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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
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part 70

raj apne room main hai aur sherry usake paas aati hai.

sherry:RK kya kar rahe ho yaha akele?
raj:kuch nahin,aao tum

sherry jakar raj k pass bethti hai.

raj:tumne khana khaya ?
sherry:RK ab main bilkul thik hoo us baat ko ab 1 week se upar ho gaya hai.
raj:phir bhi dyaan karo apnaa ok. aur aap bhi apna toh kuch dhyaan rakha kariye...
sherry:ha karugi ab suno jo bolane aayi thi woh to bhul hi gayi.
raj:kya ?
sherry:kal hum sab ka KMA main last day hai to hum sab aaj party kar rahe hai.
raj:accha sab jaa rahe ho kya?directly pucho ki naina bhi jaa rahi hai ki nahi
sherry:ha aur tum bhi chal rahe ho .
raj:sherry main kya karuga. hamesha wala sawal sab kuch tumhare liye hi toh kar rahi hai raj
sherry:are abhimanyu bhi aa rahe hai.
raj:kya kaha??? ab kya woh abhi ka naam bhi nahi le sakti kya..

raj sherry ko has k dekh raha hai sherry raj ko dekhati hai...

sherry:RK...bas ha.
raj:bolo na kya socha hai tumne.?? aur aap ne kya socha hai..
sherry:maine socha hai k shaadi to karani hi hai ek din to ...
raj:to...

sherry raj k kandhe par apnaa sar rakh deti hai.

sherry:to abhi itana bura nahin hai. sherry mai tumse bahut naraj hu aur ha sana tumse bhi
raj:kya kaha tumne..???

raj sherry ki side dekhta hai aur sherry use dekhkar smile karati hai.

raj:u mean tum usse....oh sherry i m so happy. mere dukh pe raj itne bhi kush na ho..

raj sherry ko hug karata hai.

sherry:tum khush hona.?? huuuu kuch toh baat hai..
raj:bahot ...abhi tumhe bahot khush rakhega dekhna tum. khush rakhe ga ki apne balo se darata rahega...
sherry:ha mere RK ne jo choose kiya hai,accha hi hoga.
raj:tumne bataya use ??
sherry:nahin abhi nahin kuch nahin kaha aaj shaam ko bol dugi.tum aaoge na
raj:good ..ha main aauga.

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naina apne room main hai aur shaam ko woh kya pehene soch rahi hai.

naina:offf foo ...
pooja:kya hua ?
naina:pooja dekh na kya accha lagega yeh ya phir yeh.
pooja:are tujh par sab accha lagata hai.
naina:to kya sab pehan lu ek saath,aur cartoon ban jau. practical question

naina confuse hokar bed par bethati hai.

pooja:are naina kuch bhi pehan le shahrukh tujh par fida ho hi jayega. already fida hai
naina:pooja ......
pooja:oye tu to sarama rahi hai ....
naina:main kaha sarama rahi hoo.
pooja:accha to yeh jo dabi dabi si hasi hai woh kya hai.

naina hasane lag jati hai. mujhe pata nahi tha yeh hasi itna rulayegi

pooja:naina..
naina:ha.
pooja:tu sach main sir se bahot pyaar karati hai,teri aakhe dekh aaj in main jo chamak hai woh pehele kabhi nahin thi.
naina:ha bahot pyaar karati hoo,mere sabkuch hai woh. sach bahut pyaar karti hai but raj kab samjhega..

tabhi sherry waha aati hai.

sherry:oh my god woh......
naina:bas karo tum dono.
sherry:hahahaha.....waise maine RK ko bol diya hai k hum sab aaj bahar jaa rahe hai.
naina:kya kaha unhone??
sherry:kaha woh bhi aayega.hum sab k saath.
naina:sach..??
pooja:lo ise ab juth lagata hai.
sherry:pyaar main jo hai ,ab to yahi hoga. sherry sach mai kisi se toh pyaar karti hai joh use pyaar ke baare mai sab malum hai...
naina:ha hoo pyaar main ab tum jao mujhe redy hone do.

naina dono ko room se bahar kar deti hai aur darwaza bandh kar k akeli akeli muskuraati hai.

