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Amanat..(Rajeev n Amna)*updatd prt7 pg 7* (Page 2)

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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Well thank u all for these wonderful Comments..m glad that u all liked da intro...well letz start da first part...


Veena : Sujal...
Sujal : Nahii
Veena : Sujall
Sujal : Nahi nahi nahi ..
Veena : Sujal ek baardekh to lo
Sujal : huh..Mom meine aap se kitni martaba kaha hai..mujhay aap ki dikhai hui larkion mein koi interest nahi hai ...
Veena : to kis ki dikhai hui larkion mein hai ..tum yahi bata do..
Sujal : mama aap bhi na ..mein jaa raha hun..mujhay office k liyeh bohat late ho raha hai...aap aisa kerein yeh photos..Kavya ko dikha dein...
Veena : yeh sari larkian us se barii hain...
Sujal : koi baat nahi usse koi farq nahi pare ga ..
Veena : woh to sab se hi shaadi kernay k liye tayaar ho jaye ga..
Sujal : to achi baat hai na ..uski shaadi kerwa dein ...per abih mera peecha chorein...mein jaaa raha hunnn
Veena : SUJALLLL...
Sujal : Bye mama...
Aur sujal chala jaata hai ..(yahoo jeet gaya lol)

Kavya : Sujal bhaiyaaaaaa ...Sujal bhaiyaaaaaa...
Veeena : kyun chilla rahe ho ...Sujal chala gaya hai ...
Kavya : kya chale gaye..aisa kaisay ker sakhte hain wo mere saath..
Veena : kya ho gaya ??
Kavya : unhun ne mujhse kaha tha ...k..
Veena : kya kaha tha ...?
Kavya : kuch nahi ...dekh lun ga unhe to mein ..waisay..Mom yeh sexy larkian kaun hain..??
Veena : tumhari hone wali...
Kavya : ohh thanku mama ...mujhay pata tha is pure ghar mein sirf aap hi mujhay samajhti hainn...
Veena : mujhay apni baat to puri kernay...
Kavya : mein samajh gaya hun mom ..thanku so muchhh...
Vena : YEH TUMHARII HONE WALI BHABHI HAIN...
Kavya : kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa? (aww dil toot gaya becharay ka hehe )
Veena : haan...
Kavya : matlab aap bhi baqi sab ki jaisi nikleen...
Veena : chal badmaash...hehe naashta kerlo...
Kavya : han wo to mein ker lun...per kheriyat to hai aaj churail nahi nazar aa rahi ...
Veena : Kavya...aapni behan ko koi aisa kehta hai ...
Kavya : wow mom aap to intelligent ho gayi hain ...aap ko kaisay pata mein Sneha churail k baare mein puch raha hun...
Veena hitz lightly on his head...
Veena : usse tang mat kia kero...
Kavya : kyun ..woh churail hai is liyeh ..?
Veena : Kavyaaa ...
Kavya : ok ok ...meri pyaari so choti si..Churail kahan hai ...?? hahaha
Sneha : ohh acha to yeh football uth gaya ..?
Kavya : FOOTBALL...kya mien tumhe football dikhta hun...
Sneha : Dikhtay nahi ho ...tum ho FOOTBALL...
Kavya : mom isse samjha dein..mujhay ulti seedhi cheezein mat kaha kere ..
Veeena : ab mein kyun samjhaun..?
Kavya : wahh..MOM party change....
Veena n Sneha hans rahe hote hain ...: hehehe
k wahan Head of da family atay hain ...yeah yeah Rishab Garewal...
Rishab : yeh sab kya ho raha hai ...
Veena : kuch nahi ..yeh bachay bhi na...
Rishab : kya kia bachon ne ...
Kavya : miene Sneha ko churail to nahi kaha..
Sneha : meine kavya ko football to nahi kaha...
Rishab starts laughing...
Rishab : Veena...yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai ..
Veena : meine kya kia..
Rishab : tumne hi inhein bigara hai..
Veena : acha ab saara ilzaam mere sar per...
Rishab : aur nahi to kya ...
Kavya : ok aap log ik dusre per ilzaam lagayein mein chalta hun..college mujhay bula raha hia ...
Sneha : mujhay bhi drop kerdo..
Kavya : tum koi catch ho jo drop kerdun..
Veena : KAVYA..
Kavya : okay okay..chalo....


aur idher ...prerna..Kashish aur Anjali kya ker rahe hain dekhta hain ...

