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FF: Kabhi haan Kabhi na(Pt7 Updated Pg9)

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Hii im pooja…I was always a silent reader but now ive decided to write my own fanfic…hop u wil all like it n plz bare me wid the mistakes)

So here my first fanfic goes-------------

 

                                           Intro

 

It's a Stephens's college scene--- by the gate side we saw a most popular gang of the coll ……it's the rockstars gang ….

Its member's r---

A ---- Armaan (the hottest hunk of d coll n a big flirt)

R ---- Rahul (Nerd of d coll n a close friend of A)

At ---- Atul (the funniest guy of d coll n a nature lover)

An---- Anjali (the sexiest n d attidude gal)

Ridz--- Riddhima (Best friend of atul, gud in studies n ya simple but sweet n beautiful)

M ---- Muskaan (the funniest gal in coll, n a bit tomboy)

 

(All these r of different nature n of different backgrounds but theyall r very gud friends of each other)

 

Arman secretly loves Riddhima n riddhima too loves arman,, Rahul hates Muskaan n vice versa,, Atul loves Anjali but d vice versa is not true

 

 

                    Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na -The Beginning

                                              Part 1

 

 

 Summer vacations r goin n the rockstrs r planning to go for a holiday…

 A – Chalo yaar,,, picnic per kisi hill station par chaltein hain.

 At – are waha to kulfi jam jayegi hamariLOL. Kyun na kisi gav(village)

Mein chalein.hari hari wadiyan,, hare hare pedh..(Dreaming)…Day Dreaming

A – Champ!!! Who gav…whatever..tu apne sapno mein ghum kar aajana!!! Ok.abhi hame aapas mein majeh karna hai machro(mosquitoes) ke saath nahi…

 At – machro ke saath koi maje kartha hai bhala!!!Silly

An – iski baatein chodo anyways I'll go wid armaan. Let's go to Nainital. Wats say guyz?

Ridz – ya  nainital bahut acchi jageh hai.

R n M – letz pack r bags. Vaise hum kab ja rahein hain?

A – Tomorrow morning at 8a.m I'll pick u all from mohini marg.

Sab ready rehna .. mein kisi ka wait nahi karronga!!!

 

 

                               Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na

                                              Part – 2

 

 

(After reaching Nainital ,, they r now residing in welcome hotel..)

 After refreshing,, all of them gather for a lunch ….

[On the table A is sitting facing Ridz.  At is sitting, facing An (siiting near to ridz) and by d side of A…whereas R n M r sitting facing each other.]

Suddenly A starts playing footsie wid An thinking tat hes playin footsie wid RidzLOL… whereas An thinks tat atul is playin footsie wid her..

 

Ridz is confused seeing A's facial expressions and An is also enjoying... (Even she hates atul)

 

Ridz – A tum theek to ho Na…

A – HmmmDay Dreaming (lost in Ridz dreams)…

At – An tum aur kuch lo na.. dekho kitna patli ho gayi ho..LOL

 

Ridz is still confused. By mistake her hankercheif falls down d table.. n when she kneels down d table.. she cant stop laughing LOLn now she want At to know this…

 

Ridz – At tumahra hanferchief neechey gira.. utha lo

 

When At looks down… hes so shocked tat he hurts his head by the table.Ouch

At – A mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi..Cry

A – kya hua? Pareshan mat kar. Abhi mein busy hoon?

At – Kis cheez mein?Angry

A – Champ!! Khaney(eating) mein yaar obviously.

At – tu jara neechey dekh..

(An listens this)

An – At u r jus shameless.Embarrassed

 

(A looks down under d table.. he automatically removes his leg as he has been given an electric shock.)

 

(Ridz n A r smillingSmile.An is now more irritated by At thinking tat he had made a joke of her n himself in front of allAngry , At is mad on A whereas R n M r busy wid their fights. While fighting M falls into the swimming pool wic is nearby their table. Since M don't know how to swim.. so R

imediately came to her rescue n thus saves her.)

 

M – thanks RSmile(still unconscious)

R – maine tujhe kitni bar kahan hai ki swimming sheek ley .agar aaj kuch ho jata to.

A – Kya baat hai!!! Laga reh…Wink

Ridz n At – M tum thek to ho na. chalo room mein chaltein hain.

 

(An is still angey wid At N thus from here R n M lov story startsSmile)

 hop U all lik it

 I'll continue further.

DO COMMENT N THX FOR READING

 

                              Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na

                                           Part 3

 

(The rockstars next day plan to go for n outing in Nainital. They go to Naini Lake. They rent two boats. 1 for all 3 gals n 1 for 3 boys.

After sitting on the boat Ridz starts putting her hand in water…

 

M – Dhyan se yar …

Ridz – hmmm

 

(Boys boat is nearby gals boat. They all r enjoying n suddenly Ridz slips down d boat n falls into d water. Seeing this A jumps into d water n thus saves her from drowning...)

A – Ridz... tum theek to ho na.

At – Wow!! Ridz kya jump thi…Pani thanda tha kya?LOL A ne to aise jump kiya jaise diverman ho… (Everyone looks at him) kuch galat bola kya... (Confused) diverman?

An – oh shut up At.Angry Ek to who bahut dari hui hai aur tumhe majaak sujh raha hai.

M – vaise ridz tum boat per se pani mein kaise gir gayi.

Ridz – pata nahi yaar … aisa laga kisi ne mujhe Dhakaa (push) mara ho.

M - yarr yeh ho kya raha hai? Pehley to mein giri swimming pool mein.. ab ridz bhi..

R(to all) – M sahi keh rahi  hai..

A – tujhe to ab uski sari baatein sahi hi lagegiBig smile.. Are yeh sab itefaak hai..isme koi  khass (special) baat nahi hai..ok

An – now can u all stop this topic here? Chalo lets go to another place.

