Blouse
 
Maroon%20Faux%20Georgette%20Saree%20with%20Blouse

His dad was wearing white blazers, looking tall and handsome.

Something like this.....

 

He walked up to them. Prem and Krishna started to put the luggage in the car. They all headed outside and stood by the car. Purvish and Purvi hugged Krishna and told her to take care and be careful. Prem lastly hugged Krishna. He still was not happy leaving his little sister alone.

P: Aapna khayal rakhna.....Aur phone karti rehna...

K: Theek hai baba...aab aap jao verna kaho ge ke meri vagese late ho gaye....

All three of them sit in the car with Prem driving. Krishna waves them good bye and then heads inside to finish her packing. After she was all done, she sits in her room and watches t.v. After watching t.v. she goes to the kitchen to make herself a coffee. She has a little snack at 5:30 and gets ready to leave after changing into this churidar.

 

Prem calls her on her cell and informs her that they have reached ShantiNiketan safely. Krishna informs him that she is leaving to go to the airport. Prem tells her that Laksh will be coming to pick her up so don't worry about coming home(SN) alone. Krishna goes and reaches the airport. She goes on board and her plane takes off. She was feeling really nervous as she was all alone but she tried to calm herself down. As everyone was boarding on, a hot guy came and sat next to Krishna making her feel very uncomfortable. (The guy's role is played by Mohit Malik)

Krishna had a feeling that he was not a nice guy. He kept staring at her and getting closer to the. When the flight took off, he acted as if he was scared(WHICH HE WASN'T) and grabbed her hand. Krishna gave hima "get off" glare and he let go of her hand.

Guy: Hi....I am Vicky.....and you gorgous?(trying to get her)

K: Please...... I am not interested.....

V: (in his mind) But I am....You are beautiful....No girl can ever resist me....I won't let you go easily......You make me want to love you, kiss you......Tum sirf meri hogi.....aur kissiki hone nahi dunga......kabhi nahi....

V: But I am really interested in you....

K: (faces him and is EXTREMELY ANGRY) Listen......I really don't care....just stay away from me ok.....verna bahot pactaoge....

She gets up and request to change seat. She get to sit next to an old lady who had scene the whole situation.

Old L: Beti....aggar woh tumhe aur tang kare toh mujhe bataa de naa.....mai usse theek kar dungi....

K: Shukriya maaji......

She sits with her the whole two hours ride and knew that Vicky had been still staring at her the whole time.

MUMBAI-SN

Laksh had met everyone(His choti ma, Purvish uncle, and Prem). The elders were all in one room while the youngsters were all in Laksh's room because being he youngest, he was pampered and had the best room. The were all sitting on his bed chatting.

R: Toh kaisa laga tumhara research office Prem?

P: Bahut accha tha Jijagi....Maine toh soocha hi nahi tha ke inta accha hoga....

Raunak notices that Arpita was feeling a little upset.

R: Kya hua Arpita?.....

Arpita comes out of the thoughts...

A: Woh....woh mai.....

P: Yeh zaroor Krishna ke baare me soch rahi hai....

S: Laksh saath(7) baj gaye hai.....Uski flight aa chuki hogi.....Tum jao usse lene....

L: Theek hai.....

He quickly get ready as he had just come from his lawyer's office after solving a case an hour ago. He gets fresh, changes his clothes, and heads off to leave. This is what he was wearing.

 

Krishna flight had just landed and everyone was boarding off. She walked through the customs however didn't have any luggage as Prem had taken her luggage with him. She walks out of the airport and goes outside to call as she wasn't getting any signal. As she walked outside, she noticed that it was really dark, cloudy, and thundering. But this wasn't what was creeping her out. It was the fact that Vicky(the guy from the plane) was still following her. She tried to stay calm but his presence made her feel really scared. Why was he going after her? She decided to just ask him. She went up to him and asked.

K: Dekho....maine kaha naa....mujhse dur raho.....(in anger).....

V: Par mai iss dil ka kya karu jo tumhare iss chehere(face) and badan(body) se lag gaya hai....I really like you....

He holds onto her hand tightly. Krishna gets really angry and pushes his hand off. Without saying anything furthur, she slaps him REALLLLLLY hard to make him understand and know that she hates pervs like him.

V:(looks at her in total anger): TUMNE MUJHE MARA.....AAB DEKHO MAI TUMHARA KYA HASHAR KARTA HU....YOU WILL PAY FOR IT.....

THAT'S ALLFOR NOW.....HOPE I GET A LOT OF COMMENTS BECAUSE THEYARE THE ONLY THING THAT INSPIRE ME TO WRITE MORE. HOPE YOU LIKE THIS PART. DO LEAVE YOUR VIEWS. SORRY GUYS BUT ONCE AGAIN DIDN' EDIT AS I AM REALLY SLEEPY. HOP TO GET AT LEAST 3 COMMENTS. LOVE YOU ALL. AND ALL LKT FANC, DO TELLOTHER LKTS FANS ABOUT ME FANFIC AS I AM NOT ABLE TO PM THEM RIGHT NO THAT I HAVE UPDATED MY PARTS. THANKS FOR READING....
 
PALCHIN


Edited by Dr.Smart - 02 August 2008 at 11:07pm

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wow yaar pallu......hatts of to you.......Clapu are damn good......i just loved the story line.....ad loving every singal character.........the personalities you have given them....is really what i would give if i was on your place......it was damn good......mindblowing.....now i really can't wait for the next part.......
 
taare specially mara matte next part intresting banavo padse......and also............jaldi cont. karje......okies......you are brilliant.....really.....
 
