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Posted: 16 June 2008 at 1:22am | IP Logged
wow nice updates
do continue soon

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Posted: 16 June 2008 at 1:40am | IP Logged

Hey every one here im wid da 7th part of friends forever Smile

Precap:ridhimma said not to talk with armaan again atul will now on solving armaan's problem n armaan is baq

Very next dat at sanjeevani in locker room
Armaan(to himself): bechpan se ajj tak itne pranks khele lekin ajj koi prank hi nahi sooj raha kiya ho gaya hai armaan soch soch kaise tease kare ridhimma ko first of all mujhe uska koi nick name rakhna hoga ab who glasses to pehnte nahi so aus ka naam………………………………………………. Basket yes I got it basket cool
Everyone enter locker room
Armaan:hello everyone wassup!?
Everyong except ridhimaa: hello armaan
As everyone was keeping there things in da locker room
Announcement:sabhi interns dr.keerti ko report kare
Everyone left except armaan n ridhimaa
Armaan ridhima se takrate hai aur dono ki files gir jate hai
Armaan:kiya baat hai basket ajj mujh se takrane ka dil ker raha hai kiya
Ridhima:mere abhi itne bore din bhi nahi aae aur waise bhi tumne mujhe Dhaka mara maine tumhe nahi n by da way ye basket koun hai??
Armaan: tum basket!

Everyone reporting to dr.keerti
Interns:good morning ma'am
Dr.keerti: goodmorning ajj app ki duties hai dr ridhimma children ward,dr atul aur dr anjali aids ward, dr armaan special ward aur dr.rahul aur dr.muskaan ajj app dono general ward mai rahe ge
Everyone left except ridhima
Dr. keerti: dr ridhima mujhe apne patient mr.malhotra ki file dijiye
Ridhimma: yes ma'am here it is
Dr. keerti:dr ridhimma maine app se mr.malhotra ki file mange the!
Dr.ridhimma: sorry ma'am who mai……….(starts searching for her file but could not find it)
Dr. keerti: dr ridhima ab app ko jaldi kerne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai kyunki ab app night shift bhi karenge
Ridhima: but ma'am…
Dr.keerti: get to work dr. ridhima

Armaan was standing n watching all dis ridhimma recalled dat before coming here she met armaan.armaan was standing n dancing when he realized dat ridhimma is watching him she stopped dancing
Ridhima: apne ghatiya mazak band karo armaan its not funny
Armaan: oh really theek hai agle baar aur ache pranks khelo ga ab khush
Ridhimma: huh!
N leaves n armaan start dancing n a voice came
Voice: ye app kiya ker rahe hai

Armaan: khushi mana raha ho
Voice: kis baat ki
Armaan: tujhe kiya
n turns n saw a senior doctor standing there he is dr.shubhanker
dr shubhanker is a senior doctor he is going to be married dr.keerti very soon n he is very afraid of dr.keerti

armaan: ji app……koun???
Dr.shubhanker: mai yaha ka senior doctor…app intern?
Armaan: yes sir dr.armaan malik..waise apko kal dekha nahi na
Shubhanker: ha who mai aik din ki leave pet ha
Armaan:ok sir now I have to go for my duty
Shubhanker: ya sure

Ridhimma is in children ward n she meets lots of children over there she played wid them n made them laugh
Armaan was passing n watched ridhimma he was lost in her (background music:asmani rang ho)

Scene shifts to general ward where dr.rahul n dr.muskaan r checking patients muskaan is sooo much talkative n rahul is not @ all so muskaan kept on talking wid him n he just listened rahul realizes dat she is a sweet gal

Atul n anjali r in aids ward checking patients n discussing wid each other coz atul knows more than anjali

But in special ward sama hi kuch juda hai armaan aik patient ko adha ghanta de raha hai ohh sorry sorry aik patient ko nahi aik aik ladki ko chahe who nurse hi kyun na ho but anyways armaan sab ko khush dekhna chahta hai so her aik ke saath ache se baat kerta hai

Ye haal hai humara sanjeevani ka jaha sab kuch thora kam kam hai dosti kam, pyar kam bas aik cheez hi zyada hai who hai shaitani aur kaam toh zyada hona hi hai kyunki intern of da moth jo banna hai

Atul and armaan after deir longgggggggggg duty r chilling out in caf
Atul: yaar armaan tune ridhimma ke saath koi mazaak kiya keh nahi??
Armaan: tension nalo boss mai apna kaam pore imandare se ker raha ho
Atul: good dekh dekh who aa rahe hai
N says sumthing in his ear
Armaan goes to take coffe
Ridhimma n anjali: hey atul
Ridhimma: di mai toh buhat thak gai ho ab mai aur kaam nahi ker sakte aur satath mai mere night shift bhi hai
Anjali: ohhh dats sad
Armaan: when armaan's here there is no fear mai aa gaya basket ki problem ka solution le ke
Ridhima: ridhimma mera naam ridhimma hai n by da way tumhare zaroorat bilkul bhi nahi hai
Armaan: ye lo mazedar sandwiches khao
Anjali: come on ridhimma kha lo tumhe bhook lage ho gi
Ridhimaa: zaroor is ne sandwiches mai kuch milaya ho ga
Atul: nahi ridhimma ye to mere samne le ke aya hai
Ridhimma: ok
And she take a bite of da sandwiches n screams
Ridhimma: PANI PANI PANI DOO JALDI!!!!
Anjali:ok ok ye lo
Ridhimma: u
Armaan laughs ridhimma tried to hit hhim but he ran ridhimma followed him having a mug of cooffe is her hand
Armaan: basket ko mirchi lage!!!!
Ridhimma: tum wahe ruko wahe ruko
Anjali: bas karo tum dono dr.keerti aa jae gi
Ridhimma: nahi di ajj to mai badla le ke hi rahonge
Dr keerti came there shewatched both of them fighting ridhima n coffee armaan ki taraf phenke amraan niche ho gaya aur coffee atul pe gir gai
Dr.keerti: kiya ho raha hai ye sab!!!
Ridhimaa: ma'am who
Dr.keerti:shut up dr. ridhima app ko aik night shift kafi nahi the ab app dono pore week night shifts kare ge aur who bhi saath saath
Ridhimma n armaan look @ each oder
Ridhima: ab toh isse maza chakhana hi pare ga
Armaan: 1 week night shift ek saath ab dekhna dr.ridhimma armaan malik ke pranks

N da episode ends

Hope youall liked it plz do comment n do tell whether I shuld continue or not

 

PART 8THSmile

Hey everyone im baq wid da next part n I m shooooooooooooo shorry for late update

 

Precap: dr.keerti give armaan n ridhima a whole week night shift

 

Armaan knew dat ridhimma will do sumthing so he is touches everthing carefully

Armaan enters da locker room n carefully opens da door

Armaan: shukar hai (n enters locker room)

Ridhimma have tied a thread there but he did not saw it as he was looking here n there so hefalls on da floor n his nose was injured

Armaan: ouch ouch ouch

Ridhimma enters locker room from changing room

Ridhimma:are tum to phisal gai

Armaan: nahi nahi mai to hrithik roshan banne ki koshish ker raha tha!

Ridhimma: oh really

Armaan gives him a tough look

Ridhima: acha chalo ab night shift kerne

Armaan n ridhima leaves for da night shift after two hours de have completed deir dutied n were resting in da caf on different tables a nurse came

Nurse: dr. ridhimma app ke liye phone hai

Ridhima: mere liya acha tum chalo mai ate ho

Ridhimma take da phone

Ridhimma: hello koun??

Voice: hahahaha mai mai ho

Ridhimma: koun bol raha hai

Voice: dr. ridhima mere chore lekin ajj to appki night shift haina aur apko ye bhi nahi pata hoga keh sanjeevani mai raat ko bhoot…

Ridhimma: bhoot! App koun bool rahe hai

Voice: appko yaad hai pechle hafte aik patient aya tha jis ki death ho gai the mai uske aatma hoo

Ridhima became scared

Voice: kyun paseena aa raha hai fikar na kare dr.ridhima abhi toh pore raat bki hai hahahahaha

Ridhimma: lekin app koun bol rahe hai

Da oder person hang up

Ridhima: koun ho sakta hai zaroor armaan ho ga

Ridhima goes in da caf nsees armaan sleeping on da chair

Ridhimma: armaan armaan sone ki acting mat karo

Armaan in half sleep

Armaan: kiya problem hai ridhima!

