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nice part................do continue...pm me if possible

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hey i realy lv ur ff yaar
lvd it..........wow now thy r togthr nd all know...
thts grt yaar eagrly waitng fr nxt prt
cont sooooon
luv yachu

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(Hey guyz Sorry for d late update)

 

                           Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na

                                                      

                                          Part - 5

 

 

 

(In the Morning,, at the table,,till now boys hav not arrived)

 

M – ( To An)  Yar abhi tak boys nahi aaye. Kyun na hum apne plan ko successful banatey hain.

An – then don't waste anymore time. Aur tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya karna hai.

M – Hmmm

Ridz – Main tum logo ki koi madat nahi karoongi. jo tum kar rahey ho na,, who theek nahi hai aur iske liye baad me tum dono ko bahut pachtana padega.

An – ok. but remember tum unki madat bhi nahi karogi aur hamare plan ke bare mein kisi ko nahi batana even A ko bhi nahi.(pause) M chalo mission shuru karety hain.jaldi se mirchi powder lao.

 

(M brings som mirchi powder n sprinkles som of it in R's sandwich n in juice she puts som salt then she return to her chair)

(Suddenly, R,A n At comes)

 

R – (to A) yar mera breakfast pehley se hi ready hai.

A – iska matlab yahan koi to hai jot tum se…(M interrupts)Big smile

M – tum se… aage. Vaise yeh breakfast maine lagaya hai… sirf R ke liya.khao na R.Embarrassed

A – (whispers to R) lagta hai M ne teri feelings samaj li hai.ab chal khana jaldi se start kar varna pata laga….chal chod.

 

(R smiles to M n then started to eat… he continues to eat havin waters in eye.)

A – kya hua? Tu ro kyun raha hai?

R – yeh khusi ke aason(tears) hai. Tu nahi samjega.LOL

M – R breakfast kaisa laga? Maje to aaye na?LOL

R – hmmm… bahut accha tha.tum ne kitne man se banya tha mere liye..thx.

 

(R suddenly rushes to washroom)

M – (whispers to angie) yar lagta hai kuch gadbad hai. R to aise kha rahaa tha jaise kuch hua hi na ho.

An – tune usme mirchi powder to dalaa tha na?

M – haan.

 

At – (to himself) – Are ise  kya hua? Isney to apna juice he nahi piya.koi baat nahi mein pi leta hoon.?(pause) are wah sandwich bhi hain.

M – At tum uska breakfast kyun kha rahey ho? Who bhi uska jhootha..LOL Plz mat khao usse.

At – Kyun? are dosto ke beech sab chalta hai.LOLLOLLOL

(While eating he starts to shout).

At – chi!! Yeh kya hai? Isme to puri mirchi ki factory dali hui hai.LOLLOL

A – Champ… Champ!! Sun to …

At --  baad mein..  (pause)mirchi..pani …pani..Ouch

M (whispers to An) – ise mirchi to lagi per R ko kyun nahi lagi?

An – who knows?

A – aaj mein aur ridhima dinner ke liye ja rahey hainEmbarrassed…(pause) kisi ko chalna hai to chal sakta hai..

An – itna sochne ki jaroorat nahi hai. mujhe pata hai tum kisi ko lejana nahi chatey.to phir pooch kyun rahey ho.LOL.

M – ham kabab mein haddi nahi banna chahtey.(n she giggles).

Ridz – tum dono kaisi batey kar rahi ho.

An – ab tum jyada natak mat karo..  go n njoy.Tongue

(Ridz blushes)Embarrassed

 

A – thx angie.

 

 

(at night )

 

(at gals room,,,ridz is getting ready,,shes wearing white salwaar n kameez)

An – ridz ,aaj tumhe kuch special pehna chaiye kyunki pehli bar A ke saath dinner per ja rahi ho.

M – An is rite..i think u shud wear a saari.Big smile

An – nahi tumhe kuch western dresses pehni chaiye lik mini skirts n something…u can tak from me.i hav a huge collections of this..Embarrassed

Ridz – A ko yeh sab pasand nahi hai usne kaha hai ki tum jaisi ho vaisi hi acchi lagti ho..Clap

M – oooooooo!! Kya baat hai. Pyar to sar chad ke bol raha hain.LOL

An – M stop teasing Ridz. Look at her.. sharm ke mare bichari pani pani ho raahi hai(An n M both laughs)

 

 

(at boys room)

 

(A is spraying a lot of Deo on himself suddenly At sneezes).LOL

At – Abey manaa tu ridz ke saath diner per ja raha hai per iska matlab yeh to nahi na ki pani ki jageh Deo se nahega.LOL

A – champ!!

At – kya champ!! Chal aisa kartey hain mein aur R tere saath chaltey hain. Tujhe hamari company bhi mil jayegi.LOLLOL

A – mujhe kisi ko pitney ka man kar raha hai.Angry

At -- yaad aaya .. mujhe apne baccho ko jaldi sulaney ki aadat hai kyunki wahan se to aaney per hum late ho jayengey..isliye mein nahi ja raha.LOL

A – bacche?

At – haan pinki,,sonu,,rohan…mere pyare se podwey(plants).

(A is really frustrated) AngryAngry

R – mera to man hai hi nahi.

R – in bato ko chod aur…

At, R – jo tu Ridz ko aaj surprise dene wala hai uske liye BEST OF LUCK!!Thumbs Up

(A n Ridz leaves)

 

(A takes Ridz for a candle light dinner.he gives her a packet n asks her to wear this for him, she opens d packet n finds out tat there is a red color strapless ball gown in itBlushing)

 

Ridz – A.. yeh dress..Confused

A --  Ridhima aaj mein chahta hoon ki tum is dress ko mere liye pehno.

Ridz – per Arman ..maine aise kapdey aaj tak nahi pehney.main kaise pehn sakti hoon..

A – (in a upset mood)Unhappy koi baat nahi.main tumhara us table per intezar kar raha hoon.Is dress ko wapis meri car mein rakhkar aajao.Broken Heart

 

(He goes to d table whereas ridz go to keep this packet)Broken Heart

 

 (what will happen in next part? kya ridz us dress ko pehnegi?woh surprise kya hai jo A ridz ko dega?)

 

 

(Hey guyz now i wil update my 6 part after 22 coz im goin out of station.) 

 

DO COMMENT N THX FOR READING.

 

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Posted: 12 June 2008 at 7:14am | IP Logged
really an awwsome updte please continue it soon

yogzz

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Posted: 12 June 2008 at 7:31am | IP Logged
hey pooja very nice part
bechaara rahul mirchi ko bhi ktne pyaar se kha letha hai par muskaan abhi tak uski feelings samajh hi nahi aayi
armaan/riddhima date par wow thats great armaan riddhima ko surprise de raha hai kahin propose toh nahi kar raha hai na.............
yaar tum out of station jaa rahi........enjoy u r self,have fun
thanx for pm
love u
yogitha Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 June 2008 at 7:57am | IP Logged
nce loool da whole mirchi thing very nce poor atul n raul ooooo cnt wait 4 da date wudr wot happens updte sooon n thx 4 da pkm

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Posted: 12 June 2008 at 8:00am | IP Logged
very nice update.i liked it vry much.plz cont.sooon Embarrassed Smile

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