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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=965603 (pt1)

 

 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=966111 (pt2)

 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=967273&T PN=2 (pt3)

 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=967977 (pt4)

 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=969521 (pt5)

 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=975208&T PN=1&#16962815  (pt6)

 

PART 7

1st of all guys…m vry disappointed…. evrytym my post goes hot…with more that 400 views but only 20 –24 replies…I no many of u reply n encourage me...But still it hurts wen evry tym I find soo less replies…soo kindly request all those huuu read my FF must reply……….plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz….Cry

 

 

so here the story goes………armaan fell into sleep n ridhz hands were on armaans head….she was continusly luking at him n smiling n kissed his cheeks……suddenly armaan's pager start ringing…..armaan was sleeping…ridhz says to armaan..armaan uthoo…armaan tumhara pager baj raha hai…armaan…armaan wakes …..he rubs his eyes…..n c the message….he got an emergency…he makes a cute but sad face n says to ridhz mujhe jana hoga….emergency haii..ridhz says its ok armaaan…..koi baat nahi..mujhe bhi jana chahiye..bahut raat ho rahi hai…..

padma n shash were thinking bout AR…..they were toking bout there future..mean while anji comes n interups…aap ko nahi lagta hai ki hume ridhz ki shaadi ke bare mai sochna chahiye,…peddy says..anjili beta hum usi ke bare mai baat kar rahe…shash says…hmm ab hume sabkush finalise kar lena chahiye n kal hi mai armaan se baat karungaaa………..peddy n anji vry happy

 

NEXT DAY AT SANJEEVINI……

 

Announcement..—dr armaan turant (immedieatly) dr shashank ko report kar…

 

Evry 1 get lil tensed….muskaan says..oyee dr shashank ne kyu bulaya…..

A-    pata nahi wo to waha ja ke hi pata chalega…

(he reaches to shash)

shash—mujhe tumse bahut zaroori baat karni hai armaan beta

a-      ???????

shash-woo…maine or padma ne decied kiya hai..ki hum ridhhima or tumhari shaadi…isi month karade…??

a-???(he is surprised but happpyyy….EmbarrassedTongue)

shash..um  that okk wid u?>

a-      jee mujhe koi prob nahi hai

shash to fir hum kal hi tumhare mom dad se baat kar lenge …..

armaan hugs him …n says thanku sir….

Shash says..sir nahi ab to papa…

Armaan says ohh yea papa……..

Ol are over wid there duties(in cafe)….armaan comes n sits….

Muskaan ask oyee hero kya hua..shashank sir ne kuch kaha..(anji new wat must hav happen soo she was lil smiling but hide it)

Ridhz was tensed..says ..haa armaan kyua hua papa ne kuch kaha kya….

Armaan says…arey kuch hua baba don't get tensed..unhone kaha ki…kiii

Mu- ki kyaa…..???

Ar—ki meri ridhz ki shaadi is month hone wali hai(stands n shoutsDancing)

Evry 1 surprised n happy for them……

Ridhz is blushing/……

Mu- yaar ab to bada maza ayegaana…bhai mai to ladki walo ke side huuu……atul says or mai ladke walo kii…..

Armaan n ridhz luks at each other n smiles…..

 

Interns hav done there duties n went home but cz off emergency armaan ridhz says …..

There duties are also over n r in locker room…..

 

Armaan is standing wid ridhima…n says..ek baat puchuu..

r- hai pucho na..

ar-wo ab to humari shaadi hone wali hai na..-

r- hha too?

Ar- too..mujhe ek kiss dona…plzzz….

r- armaans…!!!

Ar—plzzz plzzplzz

r- noo…n runs…..thru the corridors..

she reaches to the teraace..

armaan behnd her….

Armaan holds her…from waist,…..

Ridhz is blushing…n lil nervous

Armaan moves her duptaa lil..ridhz closes her eyes(slowly)….her heart beats goes fast….

