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Part 1
uni. Mei MIBM department mei en 3 logun ky elawa kuch he log dikh rahy thy kyun ky zayada tar student chotiyun pe thy aur jo thodhay bohot thy wo b bohot kaam nazar aa rahy thy.


Tanya: Sujal! Plz samajhny ki koshish karo papa ne hamari shadi ky liye yahe shart rakhe hai ky mai london ja kar higher study karun warna tum tou papa ko janty ho na wo waisy b tayar nahe thy aur ab agar mai jany sy manah karti hun tou mery aur tumhary rasty alag kar diye jayen gy""


Kashish jo kafi dair sy en dono ki taqreer soun rahe the Tanya ky eak ada sy bal jatak ky bolny pe jal ky reh gai-


kashish: [thinks] huh! Majbori tou yun bayan kar rahe ho jaisy 7 poshtoon pe ehsan kar rahe ho,han bahee hoty hun gy ameer logun ky ameer nakhry eak mai hun Maa sy bol bol ky thak gai hun ky us kaly <font color="black"> ky elawa jahan shadi karo ge ankh bandh kar ky kar lon ge aur eak ye (tanya) hai jo apny shadi cancel kar ky london ja rahe hai aur shadi b koi arrange nai "love marriage" aur wo bi itny khubsurat aur qabil insaan ky sath,sab kehty hain bhagwan jab daita hai chapar phar ky daita hai jaisy us "prem" ko kalak di hai lol

tanya ki banawat ab kashish sy sehan karna mushkil hota ja raha tha lehaza wo muh he muh mei budhbudha kar apna ghusa aur jalan kaam kar rahe the.

Sujal: (2 tanya) muje tumhari parhai sy koi itiraz nahe hai tum shadi ky badh bi parhai jari rakh sakti ho,muje itiraz hai tou tumhary shadi cancel karny par tum janti ho ky cards banty ja chuky hain aur tumhari taraf ka muje malun nai par hamary han sab taiyariya mukamal hain aur tum keh rahe ho ky mai tumhari papa ki itni fazul si zid ko mann lon.Wo pehle bi tou bta sakty thy,pehle bi ye shart rakh sakty thy par unu ne waqt pe shart rakh ky ye sabit kar diya ky wo hamari shadi karna he nahe chahty warna kon sa baap hai jo apni beti ki shadi bina kisi waja ky cancel karny ki baat karay.

Sujal jo kafi dyr sy bardash kar raha tha phath parah.

Tanya: "sujal plz samajhny ki koshish karu,mai ye sab kuch tumhary liye he tou kar rahe hun i knw ky tum mujh sy bohot Pyar karty ho isi liye mai yahan eak "faisla" kar ky ai hun"


sujal jo pareshani sy apna sar ahesta ahesa na mei heela raha tha tanya ki baat par chaunk kar usy dykhny laga.


Sujal: "kya matlab kya faisla kar ky ai ho?"

Tanya: "pehle mujh sy promise karo ky tum meri baat sabar sy souno gy tou tab he mai btaun ge"


tanya ne eak ada sy bal jataky hoye kaha
sujal kuch dair tak tou khamushi tanya ko dykhta raha pher kuch soch kar sar sy eshara kar ky eak nazar kuch dur baithe bubble gum chabati kashish ko dykha jo gaur sy en (sujal n tanya) ko he sou rahe the magar us ki nazrain puray department mei ghum rahe the,tanya ky liye baat karna kuch mushkil tha magar sujal ko yun kashish ki tarf dykhty hoye dykh kar tanya ki heemat bandh gai.


Tanya: "sujal mai ne bohot socha es bary mei magar es ky elawa koi rasta nahe tha ky tum Kashish sy SHADI kar lo"


tanya ky lafz thy ky koi bomb jo sidha sujal ky sar ky pas phata tha aur wo baity sy khadha ho gaya.


Sujal: "Whattt? Ye kya bakwas hai tum janti ho ky tum kya keh rahe ho,agar muje kisi aur sy he shadi karni hoti tou mai bohot dair ka kar chuka hota tumhara intzar nai kara"


sujal bohot ghusy mei paint ki pockets mei hath dal kar pareshani sy edhar udhar tehalny laga.


Tanya: "tum ne abi wada kiya hai ky tum tasali sy meri bat sounu gy"


Sujal: "tanya agarwal shayad ap ko malum nai ap kya keh rahe hain"


tanya: " mai bohot ache tarah janti hun ky mai kya keh rahe hun magar tum na tou meri bat puri soun rahy ho aur na samajh rahy ho"


tanya ne lachar aur masum bany ki puri koshish ki jab ky kuch dur ba-zaheer laparwah baithe kashish,sujal garewal ko yun ghusy mei dykh kar jal-tu-jalal-tu parhny lage.


Sujal: "kaho jo kehna aur jo samjhana hai"

sujal ne bohot ghusy mei kaha.