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I agree with pari you rock you are very very goodClap
can't wait for the next partSmileTongue
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soonTongue

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O wow!!!I luvv how u write pallu! I just read boht updates(udnno how I missed the first one…heheh.)

Omg dude the vicky dude…kya hashar krounga!!wats tht supposed to mean!!I wonder kt iska kya hashar karega!

Ooooo laksh picking kt up!!I bet she has butterflies..gosh I would!lol prem and kt fighting!!I liked tht part..it made me laff!

I luvvvved how u gave each person its personality! The characters jumped into real life for me!seriously hats off!!u r goood!

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Posted: 03 August 2008 at 9:38am | IP Logged

it was awesome

i hope laksh makes in time to save Kt
i cant for the next part cont...soon
 
by the way my name is Roshni if you want to know

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Originally posted by aishu_fan

O wow!!!I luvv how u write pallu! I just read boht updates(udnno how I missed the first one'heheh.)

Omg dude the vicky dude'kya hashar krounga!!wats tht supposed to mean!!I wonder kt iska kya hashar karega!

Ooooo laksh picking kt up!!I bet she has butterflies..gosh I would!lol prem and kt fighting!!I liked tht part..it made me laff!

I luvvvved how u gave each person its personality! The characters jumped into real life for me!seriously hats off!!u r goood!

 
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH AISHU DI......IT GOOD TO KNOW THAT YOUR DO LIKE IT SO FAR.....AND I ALSO REALLY LIKED WRITING THE KT AND PREM FIGHT....IT WAS TOO CUTE SO I THOUGHT THAT YOU ALL WOULD LIKE IT....THAT VICKY DUDE IS REALLY BAD AND MY(or should I say OUR) LAKSHU TOH USKI BAND HI BAJA DEGALOL....THE HERO COMING TO ACTION TO HELP HIS GIRLLOL......ANYWAYS THANKS FOR COMMENTING...AND BY THE WAY, WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR FANFIC???? mY FIRST ONE NEEDS A LITTLE REST AS I LIKE HOW I HAVE THE CONCEPT OF THE ONE, DON'T YOU THINK?....WELL I WILL UPDATE SOON.....HOPE YOU LIKE THE UPCOMING PART.....I WILL TRY TO MAKE IT REALLY CUTE BUT STILL ITS ONLY THEIR SECOND MEETING SO NOT TOOO JUICY.....LOLLOLLOL......THANKS ANYWAYS.....
 
YOUR EKTA#2 LOVES YOU!
 
Originally posted by Radhakrishna123

I agree with pari you rock you are very very goodClap
can't wait for the next partSmileTongue
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soonTongue
 
THANKS A LOT FOR GIVING THESE ENCOURAGING COMMENTS.....I AM REALLY HAPPY TO KNOW THAT YOU LIKED MY FANFIC....BY THE WAY, WHAT'S YOUR NAME......I AM PALCHIN, OR EVEN PALLU AS MOST OF MY FRIEND  CALL ME.......I WILL CONTINUE WITH THE NEXT PART SOON AND I AM SURE I WON'T DISSAPPOINT YOU......THANKS ONCE AGAIN FOR TAKING THE TIME TO COMMENT AND WILL TRY TO PUT UP THE NEXT PART TONIGHT IF POSSIBLE.....LOVE YOU!
 
PALCHIN
 
Originally posted by Angelic_Pari

wow yaar pallu......hatts of to you.......Clapu are damn good......i just loved the story line.....ad loving every singal character.........the personalities you have given them....is really what i would give if i was on your place......it was damn good......mindblowing.....now i really can't wait for the next part.......
 
taare specially mara matte next part intresting banavo padse......and also............jaldi cont. karje......okies......you are brilliant.....really.....
 
pari
 
PARI DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII......YEAH THANKS FOR ALL THOSE WONDERFUL COMMENTS.....BTW, KEM CHO...ANNE NAXT PART TAMAARA MATE EKDUM INTERESTING BANAAIS.....SPECIALLY FOR YOU....I KNEW THAT YOU WOULD SURELY LIKE THE PERSONALITIES THAT I HAVE GIVEN THEM AS SHE ARE VERY SWEET, CUTE, AND SIMPLE....THE WAY I LIKE IT.......HAPPY TO KNOW THAT YOU LIKE THE CHARACTERS AS WELL AS THE STORY LINE......BUT WHAT HAPPENED TO ALL YOUR FANFICS?????I LOVE THEM ALL AND YOU HAVEN'T CONTINUED ON THE....TAMNE MARA MATTE FANFIC CONTINUE KARVI PADSE....ONLY IF ITS POSSIBLE AND YOU HAVE TIME......WELL WILL TRY TO UPDATE TONIGHT....LOVE YOU DIDI......
 
PALLU
 
Originally posted by lilindiangurl13

it was awesome

i hope laksh makes in time to save Kt
i cant for the next part cont...soon
 
by the way my name is Roshni if you want to know
 
HI ROSHNI DI.....THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME THESE WONDERUFL COMMENTS......AND I WILL SURELY NOT DISAPPOINT YOU IN MAKING LAKSHU REACH IN TIME......HE IS THE HERO OF MY STORY AND HEROS ALWAYS COME IN TIME WHILE THE POLICE COME IN LATELOL.....NICE TO HAVE ANOTHER LKT FAN AS A FRIEND....YOU ALL CAN YOU ANYTHING YOU WANT AS YOU CAN SEE THAT I AM KNOWN AS PALLU, EKTA#2, AND OF COURSE PALCHIN.....THANKS ONCE AGAIN DI.....
 
PALCHIN

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