Armaan come closer ..n kiss her on neck…ridhz meltz……but she stps nnn blushingly runs…

 

EVRY THING IS FINALISED ARMAAN N RIDHZ SHAADI AFTER 2 DAYS>>>>

The preaptions are.. zhoor shoor seee…………..

(on the day of shaadi..)..

barat on the door armaan luking stunning in sherwani…

ridhz runs to window n see armaan…n says I love u armaan…

 

the shaadi is now finally over………

 

armaan n ridhz at there rooomm…..Embarrassed

 

welll…..the part is over now…..but the next 1 I prmise is vry passionate…. ofcourse ..their suuhag raat

 

….

Soo TO BE CONTINUE

hope u enjoyed

 

So comment n crtitis….leave ur suggestions toooooSmile

PART 8

 

Hey guys..i no u all r w8ing fot this part ..haina???….well 1 think I must conclud….that..as IF is site for all..so I have kept the part lil clean…….hope u understand the age factor

but still tried to make it vry  passionate

 

here it goes…

 

ridhz is sitting on the bed….armaan comes n closes the door..there is low light from table lamp ..armaan comes slowly n removes his sherwani….he comes n sits next to ridhz…he looking vry vry hot…he slowly moves his hands to ridhz cheeks….n make her lay down ….his hands are still on her cheeks …he touches her lips with his fingers….n kiss near the lips….ridhz closes her eyes….then he kisses on her chin…ridhz puts her 1 hand b/w his sholder n neck….n nther on his chest…..armaan moves down n kisses on her neck…he shwer kisses evry where ….ridhz both hands on his sholder n she is randomly moving her hands on his sholder …she graddualy moves her hands to his hairs….armaan comes kises her sholder n then come near her lips n kiss the lips/……vry passionately …he again moves to her neck n start kissing..she puts her 1 hand on the pillow…armaan holds her hands….n then she tightens the gripCensored….armaan moves..n now ridhz is on top of him……she is kissing him on his neckCensored…armaans eys are closed…….Embarrassed

 

 

Now its near 3 am….

Armaan is stting on bed n ridhz is on his laps…..armaan has caught ridhz hands….armaans says…..cutely..

Pata hai riddhima …..

r- hmm??

Ar – maine na bahut badi list bana rakhi hai…ki mujhe shaadi ke baad tumse kya kya chahiye..

R –kya kya chahiye..(smiling)

Ar- pehle to subah roz jab mai soo ke utho to tum mujhe gud morning kiss dogi…wo bhi meri lips…after all ab humari shaadi hogayi haii…

r- ooohhhkkkkkk…!!!!! Or

ar- or or..or haa..bahut sare bacche chahiyee…..joo subah shaam mummy papa mummy papa bole……

r- areyyy bacche ki zarrorat haii???…..mere pass ek baccha pehle se hi hai….

Ar-aaah..?? kaunn

R –tum(laughs)

Ar- basket…(makes a innocent face)

r- accha baba theek ..lekin..tumhari khwaaish (wish) tabhi puri hogi jab tak mai tumhe achii tarah se sudhaar nahi leti …samjheeeeeee…………!!!!

Armaasn also smiles…n says tum sudharogei too mai roozz bigadne keliye tayiyaar (ready )huu….n ridhz lightly hits on his chest …n then kiss….then they booth closes there eyes ..n sleeps…..

Next morning armaan is sleeping …n ridhz has just come out from bath roon…n sits near the mirror..she looks at her self..n wear her mangal sutra…she smiles..n takes her sundar n fil her mang…mean while armaan was starring at her….she luks at him hmm..n says too janab ki subah hogayiii………(she comes n sits near him)

Ar says hmm hogayii….umm tumhe kal wali baat yaad hai…???

Ridzh makes a notty face …n smiles ..n kisses him….n he says oyee hoyee…she smiles………she says chalo ab uthoo …..jaldi se fresh ho jao sanjeevini nahi jana..??

