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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:32pm | IP Logged

 

hi this is my first ff........first it will be little bit same as dmg but as u will read it it will become diiferent.....and please comment.

          love?
Armaan: he finishes his medical school. He is a rich guy. He doesn't believe in love. He like too be cool.
 
Ridhima: she is sweet girl. She thinks love is every thing. She loves her sister and her family. She has two best friends: kunal and sapna.
 
Kunal: he is rich. He is ridhima's best friend. His father is ridhima's father's best friend.(eijaz khan from kavyanjali and kya hoga nimmo ka)
 

Atul: he is kind and lovable person. He just moves to Mumbai to finish his study.

Anjali: she is ridhima's sister. She thinks that she is the best.
 

Sapna: she is so sweet Guajarati girl. She is ridhima's best friend. She supports ridhima whenever ridhima needs her.

 

They all are going to join sanjivani. Kya sab interns dost bane ge?

 
 
part 1.....................page:1
part 2.....................page:3
part 3.....................page:6
part 4.....................page:8
part 5.....................page:9
part 6.....................page:11
part 7.....................page:12
part 8.....................page:13
part 9.....................page:14
part 10...................page:15
part 11...................page:16
part 12...................page:17
part 13...................page:19
part: 14..................page:20
part 15...................page:22 
part 16...................page:24
part 17...................page 25
part 18...................page:28
part 19...................page 29
last part.................page 30
 


Edited by cutelove1111 - 06 January 2009 at 3:31pm

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
very nyc start!!
Clap
hope u cont soon
cant wait 2 read!
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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:39pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by ***Krinz_dmg***

very nyc start!!
Clap
hope u cont soon
cant wait 2 read!

thank u....very much.....

 

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:44pm | IP Logged

Part 1

"Baba utho"
"Baoji sone do na aaj"
"thik hai aaj jab tumhe der ho jaye gi to muje mat kehna"
"kyu der ho jayegi?"
"woh tum kaya kehte ho useā€¦.basket aur uski ball"
"basketball bauji"
" ha. vahi tumhe aaj jana nahi hai"
"omg, I almost forgot about basketball. Baoji aap nasta lagaiye me abhi aata huan."
"thik hai jaldi aana"
One guy get up from the bed and run in to bathroom and change his cloths and stand by the mirror and says to himself "what's up armaan malik" and smiles.
He go downstairs and take a sandwich.
"arre ye kya kar rahe ho beth ke to nasta karo"
Ar: woh me aake kar looga aaj me bahot late ho gaya huan"
B: lekin tumhe yaad hai na ki aaj tumhara hospital me pehla din hai"
Ar: ha yaad hai me jaldi aa jauga.
Baoji said to himself yeh ladke ka kya hoga.
Armaan reach the basketball court. The match was already started. He join the match won the match. Armaan look at the girls and give them flying kiss and smiles.
Girls: Ammy Ammy.
Another house
One girl was praying.
"he Begawan aaj muje himmat dena"
"kya tum chup reh nahi sakti" voice came behind girl.
"di please aaj to jane do" said girl and turn back. (she is ridhima)
" ridhz tum to pagal ho lekin muje to pagal mat karo"
R: maine kya kiya?
An: oh shut up.
R: di aaj hame der nahi ho rahi hai?
An: ye me kiske saath baat kar rahi huan. Me apne raste jaugi aur tum apne raste.
R: di kya aaj bhi ham saath nahi ja sakte?
An: nahi.
R: kyu?
An: little sister tumhe dad ne car kyu di hai? Chalane ke liye na.
R: ha. Lekin..
An:(interrupt) ha to apni car me aao na.
Anjali go outside from room.
An: good morning nani and dad.
Nani and sk(shasank): good morning.
Sk: ridhima kaha hai?
An: woh aati hi hogi.
R: good morning nani and papa.
Sk: good morning beta. Aaj ka din tum logo ke liye bahot important hain.yaad rakhana dr. kirti bahot strict hain. Aaj der mat karna anjali.
An: ha dad.
Sk: to aaj ham hospital me milte hain.
Anjali and ridhima leave for hospital.

precap: all interns will meet in hospital.

Please if u like it than comment is so I will write more. i m sorry for spelling mistake...


Edited by cutelove1111 - 06 June 2008 at 9:15pm

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
no reply Cry Cry Cry ........i geuss no one liked it....:( Cry Cry Cry
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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Hey i really luved the intro n 1st part..sounds gud n interesting....Very curious to knw how the story unfolds.... Wink Plzz continue soon Smile
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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:56pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by swetha10

Hey i really luved the intro n 1st part..sounds gud n interesting....Very curious to knw how the story unfolds.... Wink Plzz continue soon Smile

thank u........

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
wow gurl really love the 1st part it is mind blowing plz continue soon Clap

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