Posted: 05 October 2008 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
gosh this forum seems dead hmm maybe this will liven it up a lil..boi i've missed our wonderful romantic scenes i've re read them and they made me smile well done all!!
so it ended on rankan staring at each other...
days later wen they got all the natasha stuff cleared outof the way
kanya was sitting on the joula
right in the corner of the nanda garden on her own
she was so lost in her thought that nothing else was heard by her..
whereas ranbir just came from hell loads of work..
he managed to get her a little gift on her way..
she'd been very depressed lately
maybe the gift would cheer her up.
he entered his home to find it empty!
he looked around...there was no one in sight..
he suspected that all were busy and so went upstairs
to his room expecting kanya to be there so he could surprise her.
but no where was she he wondered
he looked everywhere..
hardly anyone was home.. he spotted shanaya and astha but he
didnt bother asking them. they'd just give him a lecture or sumthing.
he went back down and asked the servant,
ran: ramu! kanya kahaan hain..??
ramu: umm saab malika ma'am shopping gaayi hain ho saktha
hain woh bhi saath gaayi hon.. kyunke aaj tho unne dekhai naahin diya
ran: uhr!! umm teek hain tum jao!
ranbir ran his hand through his hair..
did she haveto go now.. he hardly got any time with her since,
the day they got married, this would've been the perfect time but no!
memsaab had to go shopping..!
without further ado he went up freshened up and went to the balcony for a breather.
r: wat a beautiful day..
he looked down his eyes fell on the figure below..
after a minute or so he realised it was kanya..
r: kanya..?? yahaan.. KANYA!
but no reply,,,
he ran down as fast as his legs would take him into the garden..
he crept towards her back
he went in front and saw tear stains on kanya's fair cheeks.
his heart broke to see her like this..
r: kanya..!! he shaked her
r: kanya...meri kanya ko kya huwa kanya..teek ho naa,
kanya was starteld a little she wiped the tear that was about to fall..
K: ranbir tum..aagayeh..
r: kanya?? tum kabse yahaan..
k: woh meh..
r: tum mom ke saath naahin gaayi??
k: um mummyji neh kahaan tha paar mera maan naahin tha..
r: maan ?? kanya shopping ki maan naahin kabse?? are you okay?
kanya nots her head and looks the other way..
r: aab apne paati se naazre chuparahain hon ??
kanya looked at ranbir and tears up..
k: naazre? meh chakkar bhi tumse naazreh naahin chupa sakthi!
she looks at her handns wich were placed in his..
k: jo dil mera hain uss dil ko meh hee marna chathi thi..mere pyaar ko..
ranbir hugs her..
r: kanya please phir se yeh ??? jo meh bhool chuka hoon tum??
k: kese bhool sakthi hoon meh hee tumhaari dushmaan hoon!
maine tumme bohod dard, dukk diya hain..
ranbir lets go and backs away a little..
r: aur aab??
kanya looks at him confused
r: aab itni boli maath bano
r: kya ranbir?? kanya meh tumme apni jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar
kartha hoon! jaab tum hasti hon naa mere dil ko sakoon miltha hain
jaab tum rohthi hona yeh dil toot jaatha hain..
tum tho rohke hee iss dil ko baar baar duk deh raheen hon..
r: naahin aur kuch naahin suna chatha! tumtho meri baath manogii hii naahin! aab mujhe hee saab karna hoga!
kanya aab meri kasaam tum dubbara yeh natasha mamla ke baare baath...socho bhi tho meh mar////
kanya covers his mouth..
tears flow even faster..
k: naahin ranbir ..meh aab kaabhi naahin! im sorry ..im really sorry ..
ranbir wipes her tears away..
r: aab meri iss soni see patni ke chehre peh koi asu naahin dekhna chatha..
kanya hugs him saying i love you he says it back
and they walk back in hand in hand ..
ramu comes up to them
ramu: saab..apke liye kaana lagadu?
k: naahin mujhe bhook naahin hain
ramu: paar aap neh aaj kuch naahin kayaa..
r: ramu tum jao hum bahar lunch karenge
kanya looks at ranbir..
r: kya?? i want some time away with my wife!
r: jakar ready hoke awo! aur haan tumhaare liya ek gift hain bed pe.
and rushes upstairs
15 mins later she comes down looking angelic in white
r: hai itni khoobsurat..
k: thank you..ranbir yeh neckless bohod khoobsurat hain!
r: hain paar tumse zyada naahin..chaleh..
some one continue..
i know its not so romantic but please sumone continue:D