A – yaar Angie hum kaise chal saketin hain…ridz is not at all well.

An – (arrogantly) ridz ki wajeh se hum apna program to nahi cancel kar saktein na aur vaise bhi hum yahan ghumne aayein hain, agar aisa hi hota raha to hum nahi ghum payengein.

A – angie tum kaise behave kar rahi ho.uski to socho yarr..

At – A sahi bol raha hai... Ridz abhi thodi dari hui hai.

R n M – chalo yarr ab chodo… hotel hi chaltein hain wapis… wahan per njoy ker lengein..

(An still angey)Angry

A – Oh c'mon An.. We r all in one gang..aur hamesha ek doosre ke saath hi rehtey hain tats y hamara motto  "All for one n one for all" hai..Star

M – ab maan bhi ja yaar.

An – ok … A tum ridz ko lekar car mein chalo. Hum aatein hain..

A – ok per jaldi aana

(After A n ridz left)

An – u guyz r so stupid!!!

At – (innocently) An... maine abki bar kuch nahi kiyaCryCry

R – Kya hua?

An – tum logo ne notice nahi kia kya.. Jab ridz doob rahi to A ke facial expression kaise ho gaye they.Wink

At – are facial expression ki aisi ki taisi… wo to diverman …. Matlab sab ko impress karne meiin laga hua tha.Big smile

An – At ki to chodo … use kuch samaj nahi aata but tum dono to samjhdar ho…

M – hmmmmm. Use same A bahut darr gaya tha.

R – aisa lag raha tha ki jaise koi uski bahut pyari cheez usse door ja rahi ho.

An – bull's eye!! Claptats wat I wanted to tel u. I think ridz or A ke beech kuch to hai. Lets find it out. ive made a plan for this.

At – Wah Anjali tumne plan bhi bana liya…Wink

(An whispers something to R,M n At. And then they all head towards d car n reaches to hotel)

 

(In gals room)…

An – chalo ab ridz ko rest karne do aur hum bahar mall road tak ghum kar aatein hain..A tum yahi ridz ke pass ruko.

M – Jab tak hum nahi aatein tum isi room mein rehna.Smile

R – koi problem ho to call kar dena ok..

At – wah!!!... Tum sab logo ko to nautanki mein hona chayie tha.. kitni achi acting kartey ho. An tumne to kamal la plan banaya hai..LOL

A- acting?plan? (Confused)Confused

An –At (really mad)!!!!!!Are yeh to aise hi bolta rehta hai… ab chalein At.?Angry

 

(They all go out)

 

A – Tum theek ho?.. aaj mein itna darr gaya tha jab tumhe pani mein dekha.Mein akela ladka hoonga jo ladki ko pani mei dekhar dar gaya.(flirting)ROFL……Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to mein apne aap ko maaf nahi kar pata.

Ridz – tumahre hotey hue mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta A.

A – (Smiles) I lov uHeart (n hugs her) mujhse kabhi door mat jana.Smile

 

(After somtime)

 

Ridz – yeh log aaye nahi abhi tak...

A – Hmmm. Aisa kartey hain jab tak who log nahi aatein kyun na hum movie dekhey.Thumbs Up

Ridz – oh yes.majje bhi aayeingey aur time bhi pass ho jayega.

A - Hotel manager se manga lete hain , dvd to hai hi …anyways kaunsi movie dekhey..

Ridz – (thinking) Hum dil de chuke sanam?Big smile

A – bahut boring hain.. hmmmm kabhi haan kabhi na dekhtey hain? vaise bhi tumhare nature ko bahut suit karti hai LOL….coll mein yaad hain kitni barr tumne yeh(I lov u .. I hate u) keh keh kar pareshan kiya tha mujhe…

Ridz – chodo is baat ko… who sab purani baatein hain.. Anyways lets see this movie..

A – Ok

 

(Suddenly they hear som voices…n all d 4 com to their room)

An – tum logo ki chodi pakdi gayi..aur hamne tumahri saari baatein sun li hai..

A (panickly) – ka..kau.. kaunsi baatein? DeadAur tum log yahan?Shocked

An – ghabrao nahi…vasie hume pata chal gaya hai ki u both lov each otherSmile

Ridz – tu logo ko kaise pata?

An – hum sab ne sabkuch sun liya tha..but u both mak such a lovely couple..Clap

M – yarr tum logo ne humse yeh baat kyun chupayi.(upset) .remember u only told tat we r a part of 1 gang.

A – Sorry yaar but…..

At (intreppting)

At - ab kuch hai nahi na kehne ke liye..Koi baat nahi aise aksar hota hai do pyar karne walo ke beech.. Big smile

R – yaar A tu mujhe to bata detaCry.. Mein tere bachpan ka dost hoon..

A – Sorry yar... ab se aisa nahi hoga... ab mein tujjhe apne har pyar ke bare mein bataongaLOL(winking n smiling)

Ridz – A tum kabhi nahi sudroge..Wink

An – since now we hav such a cute couple in our gang so lets party. Wat say guyz?

Ridz, A, R, M – yeah!!! Its time for celebrations!!Party

 

 

 

 

DO COMMENT N THX FOR READINGSmile

 

 

 

 Page 3 = pt 4

 Page 5 = pt 5

page 7 = pt 6

page9 = pt 7

 

 

 



Edited by pooja_j - 26 June 2008 at 12:10am

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hey pooja plz continue very nice
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Posted: 04 June 2008 at 5:09am | IP Logged

Hey!

Dat was cute!

Please continue soon n do PM me 2!


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very niceBig smile
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really luvd d concept n d update......... gr8888 prt.plzzzz update soon Smile   Smile Smile
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vry nice start Clap
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