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Amanat..(Rajeev n Amna)*updatd prt7 pg 7* (Page 7)

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Posted: 02 July 2008 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Oh gosh wht was tht..Poor Anjali got raped Cry Whoz tht moron??? Angry the shopping mall scene was too cute... Wink I liked the convo between sujal n kashish on the phone Embarrassed very excited to knw abt the next part...do continue Smile
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Posted: 02 July 2008 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
great part yaar Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap!!!!!!.....i like the way your story is progressing Smile...really coolTongue!!!!!!!!!.........kashish kitnie bechaan thi sujal say baat karne keliye (she doesn't no that it was him...but we do Wink) ....the shopping scene was really nice Smile...i think sujal withount knowing is thinking abt kashish Embarrassed....aur payal bhie uski keliye hogie Wink!!!!!!!!........par veena kou thodie batae ga .........soo veena be ready too receive how bahu ...but in unique stlye Wink........jabi iski larki kou sujal kay shaat dekhe tou saab se pehle uske paar dekhna .....lolzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!................i wonder what is kavya thinking Confused....is he going to play a really bad joke to anjali ??????????/...........ushe apne dosto ki baat manle nie chahie ye Smile....dude just say sorry too her Smile....or else this is the last time you will see your college LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............contine soon plzzzzzzzz.............great part !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Thnk u guys for ur commentz ..i just luv ur commentzz ...keep commenting...lub yew alllllll...here's da next part...hope u all will like it..!! Embarrassed


Kashish Anjali k baare mein pareshaan hoti hai ...
Kashish : mama Anjali ghar aayi kya ..?
Prerna : nahi beta ..wo keh rahi thi ..k usse presentation ki tayari kerni hai ..
Kashish : per kaafi der ho gayi hai ...aur wo phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai ..
Prerna : aisa kero uski kissi dost ko phone kero shayad un k ghar chali gayi ho ..
Kashish : haan yeh theek hai ..
Kashish Anjali ki friend ko phone kerti hai ..
Kashish : Hello!! kya Anjali hai wahan per..
Friend : Anjali..wo to library mein hai ...actually hum ne usse kaha bhi tha k hamare saath chalo..lekin us ne kaha k mein aa jaungi..
Kashish : oh thanx!!
Kashish (to herself ) : lagta hai mujhay ji jana pare ga usse lenay..
Kashish gaari nikalti hai aur library jaati hai ..
Kashish enters da library..aur us k pairon tale zameen nikal jaati hai ...woh chillati hai ANJALIII....
Aur bhagtay hue Anjali k paas jaati hai jo wahan bebas pari hoti hai ..
Kashish : Anjali..Anjali utho..ye..yeh..yeh sab kaisay...kisnay ??
Anjali kuch bol bhi nai paa rahi hoti ...
Kashish wahi Anjali k paas bethi ro rahi hoti hai ...
Kavya k doston mein se ek dost Kashish ki awaz sun raha hota hai ..
Woh KAshish ki madad kerta hai ...aur Anjali ko hospital lekay jaata hai ...
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yahan Sneha aur Sujal baat ker rahe hote hain ..
Sneha : bhaiya koi to baat hai ...aaj kal bare gum sum rehtay hain ..baat kya hai ..
Sujal : tumne kabhi CID joi kernay ki sochi hai ..?
sNeha : nahi kyun..?
Sujal : unhi logo ki tarah investigation kerti ho...bhayi aisi koi bat nahi hai ..bas aaj kal zyada kaam nahi hota...to tumhare saath din guzarne ka dil chahta hai ...kaho to phir buzy ho jaun...?
Sneha : nahi nahi !! wo bhaiya..
Sujal : ahem!! kya baat hai
Sneha : mujhay aap ka office join kerna hai ...dekhiyeh plz dante ga mat...mana kerna hai to saaf saaf nahi kehdein bas
Sujal (laughs) : aray yeh to bohat achi baat hai...per kal nahi ...do teen din baad
Sneha : kyun?
Sujal : Sneha!!
Sneha : ok ok thanku bhaiya (kisses him)
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IN DA HOSPITAL
Kashish : Doctor meri behan theek to ..
Doctor : i m sorryy ..aap ki behan ko bohat bura sadma laga hai is haadse ka....hum kuch keh nahi sakhte
Kashish : plzz meri behan ..
Doctor : hosla rakhiyeh..!!
Kashish (to herself) : mein mama ko yeh sab kaisay bataun gi...?? (starts crying bitterly) meri zimedaari thi Anjali..us k saath aisa kaisay ho gaya...
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idher Kavya ka wahi dost Kavya log k paas ata hai ...
Friend : Kavya kya tumne ..ye sab..
Kavya had a shocked expression on his face..
Kavya : tujhay kaisay pata..?
Friend : matlab Kavya yeh harkat tumne ki...
Kavya : mere paas aur koi raaasta hi nahi tha ...us Anjali ko sabaq to sikhana tha na..
Friend : Kavya to is hadh tak ...
Kavya : chal ab tu uski side mat le...ab to aagay maza aaye ga (starts laughing)




Edited by beauty_queen - 03 July 2008 at 12:54pm
goodkashish IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
oh my god......kya zatka diya tumne... Shocked ....kavya ne kiya hai yeh sab.... Angry ...ab kashish kaise sambhalegi anjali ko... Cry ...prerna ko kya jawab degi,,,,aur ab to kavya ki galti ki waje se sujal aur kashish bhi nahi mil payenge......yeh kavya ne ek saath char zindgiyaan barbad kar di. Cry .....ab jaldi se continue karo.....pata nahi is kahani me aage aage kya hoga.. Clap .....thanks

love

kashish


Edited by goodkashish - 03 July 2008 at 1:05pm

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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
OMG cant believe tht Kavya did this Shocked Poor Anjali... Cry Howz Kashish goin to take care of Anjali n how is she goin to tell Prerna???I hope Kavya ki galti ki wajah se Sujal aur kashish ke beech kuch galat na ho gaye.... Wink Plzz continue soon... Smile Smile Smile
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Posted: 03 July 2008 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
omg its like bolt from blue. Shocked Shocked Shocked .........i can't believe that kavya has done a so cheap thing..bt how could he. Angry   Angry ........bt u av written it so well Clap .thanx for updating.plz continue sooon

Edited by angel 16 - 03 July 2008 at 11:05pm
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Posted: 04 July 2008 at 12:05am | IP Logged
amazing part............. Clap ..........i can't believe it kavya is haadh tek ja sakh tha hai Angry ............
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Posted: 04 July 2008 at 1:43am | IP Logged
that was a sad part..i feel really bad for anjali... bechari... Cry aur agar kavya is sab ke peeche hai tho mann karr raha hai kii i bang him.....me getting very angry on him... Angry iman yaar next part jaldi se post karna ,me waiting... Smile

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