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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by beauty_queen

will INSHALLAH...post da next part tonight!! Smile

iman dear me waiting....Smile
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Posted: 01 July 2008 at 3:54am | IP Logged

Originally posted by beauty_queen

will INSHALLAH...post da next part tonight!! Smile

oyee,......u didnt post yesterday !ConfusedLOL...ullu banaya?LOL

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Posted: 01 July 2008 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by togepe30

Originally posted by beauty_queen

will INSHALLAH...post da next part tonight!! Smile

oyee,......u didnt post yesterday !ConfusedLOL...ullu banaya?LOL

vandu di bilkul sahi  hume ullu banayaLOL
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Posted: 01 July 2008 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
sorry guyz i wasn't able to post da part coz my net easn't working..!! n yeah both ov yew...mera ullu banane ka koi irada nahi tha heheh ..phir bhi Sorryy!!! Embarrassed ...hope yew all will like this part...


Kashish Prerna se mobile leti hai ..aur foran ussi number per call kerti hai jis number se Prerna k paas phone aaya hota hai ..
Kashish : Helloo!!
Sujal : helloo!! whoz diz?
Kashish : mein mein ...Kashish ..
Sujal : kaun Kashish..?
Kashish : wahi jis ko aapne bachaya..
Sujal : (with a very pleasant expression on his face) : ohh aap...ab aap kaisi hain..?
Kashish : haan ...ab mein thek hun ...
Sujal : Ohh good!! apna khayal rakhiya ga okay..
Kashish : ek minute!! thankyou very much..!!
Sujal : ohh no problem...koi bhi hota wo yahi kerta ..
Kashish : ok thankyou once again bubye!!
Sujal : Bye n do take care
Kashish cutz da call...
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aur idher Kavya apne doston k saath hota hai ..
Kavya : yaar ager ab Anjali ne mere sath kuch kia...mujh per koi ilzaam lagadia to mein to college se bahir hi ho jaunga..
Guy 1 : oye tu usse Sorry keh dena..
Kavya : sorry aur mein ..never..!!
Guy 2 : beta issi mein bhalai hai ...warna tu to jaye ga..
Kavya : beta isse to sabaq sikhana hi pare ga..!!
Guy 3 : kya keray ga tu..?
Kavya : bas tum log dekhtay jao!!
(n laughs like a villain lol )
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idher Sujal went out with Sneha n his mother for shopping!!
Sujal : mein office se is liyeh jaldi nahi aaya tha..k mujhay shopping per lejaya jaaye...huh i hate ladies shopping!!
Veena : ab tumhe bhi shopping aajani chhaiyeh ...kya hamesha mein aur Sneha hi tumhare liyeh kapre pasand kereinge..!!
Sneha : mama in ka to in ki biwi hi bataye gii hahaha
Sujal : chup kero tum!! bara biwi bataye...apni biwi ko to mein aisa seedha ker k rakhun ga na k bas..!! mere isharon per chale gi wo..
Sneha : han han wo to dekha jaaye ga ..jab apne biwi ka pallu pakar k chalein ge ..kyun mumma ..?
veena : han han!!
SUjal : mein aur apni biwi k pallu se...huh forget it!! aap log shopping kernay aaye hain na..shopping kijiyeh..
Sneha : hehe..
phir SUjal ki nazar ek bohat hi pyaari anklet per perti hai ...
Sujal : mein abhi aaya..
yeh keh ker Sujal us shop per chala jata hai ...aur woh anklet khareed leta hai ...
Veena : yeh kis k liye? tumne koi pasand kerli kya ..naam batao..jaldii
Sujal : mama aap bhi na ...nahi jab kisi ko pasand kerlun ga ..usse pehna dunga..aap ko khud pata chal jaye ga ..k kaun hai ap ki bahu..
Veena : lo mein to khush ho gayi thi ..
SUjal : mumma!!
Veena smiles..!!
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aur idher Anjali apni friendz k saath hoti hai ..
Friend 1 : aray anjuu kal ki presentation ka kya hua ..
Anjali : yaar ussi k liyeh mujhay abhi library jaana hai ...tum log ghar jao ..meein library jati hun...
Friend 2 : per tum akelay..
Anjali : ohh yew dont worry about me..em a big gurl..mein apna khayal rakh sakhti hun..
Frind 3 : chalo ok..per kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho na ...to call kerlena
Anjali : sure ok ab jao mujhay kaam hai..
Friendz : ok ok take carez byee!!
Ab Anjali library jati hai ...
Kaafi der ho jaati hai ...library khali ho chuki hoti hai ..per Anjali abhi bhi wahan perh rahi hoti hai..
K achanaq se wahan ki lights band ho jaati hain ..!!
Anjali ghabra jaati hai ...achanaq se ko Anjali k kareeb aata hai ...
aur Anjali k mun pe haanth rakhta hai ..n starts kissing her..
Anjali chillane ki koshish ker rahi hoti hai ...per us ka haanth Anjali k mun per hota hai ..aur Anjali kuch nahi ker pa rahi hoti...
woh Anjali ko chu raha hota hai ...usse kiss ker raha hota hai ...n finally he raped her off!!
Anjali wahin bebas reh jaati hai ..koi uski madad kernay wala nahi hota ....
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Posted: 01 July 2008 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
oh my god.......kitna kuch ek hi part me ho gaya.......kashish ki sujal se baat ho gayi.....Clap....kavya anjali se dushmani karne ki soch raha hai...Evil Smile.sujal apne pyaar ke liye payal kharid ta hai lekin dil me to kashish hi hai.......Embarrassed.....aur yeh kya hua anjali ke saath...Cry....lekin ple in me kavya ka naam mat lana........bahot hi achche part the..Clap...ple continue karo......thanks

love

kashish


Edited by goodkashish - 01 July 2008 at 7:41pm

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Posted: 02 July 2008 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Ohhh my god....Poor anjali......gosh.....i think kavya will cum there suddenly and anjali will think its him !! Confused
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Posted: 02 July 2008 at 4:59am | IP Logged
wow imu dear m so happy 2 see u bak long time...anyway great concept loved your story tooo goood... Clap Clap Clap continue sooon
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Posted: 02 July 2008 at 6:24am | IP Logged
omg its a nice Clap Clap Clap and shocking part also..........poor anjali.... im feeling bad for her Cry ............bt plz continue soon

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