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soni595 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:42pm | IP Logged

Yeh hai…Pyar ki bol…dilwaale hi samaj sake

A girl climbs up the mandir steps, wearing a sequences red
saree, her ears sparkle with red jumkas and her beautiful lips shimmer in pink lip gloss.
The girl rings the bell and walks in front of God's idol. She gives her pooja thaali to the panditji and puts her hands together in prayer.

She closes her eyes and wishes for something.
As she opens her eyes, she finds intense black eyes looking deeply at her. The girl's face breaks into a charming smile.

Together they pray to God.
As they both climb down the stairs of the Mandir, the girl's leg slips a little and she is about to fall when a firm grip encircles her waist.
They both stable themselves and continue down the steps.

 All of a sudden the heavens break loose and sweet honey drops of rain spray them. The girl spins in the rain in delightful happiness.
The guy walks to her and stretches his arm out: Evee, can I have this dance?
Evee's averts her eyes shyly and slowly places her soft delicate palm on his palm: Angad mai tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon
Angad passionately: toh kaho na
Evee: mai….mai
Angad still gazing into her eyes with smoldering passion: I love you!
Evee's eyes light up, her heart pulsating every second: I love you, too Angad!
Angad holds Evee's ankles and lifts her up and spins her round
and round in the honey drops of rain. The mandir bells being to ring, the birds begin to sing sweetly, rainbows display their seven colors and stars lighten their hearts.
Angad then hugs Evee tightly and Evee hugs him back equally, they both savor this eternal moment.

Angad then kneels down on his knees, and holds out a small silver bell. Evee looks at it, then takes it, she turns it around, and there sitting on top of the bell stand lays a shining ring, the three diamonds on it glitter in the dark night, but not as much as Evee and Angad's hearts, that shone so bright that the stars faded in front of them.

Dedicated to my pyaari Evee Baba and Angad Baba


Edited by soni595 - 24 September 2005 at 8:51pm

x_Roxy_x IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
2 good soni luved it
happe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
awwwww that was awesome part soni.
I am sure Evee will love it.
Selina IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:56pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by happe

awwwww that was awesome part soni.
I am sure Evee will love it.

She will love it!!!!!!!! That was soooo cute Soni!!!

JennyPenny IF-Addictz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Awww.............. How sweet..:)
soni595 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 9:12pm | IP Logged

Raja aur Rajkumari ki Kahani


A princess is standing beside a round pond. Her long white gown lies around

her and her shiny hair fly behind her. The crystal clear water in the pond sways

quietly, causing slight ripples that make a melodious note.

In the distance, her eyes follow the golden brown horse galloping towards her

and more importantly the prince charming riding it. The prince is wearing a

prim black suit that masters his handsomeness well. His coffee

brown eyes

glisten in the dazzling sunlight.

As the prince draws nearer on his horse, the princess's heart

trumpets faster,

her eyes sparkle more. The prince on his golden horse gallops up behind her

and she looks into the pond to see his handsome image reflected in

the pond.

The prince stretches his hand: Cinderella, will you care to join me?

Cinderella: Prince Angad, I can go wherever you take me

Then Princess Cinderella slowly takes Prince Angad's hands and lets him

 pull her up on to the horse and together they gallop into the willowy forest.

Princess Cinderella smiles at the touch of Prince Angad.

After about half an hour, Prince Angad halts to a stop abruptly. Prince Angad

slides off the horse and carries Princess Cinderella off. He then takes

her delicate palm and leads her through the forest. They come to a pathway,

and in that pathway lay a swing embedded with green leaves and white

wild flowers. Berries hang from the dancing trees and a little narrow

stream hisses at the edge. Prince Angad leads Princess Cinderella

to that swing and makes her sit on it. He then goes behind her and pushes the

swing. Princess Cinderella laughs merrily.

Prince Angad then places a flowery crown on her hair.

Prince Angad: You shall forever be my Princess and we shall stay together


Princess Cinderella turns around and puts her slender arms

around his neck

and whispers: as long as our love is there…we can never be separated.

They then fasten their eyes on each other and hug again

…savoring this moment



Edited by soni595 - 24 September 2005 at 9:17pm
Xplicit_Desii IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Yes Evee will love it. But i think she not here yet. Come fast Evee here is surprise for u.
Xplicit_Desii IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwww soni so sweet of u. U made my day my dear soni. luv u so much Heart

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