Ridhima: to yane keh tum sach mai soo rahe ho

Armaan: nahi badminton khel raha ho khelo gi

N sleeps again

Ridhimma: koun ho sakta hai

Announcement: dr.ridhima general ward mai report kare

Ridhima goes to da general ward n checks da patients dere n was returning fom dere suddenly some voices began

Voices: hahahahahahahahaha

Ridhima: koun…..koun hai dekho tum job hi ho mai tumhare awaz se darne wale nahi ho

But sheis actually very scared

As ridhima was moving her dupatta sucked somewhere as she turned dere was a ghost in black dress n an ugly face

Ridhimma started screaming: bachao bachao hellp help!!!!

Ghost started laughing: hahahahahahah dar gai dr.ridhima

Ridhima: tum!!!

Ghost took her mask out n guess wat it was armaan laughing

Armaan: dr. ridhimma dar gai

Ridhima: tum tumhe to mai nahi choro gi

Armaan ran from dere n ridhimma just started thinking of some new ideas

 

Da next morning every one was dere in da locker room n armaan n ridhimma were just yawning

Anjali: oh my God ridhimma tumhare eyes ke neeche to dark circles

Ridhima: di itne neend aa rahe hai keh dil ker raha hai dr.keerti ko abhi apna resignation letter de do

Armaan in half sleep is standing n was about to fall

Atul: are sambhal ke

Armaan put his head on his shoulder n slept

Atul: nahi yaar mujhe llocker mai cheese rakhne hai ye le rahul abhi toh isse sambhal

N transfers armaan's head on rahul's shoulder

Announcement: sabhi interns dr.keerti ko report kare

Dr.keerti: good morning interns

Interns: good morning ma'am

Armaan n ridhima were yawning n were half slept

Dr.keerti: dr. armaan aur dr. ridhimma app abhi apne ghar jaa sakte hai

Armaan: nahi ma'am hume sanjeevani se mat nikaliye humara career barbaad ho jae ga

Ridhima: yes ma'am plz

Dr.keerti: mai appko app ki neend pore kern eke liye ghar bhej rahe ho takeh mera koi bechara patient bemout mara na jae umeed hai ke appko sabak mil gaya ho ga so ajj se app dono normal duties pe hai

Arman ridhima: really ma'am

Dr.keerti: haa aur mai umed kerte ho keh ajj ke baad app dono is hospital mai doctors ki tarha hi behave karenge bacho ki tarha nahi

Armaan n ridhimma: yes ma'am n we are sory ama'am aisa phir nahi hoga

N de left for there homes

Armaan : ridhima  mai tumhe drop ker deta ho

Ridhima: nahi mujhe apne zindagi buhat pyare hai

Arman: matlab

Ridhima: matlab ye keh abhi tumhe itne neend ae hoe hai keh tum kisi bhi waqt so sakte ho aur accident ke chances bhi zyada hai soo bye

Armaan: par…..

N she leaves

Armaan: kabhi to chalo gi mere saath

After a day

Everyone in da locker room except ridhima

Ridhima enters: (singing) socha kaha tha ye jo ye jo ho gaya

Muskaan: pana kaha tha ye lo ye lo mil gaya

Atul: chutki koi kato na hai hum toh hosh mai kadmo ko thamo ye hai urte josh mai

Three of dem: badal pe pao hai ya chuta gao hai ab to bhai chal pare apne ye nao hai

Anjali: ajj tumhe kiya hoa ridhima tum atul ki tarha gana kab se gane lag gae

Ridhima: bas aise hi

Muskaan: gai gi kyun nahi agle hafte intern of da month jo announce hona hai aur madam ji ke highest scoes hai

Anjali: ohh…..

Armaan: muskaan abhi aik hafta hai aur aik hafte mai kuch bhi ho sakta hai

Ridhima: oh really so kep tring

Announcement: sabhi interns dr.keerti ko report kare

Atul: chalo yaaro bora waqt  aya hai

Muskaan: bogambo ne bulaya hai

Rahul: ye boambo koun hai

Muskaan: tujhe nahi pata??

Rahul: nahi

Atul: apne dr.keerti chalo ab chalo

Armaan pushes atul back every one leaves except dem

Atul: kiya hai yaar

Armaan: tune jaisa kaha maine waisa hi kiya ab mai kiya karo

Atul: maine kiya kaha aur kis mamle mai

Armaan: ridhima ko mannane mai

Atul: ohh ha tona ab usse apne loving saide dekha abna to usse dosti ker

Armaan: tera plan kaam to akre ga na

Atul: haa kare ga zaror kare ga abhi chale warna bogambo se dant pare ge

Dr. keerti n dr.shubhanker: good morning every one

Interns: good morning

Dr.shubhanker: ajj mai aik announcement kerne aya ho parso se hume do new interns join ker rahe hai

interns were soo happy

muskaan: sir kaha se hai who dono

shubhanker: sanjeevani Punjab se

muskaan to ridhimma: oee tab to unse khoob jame ge mere

 

n da episode ends

new interns kouns honge ye jane ke liye keep reading

hope you all liked it  n will try my best to upload next part today

do read n do comment

 

 

 

 

PART 9  Smile

 

Hey everyone im here wid da next part

 

 

As it is said dere is an angel for everyone an angel who will change one's life but what of urs turn into evil!!

 

Buhat ho gai philosophies ab kuch kaamki baatho jae

Precap:Ab aa rahe hai nae interns sanjeevani mai hmm….. maza aae ga

 

Keerti: jab who aae ge tab unse mil keh acha behave kerna app sab sanjeevani ki image mat kharab kerna

Interns: ok ma'am

Keerti: chale ab kuch kaam ki baatho jae app sab ki ajjki duties hai:dr.ridhima aur dr.armaan children ward,dr.atul aids ward,dr.muskaan aur dr. rahul app dono ajj dr.shashankko surgery mai assist karenge aur dr.anjali ajj app accident cases handle kare ge

Armaan n ridhima: phir se

N move to children ward

Shubhanker: keerti mai kuch dino se dekh raha ho tum in dono ko aik si dutieskyun derahe ho

Keerti: shubhanker inhe dosre doctors ke saath acha behave kerna chahiye so dat de can work as a team bas mai in dono ko aik saath aik team mai rakhna chahti ho

 

 

As everyone was on there duties

Muskaan:yaar to ajj sambhal lena

Rahul: kyun kiya hoa??

Muskaan: I h8 surgeries n blod too

Rahul: h8 or afraid

Muskaan: dono

Rahul: dekho muskaan jab tum kisi cheez ko apne upper havi ker dete ho tab tum us cheez se der jate ho so tum apne dil mai bas yahe kehte raho dat I can do it  aur dar apne app door ho jae ga

Muskaan was just listening him silenghtly

Muskaan: thanx rahul

Rahul: ab chale

Muskaan: haa chalo

 

In children ward

Armaan n ridhima were checking children or fighting or both im confused too!!!

 

Armaan n atul's duties r over so de r resting in da caf

Armaan:hey champ

Atul: hi

Armaan:kyun kiya hoa itna soya soya kyun hai

Atul: kafi der se anjali konahi dekha na isi liye

Armaan: oh waise atul mujhe tujhse kuch pochna tha

Atul: haa pooch

Armaan: ridhima ko mai apne love side kaise dikhao

Atul: jaise mai anjali ko dekhata ho

Armaan: nahi yaar lekin hum dono to har waqt lerte rehte hai toh mai usse sorry bolo

Atul: angrez chalegai peche sorry chor gai

Armaan: what!?

Atul: to sorry mat bolna

Armaan: phir kiya bolo

Atul: kuch bhi lyk mujhse dosti karoge

Armaan: hmm….

