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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 9:35pm | IP Logged

Once upon a time there was a girl called Soni

who realized her friends were upset

so she stumbled upon on her magic wand and wrote stories for her friends who were upset.

BAMB!

all her friends got happy and she also got happy.

Thank you Soni Pari for making my friends happy.

LUB YA

Jenny

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jenny1000

Once upon a time there was a girl called Soni

who realized her friends were upset

so she stumbled upon on her magic wand and wrote stories for her friends who were upset.

BAMB!

all her friends got happy and she also got happy.

Thank you Soni Pari for making my friends happy.

LUB YA

Jenny

awww...Jenny that's so sweet. If it's in my hands to make someone happy, then I'll take the pleasure.

I luv you too

Soni

 

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 10:18pm | IP Logged

Pyar ki Kasti….

Part One

 

Dedicated to Jenny!

 

A girl with shoulder length brown hair stands beside an oak tree

blindfolded. Her off-shouldered gold chiffon dress twinkles in the

starry night.

The girl: yeh kya hai Iqbal, tum mujhe kaha le aye?

Iqbal is clad in a pair of  black jeans and a black leather jacket

Iqbal: Neha, sabar ka fal meeta hota hai

Iqbal then leads Neha to a calm river; there an isolated boat floats in

the water.

Iqbal then fragilely unfolds the cloth around Neha's eyes.

Neha: yeh…

Iqbal places a finger on her smooth lips:shhh….

Iqbal then bends down and then lifts Neha and sets her onto the boat.

Iqbal then sits down too and oars in hands, begins to row the boat.

The silent night, spoke their hearts, night birds roamed around the skies.

After a while, Iqbal stops rowing and lets the boat float in the calm

waters. Iqbal passionately looks into Neha's eccentric brown eyes,

an electric current passes between them. Neha's hair flies behind her

and as Iqbal edges closer and…closer…till he is inches away from

Neha…till they could both count each other's heart beats. Neha

then closes her eyes as the soft touch of Iqbal's lips press on her

forehead. Then they wrap their arms around each other, hugging

each other, it seems almost like their not two

bodies but one soul.

 

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Neha pulls back as she sees something extremely terrifying.

Neha: Iqbal who…dekho….paani…

Iqbal twirls around and to his shock he finds that their boat is nearing the

choppy waters.

Iqbal: oh oh…Neha hold on tight…we're in for a tow

Neha holds Iqbal tightly, into the rapid waters they go, splashing and

swashing, until their thrown off course and bam…into the freezing

cold water. Iqbal carries Neha's limb body in his strong arms, her

chiffon dress now lays ragged. Iqbal clears a spot on the earth,

lays his black jacket on the ground and places Neha delicately there.

Iqbal then, kneels down beside Neha and pumps her chest…

a few times…Neha coughs and splutters and gets up.

Iqbal worriedly: Neha tum teek toh ho na? mujhe tumhe yaha lana hi

nahi jahiye tha.

Neha merrily: kya Iqbal…what a bore…ithna acha mausam hai…

ithni rangeen raath

and you're regretting we're here together…jao mai tumse baath nahi karti.

Neha gets up and runs away, her wet hair swinging behind her.

Iqbal's eyes fill up with mischief and he goes behind Neha and grabs

her from behind,

Leaning on her shoulders: Neha..tumhara iraada kya hai???

Neha smiles her charming smile: jo tumhara mann kahe

Iqbal then sets up a fire, to keep them warm and Kripa sits

With her legs in front of her, watching him intently.

Iqbal then encircles Kripa's waist and pulls her up. They lock eyes

…they can feel the smoldering passion between them, burning in their

hearts,

their hearts beat in one rhythm.

An imaginary song plays in the background. "sherni yeh ankh tumhari,

kya gazab hai pyaari pyaari…

 

Iqbal twirls Neha round and round, then pulls her closer and closer…

then spins her…her wet hair hits his face and then he pulls her one

 last time. The fire blazes.

 

PS: there might be a part two….don't know for sure

 

Love

Soni

 



Edited by soni595 - 24 September 2005 at 10:22pm

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
wow soni, that was such a cute part and romantic as well. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 10:27pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by happe

wow soni, that was such a cute part and romantic as well. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

ure avi is so cute, HappeTongue

love

Soni

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
That was so cute soni. U r too good.ClapClapClap

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by soni595

Originally posted by happe

wow soni, that was such a cute part and romantic as well. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

ure avi is so cute, HappeTongue

love

Soni



thanx soni,
that's me trying to fill the atmosphere with hearts, love and romanceEmbarrassed

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Evee

SONIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hug

aww...Evee BabaHug

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