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Bol Na Halke Halke!Imp note pg29 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
its really cool hun..do count soon.. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
cool ff ......do continue soon!!! dont keep us waiting!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Gr8 awsome Lved it ...........Browo πŸ‘ It was very short
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Posted: 15 years ago
don't make me wait lke otherzz riter do plzz post one BIG part A day And thx for the link .........Gr8 job
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Posted: 15 years ago
thnk u dear....and i'll update the next part very soon whenever im get tym..till then keep posting ur comments.... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgal04

not a single reply 😭 ....nobody lyked it... πŸ˜•

 

awww.on't wrry i am there  so lets start fisrt luv the name of ur FF awesome update loved it got butterfly's in my stomach 😳 awww armaan sooooooo cute and funny specially that line aao mein thumhe fresh kar deta hoon ok now i have to go but cont soon again luved ur FF 

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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwww its so cute....armaan kabhi nahu sudhrega..hehehe..the way he
says mera baccha..gaal laal hogaye hain...its cho chweet...pls continue
soon.. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice part hun
it was sooo romantic yaar 😳
update soon
n do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago

okk guys thnks u all for ur comments and now im goin to update the next part.... 😊

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recap:

RI:nahi armaan main khud ho lungi fresh

AR:[doesnt listen to her and kisses ridzii on her lips....riddhima too responds and the kiss[passionate kiss] goes on for 10 mins and then they break apart]

 

suddenly somebody knocks on the door........................

 

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                                        PART-2

armaan opens the door. It's rahul,muskaan,anjali and atul.

AR:tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho???

MU:oye yaar hero ghar aaye mehmaan ka iss tarah swagat karte hai???😲

AR:😡mehmaan😡...puhplzzz.....aur waise bhi mehmaan aate hai to drawing room mein jakar beithte hai sedhe bedroom mein ghuse nahi chale aate....😑

AT:[like 1970's hero]:oye yaar naraz kyun hota hai...hum to tum dono ko bas nayi nayi shaadi ki mubarak baad dene aaye the...agar tujhe nahi accha laga to hum log chale jaate hai.....[to others]chalo doston aaj ek dost ne apni dosti tod di.......ek dost ne hume paraya bana diya

 

AR:arre champ tu bhi na kya kya bolta rehta hai!!!!

AT:to tujhe bilkl nahi bura laga ki hum yahan aayeπŸ˜›

AR:nahi bilkul nahi😈

RA:[to others]to phir hum log bahar kya kar rahe hai chalo andar chalo...ATTTAAACKK!!!!!!

 

AR:nahiiii

MU,AN,AT,RA:hhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnn

and they all go inside and call out for riddhima....riddhima cumes out of the bathroom wearing a red and green color saree with heavy embroidery...armaan is mesmerised by her beauty and is constantly looking at her.......his mouth is wide open

RA:[giggles]muh to band kar mamu😳

AR;[embarassed]

MU:oye yaar riddhima tu to badi khili khili lag rahi haiπŸ˜›

AN:haan riddhima aaj kuch jyaada hi khili khili lag rahi hoo......πŸ˜›

AT:haan riddhima...tumne kya koi plant lagaya hai apne chehre par...πŸ€“

AN:[rolls her eyes]:atul plzzz grow up.

AT:

RA:acha ab jis kaam ke liye aaye the woh kaam to kar le

AR[to himself]:haan wo kaam khatam karo aur dafa ho yahan se...poore romance ka satyanaash kar diya tum zalimon ne😑

RI:kaun sa kaam

MU:oye hero ki heroine hum yahan tum dono ko congratulate karne aaye the aur tum logo ko le jaane aaye the

RI:kahan???

AR:ab ye kya naya drama shuru kar diya in logo neπŸ€”       

MU:arre yaar woh kya hua na...aaj sanjeevani mein jyada cases nahi aaye so dr.keerthi ne hame chhuti de di..to humne socha ki hum sab chhutti tum dono ke saath spend kare

AR:accha tareeka socha chhutti bitane ka😈      

AT:accha tareeka hai na...mujhe pata tha...tujhe bahut pasand aayega😊        

AR:saalon meri khushi bardasht nahi hoti tum logo se[to himself]

MU:haan aur isiliye hum sab ne plan banaya hai waterpark jane kaπŸ˜ƒ   

RA:haan..chal chalte hai bahut maza aayega

AR:[to himself]haan haddiyon ki poori gaddi saath chalegi to maza to aayega hi..

AN:ok done guys..tum dono jaldi se taiyaar hoke neeche aa jao hum wahin wait karte hai tumhara

AN:and yaah guys sirf taiyaar hi hona kuch aur mat karne baith jana

RI:[shying profusely]:DIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!☺️    

AR:πŸ˜ƒ      

den they all go downstairs to the drawing room and armie and ridzii are left alone in the room

AR:haan jaan so where was i???😈     

RI:[knowing tht wat he is upto]dahling u were going to the washroom to freshen up

AR:uhhh uhhh...noways i was doin sumthing else

RI:nooo.....

AR:yessss[coming closer]

RI:no[goin a step back]

AR:yess[coming closer]

RI:noooo[moving a step back]

AR:comes very close to her lyk this and holds her bare waist and brings her more closer and den kisses her neck ...riddhima is melting in his arms and holds him tightly and den armaan kisses her hairs..den her forehead ..den her cheeks....hen her chin and finally her lips...it was a very passionate kiss which went on for around 15 mins and then they broke apart to breathe some air.

 

Edited by coolgal04 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey..the intro was awesome yaar πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ..plzz do continue soon and do pm me
Afreen 😳