Tanya:" dykhu sujal,relax ho kar baat sono kashish ko tou tum janty he ho na meri dost ki haisiyat sy,ye eak middel class sy taluk rakhti hai uni mei parhna es ka janun hai aur sath he apny ghar ky halaat sy b tang hai esi liye parh k job karna chahti hai ta ky es ky ghar ky halaat kuch behtar ho jayen magar es ka masla ye hai ky es ki Maa es ki shadi apni dost ky bety "prem" sy karna chahti hai jo bilkul jaheel sa hai kashish us ko pasand bi nai karti par es ki maa ki eak he zid hai ky wo kashish ko prem ky sath he rukhsat karain ge.Kyun ky un ( kash. Ki maa) ky dowara un ky gareeb khany pe kon tashrif laye ga es waqt eny apni dost ka beta bohot si naikiyun ka silah lag raha hai magar kashish aisa nahe samajhti bal ky kehti hai ky usy bohot jald he koi behtareen insan mily ga par es ki maa esy etni muhlat dyne ko tayar nahe hai wo jald sy jald kash. Ki shadi karna chahti hain"

sujal jo kafi dair sy sabar sy tanya ki bat soun raha tha eak dum ghusy mei bol parha.

Sujal: "es pury keesay mei mai kya karun? "

tanya ne eak bar pher sujal ko khamush rehny ka eshara kiya n bol pari.

tanya: "tumara kamal dhakal hai es qesay mei ye hai ky agar tum kash. Sy paper marriage kar lo tu 1 tarf tou wo asani sy parh sakti hai n sath he es ki prem sy jan b chuth jaye ge aur es ki maa ki fikr b khatam ho jaye ge,dusri tarf tumhari shadi b usi date pe ho jis par fiy hoi hai fark sirf etna ho ga ky larki kash. Ho ge aur ye shadi sirf eak commitment ho ge haqiqat nahe,mai ne kash. Sy bat kar li hai aur es shadi pe razi hai kyun ky es tarah wo b asani sy apna mustakbil bna sakti hai aur mery wapis india any par apny rasty chali jaye ge aur hum apni mazil par"
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end of prt 1 waitin 4 ur comments.
Anam

Edited by Anam azhar - 27 July 2008 at 1:08am

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great conti dear . Clap

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Clap tanya is so irritatin,mann kar raha hai do jhapadd lagaun,ye sujal kyun nakhre kar raha hai,kashsih mil rahi hai aur kya chahie isko! gr8 part,waitin 4 thier love 2 happen! cont

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grt intro

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anam that is a very good start for your fanfic..it is very interesting..niceee..gooddddd..very well written...... Clap please do post the next part soon..me waiting for it eagerly... Smile Tongue Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 04 June 2008 at 3:55am

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Part 2
sujal ankhain padhay tanya ko yun daikh raha tha jaisy us ki dimagi halaat pe shak ho,wo jis kam ko itna asan samajh rahe the wo itna asan nahe tha.

Sujal:" i am sorry mai ye drama nai kar sakta"

sujal ky 1 jhatky sy uthnx pe tanya b ghusy mei agai.

Ta:"soch lo sujal ky es ky elawa koi aur rasta nahe hai aur na he dubara koi kashish mily ge jo asani sy maan jaye aur shayad ye hamari akhri mulaqat ho"

sujal agay kadam barhaty hoye tanya ki akhri bat pe 1 dum palta aur dheery dheery chalta us ky qareeb aya,kuch dair khamushi sy us ky kashish ky 1,1 naksh ko dykhta raha aur pher thandi sans bhar ky "han" mei sar hila diya.

Ta:"sujal u r gr8 tum waqai mujh sy muhabat karty ho i'm proud of u my love"

