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Hinaaaaaaaajeeeeeeeee kahan gayab ho gayi??? i m gonna leave for India tom n then i won't be able to read your update Cry try giving atleast one update before i go plz plz preety plz Embarrassed

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hey i read all ur parts they r fantastic....loved it......coont son..n plz PM me iff posible

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Hey hina di ! As i told you i am leaving IF bcz of my study. Then i have a request ,please give a lovely update supersoon. I was waiting for ur update from last three days but u have not updated till now.

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@Pari

I will update before u go ,i promise

@Lovish

sorry yaar,i've been mad at work today
i will update asap,i understand u have your studies

i'll try to cut the story short a bit
and come up wid something very soon

love u all


Edited by hinanaziri - 30 June 2008 at 9:10am

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Part Two:

The Sangeet:

The hall is decorated with pink and cream flowers
All Sanjeevani staff,whoever could make it is present
A few ladies in the corner are doing the dhol
and girls dancing

Shubhankar is seeing to the guests looking adorable and sweaty as ever

Nana is getting the DJ known of the program to follow

Anjali and Riddhima stand at the door to welcome the guests

Armaan and Atul walk through

Aaiye,aap dono ka hi intezaar tha
Badi jaldi aa gaye?
Kaise?

Riddhima gives Armaan a sarcy one with narrow eyes

Atul spellbound by the charms of the beautiful looking Anjali does not take much notice of Riddhima's sarcasm

Anjali blushes momentarily

but gets back to her annoyed look and says lightly hitting him

Atul!
Itni der kyu lagai?
Armaan ke sath rehke kal se tum bhi late ho rahe ho

Atul gives an upset look all of a sudden and tries to look away before Anjali reads his eyes

But that one moment was enough for Anjali

She gets worried and goes

Kya hua Atul?
Ab to sab thik hai na?

Riddhima gets worried too

Armaan gives them a 'let me explain' look and takes them aside

while Atul goes to meet Shubh

Armaan tell the sisters that Atul felt he was misusing his friendship with Armaan and wanted to find himself a place to stay asap

Anjali says

Armaan tum jaantey ho na Atul kitna sensitive hai
usey kisi ka ehsaan lena acha nahi lagta

Armaan replies

Par Anjali
wo to mera best...

Armaan!
shouts Atul calling him to meet Shubh

Armaans says

Aa raha hoo ruk

and continues

Anjali,
Champ mera best friend hai
aur mujhe koi problem nahi hai agar wo mere sath rahe to
infact mujhe khushi hogi
Champ mere bhai jaisa hai and do bhai ek ghar me eh saktey hai,
mujhe ye idea pehle kyunahi aya nahi pata

Anyways better late than never!

Riddhima thanks Armaan with her eyes for giving her sis the reassurance she needed badly

Armaan replies to her thank you and says

So its final now
Jab tak tumhari aur Atul ki shadi nahi ho jati
Tab tak hum bhai sath rahengey
Ok?

Thanks Armaan!
Anjali gives him a grateful look and hugs him

Atul spots them hugging and runs to them and says

Abey oye,
Meri wali ko kyu chipak raha hai?
Apni wali ke sath kar na

Meri wali kon meri wali?

Armaan pretends dumb winking at Riddhima

Anjali catches him and smiles at his naughtiness

Rehne de Armaan,teri dosti dekh li
Mujhe bataye bina jo tu Riddhima ke sath chalu hai na
mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai

Atul spills the beans

Tujhe kaise pata chala?

inquires Armaan

Pyaar kabhi chupta nahi Armaan!

Abey chal,band kar apne filmi dialouge
Bohot ho gaya

covers up Armaan

the sisters are glad the truth is out now

Armaan now asks cheekily looking Riddhima

Acha sun,tuney sasur jee ko dekha kya?

Kiske?
says Atul

Abey kya farak padta hai yaar
tere ya mere,hai to ek hi na

Oh ha,
Nahi maine dekha nahi unko
kyu tujhe koi kaam tha kya?

Ha yaar,bohot zaroori kaam hai

says Armaan indirectly referring it to Riddhima

Tujhe bhi?

asks Atul

Tujhe bhi matlab?

Armaan gets genuinely confused

Arey yaar Anjali aur mai unko aaj hamarey
rishtey ke baare me batane wale hai
Tujhe kal bataya to tha maine

Armaan tries to recollect

Nahi,mujhe kaha bataya tuney yaar?

Acha nai bataya?
Ab to pata chal gaya na tujhe
mujhe to bohot dar lag raha hai yaar
Pata nahi sasur jee kaise react karengey

Armaan feels his courage and plan falling apart
Riddhima watches him stress

Acha ye bata tujhe kya kaam tha?
asks Atul

Mujhe?

Kuch khaas nahi
Bas aise hi

Armaan changes topic

Waise good luck man!
I hope shehnai jaldi baje tere liye

Mujhe to abhi se sharam aa rahi hai yaar

says Atul blushing

Champ!
Tu ladka hai
aur ladke sharmatey nahi
tu sab sharmana warmana Anjie ke liye chod de

Aur chal Rahul ko dhoondtey hai
Ab tak Muskaan ne uski chatni banadi hogi naach naach ke
Parso se naach rahe hai dono

Haa yaar,bohot masti karti hai Muskaan,bechara Rahul!

Armaan cracks up 'coz he knows the real meaning of masti in context to Rahul and Muskaan

Nani,Padma and Shashank walk in

Nani calls Atul and Anjie to a corner to discuss her plan

while Armaan and Riddhima chat to Shashank and Padma

Padma goes

Dr.Keerti nahi ayi abhi tak?

