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ayesha sehgal

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hey congrates 4 new threadPartyplzzzzzzzzzzzz ab jaldi se is mansoon month mai apne ache ache updates ki baarish kardo i am waiting 4 update baarishLOL...love you...@yesha***Smile***

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congo 4 ur new thread di............ Clap ab plz jaldi se update karo......cnt wait 4 da nxt prt

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Part One:

Nana!

Kaise hai aap?

greet Riddhima and Armaan

Nana a little confused to see them there says

Kya hua tum dono subah subah meri sharan me kyu aye ho?

Kyuki aap jaise talented director ki zaroorat hai humey

Aey hero,maska lagana kam kar aur bol kya baat hai?

ok,coming straight to the point

Aap ki tabiyet abhi kaisi hai?

asks Armaan

Nana gives a durrghhh look and goes

Ye tera point hai?

abey tujhe kya lagta hai,mai hospital me picnic karney ko aya hoo,tabiyet kharaab thi isliye to aya

and pulls Armaaan to whispers in in his  ear

tu ye bulbul ke sath rehke na ek dam hero se zero ho gaya hai

kaise bekar jokes maarta hai

Armaan smiles while Riddhima gives him a what? look

He goes cheekily

Shhh! sirf mujhe pata hai ki mai isey kaise jhel raha hoo

then says out loud

Ab pyar kiya hai to nibhana to padega

Riddhima blushes,widout knowing they were actually picking on her

she then  says

Armaan,tum kon si baatein leke baith gaye?

Chalo na,sab wait kar rahe hongey

Oh ha sorry

Nana chaliye hamare saath and he drags him out his bed

Arey kidhar ye to bol

Armamn explains while walking out

Aapko to pata hi hoga ki  Dr.Shubhankar ki sagai hai 2 din baad,actually sagai agle hafte Goa me hai par ek chota sa sangeet function hai jo Mumbai me  hai unke liye jo Goa nahi aa saktey

So,hamey aap jaise directior ki madad chahiye

Aur Shubhankar sir ne khud aapko bulaya hai Nana

adds Riddhima

Kya ?

Us chachundar ne mujhe bulaya ?

Pata nahi  kiski zindagi barbaad karne wala hai

Meri mallika ka majnu banne chala tha sala

Pasine ki dukaan!

Riddhima and Armaan crack up at the perfect description of Shubhankar

and they finally get to the rehearsal room

Ayiye Nana,hum aapka hi wait kar rahe they

Shubhankar gives him a warm welcome,unknown of the fact of Nana's hatred for him

Ha ha ab zyada mat chada mere ko

Chal bata kya karna hai?

Nana offers his expertise

Lovely is delighted to see the bali ka bakra and runs to Nana 

Oji,Nanaji aap mere partner banengey ji?

Yaha par sab ki jodiya hai ,sirf mai akeli hoo

she requests

Nana remember her dancing from the last night and gets worried and says

Nai,mai kaise?

aur mai  hi kyu? mai to director hoo,tu akeli naach na

Waise bhi tu akeli 4 ke barabar hai

he mumbles the last line in fear

To kya hua ji,director bhi to actor ban sakta hai

aap dono karna ok

Mia ek acha sa gaana choose karti hoo hamarey liye

Nana finds no way out and waits for her to decide the song

Atul and Anjie practice in the corner in full swing

whereas Muskaan and Rahul are now tired

Shubha and Keerti stand alone exchanging 'can't wait' looks

Nana gets annoyed with Shubh still trying it with Keerti

He just can't stand the sight of them flirting and tries to distract them and says

Dr.Keerti,aap kiske saath nachne wali hai?

Keerti smiles and says

Shubhankar...

Lekin wo to apni mangetar ke sath nachega

Tum kyu uske sath nachogi?

Armaan interrupts to give him the big jhatka

Nana,Dr.Keerti hi to unki  fiance hai

Sagai Dr.Keeti aur Dr.Shubhankar ki hai bataya to tha maine aapko

and the sad suicidal music plays

Nana's  dreams are shattered and his aching heart cries out loud and oly he knows why

He feels betrayed and sings sadly

Mera dil jis dil pe fida hai

Ek bewafa hai,ek bewafa hai..................

Oji Nana ji ye to bada sad wala song hai

Mai to koi bhangra shangra soch rahi thi

Aap chaho to mai marathi gaane par bhi naach loongi

par ye wala gana itna dukhi hai,ispar dance kaise hoga?

Nana sighs as he watches Keerti happily chatting to Shubh

and decides to give up on her totally ,wipes off his imaginary tears

and shouts for attention

Aye sab log idhar ao re

everyone gathers

He annonces the plan

Ab mai yaha ka director hoo

to meri baat sabko sunni hogi

Koi couple dance nai hoga

Tum log chaho to Goa me jodi wala dance kar lena

par yaha to sab ek sath nachengey ,ek hi gaana par

samjhe

aur gaana mai decide karoonga

Oji Nana ji,mai ek suggestion doo?

Lovely speaks out

Acha bol!

Nana thinks she needs to be listened to this time

Balle Balle karey?..............................................

 

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Hey all my lovely people

Hope you all liked this part

I know it was mainly  NL,but i felt we needed a laugh to start with

The next update will be the sangeet and I'm so cross about the song

I had it all planned and i found out that even DMG people ar dancing on the same tune,it was sucha  coincidence that the ff and the sangeet there happen to be at the same time,but I'm not gonna change it now

So Balle balle it is in the nxt update

See u all very soon,I'll try not to be alte with the next once,since the weekend's here,I'm so happy

and Armaan's proposal in the sagai will be one to watch,don't get too excited there's lots more fun before that in Goa,the beaches are calling the doctor Lol!

Lots of love

Take care

Hina

 

 

 



Edited by hinanaziri - 27 June 2008 at 5:40am

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 6:57am | IP Logged
wow hina

firstly congo for new thread( dunnoy which one is it as i have lost my count LOL ) but congo

n yesh gr8 part... nana is funny LOL .. n armi n nana picking on poor ridz Wink not done not done Tongue

ayesha sehgal

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 7:26am | IP Logged

wowwww gr8 part yaar ,fantastic,mindblowing Clapshubhankar paseene ki dukaanLOLLOLLOLvery funny plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon ,can't wait anymore byeeee ..love you...take care...@yesha..

ayesha sehgal

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 7:33am | IP Logged

areee yeh coincidence nahi hai Embarrassedhina ,mai batati hu maine kaha tha dmg wale tumhe story writer ke liye le jayenge lekin wo to tumhe leja nahi sakte kyunki hum tumhe jane nahi denge kyunki agar aap chali gayi to hume itne ache ache update koun dega Smileisliye ab wo tumhara ff pad kar tumhare ideas chori kar rahe haiLOLsachi , be aware hina bach ke rehna..love u ..@yesha..

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 8:51am | IP Logged
hey di

CONNGO ON DA NEW THREAD DI

once again grt prt

cant wait for da next one

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Woww hina di. Really a lovely update with lovely and nana. Ohhh! Nana is so sad but i think lovely is there for him. And waiting for armi-ridz public confession. I hope this will happen soon bcz i am on this forum only for next 10 days. I dont think ,i will able to come here again bcz of my study. Now please continue soon

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