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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 12:18am | IP Logged
awesome update
plzzzzzzz jaldi continue karo

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Awww guys...thanks a lot...you guys are great....here comes the next part...hope all of u like it...love kiran!!!


Its evening time. Armaan is standing in front of the wardrobe, looking for clothes. Riddhima comes and stands behind him, holding Emaan, who was about to sleep.

Riddhima: (whispers slowly as to not to wake Emaan) Armaan…Armaan…

Armaan turns around and nods, as in asking what?

Riddhima: kia kar rahay ho? Tum abhi takk tayar kyun nahi huay….(frowning at him)

Armaan: main actually…(speaking in normal, loud voice when Riddhima interrupts)

Riddhima: sssshhh!! So rahi hai (pointing towards Emaan with her face)

Armaan: (lowers his volume and whispers) who actually mujhe samajh nahi araha ke kia pehnun…

Riddhima: (making a face) Armaaan! Tum yeh sab kaam end per kyun chor dete ho….

Armaan: ab nahi samaj araha na…help ker do please…..please please please….!!!

Riddhima shakes her head: tum kabhi nahi sudhro gey…hato aggay se…

She looks into the wardrobe, still holding Emaan. Then points out to a black kurta that was hanging on the back of their closet.

Riddhima: (points it out to Armaan) wo black kurta pehan lo….abhi naya hai, tumne aik baar bhi nahi pehna…nikalo bahir…

Armaan leans forward, his hand reaching out for the kurta. Meanwhile, he is totally pressed against Riddhima and she smiles, feeling shy. He takes out the kurta and puts it against him.

Armaan: yeh pehnun? (whispering)

Riddhima nods

Armaan: acha laggay ga?

Riddhima nods.

Armaan: pakka?

Riddhima frowns: Armaaan!!

Armaan: acha baba jar aha hun….

He is about to go but he steps back and kisses Emaan on the forehead. Emaan shifts into Riddhima's lap, clearly disturbed.

Riddhima: Armaan! Jag jayegi….jao ab….(she says in mock anger)

Armaan throws her a fleeting smile and goes to change. Riddhima smiles, and puts Emaan into her cot. They had thought of putting her cot in their own room, and had shifted it that day. Emaan was just 6 months old right now, and they had shifted her cot into he nursery a few days back. But Riddhima hadn't been comfortable with her sleeping alone so Armaan had shifted the cot back into their room.

She herself goes to the wardrobe and takes out a beautiful blue sari. That's what she was going to wear today.
…………………………………


Armaan comes out of the bathroom wearing a black kurta over his jeans (just like in the sangeet promo). He is putting on his watch when his eyes fall on Riddhima, who is looking ravishing in a beautiful blue sari. She was brushing her hair. He went and stood behind her, taking in a deep breath. Riddhima turns to him.

Riddhima: main theek lag rahi hoon?? (anxiously)

Armaan smiles, looking her up and down.

Armaan: lagta hai aj ap ne pura plan banaya hai mujhe behosh kerne ka…

Riddhima blushes: Armaaaaan!!!

Armaan: Seriously! Tum bohat bohat bohaaaat khubsurat lag rahi ho…

Riddhima: thanks…tum bhi bohat achay lag rahay ho….

She comes forward and arranges his collar properly, as he smiles. He loved it when she did these small 'wifely' things. Just then the door bell rang.

Riddhima: lagta hai who log agaye…Armaan tum please ja ke darwaza khol do, main zara kitchen se ho ke ati hun.

Armaan nods, then goes towards the door. He opens it to find Atul and Anjali standing there, Atul in a dress shirt and jeans, Anjali in shalwar kameez for once.

Armaan: hey champ!! Anjie….kaise ho tum log??

He hugs Atul and Anjali…

Atul: hum to theek hain yaar…tu bata ke itni dair kyun laga di darwaza kholne main…

Anjali: uffoo Atul…tum kuch nahi samajhte…aj un ke liye bohat special din hai….akele main kuch time guzar rahay honge…right Armaan? (winks at him as they all walk down the corridor)

Atul: kyun Anjali….aj kia hua tha?? (innocently)

Anjali looks at Armaan exasperated and rolls her eyes.

Armaan: Champ yaar tu socha na kar itna…(putting his arm on his shoulder) yeh bata ke tu Adi ko nahi laya saath main???

