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nice part Clap

plz continue soon Smile

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iman dear continue soon na... Smile

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Thank u so much guyz...i luv yew all Embarrassed Embarrassed keep on encouraging me lol Big smile Embarrassed LOL so heres da next part..!!

Sujal k paas Kavya k principal ka phone aata hai ...
aur wo usse milne k liyeh bulate hain ..!!
Sujal : Akshat mein zara jaa raha hun...tum yahan sambhal lena
Akshat : han han dont worry..aur koi achi larki dikhe to pata hai na kya kerna hai ...
Sujal : Akshat ..Shut upp!! Bye!!
Kher phir Sujal college mein enter hota hai ...
Saari larkiaan usse ghoor ghoor k dekh rahi hoti hain..jaisay unhun ne aaj tak acha larka na dekha ho lol..
Sujal to himself : yeh larkian aisay kyun dekh rahi hain...haan mujhay bhi student hi samajh rahi hongi..roz jo aana perhta hai mujhay (heheh)
kher Sujal principal k office mein jaata hai ...
Sujal : ji aap ne bulaya tha mujhay ..?
Kavya wahi per hi betha hota hai ..
Pricipal : this is the limit...yeh is hafte mein teesri martaba bulaya hai meine aap ko ..
Sujal : haan wo to mujhay pata hai ..aagay bolein ...
Principal : yeh aap ka bhai..is too much....rozana kisi na kisi pe koi comment maarta hai ...aur woh mere pass complain le ke aata hai ..
Kavya : meine kissi ko kuch nahi kaha ..wo to Anja...
Principal : Shut up KAvya...em fed up ov ur excuses...
Kavya : per..
Sujal : sir ainda aisa nahi hoga...
Principal : aap pichli martaba bhi yehi keh ker gaye the ...
Sujal : meine kaha na ab nahi hoga aisa (thoda gusse mein ...Princiapl dar jata hai ..)
Principal : okay Mr Garewal...per yeh aakhri martaba ..one more complain...n Kavya will be out of da college ...
Kavya : Kyaa..???
Sujal : okay..!! kya ab hum ja sakhte hain ..
Principal : Sure..!!
Sujal : chalo Kavya..
Kvya aur Sujal office se nikalte hain ..
Kavya : bhaiya..woh Anjali to roz hi yahi harkat kerti hai ..
Sujal : akhir kaun hai yeh Anjali..aur is ki tum se kya dushmani ..
Kavya : bas na puchein bhaiya...ghamand to us mein bhara pera hai ...
Sujal : achaaw?? kaun hai yeh ..?
Kavya : milna chahte hain ..?
Sujal : nahi nahi ..per yeh soch raha hun...is bar tumhe koi takkar ka mila hai ..
Kavya : huh Kavya Garewal ko harana is impossible..
Sujal : haan wo to pata chal hi jaaye ga ..jab tum college se nikale jao..
Kavya : aap meri party mein hain ya uski...
Sujal : APNI
kAvya : haan phir theek hai ...
donon hasne lagte hain
Kavya : woh hai Anjali (points toward a gurll)
Sujal was stunned..coz Anjali k saath Kashish bhi hoti hai ...
Sujal : y..ye Anjali hai ..?
Kavya : kaun ?? aisa kya dekh rahe hain ..
Sujal : n..nahi i mean yeh Anjali hai ..(pointing towards KAshish)
Kavya : itni khubsurat hoti to kya baat thi...us k brabar wali hai..
Sujal : woh bhi to achi hai .
Kavya : itni achi hai to shaadi kerlein na ..
Sujal : Kavya!!!
Kavya : sorry bhaiya...acha ab chalein..
Sujal : h..haaan chalo..
Anjali was luking at Sujal
Anjali : wow Di...udher dekho..
Kashish jab tak nazre ghumati hai Sujal jaa chuka hota hai ..
Kashish : kaun tha..?
Anjali : joker ka bara bhai..
Kashish : Kavya ka koi bara bhai bhi hai .?
Anjali : haan..
Kashish : ussi ki tarah ka hota..
Anjali : kaash woh apne bare bhai jaisa hota...kya looks hain...uff kya personality hai ...us se dushmani rakhne wala to koi pagal hi hoga..Man..he is so......
Kashish : sharam nahi aati apne dushman k bhai ki tareef ker rahi ho ..
Anjali : dushman k bhai k ker rahi hun..dushman ki thodi ..
Kashish : tumahra kuch nahi hosakhta..
Anjali : kaash kuch ho sakhta hota..haha
Kashish : acha acha..ab meri koi class nahi hai ..so mein ghar jaa rhi hun...gaarii yahi hain..mein taxi mein ja rahi hun tum aa jana..
Anjali : to aap driver ko bula lein na..
Kashish : woh sahab bemaar pare we hain ..
Anjali : r u sure..aap chali jayein gii.
Kashish : han han ...chalo mein chalti hun bye take care..
....aur yahan Kavya aur Sujal kya ker rahe hain dekhtay hain