tanya khushi ky mary sujal ky seeny sy lagi hanshny lage aur kashish tanya ki es bai-baki par 1 dum sy dusri tarf turn ho gai
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Introductionslalit garewal n mrs.Veena garewal ky 3 bachy hain sab sy bhadha beta "anurag garewal" jo business mei un ka sath daita
"parerna anurag garewal" jo ky anurag ki patni hai aur es ka 1 he beta hai armaan.
Mr.Lalit garewal ka dusra baita "angad garewal" hai jo ky 1 doctor hai jo apna hospital chala raha hai aur shadi shuda hai aur us ki bewi ka nam"kripa angad garewal" hai en donu ka abi koi child nai aur mr.Lalit garewal ka tesra beta "Sujal Garewal" hai jo university sy MBA kar raha hai,es ky elawa mr.Lalit garewal ki maa un ky sath rehti hain jiny sab dadi bulaty hain aur mr.Lalit garewal ky father ki death ho chuki hai tou ye hai mr.Lalit n mrs.Vena lalit garewal ka chota sa parivar.
Dusri taraf kashish ky parivar mei us ky sirf maa aur papa hain aur koi nahe...
Garewal group of industries n raheja group of industries ka business mei hamesha sy mukabla raha hai
raheja industry ky malik mr.Chetan raheja ki 1 he beti hai "tanya" jo ky mr.lalit garewal ky sab sy choty bety sujal ki class fellow hai aur us sy shadi karny ki khawahish rakhti hai magar jab sy cheeta sahab ko es ki khawahish ka pata laga tu unu ne sakhti sy inkar kar diya magar pher apni akloti beti tanya ki bhook hartal pe hatheyar dal diye magar dil sy wo abi b kisi tarah es rishty ko khatam karny ky chakar mei he thy aur akhri harby ky taur pe unu ne thek shadi sy 15 din pher tanya ki higher studies ki shart rakh di the aur ab halaat un ky mutabik ho gaye thy dusri tarf lalit sahab jo chetan sahab ki dhoky baz fitrat se ache tarha waqif thy,un ki har tarah ki chal ky liye bilkul taiyar baithy thy kyun ky ye lalit sahab ki majbori the,sab sy choty bety sujal ki pasand aur zid eny ache tarah malum the,sujal apni pasand ky mamly mei bohot nazakat aur intiha pasand tha,har hal mei apni pasand ko hasil karny wala tanya ky mamly mei b intiha pasand ho gaya tha aur har hal mei usy hasil karna chahta tha.
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kashish ki maa itny ameer aur khubsurat larky ky rishty pe pholy nai sama rahe the,in ka bas nai chal raha tha ky uny kaha bethain aur kya khatir karain jab ky sujal ki mummy kuch pareshan aur kuch khafa si es 3 kamrun ky choty sy ghar ko dykhay ja rahen the 1 tou achanak sujal ki zid ne pareshan kar diya tha aur dusra aisi family mei rishta karna 1 alag masla tha,logun ky sawalun ky liye wo abi sy khud ko taiyar kar rahen the magar khud mutamin nai ho rahe the tou bhala dusrun ko kaisy mutamin kartin un ki samajh mei nai araha tha ky sujal ne achanak tanya sy inkar kar ky es larki sy shadi ki zid kyun ki..

Veena:"Sujal beta 1 bar pher soch lo beta yun zindagi bhar ky rishty nai jodhay jaty bina kisi sy jan pehchan aur rishay dari,tum ab bachy ho en nazakton ko nai samajh rahy"

kashish ki Maa ky kamry sy nikalty he unu ne 1 bar pher sy sujal ko samjhana chaha magar wahan khamushi dykh ky wo b khamush ho gain,aur wapsi pe wo log shadi ki tarikh le kar he uthy thy jab ky kashish ki Maa aur papa ko kashish ki itni jald shadi pe itraz tha magar kashish ky israr pe unu ne tarikh dy he di kyun ky kash. Ky maa papa b ye janty thy ky kash. Ki khawahishat kya hai es liye es rishty ko jany dyna nahe chahty thy.

Sujal:"muma plz,mujh pe bharosa rakhain mai jo kuch kar raha hun bohot soch samajh ky he kar raha hun agar ap sab es tarha naraz rahain gy tou bhala mai kaisy khush reh sakta hun"

mumma ne atay he dadi maa ko larki walun ky halat bta kar sujal sy narazge ka elan kar diya tha jab ky dadi maa apny ladly potay sujal ki bat pe puri tarah mutamin aur khush nazar aa rahe thin eny apny khun aur tarbiya par pura bharosha tha,sujal muma ki narazge sy sakht pareshan tha aur eny manany ky liye har harba azma chuka tha aur esi koshish mei shadi ka din aa puhncha shadi sy ky waqt sujal ki utri hui surat daikh kar muma ko tars agaya aur unu ne agay bhadh kar sujal ky sar pe hath rakh kar apni razamandi dy di,sujal b shayad en ki razamandi ky intzar mei tha ishara milty he kashish ko mangal sutar pehna diya aur us ki mang bhar di,sath he mubark etc di jany lage sujal muma ky galy sy laga mafi mang raha tha aur muma itny dinu tak naraz rehny par bety ko seeny sy lagay anso baha rahen the.

Angad: "muma ab bas b karain warna hum b rony lagain gy"

angad ne papa ko ankh marty hoye kaha.

Lalit: "aray bhai rukhsti dulhan ki ho rahe hai dulhy ki nai jo tum sab log rony pe tulay hoye ho,chalo baho (parerna) ab andhar ja ky kuch rukhsti ki taiyari karain raat bohot ho gai hai"

lalit sahab ne mahol ki afsurdage ko dur karny ky liye jaldi jaldi ka shour micha diya..!
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end of part 2 waiting 4 ur comments,
anam

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Originally posted by monikaseth

great conti dear . Clap


thanks 4 liking keep commentingBig smile

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Originally posted by belanila

Clap tanya is so irritatin,mann kar raha hai do jhapadd lagaun,ye sujal kyun nakhre kar raha hai,kashsih mil rahi hai aur kya chahie isko! gr8 part,waitin 4 thier love 2 happen! cont

Es tanya ka enjam bi ap sab ko patah lagy ga dnt worry n sujal abi tou mila hai kashish sy so it wil take sum time na anywaz thanks 4 liking keep commentingBig smile

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