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Very cute!!! Loved Muskaan!!! Continue soon!

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cute part

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Hey thanks a lot!! Heres the next part

She spins the bottle and it ends on Armaan. Everyone hoots.

Atul: acha to Armaan…ab tujhe Riddhima ke liye kuch kerna hoga…

Armaan: kia karna hoga?? (looking at Riddhima)

Rahul: bhayi aj ka din to tum logon ke liye ziada special iss liye hai kyunki aj hi ke din tum log milley thay, aur aj hi ke din tum logon ki engagement bhi hui thi…to ab tujhe yeh karna hoga ke Riddhima ko abhi, sab ke samne ussi andaaz main propose kerna hoga jiss tarah tune uss din kia tha…

Riddhima gets flustered…everyone is hooting….

Riddhima: (gets up) nahi nahi…mujhe jana hai…Emaan jag gayi hogi…

Muskaan: arey aissey kese….tujhe to bethna hi hoga….

Anjali: haan Riddima…aj to tum nahi bhaag sakti…

Riddhima is getting very embarrassed….she tends to walk away…when Armaan holds her hand from te back and her breath stops….everyone claps AROUND….

Riddhima: Armaan..please choro na…(she says as she turns around)

At that moment, she sees Armaan sitting there, holding her hand, on bended knees. She is surprised to see him like that and smiles. Everyone becomes quiet around them and look at them. Armaan looks straight into her eyes and she waits with baited breath.

Armaan: Riddhima.....

Armaan: log kehte hain ke kisi bhi insan ka sarr agar jhukta hai to sirf Khuda ke samne…jhukay huay sarr ke saath insan kuch mangta hai uss se….aur who dey deta hai…

He looks into her eyes and then looks down, bends his head…

Armaan: harr kisi ka Khuda aik jaisa nahi….kisi ka bhagwan hai, to kisi ka Allah….par aj main tumse kuch mangna chhata hun…kyunki mere liye mera mazhab, meri ibadat, mera bhagwan…sab tum hi ho….

Riddhima has tears in her eyes as she looks at him, who was sitting on bended knees with his head bent in front of her…

Armaan: I love you….i want to marry you…I want to grow old with you….kia tum mujhse shadi kerogi???

Around them, Anjali and Muskaan have slight tears in their eyes and Rahul and Atul are looking at them in awe.

Riddhima, with hugeee tears in her eyes, nods. Armaan smiles, gets up and hugs her. They both stay embraced for a long time, as everyone around calls.

Armaan: (whispers into her ears) Kyun Basket…ab to manti ho na mujhe??

Riddhima laughs between her tears….

Muskaan: wah hero kia baat hai teri yaar….no wonder Riddhima teri baton mein agai…

Riddhima: (cleaning her eyes) wohi to Muskaan….baton main hi agai main…asliat to shadi ke baad samnay ayi…(taking her seat, this time next to Armaan)

Armaan puts his arms around her…

Armaan: kia matlab hai tumhara???

Riddhima: matlab yeh ke rehne sehne ka to koi dhang hi nahi….main idhar safayi kerti hun,wahan yeh do minute mein pura kamra ganda ker deta hai…(giggles)

Everyone laughs

Armaan: haan haan…hans lo tum sab…mujhe bhi pata hai key eh Rauuulll kitne pani main hai…kyun Muskaan?

Muskaan: oye…yeh to tu ne bilkul theek kaha…pura din langooro ki tarah tv ke aggay betha rehta hai…

Anjali: I tell you…these guys na…koi consideration hi nahi show keratay…

Riddhima: haan Di…sahee keh rahi ho ap..

Rahul: haan to theek hi na….hum log pura din kaam karte hain…ab ghar ka kaam bhi hum hi keren kia?

