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Stories - Jenny,Ouma,Shereen,Marz,Butterr (Page 3)

happe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww soni Embarrassed
Embarrassed Embarrassed 
Big smile


I loved it. It was short, sweet, beautiful, touchy, lovey-dovey, cuddly part. I am gonna faint if that happens in real. Embarrassed
Love ya Soni.

Edited by happe - 24 September 2005 at 8:12pm

Anamika_Mitra Goldie

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:12pm | IP Logged

EmbarrassedMy pyaari si Hakoooo....ek aur dream date....mmmmmmmm...EmbarrassedU deserve all the dream dates in the world..!!WinkHug


happe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:14pm | IP Logged
awwww Anamika ji, your my best buddy. HugEmbarrassedBig smile
x_Roxy_x IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
evrybody is in romantic mood even me 2 i dun why LOL Embarrassed Confused
soni595 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by komal2310

soni this is treat for me,Embarrassed

loved both the parts, u rock dearHug

u made my n happe's dayHug

this is brilliant, loved it, its very well written EmbarrassedHug

I am happy that I made both of your days

kabakt ishq hai jo, saare jaahan mai...Soni ke dil mein dastak karta haiTongue


Xplicit_Desii IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:24pm | IP Logged
Well done soni u made their day. Clap
JennyPenny IF-Addictz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
Awww.... That was lovely.. Keep it up... Clap
soni595 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 8:42pm | IP Logged

Yeh hai…Pyar ki bol…dilwaale hi samaj sake

A girl climbs up the mandir steps, wearing a sequences red
saree, her ears sparkle with red jumkas and her beautiful lips shimmer in pink lip gloss.
The girl rings the bell and walks in front of God's idol. She gives her pooja thaali to the panditji and puts her hands together in prayer.

She closes her eyes and wishes for something.
As she opens her eyes, she finds intense black eyes looking deeply at her. The girl's face breaks into a charming smile.

Together they pray to God.
As they both climb down the stairs of the Mandir, the girl's leg slips a little and she is about to fall when a firm grip encircles her waist.
They both stable themselves and continue down the steps.

 All of a sudden the heavens break loose and sweet honey drops of rain spray them. The girl spins in the rain in delightful happiness.
The guy walks to her and stretches his arm out: Evee, can I have this dance?
Evee's averts her eyes shyly and slowly places her soft delicate palm on his palm: Angad mai tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon
Angad passionately: toh kaho na
Evee: mai….mai
Angad still gazing into her eyes with smoldering passion: I love you!
Evee's eyes light up, her heart pulsating every second: I love you, too Angad!
Angad holds Evee's ankles and lifts her up and spins her round
and round in the honey drops of rain. The mandir bells being to ring, the birds begin to sing sweetly, rainbows display their seven colors and stars lighten their hearts.
Angad then hugs Evee tightly and Evee hugs him back equally, they both savor this eternal moment.

Angad then kneels down on his knees, and holds out a small silver bell. Evee looks at it, then takes it, she turns it around, and there sitting on top of the bell stand lays a shining ring, the three diamonds on it glitter in the dark night, but not as much as Evee and Angad's hearts, that shone so bright that the stars faded in front of them.

Dedicated to my pyaari Evee Baba and Angad Baba


Edited by soni595 - 24 September 2005 at 8:51pm

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