Ayi hai ma ,lekin upar hai
mai bhi nahi mili unse abhi tak
chaliye,hum sath chaltey hai

Excuse me says Padma
and mum and daughter walk up the stairs

Armaan watches them go

and Shashank asks

So,Dr.Mallik!

Sab tayyari ho gayi?

Jee sir!
Absolutely!

Armaan winks at Riddhima who loves his reply and knows the real meaning

Armaan says to himself but meaning to tell Riddhima

Meri taraf se to poori tayyari ho gayi hai
Bas aapke maan ne ki der hai

They both exchange cute smiles

and she disappears in the crowd upstairs

Atul and Anjie look a bit disturbed after Nani's instructions

Atul gives her a
What? look

Anjie goes
No!

and leaves to check on Keerti

Shash and Nani meet Shubh and Nani asks

Dr.keerti nahi dikhayi de rahi?

Shubh blushes and says

Wo,Nani

looking at his sweaty hands says

Keerti shayad tayyar ho rahi hai

Haan bhai,time to lagega

Aur dekho

Aaj to Sanjeevani ke sare doctors fashion models lag rahe hai kyu Shashank?
Shashank smiles and says

Dr.Shubhankar ,aap to bohot lucky hai,
sanjeevani ke doctors ke sath sath,staff aur marezz bhi aapki khushi me shamil honey aye hai

and then

Nana screams

Arey koi hai dance karney wala
Mujhe sirf thodi der ki chutti mili hai

Jaldi se kuch naacha gaana ho jaye?

Oh,Nana ji,ye hi to mai bhi keh rahi thi
Sangeet hai
Shor to machna chahiye

to shuru ho jao oye!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ocNFQioWM5c&feature=r elated

Hoye hoye! comes Rahul dancing

O' Balle balle !
O balle balle.....
Je soniya de rang dekhlo
Bina dor to hai udti patang dekhlo

the boys dance like crazy inviting the girls to join them

Aaj munde hoye ayna de malang dekhlo
Bina dor to hai udti patang dekhlo

Ho kudiya kudiya!..............

and the girls comes out running to answer their call

Muskaan leads

Satsriya kaal soniyo
Sunao sanu haal soniyo

O ,zara nachke dikhao saadde naal soniyo
Dasso ji sawal soniyo
Aydi kyu chaal suniyo.....................................

they give them competition

and Padma brings Keerti out amongst the dance riot

The girls run up to recieve her

Ho ooo oooooo !

Baage wich aya karo.......

sings Shubh to welcome his bride

and all the others get Shubh and Keerti in the middle and dance around them

Lovely comes down the stairs singing

Mala wich phul tangya
umraa lang chaliya.................

Nana is embarassed for some reason and goes to get her back to her senses

all giggle at them and then 

Do the holding hands in pairs and going round in circles dance to end the song

and a stare session runs till the tune plays.........................

the audience gives the couples a huge round of applause as they come to a halt

sweet glances and lovestruck looks everywhere....................

Nani smiles to see all the love around

The girls then take Keerti to the corner with Mehndi and dhol

And Shubhankar goes with he boys to the dudes area

Sparks fly high from both ends

Nana shouts

Arey baki ka dance jo practice kiya hai wo bhi  abhi hi karlo

Goa me hum nahi dekhne ayengey

Armaan goes,aisi baat hai?

and just as he gets up to do his surprise tune

They hear

Hi!........................



....................................................

Hi everyone
I've been very bad this time ,took so long I know
and I mean to say sorry from the bottom of my heart
Hope the update was worth reading ,and i did tell you i wudn't change my song,hope u enjoyed it and there's one more scene now to the sangeet with a AR and RM dance and u proabably have guessed who said Hi,

Then its the Goa beaches to explore 
I can't say when I'll be updating,'coz I'm packing to move into my new house,I'm really excited but also sad that i wudn't be able to update as regular
Please comment on this part
and now that Nani has got her plan of fixing Shash and Paddy before anyone,do u think Armaan and Atul 's proposal will take a back seat?
Do tell me
Love u all
Take care
Hina










Edited by hinanaziri - 01 July 2008 at 3:11am

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hey hina
awesome part yaarrr  Clap
dont say its bad at all... especially wen its written by u WinkWink
luvd it from the bottom of my heart Hug
i really liked the part where armaan says to atul.. tere sasur ji aur mere sasur ji to same hain na LOL
it was super cooool...as always EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
n awesome song selection..really luv this song Big smileBig smile
achaa... ab jaldi se update karna okkk...
dont hang us on cliff for soo long WinkWink
luv yaa
tiya Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 6:57pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by freezinme

hey hina
awesome part yaarrr  Clap
dont say its bad at all... especially wen its written by u WinkWink
luvd it from the bottom of my heart Hug
i really liked the part where armaan says to atul.. tere sasur ji aur mere sasur ji to same hain na LOL
it was super cooool...as always EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
n awesome song selection..really luv this song Big smileBig smile
achaa... ab jaldi se update karna okkk...
dont hang us on cliff for soo long WinkWink
luv yaa
tiya Embarrassed

Hey Tiya

Phew!

Thanks for replying hun,I was really worried that i've put everyone off with the delay,now i can sleep peacefully

and I haven't forgotten about your ff,i've got it printed i'll read it on the way to work tomorrowLOL

thanks gain for replying and liking

love

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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
awesome welcome back:D...

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