Anjali: nahi yaar….uss ko Ma ke pass chor ayi hun…ajeeb irritated sa hua hua tha aj…aur wese bhi, aj to hum sab ka day hai…we should celebrate…

Armaan: yeah…after all aj ka hi to din tha jab hum sab pehli baar milley thay…

Atul: sach yaar Armaan…tu ne bohat acha kia jo aj hum sab ke liye yeh party rakh li…kamm hi aisay maukay milte hain jab hum sab saath hon…

They have reached the lounge by now….and are sitting down.

Armaan: wese iss ka credit mujhe nahi, Riddhima ko jata hai…ussi ne socha tha iss idea ke barray main…

Anjali: wese yeh Ridzi hai kahan? Kahiin dikhayi nahi de rahi??

Armaan: haan who Riddhima…(looking around)

Riddhima: main yahan hoon Di…

They all look up to see Riddhima. Armaan smiles as he looks at her, he is so damn proud to be her husband ahha. Anjali stands up and hugs her.

Atul: wah Riddhima….aj to tum bohat achi lag rahi ho…

Armaan: abay…aj to kia…Riddhima hamesha hi achi lagti hai…(sincerely)

Riddhima smiles.

Anjali: hey Riddhima…yeh Emaan kahan hai??

Riddhima: Di who so rahi hai…

Atul: kia yaar…hum jab bhi attay hain who so rahi hoti hai…

Armaan: Champ who bachi hai….6 mahinay ki…soye gi nahi to kia tere tarah pura din bakk bakk kerti rehey gi??

Atul: acha yaar dantata kyun hai…

Anjali: acha yeh sab choro…batao, Sapna to arahi hai na??

Riddhima: Nahi di…who nahi aa payegi…Amit ki mummy ki tabiyat kharab ai na…iss liye…

Just then the door bell rings. Riddhima and Anjali exchange looks.

Riddhima: Lo! Agai humari patakha…(laughs)…main ja ke darwaza kholti hun…

Riddhima and Anjali both go to open the door, to see Rahul and Muskaan standing together. Rahul is dressed casually in jeans and shirt, while Muskaan is wearing shalwar kameez too, with her dupatta covering her front, as she was 6 months pregnant. She is looking angrily at Rahul for some reason when Riddhima opens the door.

Riddhima: Hi Muskaan…(hugs her)…hi Rahul…tum logon ka hi wait ho raha tha…

Rahul: haan who Riddhima…thora traffic tha….

Muskaan: oye…jhoot na bol…khud hospital se annay main dair ki thi tu ne…(stepping inside the house)

Rahul: haan to wapsi pe rash than a…teesri baar samjha raha hun tuje…

Anjali: Guyz guyz…control…tum logon ne to attay hi jhagra shuru ker dia…andar to ao…

They all head towards the lounge, where Armaan and Atul are waiting.

Atul: Hi Rahul. Hi Muskaan.

Muskaan: haan haan…hi shi baad mein kerna….pehle mujhe bethne ki jagah de…(she practically waddles to the sofa, as Armaan shoots Riddhima a look and both grin)

Muskaan's pregnancy had been a great fun for all of them, because she had turned even more irritated and angry over the time. Poor Rahul had to bear her ranting all day long, and the others really enjoyed it. The others had never imagined Muskaan to be pregnant, and the news had been a very pleasant surprise. Amongst all of them, Anjali's son was the eldest, then was Emaan and then Muskaan's 'to-be-baby" haha.

They all stand in a row looking at Muskaan, as she takes in some deep breaths. Then she looks at them

Muskaan: Oye..tum sab log mujhe kyun dekh rahay ho???

They all at once avert their gazes to each other…

Armaan: umm…nahi who Muskaan…hum tujhe to nahi dekh rahay thay….

Muskaan: mujhe sab pata hai…tum sab aik number ke duffer ho…idiots….

Riddhima raised her eyebrows…then went and sat by Muskaan

Riddhima: Muskaaan! Kia ho gaya hai yaar….tum chill kero, ghussa nahi…ghussa baby ke liye theek nahi hai….

Muskaan: main janti hun…par is Rahul ki wajah se…(shoots him a killer glance) mujhe harr waqt ghussa aya rehta hai…

Anjali: acha ab chill kero…relax…(holding her shoulder) I know how it is…

Armaan, Atul and Rahul form a group

Armaan: oye…ab tune kia kiya…Muskaan itna ghussa kyun hai??

