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One-shot (Pinky requested by sabbz)

 

10 years ago (1998)

 

Prem- Pinky!! Arye Pinky kaha ho tum?

 

Heer:- arye arihoon baba! Aur mujhe Pinky muth bool. Mein ab paach saal hochuki hoon. Koi bacha nehin hoon mein.

 

Prem- lekin tum hamesha meri pinky thi. Aur tum hamesha rahega.

 

Heer- ab tu ghar gake aram kar. Teri maa bulari hai.

 

Prem- Ok. Bye Pinky.

 

6 year old Prem leaves Heer's house and heads to his own. Heer watches her sweetheart leave and smiles. He looked adorable with his slightly large polo shirt and cargo pants. Heer was forever his and he was forever hers.

 

Present day (2008)

 

10 years have past since Heer's fifth birthday. A lot has changed. Both Heer and prem have grown up quite a lot.

Freshman year in high school. Prem is now every girl's dream and the school's sports star. Girls would kill for the chance to be with him.

 

Heer. Her name describes her well. Just like a diamond she has no down sides or bad qualities. So why is she always on her own? The centre of torment and verbal abuse.

 

Vedika- Heer. The dance is Friday. Have you got a date?

 

Heer- Vedika. I'm not going.

 

Vedika- Why?

 

Heer- I just don't feel like it. (Turns her head towards Prem and his latest girlfriend Adrianne)

 

Vedika- (puts her hand on Heer's shoulders.) he remembers you Heer. You're his friend.

 

Heer- I wish. (Slams her locker shut and walks away)

 

That night after class

 

Heer is at her locker putting books into her bag. Amman walks up behind her and grabs her by the waist.

 

Amman- hello gorgeous (kisses her neck repeatedly).

 

Heer- Amman get off. (pushes Amman away)

 

Amman pushes Heer against the lockers and tries to give her a quickie (hicci). Suddenly someone punches him right on the nose and it starts to bleed.

 

 

 

Person- get lost you jerk (Amman runs away)

 

The person kneels down in front of Heer's locker where Heer is crying and covers the bite with her hand. The person lifts her up wedding style and takes her to the medical room. The person gets a cotton bud and wets it with antiseptic. He lifts Heer's hand away from the bite and sees that it's bleeding. The person stands up in a wave of rage to search for Amman but Heer grabs his hand and pulls him down.

 

Heer- leave it prem just leave it.

 

Prem's teary yet angry face is shown.

 

Prem: can you forgive him?

 

Heer- yes.

 

Prem- can you forgive me?

 

Tears stream from Prem's eyes. Heer cups his face into her hands and prem holds them.

 

Heer- why should I forgive you? What did you do?

 

Prem- I never thought about your feelings.

 

Heer realises what Prem is trying to say. She can't stop crying.

 

Prem- you see. Even you are crying.

 

She cries harder. Prem removes the hair off her face and wipes her tears.

 

Heer- I thought you forgot about me.

 

Prem hugs her tightly.

 

Prem- never Pinky never.

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Chocolate

 (Amar and Divya)

 

Divya- Amar give it!

 

 Amar- one bite please.

 

Divya- no now give it!

 

Amar- c'mon Divya one bite.

 

Divya- Amar you're diabetic!

 

Amar- too bad them (he shoves a mega size Kit-Kat bar into his mouth)

 

Divya- AMAR! This better be the only thing you had today.

 

Amar- I can't believe my tutor is trying to starve me to death.

 

Divya playfully punches Amar.

 

Rajeev- What's going on?

 

Divya- Rajeev he ate a whole mega size Kit-Kat bar.

 

Rajeev- What! Amar!

Amar- I haven't had any sugars today. Or carbs. And I'm having steak for dinner.

 

Rajeev- good. Please leave Divya alone.

 

Amar- ok. Can you get her to come here?

 

Rajeev grabs Divya's wrist and pulls her over.

 

Rajeev- I believe this is yours.

 

Amar- you believed correctly.

 

Rajeev hands Divya over to Amar and leaves

 

Amar- hey I got a calorie free way for you to taste the chocolate.

 

Divya- how?

 

Amar- kiss me.

 

Divya- no way.

 

Amar- yes way.

 

Divya pulls out of Amar's grasp and runs away. Amar chases her. They chase each other round the back yard until Amar catches her by grabbing her waist and pulling her towards him. Divya hits Amar's chest and laughs. Amar looks down at Divya and smiles lovingly.

 

Amar's thoughts- wow she is really down to earth and fun loving. She is so much more than a pretty face. She may be the one.

 

Whilst Divya has her head on Amar's chest she is thinking to herself.

 

Divya's thoughts- he is so sweet and funny. I don't care what the high school rule is, I'm in love with a jock and that's a done deal.

 

Rajeev- Divya your mom's here!

 

Divya- coming!

 

She starts to leave but Amar pulls her back. He places one hand on her waist and one on her cheek. Her pulls her face forward and kisses her head.

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i read both the oneshots on AR and i simply loved their POVs....waiting for more Big smile
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hey priya
both were simply beautiful pieces of writing n i simply loved them

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