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vry nice part Clap
it was so sweet Embarrassed Embarrassed
luvd it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 13 June 2008 at 5:25am | IP Logged
great part




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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 12:48am | IP Logged

dear I am really really sry for replying late...

nyways really ncie part..!!!..loved it..

plz update more supersoon...

cant wait 2 c wat ahppens next...!!!...ClapClap




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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 8:24am | IP Logged
thx guyz for ur comments.. but im not satisfied there r 950 views n only 50 replies Cry ...plz all the silent readers tak out som time n do reply...




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Posted: 14 June 2008 at 8:37am | IP Logged
hey pooja srrry fr late cmmnt yaar actuly i ws hvng exm tdy thts why so srrrrrrry............
it ws grt yaar realy realyyyyyyyy enjoyd it omg yaar ye muski ne to oh god poor atul shikari koi or tha or shikar koi or ho gaya it ws soooooooooooo fnnnnnnnny nd wow ar goi 2 date nd ar gftsd her dress wow cnt wait 2 read nxt prt sure she wll definately wear it
cont soooooooon
luv yachu




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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 5:07am | IP Logged

Hey guyz …sorry for d late I was out of station… This part is almost based on A N Ridz…romantic scenes..         





                                Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na


                                            Part  - 6



(Hearing som sound,A turns back……He see Ridz in a Red beautiful gown..he gets  mestermised by her beauty……..n keeps staring at her …

Heres her gown..




(They both share a cute romantic moment…n after sometime…suddenly….


Ridz – Ar…Armaan..

A – (he is still lost in her… ) pause… ha..huh ..riddhima..


(Riddhima trys to say something but A puts his finger on her lips..Blushing)


A – maine soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki tum itni sunder lagogi is dress mein..


(Ridz blushes)


A – tumne mere liye yeh dress pehni………..Riddhima I Lov UHeart

Ridz – A main tumhe khush (happy) rakhne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon ..yahan tak ki apni jaan bhiTongue(suddenly A intreppts )


A – Riddhima phir kabhi aisi baat mat bolna….tum meri jaan ho aur agar tum hi chali gayi to main kaise ji paonga…Clap


(both cries n hugs each other)Embarrassed



(At the hotel)

(Atul is doin swimming)


A – thande thande pani se nahana chayie..gana aaye ya na aaye nahana chayie…LOLLOL


(An slowly comes thr n runs…takin away all A clothes)

meanwhile A comes out of d pool n searches for his clothes)



A – are mere kapde kaun le gaya…ab mein room mein kaise jaonga..

 Us kapde choor(thief) ko keedey(insects) pade..LOLLOL



(scene changes)


A – Ridz …apni aankhey band karo..mujhe tumhe kuch surprise dena hai..


(Ridz closes her eyes)


 Ridz – A …tum mujhe yeh kahan le ja rahe ho…

A – Abhi pata chal jayega …bus thoda aur intezar..


(after sometime)


A – Ab tum apni ankhen khol sakti ho..


(Ridz opens her eyes n sees tat 2 persons r standing in front of her )


Ridz – Armaan …. Yeh ..yeh kaun hain?Confused

A – Yeh dono who insan hain jinhone mujhe janam diya hai…so meet my parents..Big smileBig smile


(Ridz  left dumstruck..she quickly goes to his parents n takes their blessings)Clap


Ridz – Aap log Nainital mein kaise?

A – mom aur dad shuruwat se hi Nainital mein rehtey hain..woh to bus main mumbai apni studies ke liye aaya tha.

Ridz – A …tumne kabhi bhi apne parents ke bare mein nahi bataya.kyun?Angry

A – maine socha ki seedhey tumhe parents se hi milwa dete hain(A winks)LOL


A's Mother (Padma) A … im proud of u beta …mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum is mamle (case) apne papa se bhi tez niklo gey..LOL


(A n Ridz smiles)


A' Father (shashank)(To A) – Armaan yeh Riddhima ne kya pehn rakha hai?Ouch

A – papa who ..who..


Shashank – tumne to bataya tha ki Riddhima seedhi saadi hai..but isne to..Angry

Padma – ab chodo bhi na.mujhe to riddhima pasand haiSmile

Shashank – chodo kya? Yeh rishta muje manjor nahi hai…Ouch

Ridz – Uncle..aap mujhe galat samaj rahe hain..maine aise kapde kabhi nahi pehne …yeh..yeh to A ne ..Big smile

Shashank – accha to ab tume yahi kahogi na ki A ne kaha tha ise pehne ke liye…so tat in case I would lik to say( Ridz interrupts)

Ridz – uncle aapko meri baat ka yakeen nahi aa raha hai na.. to aap A se hi pooch lijiaa na..

A – Are maine kab kaha tha yeh pehn ne ke liye…WinkWink


(Ridz gets angryAngry n starts to cry)Cry


Shashank – are beta…hum to mazak kar rahe they … maine hi A ko kaha tha ki who tumhe yeh dress present kare…

Ridz – Kya?Cry


(A giggles)LOL


Ridz – A….main tumhe nahi chodongi..

A – tum mujhe pehle hi ghayal kar chooki ho apne pyar se..ab kitna ghayal karogi..ClapClap


(ridz blushes n A hugs her)Embarrassed

(Padma  N shashank cougghes)Big smile


Shashank – A .. jao tum apna dinner continue karo maine kaha tha who jaroor karma..Best of Luck!!!!Thumbs Up


(shashank n A winks)

(Ridz confused)Confused


Padma – chalo ab hum chaltey hain…tum dono enjoy karo..god bless u


(They both goes.. n A ridz goes back to their table)


Shashank ne A se aisa kya kaha? Atul apne room mein kaise jayega?LOL











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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 5:38am | IP Logged
it was choo chewr..especcialy.......the dad n son...trick!!!!!
n finally u updated!!!
thnkxx for the pm!!


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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 5:39am | IP Logged
very nice and thnx 4 the pm.and pm me again whn u will update again

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