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L.A DEAL ( Short,excellent) Part 2 on p2 (Page 2)

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intersting .......pl. continue.......
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If I have time, I will post the second part tonight.
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Next part will be post today.
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PART 2:

That restaurant day ended with Ranbir and Angad happy and John unhappy.
THE DAY AFTER: In the place of the PTR ( the criminel group):
Everyone is angry because that was the first time that a police have stop their robbery.
Kareena: How come that these police stopped us? I just cant bilieve.
Akshay: Darling, dont take any tension. It s true that they have stop one of our robbery, but we can do another one. It s that simple.
K: Ya, but they may stop another one. They are the best police team. That time, they may arrest us.
A: If they are the best police team, then we are the best chors. We made a mistake last time and that time we wont.
Be confident.
K: They also have two of our men.
A: Dont worry. I will take them out of there soon.
K: So what do we do now?
A: I think that we should do another robbery. We need to show the world that no one can stop us. We will rob the biggest bank in the world.
K: You sure?
A: Ya. I already have a plan. I havent finish it, but i will have ready for tomorrow.
K: Arent you scare of these police?
A: Come on. I am not scare of anyone. Why are you looking scare? Be confident!!!
K: Last time, we almost got caught. That scared me a lot.
A: Dont worry. I am with you. Nothing will happen to you.
Then, Akshay hug Kareena.
K: I love you.
A: me too.
He kiss her on her cheek.

IN THE POLICE TEAM PLACE:
Ranbir and Angad are talking.
R: I am in love.
A: Me, it have been 2 years since a girl is in my life.
R: Deepika is mine.
A: shut up. She is mine. I love her since the first time I saw her. So let us live peacefully.
Then, John, Deepika and Saif enters the room.
J: Guys, we will get the meeting of an important person soon. So be ready and dont go away.
R: Who is the person?
S: You will know it in 5 min.
5 min later, Kareena comes in.

Ranbir and Angad takes their gun out.
R: What is she doing here?
S: Calm down guys. She is working for us.
A: What? You guys never told us that.
S: Ya. We waited the right time to tell you guys that.
A: Is she a police officer?
J: Before, she wasnt, but now she is.
K: Ok guys. I have something important to tell. Yeaterday, Akshay told me that he was going to rob a bank. The biggest bank in the world.
J: Do you know what is his plan?
K: No he havent told me yet. That could be a great chance to take him red handed and arrest him.
A: Why dont we just arrest him in his house?
S: Because according to the justice, he is not considered criminel. no one have caught him red handed.
K: okay guys, I need to go, Akshay is waiting for me.


END OF PART




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Edited by ai_111 - 28 June 2008 at 11:58am
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