Atul: cha lab chup ho ja who aa rahe hai

Armaan:ok now ill behave good wid her

Atul:ok

Anjali ridhima muskaan n rahul: hey guyz

Atul n armaan: hi

Anjali: rahul aur muskaan tum logo ki surgery kaise rahe

Muskaan n rahul: buhat ache

Anjali: gr8 lekin muskaan tujhe toh khoon se dar lagta haina

Muskaan: lagta hai nahi lagta tha

Anjali: good for u

Armaan stand  up n went to take coffee for alln give it to all

When he gave it to ridhima she just looked @ him in a weird way

Armaan: wat!? Oho nahi milaya ajjis mai kuch

When armaan was about to sit ridhimma removed chair n armaan fell

Everyone started laughing

Armaan was abt to say sumthing but den he recalled dat atul told him to behave good

armaan did not said anything to her

in da locker room

anjali: ridhima jalde anamai tumharawait ker rahe ho

atul: bye anjali bye everyone

anjali: bye

rahul: aao muskaan mai tumhe chor deta hoo

muskaan: haa chalo

rahuln muskaan:bye armaan bye ridhimma

armaan n ridhimma: bye

ridhima: armaan tumhare tabiyat to theek hai

armaan: haa kyun

ridhima: tum itne der se koi prank nahi khela mujh pe

armaan: mai thak chukka ho ridhima ye roz roz ki ladaiyon se

ridhima: ladna chahta bhi koun hai

armaan:ok denajj sehum dost ban sakte hai

ridhima in her heart: kaheye iski koi chaal to nahi hai

armaan: kuch kaha tumne

ridhimma: nahi lekin tum phir mujhe kabhi tang nahi karoge

armaan: kabhi nahi

ridhima:ok den friends

armaan: friends

ridhimma: friends

ridhima: dim era wait ker rahe honge mujhe janahai bye

armaan: ok bye

ridhimma leaves

armaan: yippee!! Ab aae ga maza ab tum dekhna ridhima mai tumhare dil ki baat zubaan pe kaise lata ho

 

n daepisode ends

tomorrow: new interns entrance who dey will be villans or angles??? If u wanna know den do read next part

 

do readdo comment n do tell me whether I shuld continue or not

 

 

PART 10

Hello everyone im here again wid da next part

 

Kiya app sab ko pata hai humare aas paas bhi koi pyar kerne wala armaan ya wale ridhimma present ho sakta hai bas zaroorat hai usse pechanne ki God hume itne ishare dete hai us shaiks ke bare mai lekin hum hai keh kabhi un isharo ko samajh hi nahi pate aur jab dher sare koshisho ke baad bhi hum usse pechan nahi pate to humare liye aik angel bheja jata hai jo hum us insaan ke samne khara kare aur kaha : abe idiot he's da one"

 

Precap: armaan aur ridhima ab dost hai!....cant believe na

 

 

Next day

Everyone is sooo excited about da new interns

Dey show a gal coming in normal shalwar kameez (background nagada nagada music)

 

An accident case comes in sanjeevani everyone is bzy except muskaan so muskaan have to handle this as she is afraid of blood she tries her best but cannot handle aik ajnabi lady doctor ate hai she was wearing red shalwar kameez n she helped muskaan de have not shown da face of dat doctor yet

Muskaan: thank u yaar agar tum nahi hote to ajj dr.keerti to mere band nahi table hi baja dete

Doctor: itz ok

Muskaan: waise tum ho koun

Doctor: mai yaha ki nai intern ho dr.amber

 

Amber

Full name amber khan uncha lamba kad  so  much possessive about her ….her…….everything she is just cool mast gal n like to see everyone happy

Note: this character is a lil bit lyk me but not a copy of mine

Muskaan: to tum bhi Punjab se ho

Amber: haa

Announcemen: sabhi interns dr.keerti ko report kare

Muskaan: ab is waqt bogambo ko kiya kaam hai

Amber: bogambo??

Muskaan: samajh jao gi samajh jao gi ajj to tumhara pehla din hai ahista ahista samajh jao gi

As de were walking to report dr.keerti dey met ridhima

Amber: are ridhima

Ridhima: tum…..

N dey hugged each oder

Muskaan: tum ik dosre ko jante ho

Ridhima: buhat ache tarha se jab mai London mai the tab amber aur mai aik hi university mai the

Muskaan: lekin tum to Punjab se aae hona

Amber: actually London se mbbs complete ker ke Punjab chale gai the aur waha ke sanjeevani mai internship ker rahe the tab hi Mumbai se offer aae so I accepted it

Ridhima: ajj aik aur intern aa raha hai koi idea hai koun hai??

Muskaan: dr.kerti keh rahe the keh koi male doctor hai

Amber: hmm…

 

dey reported to dr.keerti everyone was there

dr.keerti: welcum amber app ko mai sab interns se milwa dete ho

n introduce everyone to her

muskaan: llekin ma'am do interns ane wale the na

dr.keerti: haa dr.muskaan lekin mai app logo ko batana bhool gai keh humare dosre intern 12 baje tak aae ge aur abhi toh sirf 10 baje hai

muskaan: ok ma'am

dr.keerti: ok everyone baq to work aur dr.amber app. App aj accident cases handle karenge

amber: ok ma'am

anjali: hey amber

armaan: tum dono aik dosre ko jante ho?

Muskaan: haa hero who ye dono aik saath London mai arhte the

Atul: my name is atul sun zara amber anjali kaha hai to ab chale

Amber: excuse me too please

Atul: are tum bhi hindi movies dekhte ho

Amber: haa

Atul n muskaan: ab to khoob jame gi jore

Armaan: chalo ab pore intership mai gane hi sunne ki milenge

 

everyone was soo happy wid da new intern

armaan to ridhima: hi friend

ridhima: hmm.. hi

armaan: how r u

ridhima: f9

armaan: hmm…

ridhima: armaan baat kiya hai sedhe tarha bolo na plz mujhe aur bhi buhat kaam hai

armaan: kuch bhi toh nahi

ridhima: theek hai ab mujhe jana hai bye

armaan: are ruko

atul: chale gai ab chale gai chale gai armaan ki ridhima gai

armaan: abe yaar to chup reh na

atul: armaan maine tere madad ki lekin tune to mere nahi ki

armaan: kiya?

Atul: madad yaar!

Armaan: tere bhi kerdenge pehle mai set ho jao phir tere bare mai sochenge

 

Everyone was on their duty

Amber ke baal khule hoe the so she picked a pen n tied her hairs wid it coz she was disturbed by her hair

 

After sometime her hair were opened she turned n saw a boy holding dat pen which she used to tie her hair

Amber: hey excuse me tumne pen kyun nikala mere balo se

Boy turned

Boy: mujhe zarorat the aur pen nahi mil raha tha (giving her pen baq) waise thanx

Amber just grabbed dat pen baq n again tied her hair

Boy: rehne dijiye na khule zyada ache lagte hai

Amber was too shocked : wat?

Boy: kuch nahi

Announcement: sabhi interns dr.keerti ko report kare

Amber: phir se  

 

Everyone was dere

Dr.keerti: sorry interns for disturbing u all lekin app ko apke nae college se milana tha ye hai dr.karan

N it was da same boy

Amber: tum!

Dr.keerti just staired @ her

Amber looked down

Dr.keerti: welcum dr.karan ye hai sare interns

N introduced everyone

Dr.keerti: ok interns ab app sab apne apne duties pe wapis jaa sakte hai

N dr.keerti left

Karan: hey saro!

Everyone looked @ each oder whos saro!

Karan: tum saro…yaar kiya naam bataya tha dr.keerti ne…….hmm……….haa dr.amber

Everyone looked @ amber

Armaan: tum dono aik osre ko jante ho

Karan: nahi lekin itna janta ho keh ghussa buhat hai madam mai

Amber: shut up

N leaves

Karan: hi everyone myself karan!

 

Karan gupta is a happy go lucky boy n is a bit naughty n is 40% flirty

 

N da episode ends

 

Hope u all liked it

 

Do read do comment n plz tell me whether I shuld continue or not


 

 

 

PART 11 Smile

Hey friends

 

Precap: entry of new interns

 

Karan went to dr.keerti

Karan: ma'am app ne mujhe to duty de hi nahi

Dr.keerti: app dr.amber ke saath accident cases handle karenge

Karan: ok ma'am

 

Amber to ridhimma: yaar ridhima tum se aik baat pooch

Ridhima: haa pooch

Amber: mind to nahi karoge

Ridhima: nahi

Amber: tum London mai armaan ke bare mai buhat kuch bataya kerti the n as I remember tum usse pyar kerti the aur pyar ka izhaar bhi ker chuki the

Ridhima: haan

Amber: to ab kiya?!!

