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Temptations

Temptations

The world is full of people.  People you know of; people you don't know of.  Most of the people in this world don't affect your life in anyway.  But there are also people in this world who end up changing your entire life.

This is the story of six strangers who had one goal to become doctors.  They were strangers to each other and to themselves.  This is the story of how these six individuals realized that strangers are friends you have yet to meet.  This is the story of the temptations these strangers brought out in one another.  The temptation to succeed; the temptation to expect; the temptation to give-up; the temptation to desire; the temptation to hate; the temptation to love.  It is these temptations that these six strangers bring about in each other and how these temptations alter their lives forever.

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The Characters




Armaan Malik - A hot shot who is actually smart. Armaan is a chick magnet. He is someone who is liked by all being it boys or girls. He has this charm that can lure anyone away but beyond that Armaan is a dedicated student who wants to be a doctor. Not many know but Armaan Malik is actually a nerd, someone who hides his face in books.



Riddhima Gupta - She is cool and beautiful. Riddhima, has been born and brought up abroad. For her to come to India was in itself an experince. Riddhima is a dedicated and caring person who wants to be a doctor. Riddhima also a certain charm which can lure people into her.

"They met, they fought, they cried, they laughed and they would change the meaning of life and love forever"



Anjali Gupta - Anjali has been born and brought up in India. She is the cousin of Riddhima but has never met her till date and does not even realize that Riddhima is her own cousin. Anjali is very sophicated, stylish and is perfectionist. She always strive for the best and cannot stand to lose.



Atul Joshi - Is the most coolest guy on campus. Atul is a nature and animal lover and is always in the good books of everyone. He is caring and nice but beneath it all, Atul is someone with a goal in life. Someone who is out to prove something. Someone who would change someone else forever..

"They met, and they stared" "It was never at love at first sight but something happened which changed their lives forever"



Rahul Grewal - He is cool, clever and smart. He think of himself as Mr. Perfect and strives to be the best in life. Though not many know but Rahul is actually a someone who is always there for his friends and his family. Rahul is also stylish and is named in College as Style Icon.



Muskaan Chadda- She loves talk and talk. Nothing can bore her and She does not care if you get bored. She talks so much that she even talks in her sleep. But Muskaan is a very nice and caring girl who is deterimed to become a doctor and show it to the world that there is not much of a difference between female and male.

They met, they fought, they talked, they irritated each other, they laughed and then... everything changed forever".

Cast -
Armaan - Karan Grover
Riddhima- Shilpa Anand
Anjali - Sunaina
Atul - Pankit Thakkar
Muskaan - Dhrishti
Rahul - Mayank Anand
Shashank - Monish Behl
Padma - Shilpa Tuliskaar
Keerti - Sonia
Subhankar - Ayaz Khan

Side Characters ( but important part of the story)


Shashank Mehra - Is the dean of the Medical College. Very strict. Shashank does not care much as long as his college does not come under problems. Shashank is also a toughest teacher at the medical school.


Padma Bansal - is the headmistress of the Medical College. Unlike the dean, Padma is very caring, fun loving and is always looking out for her students.



Keerti Mehra - is the daughter of Shashank Mehra and just like her father is very strict in the matters of teaching what is right and wrong. But she has a past which no one knows about.



Subhankar Sai - is the most fun loving teacher at the Medical College. He is on everyone top favorite list and tries to make the subject funny and great as possible. He is also someone who is there for his students, faculuty and staff...

This story is written and produced by

"Heaven Productions"

Which includes all the members of
Karan/Armaan & Riddhima/Shilpa Heaven

We hope you enjoy reading it!

Please leave your comments. The first part will be posted soon.

Chapter Index-
Part 1 - pg 4  or pg 1


Edited by jenny1000 - 10 June 2008 at 3:36pm

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Part 1 -By Jenny

" Oye, I am late, hurry up, I need to catch the train as soon as possible, I cannot miss this train"

"Madam, please relax, you are not gonna miss the train. As long as I am here, you won't miss it?"

"Oye shut up yaar. I cannot miss this train, I need to climb this train like this before my family finds out that I ran away to pursue my profession. In my house, girls and boys are treated so unfairly. They think that as a girl, I should only get married and settle down. Forget that, I got admission to such a good medical school and I am going to be a doctor"

" Of course Madam, but I have a question?"

" Do you have to ask questions now?" " What is it?"

" Do you talk this much always?"

" Oye , I do. I love to talk, do you have a problem?

" No Madam. Here, I have gotten all your luggage in, now give your hand yaar."

Boom Boom..

" Yes, I did not miss the train, phew. I am so scared to climb the train when the train is running. Now let me find my seat.."

As she walked, she stared at all the people that were looking at her. While she did not realize, there was a marble on the floor. As soon as she stepped on it, she fling through and landed into someones's arms. As she opened her eyes, she looked into his big eyes. For a moment, both did not realize what happened. When they realized, they got up.

" Can't you see?"

" Listen, I can see, but it;s not my fault there was a marble on the floor"

" Whatever"

As he walked away from her, she stared at him. " What the heck does he think of himself? He think he is some Brad Pitt, but looks like a monkey. Now let me find my seat, A21.

