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Kaise hai aap?
greet Riddhima and Armaan
Nana a little confused to see them there says
Kya hua tum dono subah subah meri sharan me kyu aye ho?
Kyuki aap jaise talented director ki zaroorat hai humey
Aey hero,maska lagana kam kar aur bol kya baat hai?
ok,coming straight to the point
Aap ki tabiyet abhi kaisi hai?
Nana gives a durrghhh look and goes
Ye tera point hai?
abey tujhe kya lagta hai,mai hospital me picnic karney ko aya hoo,tabiyet kharaab thi isliye to aya
and pulls Armaaan to whispers in in his ear
tu ye bulbul ke sath rehke na ek dam hero se zero ho gaya hai
kaise bekar jokes maarta hai
Armaan smiles while Riddhima gives him a what? look
He goes cheekily
Shhh! sirf mujhe pata hai ki mai isey kaise jhel raha hoo
then says out loud
Ab pyar kiya hai to nibhana to padega
Riddhima blushes,widout knowing they were actually picking on her
she then says
Armaan,tum kon si baatein leke baith gaye?
Chalo na,sab wait kar rahe hongey
Oh ha sorry
Nana chaliye hamare saath and he drags him out his bed
Arey kidhar ye to bol
Armamn explains while walking out
Aapko to pata hi hoga ki Dr.Shubhankar ki sagai hai 2 din baad,actually sagai agle hafte Goa me hai par ek chota sa sangeet function hai jo Mumbai me hai unke liye jo Goa nahi aa saktey
So,hamey aap jaise directior ki madad chahiye
Aur Shubhankar sir ne khud aapko bulaya hai Nana
Us chachundar ne mujhe bulaya ?
Pata nahi kiski zindagi barbaad karne wala hai
Meri mallika ka majnu banne chala tha sala
Pasine ki dukaan!
Riddhima and Armaan crack up at the perfect description of Shubhankar
and they finally get to the rehearsal room
Ayiye Nana,hum aapka hi wait kar rahe they
Shubhankar gives him a warm welcome,unknown of the fact of Nana's hatred for him
Ha ha ab zyada mat chada mere ko
Chal bata kya karna hai?
Nana offers his expertise
Lovely is delighted to see the bali ka bakra and runs to Nana
Oji,Nanaji aap mere partner banengey ji?
Yaha par sab ki jodiya hai ,sirf mai akeli hoo
Nana remember her dancing from the last night and gets worried and says
aur mai hi kyu? mai to director hoo,tu akeli naach na
Waise bhi tu akeli 4 ke barabar hai
he mumbles the last line in fear
To kya hua ji,director bhi to actor ban sakta hai
aap dono karna ok
Mia ek acha sa gaana choose karti hoo hamarey liye
Nana finds no way out and waits for her to decide the song
Atul and Anjie practice in the corner in full swing
whereas Muskaan and Rahul are now tired
Shubha and Keerti stand alone exchanging 'can't wait' looks
Nana gets annoyed with Shubh still trying it with Keerti
He just can't stand the sight of them flirting and tries to distract them and says
Dr.Keerti,aap kiske saath nachne wali hai?
Keerti smiles and says
Lekin wo to apni mangetar ke sath nachega
Tum kyu uske sath nachogi?
Armaan interrupts to give him the big jhatka
Nana,Dr.Keerti hi to unki fiance hai
Sagai Dr.Keeti aur Dr.Shubhankar ki hai bataya to tha maine aapko
and the sad suicidal music plays
Nana's dreams are shattered and his aching heart cries out loud and oly he knows why
He feels betrayed and sings sadly
Mera dil jis dil pe fida hai
Ek bewafa hai,ek bewafa hai..................
Oji Nana ji ye to bada sad wala song hai
Mai to koi bhangra shangra soch rahi thi
Aap chaho to mai marathi gaane par bhi naach loongi
par ye wala gana itna dukhi hai,ispar dance kaise hoga?
Nana sighs as he watches Keerti happily chatting to Shubh
and decides to give up on her totally ,wipes off his imaginary tears
and shouts for attention
Aye sab log idhar ao re
He annonces the plan
Ab mai yaha ka director hoo
to meri baat sabko sunni hogi
Koi couple dance nai hoga
Tum log chaho to Goa me jodi wala dance kar lena
par yaha to sab ek sath nachengey ,ek hi gaana par
aur gaana mai decide karoonga
Oji Nana ji,mai ek suggestion doo?
Lovely speaks out
Nana thinks she needs to be listened to this time
Balle Balle karey?..............................................
Hey all my lovely people
Hope you all liked this part
I know it was mainly NL,but i felt we needed a laugh to start with
The next update will be the sangeet and I'm so cross about the song
I had it all planned and i found out that even DMG people ar dancing on the same tune,it was sucha coincidence that the ff and the sangeet there happen to be at the same time,but I'm not gonna change it now
So Balle balle it is in the nxt update
See u all very soon,I'll try not to be alte with the next once,since the weekend's here,I'm so happy
and Armaan's proposal in the sagai will be one to watch,don't get too excited there's lots more fun before that in Goa,the beaches are calling the doctor Lol!
Lots of love
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wowwww gr8 part yaar ,fantastic,mindblowing shubhankar paseene ki dukaanvery funny plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon ,can't wait anymore byeeee ..love you...take care...@yesha..
Joined: 27 May 2008
areee yeh coincidence nahi hai hina ,mai batati hu maine kaha tha dmg wale tumhe story writer ke liye le jayenge lekin wo to tumhe leja nahi sakte kyunki hum tumhe jane nahi denge kyunki agar aap chali gayi to hume itne ache ache update koun dega isliye ab wo tumhara ff pad kar tumhare ideas chori kar rahe haisachi , be aware hina bach ke rehna..love u ..@yesha..
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