Rahul: pata nahi yaar…aj kal to mei uski taraf dekhun bhi to ussay ghussa ajata hai…

Atul: tu ne kuch na kuch to kiya hi hoga…

Rahul: abay yaar maine kuch nahi kiya….jabse yeh pregnant hui hai isse kisi na kisi baat per ghussa hi aya rehta hai….

Armaan snickers…

Rahul: haan haan tu hans le…tera time to nikal gaya hai na…mujhe yaad hai kese Riddhima bhi tujh per apna ghussa nikalti thi….

Armaan remembers his own time…Riddhima really had changed a lot during her pregnancy….she was fidgety and irritated all the time…

Armaan: haan yaar…who to hai…bass tu fikar na kar…yeh do teen mahiney ki baat hai…last month takk who aik dumm theek ho jayegi…dkeh lena….

Rahul: esa kia??

Armaan: haan wo….(hes feeling embarrassed talking about all this…specially Riddhima's pregnancy) jab Riddhima ka last month tha to usska attitude bhut change ho gaya tha….she wanted me around all the time…tujhe yaad nahi hai, isi liye meine leave lit hi…

Atul: haan Rahul….Armaan theek keh rha hai…

Armaan: acha yeh ab hum kia larkion wali baatain ker rahay hain? Khana khaye??

Rahul: haaan yaar plz…mujhe bhut bhoook lagi hai…

Atul: mujhe bhi…

Armaan: tujhe to hamesha hi bhook lagi rheti hai…mein Riddhima se kehta hun, khana laga de…

He walks over to Riddhima who is talking to a flustered Muskaan…he calls her over with a sign of his hand…she stands up and walks over to him, he puts his hand on the small of her back and takes her to the corner of the room.

Riddhima: kia baat hai Armaan??

Armaan: who umm…Muskaan theek to haina?

Riddhima: che…Armaaan! Theek hai who…thora b.p. high hai uska…normal si baat hai…tum bhi na…

Armaan: arey yaar main uska friend hun mujhe fikr ho rahi thi…

Riddhima: Armaan…tumhain to har pregnant larki ke barray main wese hi fikr lagi rehti hai…

Armaan: that just shows how caring I am…khair choro…tum khana laga do na…warna who dono bhook se marr jayenege….

Riddhima: haan mai laga deti hun…(she is about to walk away when Armaan holds her hand) ab kia hai???

Armaan: acha suno…(looks arnd to see no one is listening) aik kiss to deti jao…

Riddhima: Armaaaann!! Sab log kharray hain…

Armaan: arey koi nahi dekh raha…plz plz plz…aik kiss…

Riddhima: NO! Main ja rahi hun…(pulls her hand away and starts walking away)

Armaan: Riddhimaaa….(steps forward to hold her again but she runs away)

He smiles to himself and then goes over to everyone else…where they start chatting…


DO COMMENTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!! Love kiran...

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 3:53am | IP Logged
really a nice one and thanks for the update and pm please continue it soon.



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Edited by kvn1983 - 21 June 2008 at 3:55am

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 4:42am | IP Logged
really really cute prt! loved it cntd sn!

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 6:24am | IP Logged
tht ws so sweet...aise hi jaldi jaldi upd8 kiya karo...lvd all the cuple's chemistry...nxt tym plz add sm "quality"AR scenes... Wink u knw...

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 9:21am | IP Logged
lovely ffffff Clap Clap Heart

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 9:34am | IP Logged
hey i hv jst read ur all prts nd it ws outstndng yaar i jst say 1 wrd superb yaar ..........vryyyyyyyy guuuuuuuuuud omg yaar armaan to din par din or bhi naughty hota jaa raha hai..nd muski pregnant nd poor rahul sara tme gussa omg yaar nd all rwe laughgn jst mindblowng yaar.............rahul nd ar nd atul wow yaar thyw re toooo guuuuuuuud jst cnt wait 2 read mre
cont soooooooon eagrly waitng fr d nxt prt
luv yachu

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 9:36am | IP Logged
soooo..cute..
wow!!..i hope if DMG ever takes a leap or sumthin...
i hope its juz like ur ff.. Embarrassed
awesum job.. Clap Clap
continue soon...

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