Atul: haan…ab after all hum bhi insane hain….hum bhi thak jatay hain…

Armaan: exactly champ…wese bhi pura din O.T main kharay surgeries karna kitchen main kharray handi bananay se ziada mushkil hai…

Riddhima: (puts her hands on her hips) achaaa?? Matlab tumhara kaam kaam hai…aur humara kaam kaam hi nahi…

Armaan: Riddhima…hum ne aissa to nahi kaha par ab yeh to tumhain manana parray ga….ke hospital ka kaam ziada hectic hai…

Riddhima: ohhh!! Dr.Armaan Mallik, ap shayed yeh bhul rahay hain ke aik saal pehle takk main bhi hospital main hi kaam kerti thi…aur pura din kaam kern eke baad bhi ghar aker apke liye dinner banati thi, aur ghar ka kaam bhi kerti thi…

Armaan: Riddhima…jhoot matt bolo…uss waqt naukar hota hai gahr per….

Riddhima: MAIN??? Main jhut bol rahi hun? Armaaaan!!!(angrily looking at him)

In the meanwhile, all the others will looing at Armaan then Riddhima as they bickered…Armaan, Riddhima…Armaan….Riddhima….Riddhima….Armaan….

Muskaan: BASSSSSSSSS!!! (putting her hands on her ears) Pagal ho gaye ho kia….larr kyun rahay ho tum log??

Anjali: haan guyz…chill…kia ho gaya hai…

Riddhima: nahi Di…inhain bi to pata chalay key eh auraton ka kaam karna itnaa asaan nahi hai…

Rahul: arey Riddhima ap to ghussa ho gai…Armaan to wese hi mazak ker raha tha…haina Armaan? (slightly forcing a smile)

Armaan: ha…haaan Riddhima…main…main to mazak kar raha tha…(gulping, as he knew he was now in for something bad)

Riddhima: no no no…aj to koi mazak shazak nahi….kal se ghar sa sarra kaam tum karoge aur Emaan ka khyal bhi tum hi rakhoge….kal main Ma ke pass jarahi hun…bohat din huay unse mille huay…

Armaan: arey ye kia baat hui…mili tum nahi ho to qasoor mera hai…

Anjali: nai Armaan…Ridzi sahee keh rahi hai…main bhi kal jaungi Ma ki taraf…aur tum..(pointing her finger at Atul) tum Armaan ki bohat side le rahay thay na…to ab tum bhi ghar ka sarra kaam karoge….

Atul: par Anjali…

Anjali: no more arguments Atul…

Rahul: tum donon to gaye beta…(laughing)

Muskaan: OYE!! (hits him on the head) tujhe ziada khush hone ki zarurat nahi hai….mein bhi ja rahi hun inke saath…tum teenon aik hi jagah marray rehna aur ghar ka khyal rakhna….

Atul, Armaan and Rahul make SHOCKED faces as all the three girls get up and go inside their room.

Atul: abbay yaar Armaan…tu ne to marwa dia…

Rahul: haan Armaan…bola b kia karna hai…

Armaan: karna kia hai…(standing up) In larkion ko yeh ker ke dikhana hai ke hum in say kamm nahi…hum sab kuch ker sakte hain…ghar ka khyal bhi rakh skate hain, khana bhi bana sakte hain aur bachon ka khyal bhi rakh sakte hain…

Atul: haan hana…aur saath hi saath hospital main 12 ghante duty bhi de sakte hain…pechhe se bachon ka kia hoga…

Rahul: abbay yaar…oga kia…kal leave leni parray gi…

Atul: par humain leave dega kaun? Dr. Shashank to yahan hain nahi…Aur Keerti Mam ne to bilkul nahi manna….phir kia karain ge…

Armaan and Rahul share a look

Armaan: wohi kerein ge Champ…jo hum hamesha kerte hain…

Atul: Matlab???

They both look at Atul, and he understands….ten they all three sit on bended knees and shout

All three: ISHQQQQQQQQQQ…..HAYEE!!!!

And then all three laugh, as the girls peek out from the corner of a room.

Ok guys…that's it for today…DOOOOOOOOOO tell me how was it…actually I had something else in mind but once I started writing al this just came out itself…hope u guys like it…plzzzzzzzz comment….love kiran!!

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