Ridhima describes each n every thing to her

Amber: tum bas itne chote si baat pe usse itne bare sazadoge

Ridhima: nahi ye choti se baat nahi hai us ne jo kaha us ka matlab ye hai keh usne kabhi mujhe jana hi nahi

Amber: nahi ridhima who toh bus apne thoughts….

Ridhimma:its all over now aura b who mera dost hai sirf dost

Ridhima leaves

Amber: nahi ridhima tum sab kuch chupa lo lekin apne ankho mai us ke liye jo pyar hai who kaise chupao gi chalo amber abhi duty pe

 

An emergency case of accident came dey were 3 people 2gals n one boy

Amber was doing stitches on da gals forehead karan came dere

Amber did not noticed him

Karan: koi emergency case aya hai??

Amber: hmm…..

Karan: kounsa

Amber: tum dekh nahi rahe mai stitches laga rahe ho ankhe decoration ke liye to nahi hote

Karan: ok f9 mai khud dhondh longa

 

 

Scene shifts to atul n anjali

Atul: anjali tum thak to nahi gai mai tumhare liye coffee le ke ata ho

Anjali: nahi bas duty khatam hone wale hai uske baad saath mai caf chale ke coffe piyenge

Atul: haa zaroor

Amber is watching both of dem

Amber in her heart: dono aik dosre se pyar to kerte hai lekin bata nahi sakte poor dem

 

Scene shifts to muskaan n rahul

As rahul is soo silent muskaan keeps on talking widout listening even a word from rahul

 

Amber to wardbot: ye file dr.keerti ko dedijiye

N sees both of dem in caf

Rahul is watching muskaan n muskaan widout seeing @ him just talking talking n talking…

 

Amber in her heart: are ye toh chup hi nahi hote dekhe toh sahe woh usse kaise tuk tuk dekh raha hai lekin jab usse apne bato se fursat mile gi tab hi dekhe gin a ufff……… yaha bhi wahe hai! Kuch toh kerna hi pare ga

 

After a few days in locker room

Ridhima enters opens her locker n sees two flowers one red n da oder pink

Ridhima: ye kis kis ne bheje honge??

Everyone enters

Ridhima: hi everyone

Everyone: hi

Anjali: subah subah ye phool tumhare hath mai kiya ker raha hai zaroor atul ne diya hoga

Atul: nahi anjali maine aj tak tumhare siva kisi ko phool nahi diya sachi! Promise

Anjali: ok ok phir ye phool kaha se aya

Ridhimma: pata nahi di abhi jab locker khola to ander hi tha

Amber was looking confused

Ridhima: kiya hoa amber

Amber: kuch nahi

Karan was also looking confused

Atul: ab tujhe kiye ho gaya

Karan: kuch bhi toh nahi

Announcement: sabhi interns dr.keerti ko report kare

Atul: acha toh hum chalte hai

Holds anjals hand n leaves

Everyone left except amber n karan

Amber: oee chichundar who pink rose tune rakha than a

Karan: haa lekin tune bhi toh red rose rakha than a

Amber: mai chahe jo marzi karo tujhe isse kiye

Karan: to mai bhi chahe jo marzi karo tujhe kiya

Amber: huh!

Karan: huh!

 

N both turned their back towards each other after a min amber turned

Amber: dekho ab humare paas aur koi rasta nahi hai hume aik saath hi kaam kerna hoga

Karan: ok but kiya karenge

Amber: suspend!

Karan: kiya?

Amber: agar hum 2 min maid r.keerti ke paas na pohnche to for sure suspend ho jaenge

Karan: oh ya ryt

N dey both left for reporting get their duties n after their duties they were in da caf

Karan: so wats da plan of action

Amber: maine kuch socha hai

Karan: gr8 tum sochtii bhi hho

Amber: very funny

Karan: acha dekho ab hume dost banna chahiye coz hum aik saath dushman ban ke to kaam nahi ker sakte na

Amber: ker to nahi sakte lekin dost bhi nahi ban sakte 

Karan: c'mon yaar

Amber: ok lekin sirf isi kaam ke liye dosti us ke ilawa mai tum se baat bhi nahi kerna chahti aur mujhse is ke ilawa aur koi umeed bhi na rakhna

Karan: ok but tum mujhse itne ghusa kyun rehte ho

Amber: anywayz! Ab plan ye hai keh pehle takrar phir pyar aur phir!...

Karan: phir  ohhhhh cool tumhare paas to brain bhi hai

Amber: huh!

 

Coming soon: loads of masti loads of cute scenes n loads of fighting!

 

Hope u all liked it plz do read n do comment

 

 

 

PART 12 Smile

 

 

Hey everyone im here again wid next partSmile

 

Precap: amber n karan on a mission

 

 

Next day

Everyone in da locker room except amber.amber enters

Amber: hey everyone

Everyone: hey amber

Muskaa: kaise ho amber:

Amber: mai te bhale change tuse sunao ji

Muskaan: mere toh pocho hi mat mere Hitler landlady buhta hi kharoos hai yaar

Amber: tum mere ghar mai mere saath kyun nahi reh lete

Muskaan: tumhare ghar mai……

Armaan: haa isse tere problem bhi solve ho jae gi aur amber ko aik friend ka saath bhi mil jae ga

Amber: haa exactly aur waise bhi mai ghar mai akele hi toh rehte ho

Everyone: akele!!

Amber: haa mere parents ki death ho cchuki hai

Everyone makes a sad face

Tears came in amber's eyes

Amber: excuse me

N leaves locker room

Atul: chalo reporting tym ho chukka hai bogambo ke paas chalte hai aur usse khush kerte hai

Everyone: haa chalo

Interns: good morning dr.keerti

Dr.keerti: good morning(in a sad way)

Atul whispering wid anjali: ab inhe kiya ho gaya

Anjali: pata nahi

Dr.keerti: ajj app sab ki duties hai blah blah blah blah….

Dr.keerti: ok interns u all can leave now

Armaan: ajj sad day hai kiya??

Ridhima: lagta toh aisa hi hai hum aisa kerte hai keh dr.shubhaner se pochte hai

 

Dey found dr.shubhanker n asks wats daproblem wid dr.keerti

Shubhanker: actually interns hum dono ke engagement hone wale hai

Anjali: toh sir is mai dukhe hone wale kiya baat hai

Shubhanker: dukh ki baat ye nahi hai dukh ki baat toh ye hai keh hum dono ke parents ki death ho chuki hai aur humare realatives bhi kuch zyada nahi hai toh keerti isi baat se pareshan hai

Armaan: shubhanker sir app fiqar hi mat kare hum haina

Rahul: haa sir hum app logo ki shaadi dhoom dham se manae ge

Muskaan: haa oe mai toh ladki walo ki taraf se ho

Ridhima: mai bhi

Anjali: mai ladke walo ki taraf se

Armaan: mai ladke walo ki taraf se

Atul: jaha mere anjali wahe mai mai bhi ladke walo ki taraf se ho

Rahul: mai ladki walo ki taraf se

Amber: mai ladki walo ki taraf se

Karan: ab mai aur amber aik side se toh nahi ho sakte toh mera naam ladke walo ki taraf se mai likh lo

Everyone: likh lo matlab!

Karan: I mean mai ho

Keerti was listening all his convo so she became happy n hugged everyone

Armaan: magar ma'am engagement hai kab??

Keerti: next month

Amber: theek hai toh hum kal hi se tiyariya shuro ker denge yaad rakhna sab kal duties ke baad mere ghar aa jana

Everyone: ok

Keerti: thanx amber app ne jo kuch mere liye kiya…

Amber: ma'am appki tarha mere bhi parents nahi hai aur mujhe pata hai dat how it feels mai buhat khudgarz ho app ke family ban ke app se dher sara pyar lena chahte ho bas

Keerti hugged her: chale ab hum sab ko duties pe chalna chahiye warna sanjeevani hi band ho jae ga

Everyone laughs: yes ma'am

 

After duties

Amber was sitting in da locker room n thinking sumthing

Karan came n said this loudly in her ear: HELLO!!!!!LOL

Amber: ahhhhh

Karan laughs

Amber: idiot bewakoof dara diya na mujhe!