Prerna : KAshISH.....
Kashish : ji mama..
Prerna : Anjali uthi...
Kashish : kaun Anjali..??
Prerna : Kashish ...tumharii behan Anjali..
Kashish : meri behan..?? kaun ??
Prerna : Kashish kya ho gaya hai tumhe ?
Kashish : mujhay kya ho ga ..waisay aap ko mera naam kaisay pata ...?
Prerna : Kashish hosh mein aao kya ho gaya hai tumhe?
Kashish : aap hain kaun ...?
Prerna chillati hai : ANJALIIIIIIIII
Anjali bhagti hui aati hai ..
Anjali : kya hua mama ...chilla kyun rahi hain ..
Prerna : dekho na Kashish ko kya hogaya hai ...
Anjali : kya hua di aap ko..?
Kashish starts laughing : HAHAHHA
Kashish : wow kya tareeqa hai Anjali ko uthane ka...
Prerna : huh Kashish merii jaan nikaal di tum ne..
Kashish : mama aap mein jaan kahan hai .. ehehe
Anjali : Di bohat hi ghatiya mazaq tha...
Kashish : bhayi mazaq to mazaq hota hai ...kher chal ab ready ho jao...humein jaana hai ...
Anjali : kahan..
Kashish : shopping tumhare liyeh ek larka khareedna hai na ...
Anjali : DIII....
Kashish : duffer college aur kahan hehe..chalo jaldi tayar ho jao...
Anjali : okay mein bas abhi aayi ..
Kashish : kahan jaa rahi hun ..
Anjali : tayar hone ..
Kashish : oh ok..!!
Prerna : sambhal ker jaana aur...
Kashish : apna khayal rakhna... aur koi ulti seedhi harkat mat kerna...humein pata hai mama..waisay aap rozana ek hi lines bol bol k thaqti nahi ..?
Prerna : Kashish ...
Kashish : ok ok sorryy hhehe ..(n kisses her mother )
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Veena : to kis ki dikhai hui larkion mein hai ..tum yahi bata do..

Sujal : mama aap bhi na ..mein jaa raha hun..mujhay office k liyeh bohat late ho raha hai...aap aisa kerein yeh photos..Kavya ko dikha dein...

Veena : yeh sari larkian us se barii hain...

Sujal : koi baat nahi usse koi farq nahi pare ga ..


LOL   LOL
Lol....The part was soo funny !!! LOL LOL LOL Continue Soon !!LOL

Edited by togepe30 - 22 June 2008 at 4:01am
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 6:03am | IP Logged
nice one please continue it soon
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Nice part.... Clap Plzz continue soon Smile
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 10:32am | IP Logged
very nice intro and very nice part Clap
plz continue soon
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
amazing part
it was really funny
Clap
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
hey really nice part.........wonderful starting Clap ....love the family relation for both of family.......i love sujal's character......khud kehta kyun nahi ki woh ladki dhundhega apne liye Wink .......aur kashish jise her waqt mazak hi pasand hai LOL .....i hope sujal ke pyaar ko woh mazak na bana de.......i hope they both meet really fast so we can progress on story.......ple ple continue......i cant wait to read more.....thanks for this wonderful part.......great writer.. Clap ...

love

kashish


Edited by goodkashish - 22 June 2008 at 4:44pm

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 3:29am | IP Logged
awesome story con't soon

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