As she moved, and finally found her seat. All she wanted to was sleep. She put her luggage closely and turned to face the person with the paper in his hand. She decided that if she was gonna have to sit in this seat for a long trip, she might as well communicate..

" Helloji. Excuse me? "

The person grunted twice but she did not understand anything and continued..

" My name is Muskaan Chadda. Muskaan meaning smile. My parents tell me I have a beautiful smile"

" I went to school in all girls school. I have 3 sisters and 4 brothers. I have done my graduation and all. Now I am going to become a doctor."

" I want to prove that girls are equal to boys or even more superior"

" I am tennis champion and I love to eat and talk"

" What about you?"

As the person put down his paper, she stared at him. " Tum?"

" Are you done? I have gotten a headache because of you! Don't you ever shut up?

" Excuse me, please .. No one can get a headache for me, instead I cure them but If I knew I was gonna be sitting with a khadroos, I would talked more just to irrtate you."

" Whatever"

" Hmph..."

She turned and stared out the window. Before she had realized, she had fallen asleep.

He closed his paper and saw her. She looked so innoncent when she sleeps he thought to himself. She was a stranger to him but something about him inclined him towards her. He noticed that she was shivering. He grabbed the blanked next to him and covered her up. He smiled and turned towards the window to sleep. She opened her eyes slowly and thought to herself. " Itne Bhi Bura Nahin Hai"

Few hours later,

She started snoring. Her snoring kept him awake the entire night. It wasn't her snoring but the fact she talked in herself really irrtated him. He had so much to think over. He was going to begin his medical school year. He had always topped but this year, the compettion was tough after all he had gotten to the best medical college in the country and so had many other people. He always believed in topping but nowadays his concentration was on something else. Those dreams that he kept having bothered him downright. Who was that girl in his dreams? Why did it bother him that he could not see who she was? Why did he feel that she was gonna change his life? Even the Gurjuji at home told him that he is going to meet few people who will change his life forever. Who was gonna be those people and who was the girl? He had plently of girlfriends but why was he not interested in any of them? Why did he want to search her.? As the train jolted him out of his thoughts, he turned and decided to wash his hands..

Just then.. Someone came towards the door. He bumped into the person and felt really weird. He stared back at the man and walked away just then he stopped. He realized and ran back. Before the man could approach "her" , he reached there and grabbed him. She woke up and was shocked to see him beating this other guy. She made sure all her stuff was safeguarded when she realized the man had her purse. She screamed loudly but by that time many other people had come towards to help. The man was put away and she had been her purse back but he was not alright. He had been hurt on the hand. She grabbed his hand and made him sit down next to her. She grabbed her medical kit..

" Hero, what the heck do you think you were doing?"

" I am not some hero. I did what I felt was right"

" Yeah, but hurting yourself for whom? I am just a stranger"

" No, you are not a stranger. You have told me everything about yourself therefore you are not a stranger, no longer"

She smiled at his talks. She applied the bandage and kept her hand on his hand. She felt a little spark and so did he. He smiled at her and went back to sit his spot.

Few hours later, the train had arrrived at it's destination.

As they both grabbed their luggage, she couldn't handle the hard hitting things so he grabbed it for her. She smiled. As they reached the platform, he stepped down and approached her with his hand. She smiled and grabbed it. As he gave her stuff back, she felt his touch on her hand. He smiled.. There was just silence between them...

" Thanks. Thanks for everything"

" No problem. Good luck in everything you do"

" You too., Bye"

" Bye"

As he walked away from her, she just stood there. She then realized that she did not even know his name. As she ran behind him, he dissappared into the shadows of people. She then realized something..

" What is happening to you Muskaan?" He is not your destination, your path is different from his" and she turned around and walked in the different direction....

But are their paths really different? Who is the stranger that changed Muskaan?

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To be continued...
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Part 2 - By Tashu

"Wow the weather is amazing today.  Oh I love sitting in this park the trees, the flowers it's all just so beautiful and clean" said the young man lying on the park bench.  He was an ardent nature lover and spending time in this park was his favourite pass-time.  You would always find him in this park .. riding his bike, feeding the birds, taking photos, studying, and just relaxing.  This park may as well have been his home.

 

"Thudd" out of nowhere a glass juice bottle had landed on the grass near the young man.  He jumped up to see who had thrown it.  He looked around but the only people he could see in the park area around him were a young woman who was jogging and a little girl and her parents who were picnicking.

 

"It must have been the little girl .. kids just don't understand that littering harms us all" thought the young man and he headed over to the family.

 

"Excuse me is this your bottle?" he said to the little girl.

 

"No Mister .. we don't use glass bottles like that we use the plastic kinds that you can use over and over and over again" said the little girl.

 

"Is there a problem" asked the little girl's father

 

"No no I just thought that maybe you had thrown this bottle on the ground over there"

 

"Oh no that isn't ours and mister . Littering is bad .. we don't litter because it makes our world dirty and bad" answered back the little girl scrunching up her nose.

