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Main Sirf Angad Ki Hoon-GOLDIE pt28 pg32 (Page 2)

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do you like it?



Edited by jjknlvr91 - 27 September 2005 at 6:32pm
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sounds veeeeeeeery interesting... continue soooon!
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sound interestin contine soon
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i put it on the first page if you want to look tell me how it was please in the other parts they will be longer this is short because its the first part Wink

Edited by jjknlvr91 - 27 September 2005 at 6:02pm
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OMG...really cool...go on..
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It sounds Cool! Cont Soon! Clap
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Part Two:

The sun was out and shining through the girls window. As her mother came into her room she noticed her daughter with a very wide smile which made her think!

Mom: Uff 10 bage ray hay or tum soore he ho krip

the girl rushes up from her blanket. Her rosy pink cheeks and her layered up to her shoulders hair and she quickly put it in a bun and started yelling

Kripa: Mama app mujay kyun ithe dayaar say utiee???? Aab kya jawab doonge director ku??

She gets upset and goes to take a shower even before her mother could even speak any words.

Kripa comes out of the bathroom. She opens up her closet and finds a white flappy rime stroned skirt and a pink sleeve less pnk top to go with it. She dresses quickly as possible. She goes to her chess and pulls out long silver and white dangling earings and puts those in. She puts light make up some powder over her face and black eye liner with some lip gloss as the touch up. She brushes her hair puts her hair half up. She is looking very pretty. She quicky goes downstairs and goes to check the clock 10:00 then she thinks to herself i thought mom woke me up at 10 she gets confused but doesnt question her mom. She grabs a bagel and leaves. While she leaves her mother yeslls

Mom: Kripa beta jaalde aajaana aaj hamey Khanna kay ghar pay jaana hai      

Kripa: Smiles her mind thinks about Angad then she quickly says aacha teika then she leaves

Angads house:

Its 10:00 Aliaya comes into Angads room and smiles and thinks he probably went to sleep late last night. She looks at his face so innocent and thinks to her self i wonder biya ki dream kya hai! She notices his jurnal and as usual the job of little sisters while her brother is sleeping she quitly crawls accross the floor and sits on his chair and starts reading his diary she smiles to herself to see this part of her brother that she has never seen the jurnal slips out of her hand and makes a loud thud. She gets scared and then Angad starts waking up! He sees her ...

To be continued...

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Edited by jjknlvr91 - 27 September 2005 at 9:20pm
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