Karan: tum darte bhi ho! Strange

Amber: ajj to mai tumhe choronge nahi

Karan: pehle pakro gi tab choro gin a

Amber starts following him was just about to catch him n armaan came

Armaan: hey hey hey kiya pakran pakrae khel rahe ho mai bhi khelo

Everyone enters

Atul: haa acha idea hai bachpan ki yaade taza kerne ka

Anjali: stop it!

Atul: ok anjali tum kehte ho to mai ruk jata ho

Karan: tym please

N dey both stops

Amber: ok

Amber: yaar kyun na ajj hum sab film dekhne chale

Everyone: yaa!!!!

Anjali: kounsi film hai by the way?

Amber: Krishna cottage

Ridhima: horror movie hai na

Amber: haa lekin maza aae ga aur mere pas tickets bhi hai so plz na chalet hai

Everyone: ok

Dey all first went to their homes n den reached cinema hall

Amber was already present there n karan came

Karan: mai aa gaya

Amber: kitne der laga de

Karan: kyun tumne miss kiya

Amber hits his foot

Karan: ouch!

Amber: ab kaam ki baat suno maine aise film choose ki hai keh sab dark e mare aik dosre ke peeche chupne lage nge

Kaan: very bad tum apne friends ko darana chahte ho

Amber: oh God apne sara dimag mujhe kyun de diya kuch is bewakoof mai bhi daal dete

Amber: tum bas itna yaad rakho keh ridhima armaan ke saath anjali atul ke saath muskaan rahul ke saath aur tum mere saath betho

Karan: kyun tum hara irada kiya hai

Amber: tumse jitna kaha jae bas utna hi karo

Everyone came

Armaan: chalo ab chale

Amber: haa chalet hai mai starting miss nahi kerna chahte

 

Dey enters cinema hall n everyone sits

Anajli atul ke paas bethte hai muskaan rahul ke paas aur ridhima amber ke paas  aur karan armaan ke paas

Karan: ridhima tum yaha aa jao gi mujhe who wale sear pe bethna hai

Ridhima: ya sure

 

Film begins

Some very horror scenes ridhima hide her face behind armaan armaan was seeing her dey both lost in each others eyes

Muskaan became scared so she started screaming rahul putt her hand on her mouth n says: ok muskaan calm down

Anjali is watching movie widout anyfear but atul holds anjali hands tightly

Anjali: ye kiye ker raho ho atul

Atul: alto jalalto aae bala ko taal to alto jalato aae bala ko taal to

Anjali: atul atul

But he keep on saying da same word anjali ignores him n kept on watching da film

Amber hold karan's hand so tightly but karan did not said even a word he is just seeing her fully scared

After interval romantic film starts so amber started crying n karan keep on passing tissue paper to her n everyone was soo deeply involved in da film

 

After da film everyone is sitting in some restaurant

Anjali: wow yaar amber good choice I loved it

Atul: kya kak ache film the mai to marne hi wala tha aur who dekho muskaan ab tak kamp rahe hai

Armaan: haa drone film the n recalls when ridhima was trying to hide her face beside him

Ridhima: are karan ye tumhare hath ko kiya hoa dekho kitna khon nikal raha hai

Everyone became attentive

Anjali: aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi jangle billi ne tumhare hath noche ho

Karan: kuch aisa hi hai agle baar jab bhi hum film dekhne jaenge to amber ke nails pehle katwaenge phir jaenge

Anjali: yane keh ye….

Karan: haa amber ne hi kiya hai itne zoor se hath pakra hoa tha keh had

Amber: oh im sorry but itne bhi gehre zakham nahi hai ghar ja keh dressing ker lena

Atul: chalo ab hume chalna chahiye subah hospital bhi jana hai yaad haina

Armaan: haa chalo

Ridhima went home wid anjali muskaan n atul went home with their bicycle n scotty

Rahul in his car

Ab bache amber karan aur armaan car armaan aur karan ke paas tha

Karan: aao amber mai tumhe chor deta ho

Amber: nahi mai armaan ke sath jaonge

Amber: armaan kiya tum mujhe mere ghar chor doge

Armaan: ye bhi koi pochne ki baat hai come

Karan: yaar ye itna bhao kyun dete hai chal karan ab tobhi chal

 

Armaan n amber were on their way to their respective homes but they met wid an accident

Dr.keerti called karan: karan jalde hospital aao amber aur armaan ka accident ho gaya hai

Karan: kiya!!!! OMG ma'am mai abhi pohnch raha ho

Karan informed everyone

Karan came to sanjeevani first n saw keerti

Karan: dr.keerti ab kaise hai amber

Keerti: buhat critical condition hai unke

Karan: aur armaan

Keeerti: who out of danger hai but unke hath aur sir pe kafi gehre chote lage hai

Everyone reached their

Ridhima: karan…..armaan

Anjali: haa kaisa hai ab who?

Karan: he is out of danger

Atul: aur amber??

Karan starts crying: uske halat buhat critical hai

Muskaan: yaar to phikar na ker rab sab changa karega

Keerti: abhi hum dr.amber ka operation kerna hoga unke bazo mai sheshe ghus gai hai to koun mujhe assist kare ga

Karan: ma'am mai karoga apko assist

Ridhima: nahi karan tum nahi mai ker lete ho

Karan: nahi tum armaan ka khiyal rakho mai amber ka

Everyone: best of luk

Karan: enters operation theatre n sees  amber a drop of tear rolled over his cheek but he controlled himself n recalled all da moments dey were together

Keerti: dr.karan operation shuroo kare

Karan: yes dr.keerti

 

Everyone outside is just praying for da life of amber

 

Muskaan: rab je apko agar kuch lena hi hai toh mere jaan le lo magar plz amber ki jaan baksh do

Rahul: muskaan aise nahi kehte rabb sab da changa hi akre gat um khd  hi to kehte hona kisi ko kuch nahi hoga

Muskan apna sar rahul ke kandhe pe rakh ke rone lag jate hai

 

 

Atul: anjali tum fikar na karo God kabhi bhi amber jaise ache ladke ko hum se nahi chene ga

Anjali: I hope so

Ridhima is wid armaan armaan is still unconsciousCry

Ridhima: armaan tum sun raeh hona tumhe theek hona hi pare ga mere liye is hospital ke liye humare dosti ke liye

N holds her hand

 

Everyone is waiting fot karan n keerti to come out n give them a good news of amber's life

 

 

Coming soon: kiya hoga amber ka?????

 

So dis was a toooooooooo long part  hope u liked n plz do read n do comment n do tell me whether I shuld continue or not

 

 

PART 13  Smile

 

Hey everyone

 

Precap: armaan n amber's accident

 

Karan came our of da operation theater

Everyone gather around him except ridhima as she is taking care of armaan

Muskaan: kuch bole gab hi keh nahi

Anjali: tell na

Karan said yes wid sign language

Karan: operation to theek hoa lekin agar kal tak hosh na aya to ……

Muskaan: oee to fikar hi na kar jab tak rab humare saath hai kuch nahi hoga amber ko

Rahul: haa muskaan bilkul theek ekh rahe hai

Atul: chal karan tum ab buhat thak gai hoge tum ghar jao

Anjali: haa aisa karo tum sab ghar cahale jao mai yahe rukte ho

 

Meanwhile ridhimma came there

Ridhima: karan kaise hai amber ab?

Karan: khatre se baher hai

Ridhima: thanks God

Anjali: chalo ab tum sab ghar jao mai hona yaha

Karan: nahi anjali mai yaha ruk jata ho

Anjali: tumne apne halat dekhe hai tum ghar ja keh aram karo

Karan: agar ghar jao ga to yahe sochta rahonga keh amber ab kaise hoge to isi acha nahi yahe beth keh socho

Anjali: u sure

Karan: ya tum sab jao abhi

Ridhima: haa karan bilkul theek keh raha hai mai aur karan armaan aur amber ke liye rukte hai app sab jao

Everyone: ok bye karan take care

 

Karan came in da amber's room just putted her head on da bed n slept deeply

 

Ridhima went to armaan's ward

Ridhima while holding his hand: armaan tumhe jalde se theek hona hoga humare dosti ke liye waise agar sach kaho to mujhe ye rishta dosti se kuch zyada lagta hai jab maine tumhare accident ka suna to aisa laga jaise mere pairo ke neeche se zameen hat gai bas ab aur nahi ab mai tumhe theek dekhna chahte ho ok so get well soon

She went to da sofa nearby n slept

 

Next day morning

 

Amber became conscious n saw karan wid her

Amber in a low voice: ahem ahem n tried to sit

Karan woke up: are ye tum kiya ker rahe ho lete raho koi zaroorat nahi hai bethne ki maihona

Amber: tum kab aae?