Ar- nahi

r- kyuuu…

ar- maine humdono ki chottii le li soo don't worryyy…n .hav fun ..(with notty smile)

r- armaan….achaa chalo ab fresh to ho jao maine nashta bana diya hai or wooh bhi tumhare fav.aloo ke parathe…

armaan gets charged up….n quickly get fresh..

(Dinning hall)

ridhz is serving him the parathe…n he is luking at her n smiling….

Now she sits near him..armaan takes a bite  but stops..he thinks n ask …tumne khaya …??

r- nahi pehle tum khaooo

armaan takes same piece of paratha n feeds ridhz…n says pehlee tumm….

Ridhz smiles..armaan cutely kisses on her cheeks

 

 

PART9

 

after some tym..armaan n ridhz both sitting together n watching tv..

armaan has kept his 1 arm on her sholder..ridhz is bizi watching tv bt armaan is just luking at her n plzying wid her hairs......after some tym ridhz angrily switch off the tv n says " kya armaan tv pe to kuch bhi nahi aa raha....mai kitna bore hoo rai....

ar- bore...arey abhi abhi to humari shaadi hui hai or tum bore ho rahi hoo....kaho kuch entertainment plan karu..(wid a notty smile)

r - ..armaan ...aisi baat nahi hai per ..hum kahi ghoomne bhi nahi gaye..plzz kahi bahar chalte hai naa..

ar - to meri jaan ko kaha ghoomne jana hai..???

r - ummm........picture dekhne chale ...???

ar-  theek to tum jaldi se taiyaar ho jaoo...

(scen shifted to their bed room..)

armaan was getiing ready n ridhz was scratching her head ..wat to wear..mean wil the fone rings....

armaan goes too attend..n as soon as he keeps the fone down ridhz shouts..

r - ARMMMAAAAAAN..............!!!

armaan got scared n asked ..kya hua ..???...

r - JALDO AAOOOO......

armaan quickly runs..n see ol over n says kya hua ...kyu chilla rahi hoo..??

 ridhz with calm voice says... armaan dekhona mai kya pehnu..kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai..??

armaan gts clam n says..ridhimma..iskeliye itna joor se chilla kyu..pata meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thii......

r - accha bab sorry ab batao konsa suit  pehnu...?

green pink blue yellow red black white marine....?/? konsa??

ar - arey tum wo wala kyu nahi pehnti joo maine tumhe gift kiya tha..ye green yellow kya kar rahi ho...???

r - areyy haa woo wala ..that perfect..she quickly takes the suit from cupboard nn says ..thanku armaan  ur choooooo chweet(along wid kissing his cheeks..n runs to BR)

ar - touches his cheeks n smiles....Embarrassed

(scen shifted to movi theatr..)

ridhz is vry xcited ....she had bigggg packet of popcorns n huge size softdrink...n she is continuesly eating widout ny break ..her eyes are wide openGeekTongue.....

whereas armaan ..is crying too see the scene ..he luking vry cute n innocent...mean ridhz stares him...n says in her mind,..howw cute...my sweet huddy....

 

scen shifted....

armaan is driving ..n ridhz hus teasing him...

r - uaaa uaaa uaa..(she is making fun off armaan..)

ar - riddhima...bas bhi karo..wo to mai thoda emotional ho gaya tha ..jab wo bichare lovers alag ho rahe the..thats its..

r - yeah yeah i no...bt fir bhi tum bahut cute lag rahe the(she is laughing soo load LOLLOLLOL)

she calms down.....armaan ask...achaa wo sab chodo ab bato ki bore to nahi hui....movi achi lagi...

r - arey armaan mai apne sweet hubby ke saath bore jo sakti hu kya...??

ar - oyee hoyee....Embarrassed

 

ridhz shout again..ARMAAN GADI ROKO ABHI ARMAAN PLZZ STOP THE CAR....

ar stops the car n asks kya hua...???

r - woo ice creamn...mujhe ice cream khana hai....

