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dear I am really really sry for replying late...
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Hey guyz …sorry for d late update..as I was out of station… This part is almost based on A N Ridz…romantic scenes..
Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na
Part - 6
(Hearing som sound,A turns back……He see Ridz in a Red beautiful gown..he gets mestermised by her beauty……..n keeps staring at her …
Heres her gown..
(They both share a cute romantic moment…n after sometime…suddenly….
Ridz – Ar…Armaan..
A – (he is still lost in her… ) pause… ha..huh ..riddhima..
(Riddhima trys to say something but A puts his finger on her lips..)
A – maine soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki tum itni sunder lagogi is dress mein..
A – tumne mere liye yeh dress pehni………..Riddhima I Lov U
Ridz – A main tumhe khush (happy) rakhne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon ..yahan tak ki apni jaan bhi…(suddenly A intreppts )
A – Riddhima phir kabhi aisi baat mat bolna….tum meri jaan ho aur agar tum hi chali gayi to main kaise ji paonga…
(both cries n hugs each other)
(At the hotel)
(Atul is doin swimming)
A – thande thande pani se nahana chayie..gana aaye ya na aaye nahana chayie…
(An slowly comes thr n runs…takin away all A clothes)
meanwhile A comes out of d pool n searches for his clothes)
A – are mere kapde kaun le gaya…ab mein room mein kaise jaonga..
Us kapde choor(thief) ko keedey(insects) pade..
A – Ridz …apni aankhey band karo..mujhe tumhe kuch surprise dena hai..
(Ridz closes her eyes)
Ridz – A …tum mujhe yeh kahan le ja rahe ho…
A – Abhi pata chal jayega …bus thoda aur intezar..
A – Ab tum apni ankhen khol sakti ho..
(Ridz opens her eyes n sees tat 2 persons r standing in front of her )
Ridz – Armaan …. Yeh ..yeh kaun hain?
A – Yeh dono who insan hain jinhone mujhe janam diya hai…so meet my parents..
(Ridz left dumstruck..she quickly goes to his parents n takes their blessings)
Ridz – Aap log Nainital mein kaise?
A – mom aur dad shuruwat se hi Nainital mein rehtey hain..woh to bus main mumbai apni studies ke liye aaya tha.
Ridz – A …tumne kabhi bhi apne parents ke bare mein nahi bataya.kyun?
A – maine socha ki seedhey tumhe parents se hi milwa dete hain(A winks)
A's Mother (Padma) A … im proud of u beta …mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum is mamle (case) apne papa se bhi tez niklo gey..
(A n Ridz smiles)
A' Father (shashank)(To A) – Armaan yeh Riddhima ne kya pehn rakha hai?
A – papa who ..who..
Shashank – tumne to bataya tha ki Riddhima seedhi saadi hai..but isne to..
Padma – ab chodo bhi na.mujhe to riddhima pasand hai
Shashank – chodo kya? Yeh rishta muje manjor nahi hai…
Ridz – Uncle..aap mujhe galat samaj rahe hain..maine aise kapde kabhi nahi pehne …yeh..yeh to A ne ..
Shashank – accha to ab tume yahi kahogi na ki A ne kaha tha ise pehne ke liye…so tat in case I would lik to say( Ridz interrupts)
Ridz – uncle aapko meri baat ka yakeen nahi aa raha hai na.. to aap A se hi pooch lijiaa na..
A – Are maine kab kaha tha yeh pehn ne ke liye…
(Ridz gets angry n starts to cry)
Shashank – are beta…hum to mazak kar rahe they … maine hi A ko kaha tha ki who tumhe yeh dress present kare…
Ridz – Kya?
Ridz – A….main tumhe nahi chodongi..
A – tum mujhe pehle hi ghayal kar chooki ho apne pyar se..ab kitna ghayal karogi..
(ridz blushes n A hugs her)
(Padma N shashank cougghes)
Shashank – A .. jao tum apna dinner continue karo aur..jo maine kaha tha who jaroor karma..Best of Luck!!!!
(shashank n A winks)
Padma – chalo ab hum chaltey hain…tum dono enjoy karo..god bless u
(They both goes.. n A ridz goes back to their table)
Shashank ne A se aisa kya kaha? Atul apne room mein kaise jayega?
DO COMMENT N THX FOR READING.
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