 

The young man smiled and extended his hand to the little girl for a shake.  "Thank you sweetheart .. I wish everyone would understand that . And I'm sorry I thought you did"

 

The young man smiled at the family and turned around to walk to the bench. 

 

"If the little girl didn't throw the bottle . Did that young woman jogging throw it Confused . I thought people my age would be more aware of these things . No no maybe there was someone else I didn't see."  He started to look around again to see if he could figure out who had thrown the bottle.  But the young woman was the only person he could see nearby.  He walked over to where she was stretching.

 

"Excuse me"

 

"Excuse Me" he repeated but he noticed that she had a headset on and was chatting away with someone.

 

"EXCUSE ME" he repeated for the third time only this time he was loud enough to get the young woman's attention.

 

The young woman stopped talking and stared at the young man.  He was cute.  She knew she was gorgeous and assumed that he probably wanted her number.  She had been through this so many times.  She looked him over from head to toe and said "Yes" expecting him to ramble a little and then ask her for her number.

 

"Is this yours?" asked the young man holding up the bottle.

 

"Huh" the young woman was confused.  Was this guy really asking her about a bottleConfused

"I asked if this was yours"

 

"The bottle? You're asking me about the bottle?Confused"

 

"No I'm asking you if the park is yours .. of course I'm asking about the bottle . I'm holding it up to you while I'm asking aren't I?"

 

The young woman started to laugh LOL "Oh My God . You're asking me about this stupid bottle .. wow .. yeah its mine so?"

 

"Ha ha ha .. I'm so glad I was able to make you laugh . Too bad I didn't say anything even remotely funny"

 

The young woman was starting to get irritated now.  She didn't have time for this.  "Look I don't have time to argue about my ownership of this bottle . You can have it if you're so interested in it"

 

"You know what I don't have time for this either . But I'm making time to tell you that you're a highly irresponsible citizen of this city . And this world"

 

Now they young woman was very irritated  "What the .. look I don't know what trip you're on but you don't have any right to speak to me that way nor do you have any right to waste my time with this frivolous stuff . I'm a med student and I have a thousand things to do and listening to your lecture isn't one of them"

 

"Excuse me . I have a thousand and one things to do and sadly for you giving you this lecture is one of them .. do you realize that a little girl who's probably only up to your knees has more sense than you do? Do you realize that people like you are not only ruining what our parks look like but are also harming the world.  It is so sad to see that a young educated woman like you has absolutely no understanding of the consequences of these disgusting actions."

 

The young woman couldn't believe what she was hearing.  Was this guy for real?  He was lecturing about throwing a glass bottle on the ground "what a nerd" she thought "probably has nothing else to do in his life" and she started laughing at her thoughts.

 

The young man stopped talking and stared at her incredulously "Are you laughing?!?! .. Why on earth are you laughing how is the fact that you're polluting the earth we live on funny?!?!?"Confused

 

"LOL I'm laughing because I guess you're one of those hippie poet types aren't you . You don't look like it from your clothes but but the way you're going on and on about this it sure seems like you are alright whatever like I said I don't have the time for this"

 

The young man took a step closer to the young woman and said "Ohhhhhhh okay . I get it well you're right about one thing .. appearances can be deceptive"

 

The young woman stopped laughing and took a step back.

 

The young man grabbed her hand and smacked the glass bottle into it "This is your bottle . Find a proper place to dispose of it" .. He took a step back and made a move to walk away but stopped and turned around again. "You said you were a med student . Well that's funny . You're studying how to save lives .. but your actions don't really show that .. do you realize that the glass bottle you threw could have shattered and hurt someone or started a fire in the blazing sun and someone could have been hurt in that fire so I guess the med school you go to teaches you to how to hurt people and then teaches you how to save them . amazing" he shook his head and laughed.

 

"How dare you " started the young woman but was interrupted by her phone vibrating.

 

"Hello yes this is Anjali Gupta speaking .." she paused as she listened "oh so the orientation session is today but it was supposed to be tomorrow was it not oh okay this afternoon . I'll be there thank you"

 

She turned back to where the young man had been standing to have a go at him but realized that he was gone.  She was so angry.  How dare he talk to her that way.  She threw the bottle down on the floor and went to pick up her jacket from the bench where she had left it.  From the corner of her eye she saw a little girl playing with her parents and the things the young man had said to her came back to her "You're studying how to save lives but your actions don't show it .. the glass bottle could have shattered and hurt someone "

 

She went back to where the bottle lay and picked it up.  She looked around and saw a recycling bin and tossed the bottle into it.  She stood there for a minute remembering the young man.  He had been cute but odd.  He had been so passionate about her littering.  She snapped out of her dream and said to herself "Anjali what on earth are you doing . Are you seriously thinking about that guy and what he said? Hello . Orientation . Did you forget about that . Girl you did you're good deed for the day now get going."  Although she laughed at herself and started jogging to where her car was parked, she couldn't quite let go of what had just happened to her.  Who was that guy and why did what he said make sense to her?



Edited by jenny1000 - 10 June 2008 at 2:10pm

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