Karan: kal se yahe tha

Amber: kyun koi ladne ke liye nahi mila kiya

N dey both laughed amber start coughing

Karan: ye lo pani pio

N gave her da glass of water

Karan: aram se

Amber stairing @ him in a strange way

Amber: tere tabiyat to theek hai

Karan: haa to bata tere to  theek haina?

Amber: haa mai theek hi ho lekin kafi dard ho rahe hai tango mai aur sar mai bhi

Karan: ab operation hoa hai to dard aram aram se hi jae ga na

Amber did not understand y karan was being protective towards her

 

 

In armaan's ward

Armaan woke up but ridhimma was still sleping

As armaan had few injuries so he walked towards ridhimma

And removed hair from her face n was just looking @ her n ridhima woke up

Ridhima: armaan tum! Yaha kiya ker rahe ho tumhe apne bed pe hona chahiye tha

Armaan: haa who pani pani lene aya tha

Ridhima: mujhe keh diya hota abhi chalo apne bed pe

They both walked towards armaans bed

Ridhima: ab yaha se hilna bhi mat jo chahiye mujhe kehna

N brought a glass of water for him

Ridhima: ye lo

Armaan: woh!..kal ke accident mai amber bhi mere saath the …who theek to haina

Ridhima: tum fikar na karo karan hai uske saath

Armaan: sab mere galte hai

Ridhima: kyun?

Armaan: woh….(n recalled da accident moment he remembered he was thinking about ridhima)

Armaan: kuch nahi tum yaha kab se ho

Ridhima: kal raat se

Armaan: lekin kyun?

Ridhima: as a friend n a doctor

Armaan: as a friend or a……

Ridhima: kiya matlab haii tumhara(n stand up)

 

Dr.keerti came

Keerti: dr.armaan ab app kaisa feel ker rahe hai

Armaan: better ma'am

Keerti: get well soon

N leaves

Ridhima: dr.keerti woh……

N she tries to leave but her hand was stucked somewhere

Ridhima: armaan! Mera hath choro

No response

Ridhima:armaan mera hath…….

As she turns she see dat her bracelete was stucked wid armaan's shirt

Armaan just stairing @ her n giving a naughty look

Ridhima just tried to get it out but her bracelete was soo stucked dat cant be taken out so she take dat bracelete out n leaves it there  n leaves

Ridhima: dr.keerti

Keerti: ji dr.ridhima

 

Ridhima: ma'am amber kaise hai ab??

Keerti: abhi unke reports aa jate hai to sab pata chal jae ga

Ridhima: ok ma'am mai ab ghar ja ke ate hoo

Keerti: ji

 

Wardboy came: dr.keerti ye lijiye dr.amber ki file

Keerti: thanx

After seeing it she is very shocked

N went to amber's room

Keerti: dr.amber ab app kaisa feel ker rahe hai

Amber: good ma'am

Keerti: maine appko kuch batana tha

 

No one is their dey talked but it is not shown wat dey talked

 

 

Karan: dr.keerti reports theek to aae na

Dr.keerti: ji dr.karan

Karan: thank God

But keerti is looking sad

Karan: ab dono ko discharge kab kerna hai

Dr.keerti: armaan ko kal aur amber ka pata nahi

Karan: ok ma'am mai abhi amber se mil ke ata ho

Everyone came: hey karan ab amber kaise hai

Karan: she's fine mai bas usse hi milne ja raha ho

Anjali: to chalo hum bhi chalte hai

Karan: haa chalo

 

Everyone in amber's room amber is in sleep

Karan: amber utho dekho sab tumse milne aae hai

Amber woke up n after seeing everyone around her in such a serious faces

Amber: mai kahe mar to nahi gai jot um sab mujhe aise dekh rahe ho

Muskaan: oee mare tere dushman tujhe kuch nahi hoa sab theek hai

Anjali: ab kaise feel ker rahe ho

Amber: changa ji

Atul: lekin ye sab kaise….

Amber: oee apko pata hai ye sab kyun hoa

Rahul: kyun

Amber: kyunki mai film ke liye is manhoos karan ke saath jo bethe the

Everyone laughs

Muskaan: chal amber ab toh jalde jalde theek hoja phir saath mai duties karenge

 

Announcement:dr.karan,dr.anjali,dr.atul aur dr.rahul dr.keerti ko report kare

Rahul: abhi kyun bulaya hai

Anjali: chalo dekh keh ate hai

 

Muskaan: tum theek to ho na

Amber: haa bas thore sar dard hai

Amber: waise aik baat batao ye karan yaha kab se hai

Muskaan: jab se tum yaha ho tabse in fact jab hum yaha pohnche to humse pehle hi tha aur to aur raat ko anjali ne kaha bhi usse keh ghar chale jao lekin who nahi mana aur pore raat tumhare paas raha aur usse ne to tumhara operation kiya mai tumhare liye fruits late ho

Amber thought: kahe karan mujhse???....nahi aisa nahi ho sakta

 

Next day

Everyone enters in da amber's room

Amber: hey everyone ajj pora ka pora gang yaha hey armaan ab kaise ho

Armaan: theek bas halke phulke chote hai tum sunao tum kaise ho

Amber: bas theek aoo na betho

Anjali: amber dats it mai ab inhe aur bardasht nahi ker sakte

Amber: lekin kiya hoa??

Anjali: tumhe pata hai kal hum sab dr.keerti aur dr.shubhanker ki engagement ki shoping ke liye gai the ar ye sab mere baat manne ko tiyar hi nahi

Armaan: ab jab hum keh rahe hai keh gende ke phool decoration mai ache lage ge to tum humare baat kyun nahi maan rahe

Anjali: nahi rose flower zyada ache lage ge

 

Muskaan: rahul dekh tujhe ye kerna hi hoga

Rahul: nahi mai ye nahi karoga

Amber: kiya kerna hoga…wat r u talking about

Muskaan: dekh na yaar mai ise keh rahe ho keh red shirt pehne ga to sona lage ga aur hum sab red saree red shalwar kameez aur red ghagre hi toh pehne wale hai

Rahul: nahi mujhe blue colour pasand hai

Muskaan: red

Rahul: blue

Muskaan: red!!!

Rahul: blue!!

 

Anjali: rose

Atul: genda

Anjali: rose!!

Atul:genda!!!

Amber: ENOUGH  ENOUGH  ENOUGH!!

Everyone stops

Amber: hash!!

Karan: ye lo pani piyo

Amber: nahi pina mujhe dekho guyz I have a better idea ladke wale right pe khare ho aur ladki wale left pe

Muskaan,ridhima,rahul  stands on da right

Armaan,atul,karan n anjali stands on da left

Amber: ab anjali tum right pe jao aur rahul tum left pe jao

Rahul n anjali goes dere

Amber: dats it mai yahe keh rahe ho keh dr.keerti ki side pe ladkiya ho jate hai aur sir shubhanker ki side pe ladke ho jao is dat ok now

Armaan: ya good

Everyone: dats ok

Announcement: sabhi interns dr.keerti ko report kare

Anjali: chalo galz follow me

Atul: are ye to abhi se shuroo ho gai

Anjali: bye amber take care

 

N everyone leaves

 

Coming soon: keerti n shubhanker's enagement's preprations n da MEGA EVENTSmile

 

Hope u all liked it

Plz do read  ,do comment n do tell me whether I shuld continue or not

 

 

 

 

 

 

PART 14

 

 

Hey everyone Big smile

Im here again wid da next part

 

Precap: ladkiya keerti ki side pe aur ladke shubhanker ki side pe

 

Armaan is discharged

Next day

Dr.keerti: good morning amber ab app kaisa feel ker rahe haiSmile

Amber:  theek ma'am. Ma'am app se aik request the kiya app mujhe ajj discharge ker sakte hai

Dr.keerti: but kyun?

