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Veiledbeauty IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 8:12pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Dark Love

Yay I'm first! LOLEmbarrassed

Woww that was amazzingg!!! It left me breathless LOLEmbarrassed That's not the end is it?! I hope not! LOL Cont Sooon Zuzu! I'm getting really excited! Embarrassed

LOL That's the end.. it was a one-shot.. but since I got such a lovely response, I might write Armaan's point of view as well Embarrassed

Veiledbeauty IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 8:56pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by deepali.patel

interesting plz continue soon can't wait to see what's next plz continue soon Clap

Thanks dear.. but thats the endEmbarrassed

Originally posted by ArmiandRidz4eva

wow, that was really good, shame it is only this long, u going to continue it?

Sania Embarrassed

LOLLOL uff everyones asking.. Ok peeps.. I'll write one more part on armis point of view

Originally posted by Ravishing_gal


gr8 start... or atleast i hope it is... coz u sed it has a sad ending???

awww... armi kissed her, how sweet... but how can he just leave str8 after???Confused

plz continue it soon coz itz a reli sad cliffhanger... Cry

nd btw.. i reli like ur siggy; the monkeyz reli cute...awwww Embarrassed Embarrassed



Thankss Irsaa! Will write one more part.. LOL

meow23 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 12:19am | IP Logged
dat was an amzng prt.... i was breathless after readng....njoyed readng dat prt Smile Smile
Catwoman IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Veiledbeauty

Here's the litte piece for you, Kat Embarrassed I'm not sure if it's good... It's got a sad ending. Hope you like it!


"May I?"

The stranger took the seat across me on the caf table where I was working on my new script. The January air blew violently outside, yet we did not feel its wrath. Snowflakes flew everywhere. Even though the heat was on, I felt utterly frosty in his presence.

He stared at me with his deep gray eyes. I noticed his long eyelashes every time he blinked. His pale soft skin and his scent made me go crazy. His stubble gave him a masculine look to die for. And his lips… My thoughts ran wild. I tried avoiding his gaze but his eyes did not leave me. His eyes looked quite memorable. I grew uncomfortable, trying to guess what he was thinking.

The bell rang. Another customer came in, bringing with him the icy air from outside, which made me feel colder. My limbs ached from the cold.

"You're beautiful." I looked at him in shock. "Your beautiful eyes make me want to drown in them. Your long silky hair makes me want to bury my head in them. And your skin…" He took my hand into his. "So soft and supple…" He rubbed his fingers on my palm, wiping the sweat away. I looked at, astonished. No one had called me beautiful, especially not in the way this mysterious man was. He closed my notebook and pulled his chair closer.

"And your lips…" I closed my eyes as his fingers touched my lips. I shivered. My body was as stiff as a block of ice. I felt his breath on my face as he leaned into my face. "Riddhima…" He said, in a tone which made me melt. I wondered how he knew my name, but I could not bring myself to open my eyes. I knew he would be right in front of me… "Riddhima…"

His lips touched mine, soft and tender. I forget everything around me, kissing him back gently.

"I'll see you around, Riddhima," he managed to mumble, breaking the kiss. I did not feel like opening my eyes, savoring the taste of his lips on mine. When I finally managed to open them… He was gone. I suddenly realized who he was.

"Armaan…" I said. A tear rolled down my cheek. It was him again… but she knew they would never be together. They weren't meant to be… but he always left her Breathless...

LOL i was aspecting something else and this "priceless"Clap

I guess TASK IS COMPLETE......LOLThumbs Up

Must say Armaan's a fast moved!!.... LOL....leaving girls breathless where ever he goesWink

@NJ now honey u can not say that did not caputure everything....Wink

Love KatEmbarrassed

nuts123 Goldie

Joined: 24 February 2008
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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 11:28am | IP Logged

o good, so glad ur continuing it..ClapLOL . hoping 2 read abt armi's fast nd mysterious move

pm me when u update plz

-Mansi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Wooow..dat was Amaazing..Yeeah..agree Armaan is FAST! Wink
~@$hm@~ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
This was B R I L L I A N T !

I loved it!!"Breathless" Embarrassed
Veiledbeauty IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 June 2008 at 12:19pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by hinanaziri

Hey Zuzu,

hun,u left me speechless
I didn't know this side of u
thanks Kat for bringing out the awesomely romantic side of this girl
sweetie,u have to cont,i ain't takin no for an answer
loved it truly
how breathtaking was that?????????????????
plz cont

LOL, thanks Hina EmbarrassedEmbarrassed I'll write one more part and thats it.. already got three FF's LOL Can't manage too many Embarrassed

Originally posted by spln

hello zuzu...u plan to continue that????u have to...coz i rememebr kat asking for the setting to be in london n u make no mention...except the snow which isnt london exclusive at all i can tell u as a michigan girl!!!

loved it soooo was just mesmerizing like i could see the whole scene...n like i hated the fact that i cud see its that one moment i was liek...KAT...why the hell did u ask for a short hoo.....

plz plz continue...its amazing to read something intense coming from u since u usually get that streak of humor in....but i think u did a swell continue zuzu...whenever u can...u let us know armaans side of the story!!!

Haha... yeh.. i figured that after i posted... i was like... it doesn't so snow in london Confused I definately will write armaan's side of the story... LOL love your comments! thankss..

Originally posted by sweet-niz

ooooo u left me breathless grl lool
shem its only smal n has a sad endin
bt lkin 4wrd to a lil bit mre very
interstin intro updte sooon

Aww, thankss Embarrassed will post armaan's part tmrow..

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