Kavya : bhaiya mein to bhul hi gaya..meri ek aur class hai ...aap jayein mein aa jaun ga..
Sujal : chalo ok theek hai..
yahan Kashish college se nikalti hai ...aur yahn Sujal nikalta hai ..
Kashish was walking all alone...woh kuch perhtay hue chal rahi hoti hai ...aur usse pata bhi nahi chalta ..k woh ek sunsaan road per ajati hai ..
Jab tak she realise bohat der ho chuki hoti hai ..wo kaafi aagay aa chuki hoti hai ..
Kashish : oh God!! yeh mein kahan aa gayi..yahan to taxi ka naam o nishaan nahi hai...
woh us sunsaan road pe akelay khari hoti hai aur soch rahi hoti hai k ab kya kerun ..
k achanak wahan ek gaari aati hai ...jis mein se chaar (4) paanch(5) larkay nikalte hain...n they all were drunk..!!
aur woh log Kashish k kareeb aa rahe hote hain ..
Guy 1 : yeh dekh yaaar...kya larki hai ..
Guy 2 : haaan yaar...is k liyeh to hum jaan bhi de dein..
Guy 3 : chu k dekh le ..asal mein hai bhi ya koi pari hai ...
Kashish was veryyy scared...she tried to run...per on of da guy holdz her hand..
Kashish : choro mujhay ...
Guy 2 : abay chor yaar yeh meri hai ..(aur wo Kashish k kareeb aanay lagta hai ..)
Kashish chillaatii hai : BACHAOOO...
per yahan koi sunne wala nahi hota..
Guy 3 : kaun bachaye ga tumhe...
Aur woh teenon Kashish k kaareb aa rahe hote hain ...one of da guy was about to touch Kashish's face...
Jab he was punched back by a man....(Sujal k ilawa aur kaun ho sakhta hia yaar ) lol
Kashish anjane mein hi is ajnabee ko kaafi zor se gale laga leti hai ...
woh pal kuch der k liyeh ruk jaata hai ...hawayein bhi is pal ko aur un donon ki nazdeeki ko mehsus ker rahi hoti hain ...
Kashish bohat darii wi hoti hai ...us ki aankhon se aanso beh rahe hote hain...aur pata nahi kyun Sujal se woh bardaasht nahi horaha hota..!!
ap aap log khud hi soch lein ..un larkon ki kya pitai hui hogii hehe ..
Sujal un ki theek thaak pitai kerta hai ...aur wo larkay wahan se bhag jaatay hain ..
Sujal : erm..w..woo aap is waqt yahan kya ker rahi theen??
Kashish nazrein jhukai wi hoti hai ...Kashish ne abhi tak Sujal ko dekha nahi hai ..
Kashish : wo mein Taxi....
aur darr k maare wo behosh ho jaati hai ..
Sujal usse hospital le ke jata hai ...
aur about 2 3 hours baad Kashish hosh mein aati hai ...wo apni aankhein kholti hai to Prerna ko apne brabar mein pati hai ..
Preerna : KAshish...kya hua tujhay..? tum theek to hona ..
Kashish : mein yahan ?? kaisay ??
Prerna : bhala ho us insaan ka jisne humein phone ker k bataya ..aur tujhay yahan tak le aaya..
Kashish : woh kahan hai??
Prerna : woh to chala gaya..
Kashish : aisay kaisay chala gaya...mujhay us se milna hai abhi ...meine unhe dekha bhi nahi ..kaun hai wo...mama mujhay unse milna hai ..
Prerna : aray...yeh kaisi betuki batein ker rahi ho...
Anjali : Di...ab wo jaa chuka hai ...
Kashish : huh!! ek min mama ..us ne aap ko phone kia tha na...apna cell dein jaldi ....


Hope u guyz will like this part...do comment!!

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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
Hey nice part.....I hope kashish-sujal jald hi mile..And iss baar kashish bhi sujal ko dekhe LOL LOL

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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
fantastic part...love it.......the first meeting of sujal and kashish....but i am sad that kashish wont be able to see sujal's face........kashish is so smart......she is going to call sujal from her mom's cell.......mind blowing idea........i love kavya and anjali.....they r funny....ple continue soon.......thanks

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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 1:12am | IP Logged
iman dear nice part..goodd...i loved sujal,kashish in the part...sujal has already started protecting kashish.. very very very very damn well written....ek dum mast... zabardast.... Clap do continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... Smile Tongue Big smile

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