Amber: ma'am mai yaha rahonge to sab har waqt mujh hi se milne ate rahe ge aur apne duties pe kam concentrate karenge aur mai aisa bilkul nahi chahte aur waise bhi ajj se hum appki engagement ki prepration kerne to wale hai toh sab raat ko mujhse milne aa jaenge

Dr.keerti: ya but apko daily check up ke liye ana pare ga

Amber: ok ma'am

Dr.keerti: app 12 baje tak ghar jaa sakte haiSmile

 

Karan in very anger entering amber's wardAngry

Karan: amber ye kiya haiAngry

Amber: kiya shesha dekh liya kiyaLOLLOL

Anjali n muskaan r also present there

Dey all started laughingLOLLOLLOL

Karan: kiya tum dono khi khi ker ke has rahe ho isse kuch samjhate kyun nahiAngry

Anjali: kiya samjhae n by da way wat r u talking about

Karan: are ye ajj dischare hone ki baat ker rahe hai abhi injuries theek nahi hoe I don't think it's a good decision

Muskaan: oee to to awae sar pe charh raha hai atleast ghar mai zyada zraam ker sake ge

Karan: lekin

Armaan n ridhima enters

Ridhima: hey everyone

Armaan: ouch

Ridhima: kiya hoa maine kaha than a keh abhi tumhe rest ki zarorat hai mere baat to tum kabhi mante nahi ho chalo abhi yaha bethoEmbarrassed

N dey both sat on sofa

Atul: are intern gang pora ka pora yaha lekin kuch kami hai

Rahul: bachna ae haseeno lo mai aa gaya

Atul: are to bhi…..kher

Amber: galz ajj tum sab mere ghar aa jana engagement ki tiyariya shuroo kare ab sirf 3 weeks rehte hai

Anjali: n remember kal intern of da month announce hona hai

Muskaan: aho who kaise bhool sakte hai

Rahul: chalo phir ajj milte hai amber ke ghar pe

Muskaan: ooe hello tumne suna nahi usne kiya kaha usne kaha GALZ! Yane keh boyz not allowed

Armaan: aise baat hai to ajj tum sab mere ghar aa jana BOYZ!!

Ridhima: armaan I think tumhe aik do din ki chutti le lene chahiye

Armaan: tum mera kitna khyal rakhte ho

Ridhima gets confused n started looking here n dere: dost dost ka khyal nahi rakhe gat oh koun rakhe gaEmbarrassed

Anjali: wah ridhima tum to kafi kuch sekh chuki ho

Amber: chalo ab mera jane ka tym ho gaya hai muskaan tum ma'am ko bool dena ajj raat ka

Muskaan: haa theek hai

Karan: amber mai tumhe chor do

Amber: nahi mai khud chale jaonge

Rahul: aise kaise khud chale jaonge

Atul: haa aur  rickshaw mai toh jhatke bhi buhat lagte haina

Amber: lekin mai keh rahe hona mai chale jaonge

Anjali: come on amber zid mat karo karan ke saath chale jao

Ridhima: haa amber

Amber: ok chalo

She is walking wid da help of stick she hand over her bag to karan as dey reached gate of sanjeevani

Amber: are karan tumne dr.keerti ko toh inform hi nahi kiya

Karan: nahi maine ker diya tha

Amber: ok good

 

They both sit in da car n went to her home

 

As dey reached

Amber: chalo ab tumhe der ho rahe hoge tum jao warna bogamba buhat dante ge ok bye

Karan just stood dere n kept on stairing here

Amber: karan!!!

Karan: ha….kiya kaha tumne

Amber: jalde jao hospital!!

Karan: ya bye take care

Amber: bye

Karan: see you!

Amber: ya see u

Karan: tata

Amber: ab jao bhi

 

After duties muskaan came home as I have told before muskaan n amber live together

Muskaan came in da amber's room

Muskaan: hey amber ab kaisalag raha hai

Amber: changa ji

Muskaan: ajj baher buhat barish ho rahe hai mai toh aa gai abhi sab waha phanse honge

 

 

Dey show sanjeevani gate

Atul ridhima rahul n armaan are standing there

Ridhima: ab yaha se kaise jae ge maine di ko kaha tha keh pehle mat jao ab mai kiya karo

Atul: apne choro mere sochho mere cycle bechare kahe khare bheg rahe hoge

Rahul: tu tension na le mai tujhe chor deta ho infact hum sab ne armaan ke ghar hi toh jana hai toh sab chalte hai

Armaan yelling wid pain: ahh

Ridhima: aur tum kaise jao ge

Armaan: apne gare se

Ridhima: halat nahi lag rahe gare chalane ke kabil

Atul n rahul leaves

Rahul: bye armaan tere ghar pe milte hai

Atul: bye ridhima

Arman: chalo!

Ridhima: kaha!?

Amran: mai tumhe chor deta ho

Ridhima: r u sure u can drive?

Armaan: ya

Ridhima: ok then chalo

 

Dey both sat in da car

Their was complete silent

As dey were passing they saw basketball court

Armaan: ridhima yaad hai yaha kitna basketball khela hai humne

Ridhima: haa yaad hai lekin humesha jeete to mai hi the

Armaan: humesha! Did u said humesha jhoot mat bolo mai bhi jeetta tha

Ridhima: kab?

Armaan: haa woh…….

Ridhima: jhote

Armaan: kitne haseen the na who din

Ridhima: haa tumhare liye toh kuch zyada hi the

N dey both laughed

Armaan: ahh

Holding his head

Ridhima: kiya hoa armaan stop da car armaan

Armaan stoped da car

Ridhima came very close to him seeing wat happened to her forehead she did not realized it but armaan was just stairing @ her she after sumtym realized it n pulled herself bak n started looking out of da window

Armaan smiled n started driving

Dey reached ridhimma's home n dropped her armaan went bak to his home

 

 

Ridhimma enering house n anjli came ridhima is lost in her own world

Anjali: are ridhima tum aa gai mai tumhe lene aa hi rahe the

No response

Anjali:ridhima!!

Ridhima: ji di! Haa who armaan ne chor diya chale di ab mai change ker ke ate ho amber ke ghar jana haina

Anjali: y a I m waiting jalde kerna

 

Ridhima changed n dey both went to amber's home

 

Ting tong!

Muskaan: ya coming

Opens da door

Ridhimma n anjali r there

Muskaan: hi yaar kitne der karde kitne der se tumhara wait ker rahe hai

Anjali: bas ye ridhimma hi der kerte hai humesha

Ridhima: sorry ab kaam ki baat kare

 

Dr.keerti n amber r sitting dere n discussing engagement's theme

 

Dr.keerti: I think humetheme red colour ki rakhne chahiye watssay?

Anjali: job hi theme ho lekin un boyz se better ho

 

@armaan's house

shubhanker: tum ladke kisi kaam ke nahi ho kuch toh soch kiya decoration kare kiya kapre pehne ladkiya tumse kafi better hai

armaan: sir ye baat to app ne sahe kahe chale ladkiyo ke paas chalk eh unhe se pooch lete hai

atul: haha tumhe kiya lagta hai abhi hum jaenge aur humpe phol bares ge are pathar ki barish karenge hum pe

rahul: to aab kiya kare

armaan: idea

 

@ amber's house

ridhima: red decoration ache alge gi aur ring diamond ki

anjali: ya

muskaan: haa buhat ache rahe gin a

keerti: aur kapre???

Amber: app ka lahenga red colour ka mai kal hi jake order de donge

Muskaan: is tarha jaege langri khelte khelte

Amber: are haa

Muskaan: mai kal dr.keerti ke saath ja ke order ker donge tension nahi

Anjali: aur humare dresses mai aik cheez common hoge red colour uske ilawa hum baad mai apne dresses decide karenge

Ridhima: ab socho gana bajana bhi toh kerna hai

Muskaan: lekin sangeet toh sirf shaadi mai hota haina

Ridhima: are to fikar na ker engagement mai bhi gana chalta hai

Amber: haa hum itne ache practice karenge keh ladko keh moo khole reh jayenge

 

Boyz r listening from window

Atul: aaela!LOL

Armaan put his hand on atuls mouth they come out

Armaan: agar ye sher hai to hum bhi

Rahul: sawa sher hai!