ar- tum bhi na ridhima bikul baccho ki tarah behave kart hi ...

r - acha baba plzz ab mujhe icecreamn khanhi hai....

she quickly run to the icecream wala..n says..bahiya ek choclate chips ..big size kornato...or ek plain big size kornato....

armaan says ..nahi ridhima mai palin kornate nahi khata ....mujhe bhi cholclate wali chahiye....

r - arey armaan mujhe pata hai per yeah tumhare liye nahi haii....u can order anything for ur self ..or bil de dena mai car mai tumhara wait kar rahi hu.....

armaan is shocked...bt pays the bill n sits in the car......

he is watching ridhz eating the icecream like cute lil child..n smiling....

now ridhz has eaten both her icecream soooo quickly but armaan is still eating....

ridhz says..making cute baby face..-- armaan...mujhe ek or icecream chahiye..

ar - chup koi icrecream nahi milegi ..abhi abhi do do khayi naa.....gala gharab ho jayega....chup chaap bateo(like a cute hubby he cares for her....)

ridhz in sayin vry low volume..ek icecream hi to mangi thi..chillata kyu hai...Unhappy

ar - kya kuch kaha tumne ????

r - nahi to maine kuch bhi nahi bole....Confused

scen shiftd..arman n ridhz at home..changed their clothes....)

ridhz is sitting in front of the mirror n armaan is reading a magzine...

r - armaan movi kitni achi thi naa......

ar - hmmmm( mean while ridhz comes n sits near him on bed....)

r - or woo heroo ..woo kitna handsome tha..he was shooo sweet....bichara us ladki ne use kitna tang kiyaa...

armaan is getting jealous n doesnt response....

r - batao na armaan woo bahut sundar tha naa.......(she new that h was feeling bad..)

armaan  - kya khak sundar tha...shakal dekhi thi usne apne ek dam sada(rotten) hua alooo.....Angry

ridhz - with a notty smile) orrrr tum...Embarrassed

ar - mai bhi sadaa...( he thinks a bit..wat is he sayng..n smilesEmbarrassedBig smile)

r - gives a notty smille....

ar - oyee hoye..(he keeps his hands on her cheeks..._

he kisses her ...ridhz closes her eyes..

he is showering kisses evry whre.. he gradualy moves doen 2ward her...neck..he kisses him evry where...n ridhz keeps her both hands on his head...she slowly ..switch off the lights......CensoredCensored

 

hey ..guys tym to end upp...hope u liked it......

 

do comment/critisis or leave ur suggestionsSmile

 



Edited by im_dibest - 02 July 2008 at 6:32am

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um hello dis is my first tym i'v replied afta reading but i couldn't u refuse wen u told every1 do reply n certainly if i made a fanfic den i wud breally upset if only 30 ppl commented n like 60 viewers

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and also plz do not mind buh i wud like 2 say dat people who have read dis ff how can u b so cruel in not replyin wen some1 spends dere time writing it so we feel happier bout ar jodi n especially afta she told every1 2 reply

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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 6:41am | IP Logged
um sowi i wasn't sayin it 2 da writer of the fanfic i was sayin it 2 da ppl who viewed da fanfic buh never bothered 2 reply n say it was gd
not being rude at all jus tellin u all how someone wud feel

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Posted: 25 June 2008 at 8:28am | IP Logged
really a nice update please continue it soon

"Tell The R@in To Stop Falling,
Tell The Sky Not To Be So Blue,
Tell My He@rt To Stop Beating,
But Don't Tell Me To Stop Missing KASH."


Edited by kvn1983 - 25 June 2008 at 8:29am

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Hey dear dont get disheartened..Itz a fantastic part... Clap I'm really very excited abt the marriage part...Cant wait to read it... Wink Plzz continue soon Smile

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aww really cute!! love it!! can't wait for the next part!! Clap

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hey,it was a fabulous part...dnt worry m sure every1 lykes ur FF...it too gud... Clap
plz continue soon...pm me if poss 4 u...

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