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thx everybody..i'll update soon..

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aww....it was really sweet pooja...

I read all the 3 updates.....so nice story line...!!!...

do update d next part soon...!!!

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wow!!!!!!!! at last confession took place........ gr8888 prt.. superb!!!!!!!!!! update contd soon......... waitng 4 d nxt prt..... thnxx 4 d pm.plzzz update soon Smile Smile Smile

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awwwwww very nice ff
plz update it soon

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superb part Clap
now every1 knows bout AR Embarrassed Embarrassed
koooooool Wink
plz continue soon & do pm me
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awww ur ff is relly cutee.i like it soooo much!!!
please updtae soon n please pm me if u dont mind!!

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 12:59am | IP Logged

                                    Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na

                                            Part - 4

 

 

(All of them arranges a party for ridz n A in d hotel's garden, they also arranges 4 a disco n a cocktail paryBig smile).

 

(An pushes ridz n A to a dance floorSmile.)

 

 

A – Humare dost kitney acchey hain.

Ridz (blushing) – hmmmBlushing

 

(Suddenly atul interrepts them)

 

A – (To himself) is At ko bhi abhi hi aana tha.LOL.

At – kya yar … is pyar, ishq mohbbat ke chakar mein hame hi bhool gaye.Big smile

A – Champ!!! Kaisi baatey kar raha hai yaar..

An – hey guyz!! kya baatey ho rahi hai.

 

 

(Scene changes)

 

(At the table----)

 

R – M mere saath dance karegi kya?Wink

M – Mujhe kya kisi pagal kuttey ne kata hai jo tere saath dance karongi? Agar tune mujhe gira diya sabke samne to?LOL

R – tu hamesha mujhe se aisi hi kyun baat  karti hain.. Main itna bura hoon kya?Cry

M – chal ab pareshan mat kar aur apna kam kar.Broken Heart

 

(R gets  irritated Angryn goes for a drink. In anger he really drink too much)

 

A –  R … bus kar yaar kitna piyega?

R – A tu nahi janta aaj mujhe itna dukh hua hai… M mujhse hamesha aise hi kyun baat karti hai…

A – Yar M ka nature hi aisa hai… chod is baat ko aur chal room mein rest karley.

R – Main M se bahut pyar karta hoon yar magar who mujhe accha nahi maanti.Cry

A – (Really shocked)…..Shocked

R – in ladkiyon ki wajeh se hame kitna sehna padta hai..apne aapko pata nahi kay samajti hain.

 

(R  goes to d stage n asks for a mike .)

(A goes towards him n ask him to keep d mike down n to go into the room)

 

R – A aaj mujhe mat rok.. aaj main bahut dukhi hoon,,mujhe bolney de jo main bolna chatha hoon.

R – (To other people present in d party) All u boyz thr..kabhi bhi kisi ladki se pyar mat karna kyunki pyar mein bahut dookh jhelney padtey hain(pause)….Maine bhi kisi se pyar karta tha magar who meri feelings kabhi samaj hi nahi payi(crying)..Ladkiyan hoti hi aisi hain bus who chathi hain ki hum ladkey unke isaro per nacchtey rahein or nachtey rahein…Broken Heart

 

(Suddenly he falls over d stage,,, A rushes n takes him to d room)

 

 

(In d night...)

(Boyz room)

 

A – yar aaj R bahut dhooki tha..

At – hmmmm….lekin usne to kabhi drink kari hi nahi to aaj kaise?Confused

A – yar jab kisi ke dil per chot lagti hai to who yeh sab karney ke liye majbor ho jata hai.

At – u mean like devdas?Wink

A – haan (in upset mood)

At – kaisa kalyug hai… bhagwan(praying to god)LOL

A – chup kar yar

 

(R is sleeping)

 

(In gals room)

 

An – (angry) R behaved very badly today... Hum ladkiyon ke bare mein pata nahi kya kya keh raha tha... I think hes out of his mind...Angry

 M – Ek baat samaj nahi aayi yar … ... who meri taraf dekhar hi kyun bol raha tha…?uski wajeh se sab mujhe ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahey they(frustrated).Big smile

Ridz – mujhe lagta hai ki who kisi ladki se bahut pyar karta hai aur who ladki us se pyar nahi karti hai..i mean ek tarfa pyar..Clap

An – u may be rite? But yar aaj uski wajeh se hamari to insult hui hai na.

M –ladke hotey hi aisey hain..kuch sochtey samajtey hai nahi aur bus boltey jatein ahi aur boltey jatey hain..

Ridz – leave this topic n lets go for sleep .. its really getting late..

An – ya but in ladko ko iski sajhaa(punishment) milni hi chahihey. In ladko ko batana hi padega ki hum ladikyan kaisi hoti hain.

Ridz – An… faltoo mein hum ladai kyun karey. Vaise bhi us same R ne drink kari hui thi. Aur baki isme A aur At ka koi haat bhi nahi hai.

An – but un don ne R ko roka kyun nahi.. aur vaise bhi maine decide kar liya hai ki  main unse badla lekar hi rahoongi.

M – Ridz ..An sahi keh rahi hai.. unko realize hona hi chayie ki unhone kya galti ki hai.   (to herself)R ke bachey ko to main chodongi nahi.

An – ok then,, now its confirm….  we'll start our mission from tomorrow morning.

 

( then they all goes to sleep).

 

 

{{{{Precap – M is sprinkling something in R food n An is running wid At clothes.. who is in pool.LOL}}}

 

 

 

 

DO COMMENT N THX FOR READINGSmile

(I request everyone specially those who r silent readers,

to reply)

 

(Page 1 = Pt-1,2,3)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by pooja_j - 08 June 2008 at 1:20am

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 2:01am | IP Logged
mission ladko se badla leneka
rahul bechaara devdas
no romantic scenes of armaan/riddhima Cry
thanx for pm
i think next part is going 2 be funny
love u.................
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