Atul: kiya??Confused

Shubhanker: guyz ab yeh socho keh hum kiya kare

Armaan: sir apko ab tak itne si baat samajh mai nahi aae kal se humare bhi practice

Armaan,rahul,atul: shuroo!!!Wink

 

N da episode endsSmile

 

Coming soon: intern of da month n prepration 4 shubhanker n keerti's engagementBig smile

 

 

 

Hope u all liked it plz do read do comment n do tell me whether I shuld continue or not

 

PART 15

 

Hey everyone likhte likhte pata hi nahi chala kab 15th part bhi aa gaya I never use to believe in myself but now I thin dat I got some creative thoughts so thanx all 4 dat luv u all n thanx for supporting again n reading it

 

Precap: guyz spying in galz preprations

 

 

Next day

 

Ridhimma is jogging sa she reaches basketball court all moments wid armaan n rest of her friends come in her mind she entered basker ball court n started playing basketball armaan came there but she did not noticed him he was stairing @ her after sumtym he entered basketball court

Armaan: hey basket court nahi kerna kiya

Ridhima: kiya faida humesha to tum harte ho

Armaan: ab nahi haronga

Ridhima: humesha yahe kehta ho

N dey both laughed

Ridhima: don't u think ab hume chalna chahiye

Armaan: haa aur ajj iotm bhi announce hona hai so best of luk

Ridhima: same to u

 

same day @ sanjeevani

Locker room

Muskaan just praying

Atul enters

Atul: hey muskaan

Muskaan no response

Atul: muskaan

Karan n amber enters too

Karan: kiya hoa

Atul: muskaan jawab hi nahi de rahe

Muskaan: atul buhat dar lag raha hai itne nervous to mai apne result pe kabhi nahi hoe the

Armaan enters

Armaan:lekin result to wahe ae ga na jo kiya hoga

Anjali enters

Anjali: exactly agar is month nahi bhi ban pae to next month ke liye try karma ab intern of da month ka award sirf aik ko hi milna haina muskaan

Muskaan: baat to tum sahe keh rahe ho

Everyone is bzy wid there lockers

Ridhima enters

Atul: is ko aaj nervous nahi hona chahiye tha???

Armaan: haa

Ridhimma: lekin atul jo hona hai who hona hai phir kis baat ka rona hai

Anjali: dekhe mere aur mere behan ki sooch kitne milte julte hai

Rahul enters

Rahul: hey

Everyone: hey

Rahul: chalo sirf 5 min reh gai hai ceremony shuroo hone mai

Dey all reached hall

Dr.shubhanker: hello everyone u all worked good but intern odd a month is…..

Dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak

Shubhanker: dr.muskaan chadda

Muskaan's eyes r closed n rahul is sitting wid her he immediately hugs her

Hall mai taliyo ki awaz gunj rahe hai

Muskaan is soo happy

She received da award

Karan: chal yaar ab treat

A wardboy came

Wardboy: dr.karan apke liye ye letter aya hai

Karan receives it n went outside to read it

 

After sumtym amber realized dat karan was not present she searched for him everywhere but cant find him tied his cell but it was switched off @ last she went in da locker room karan was sitting there wid his head down

Amber: tum yaha ho tumhe pata hai maine tumhare liye pora hospital chan mara

Amber:ab kuch bolo bhi

Karan is just sitting silently

As amber sat down she sees tears in karans eyes n was totally shocked

Karan:…..woh nahi rahe……

Amber: koun?

Karan: da most important person of my lyf………mere dade…

N started crying lyk hell n hugged amber

Amber make him feel comfortable

Karan: unke antim sanskaar ke liye mujhe jana hoga

Amber: mai bhi chalonge tumhare saath

Everyone enters

Atul: are isi kiya hoa award na jetne ka gum mana raha hai

Everyone laughed except amber n karan

Amber staired @ atul

Amber: karan ki dade ……ab nahi rahe

Everyone was shocked

Armaan: karan( sat wwid him) tum fikar na karo hum sab haina

everyone was consoling

amber: ab antimsanskaar ke liye mai aur karan out of town jaenge aik do din mai wapis aa jaenge

atul: amber tumhare to tang waise bhi kharab hai toh mai tumhare jaga chala jata ho

amber said in sign language dat she will go

armaan: hum sab chalte hai

amber: haa aur yaha ka kaam koun karega

armaan: haa phir theek hai tum dono jao

 

they told everything to keerti n keerti allowed both of dem

dey both left for bhatinda were his dade use to live

armaan was watching dat ridhimma was upset

armaan put his hand on her shoulder

armaan: ridhimma kiya hoa

ridhimma: kisi ko khone ka dard kiya hota hai eh mujhse acha aur koun jaan sakta hai

n left

 

 

amber n karan are traveling on karan's car

complete silent is dere

amber: karan ye apne app ko sambhalne ka waqt hai agar tum yohe ansoo bahate raho ge to isse kisi ko kuch nahi milega na tumhare dade ko na tumhe tum bas apne dil mai ye pray karo keh tumhare dade jaha kahe bhi hoo khush ho aur socho jab who uss sky se(pointing towards sky) tumhe dekhenge to who kitna roe g e aur jab who roenge to barish ho ge kyunki barish tabhi hote hai jab upper koi buhat sad ho

karan was listening it very carefull

karan: thanx amber

amber: are is mai thanx ki kiya baat hai jab bhi koi aisa moka aae na to apne dil se sare pareshaniya 2 sec ke liye nikaal ke apne ankhe band kerke socho keh is waqt kiya kerna chahiye answer khud hi mil jae ga

karan: sachi

amber: muchi mai bhi aisa hi kerte ho

 

who waha gai aur dosre hi din sare rasme pore ker keh wapis ane ke liye nikal gai@ sanjeevani

muskaan: bechara karan uski dade ……..

anjali: haa really soo sad

atul: uski shakal roo roo ke adhe ho gai the

rahul haa aur muskaan iotm bhi ban gai

atul: kiya?.. .hum yaha uske dade ka dukh mana rahe hai aur to

muskaan: maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha

 

keerti: congrats muskaan n by da way app 1 week tak monitor hai jo sab ko duties de ge

muskaan: ok ma'am

keerti: soo app ka kaam kal se shuro hai

muskaan: ok ma'am

ridhimma was sitting in da stair case

armaan went there n sat wid her

armaan: tum humesha porane sare baate kyun yaad kerte rehte ho

ridhimma: tumhe kiya lagta hai mai yeh apne marzi se kerte ho

armaan: I know lekin tum apne zindagi mai sirf ache porane yaade yaad rakho baqi sab bhool jao apne ankhe band karo

ridhimma: kyun?

Armaan: karo na ab dekho yaad karo who sare ache ache yaad

She remembered when her mom gave her first bday present

Armaan: sab kitna acha haina

Then she remembered when dey visited parks n all

Armaan: kitne pyare pyare yaade haina in ke sath jiyo

N den da scene when she proposed to armaan came n she suddenly open her eyes her eyes were still full of tears

Armaan: ridhimma kiya hoa

Ridhima just ran away from there

N she was sitting in da locker room all alone

Ridhimma to herself: aik baar phir try kerte hai

Aur is baar use armaan ke sare pranks yaad ate hai

N she open her eyes

Ridhimma: nahi mai ye sab yaad nahi rakhna chahte

Anjali entered

Anjali: kiya yaad nahi rakhna chahte

Ridhimma: kuch nahi di

Anjali: are tum toh ro rahe ho

Ridhimma: …who….di….. mama

Anjali: oh mujhe bhi

N they both hugged

 

Amber n karan reached sanjeevani

Amber: waise safar acha raha par ab koi galat fehmi mat rakhna

Karan: galat fehmi?? Kaise galat fehmi

Amber: wahe jot um humesha mujhse rakhte ho dost banne ki

N leaves

Karan: ye ladki sach mai pagal hai

N hit his head

 

 

N da episode ends

Hope u all liked it

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