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Madhosh Dil Ki Dhadkan(LKT)-Note:Angad+Kripa Entry (Page 3)

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Thank to everyone who has commnted and sorry to prem-heer fans for not having heer in my stor but i think jennifer looks good with harsad also....just imagine heer playing sargam's role if you r a prem-heer fan.... sorry i dissappointed you....i am writing part one today as i finally have otten a break....love you all...
 
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PART 1

Mumbai- 7:00am-Virani House(Shantiniketan)

It was a bright, sunny day at the Shanti Niketan. Everyone was awake by this time. Baa and Ganga were in the mandir doing pooja. Sahil took bhagwan's ashirwad, quickly ate breakfast which his bahu, Arpita had made for him, and left to go to his office. Arpita then did her pooja around the tulsi plant with Sargam. While they were doing the pooja around the tulsi plant, Raunak came from behind them and joined them.

S: Good morning Bhaiya....

R: Good morning Ms. Chipkali....(laughs)

S: Very funny....(gets a little angry)

A: Isse kyu sataa rahe ho....jao jaa kar apne bhai ko uthao....

S: Bhabhi, Mr.Kisna ko toh jaldi uthne ke aadat hi nahi hai....

R: Arre soone do usse....bichaara subhe paach(5) baje ghar aaya tha....

A: Woh kyu...(a little tensed)...

R: Ek important case tha...bahot research karni thi isi liye....

A: Sub tumhari galti hai....kya thodi bhi break nahi de sakte the....tum bhi naa Raunak....tum jaante ho ke stress accha nahi hota....aur upar se yeh sardi ki season....aggar mere devar(brother-in law) ko kuch hu naa toh....

R: Arre theek hai meri maa...age se inta kam nahi karne dunga....HAPPY...(smiles)..

A; Yes...aab usse utha kar atti hu...saath me nasta karenge....

R: Theek hai....Mai Ritvik ko uthata hu....

S: Mai bhi atti h aap ke saat...

Arpita heads inside and goes to Laksh's room while Raunak and Sargam to to Ritvik's room.

Pune- 7:00- Shah Niwas

It was a beautiful, new day. Everyone was awake in the Shah family. Purvi was doing puja to Lord Krishna. Purvish joins her and they both do the aarti together. As they turn around after finishing the aarti, they find their handsome son,Prem, standing there all ready. Prem comes up to his dad and takes his ashirwaad and then takes his mom's ashirwaad.

P: Godd morning mom...

Purvi: Good morning beta....

Purvish: Ready beta....

P: Yes Dad....(smiles)

Purvish: Par Krishna kaha hai.....

P: Arre mai usse hi uthane jaa raha tha...pata nahi jaagi hai ke nahi?

Purvi: Yeh ladki bhi naa....

Prem takes the prasad from his mom and goes towards Krishna's room.

 

MUMBAI-SN

Arpita enter's Laksh's room. She finds his sleeping with his back facing upwards and his face uner his soft pillow and a pillow covering his body.

A: Good morning Mr. Kumbhkaran.....get up( she walks up to his bed and taps his shoulder slowly...

L: Ummmm...Soone do naa bhabhi.....sab ko meri neend aur mere soone se hi kyu problem hai?.....bhaiya inta kam karvate hai....sargam itna loud music sunti hai ke neend bhi udd jaati hai....aur aab aap....

A: Arre aggar mera bus chalta toh mai tumhe soone deeti....par aaj ke din nahi.....

L: Kyu aaj kya hai.... .........naa hi koi match hai joh dekheni hai....naa kissi ka janam din hai.....naa koi pooja hai....phir kya baat hai(still has his eyes closed and is sleeping in the same position)

A: Tum uhtho toh sahi mai bataati hu...

Laksh slowly gets up to face heras she was now sitting on the side of the bed.

L: Kya baat hai...(now wide awake)

A: Aaj raat ko Prem aur Krishna yaha aarahe hai....

L: (really excited): What...?....

A: Haan....Unn dono ko yaha par job mil gayi hai.....Mom Dad aab Mumbai aane wale hai....I am so excited.....kitne saalo baad tum unhe milonge.....

L: Haa....Choti ma aur purvish uncle se toh mai aap ki shaadi ke baad kabhi nahi dekha kyunki mai padhai(studies) ke liye America gaya tha.....

A: Woh saab aaj shaam ko aarahe hai....

L: Theek hai mai unhe airport se lekar aaounga.....

PUNE-SN

Prem wakes into Krishna's room. He looks and finds her on the phone talking to someone. Her voice seemed to be very tensed. She was all ready wearing a beatuiful but simple red churidar.

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Her hair perfectly staright and silky. She was facing the opposite side and didn't notice Prem come in. She hung up her phone. Prem tiptoed closer to her and hugged from the back which scared Krishna.

P: Good morning baby.....

K: Kissiko daraana ho toh aap se sikhe....(a little angry and tensed)..

P: Kya hua...?Kis ka phone tha....

K: Woh travel agent ka....hum jis fligh se jaa rahe the uss me sirf teen log jaa sakte hai....

P: WHAT????

 

THAT'S IT FOR THIS PART.....DO TELL ME HOW ITS GOING.....REMEMBER TO LEAVE YOU REPLY AND OPININS...HOPE YOU LIKED ME EFFORT....THANKS FOR READING AND SORRY BUT I DIDN'T EDIT!!!

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Edited by Radhakrishna123 - 19 July 2008 at 12:29pm
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nice pat pallu......gr8 job......keep it up....will be waiting for the next part..Clap
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i finally got a chance to read your new ff and i must say it is
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i cant wait until S+P and L+K meet
cant wait for the next part
cont....soon
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Character intro was great even part one...

Please continue soon Tongue

Sneha


Edited by Radha...Shyaam - 19 July 2008 at 7:28pm
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Thanks a lot Pari Di, lilindiangurl13, and Radha..Shyaam for commenting....I will try to put up the next part tonight....your comments really encourage me....thanks a lot
 
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