IN THE EVENING

sab ek k baad ek neache aate hai redy hokar.abhi kab se sherry ka wait kar raha hai aur tabhi sherry aati hai
jisane yeh pehana hua hai nice dresss

abhi bas sherry ko dekhta jaa raha hai,sherry usake pass aati hai. ab itne aakeh fadh kar mat dekh bichaari bachi dar jayegi...

sherry:hii i hope main acchi lag rahi hoo.
abhi:acchi .....aap kamaal ki lag rahi ho,black colour aap par bahot accha lagata hai.
sherry:thanx...waise naina abhi tak nahin pata nahin woh aaj bol payegi ya nahin.
abhi:kya bol payegi..hum samajhe nahin. are maine kaha na samajhne ke liye akal chaiye joh tumhaare paas nahi hai...
sherry:well hum sab ne i mean hum sab cadets ne naina se yeh kaha hai k aaj woh RK ko
apne dil ki baat bol de.
abhi:kyaa.....par naina kaise bolegi.. muh se stupid...
sherry:dekhiye RK ka wait karegi to umar nikal jayegi. yeh lo yeh sherry kuch hi dino mai raj ko itna janti hai but in mr ko itne salo mai raj ko kuch bhi nahi samaj paye..
abhi:hahahahaha...baat bilkul sahi kahin,raj to kabhi nahin bol payega. tubelight nahi yeh toh fused bulb hai..
sherry:ha janati hoo tabhi to maine yeh kiya hai k aaj pary main naina RK ko bata de k woh usse pyaar karati hai.
abhi:i wish naina ko unka pyaar mil jaye.
sherry:mil jayega saccha pyaar to ek din mil hi jata hai. agar tumhari baat mai jara bhi sachai hai toh don't worry tumhe is gorilla se shaadi nahi karni padegi..LOL

abhi sherry ki taraf dekhta hai.

sherry:kya hua??
abhi:kuch nahin.bas...
sherry:aapke sawaal ka jawaab dena tha mujhe.jo aapne mujhse kiya tha.
abhi:...........
sherry:mera jawaab ha hai abhi..

abhi ko apne kano par yakeen nahin hota woh sherry ko khush hokar dekhne lagata hai.

abhi:aap sach keh rahi hai ,aap sach hamare saath...
sherry:ha ...RK ki choice ho aap kaise mana kar sakati thi. raj ki choice bus ek hi baare mai buri hai
abhi:matalab hum aapki pasand nahin hai. ab is sahi baat samjh mai aayi...
sherry:maine aisa kab kaha,aap mujhse bahot pyaar karate ho aur yahi baat sabse badi hai.
main sach main khush hoo.

abhi sherry ka haath apne haath main leta hai. don't dare to touch her u gorilla

abhi:i love u sherry ..aaj main bahot khush hoo. and i hate u..( i mean abhi not u sana)
sherry:janati hoo main.

abhi sherry ko hug karata hai.aur tabhi waha raj aata hai. chalo aacha hua raj aa gaya warna pata nahi yeh kitne der sherry se chipke rehta...

raj:aham...kisi ko main yaad bhi hoo ya bhul gaye mujhe. are mai toh tumhe hi yaad kar rahi thi raj kya time pe entry maari hai....
abhi:ohh raj tumhe kaise bhul sakate hai aaj tumhaari wajah se to hume sherry mili hai.

raj abhi aur sherry dono ko hug karata hai.

raj:i m so happy 4 both of u ..
sherry:waise tum kab hume yeh mauka doge k hum tumhaare liye yeh kahe. good question rather i say intelligent question
abhi:ha yeh baat bilkul sahi kahin,bolo raj ...??
raj:mere peeche kyun pad gaye tum dono.meri life main koi nahin hai. are agar tum khud se kuch karte hote toh inko tumhare piche nahi padna padta..
sherry:nahin hai to kisi ko lao.kya pata aaj hi tumhe woh mil jaye.

tabhi naina waha aati hai,naina ne yeh dress pehana hai very beautiful dress...


raj naina ko bas dekhta hi reh jata hai,aur abhi aur sherry dono waha se chale jate hai.
aur raj ko pata hi nahin hai k woh akela hai yaha par bas woh naina ko dekhe jaa raha hai. hai raj ka yun dekhna mera toh bura haal ho jata hai...

naina:sir ....sab chale gaye hai,hum sayad late ho gaye.
raj:..hum..nahin to abhi aur she.....

raj dekhta hai woh dono waha nahin hai.

raj:are yeh dono kaha chale gaye,abhi to yahi the.
naina:kya ..yahi the phir kaha gaye.
raj:waise sherry ne abhi ko yes bol diya hai. aap kab apne dil ki baat kahege...
naina:KYAAAA...??
raj:ha ....naina.. yeh ha tumhare liye tha naina....
naina:ohhh wow yeh to bahot acchi baat hai.sherry abhi sir k saath bahot khush rahegi.
raj:yes bahot pyaar karata hai chohaan sherry se. aur tum naina se nahi karte kya..
naina:par dekhiye woh dono to gayab hua samajh sakate hai but baki sab bhi chale gaye kisi ne mera wait nahin kiya.
raj:ha yeh baat to main bhi samajh nahin paya aisa kyun kiya sabne.
naina(in her mind):main janati hoo k sab kyun chale gaye. hum bhi jante hai naina...
raj:kuch kaha tumne?? kuch suna aapne..
naina:nahin to ..maine kaha kuch kaha.
raj:to chalo hum bhi chale.
naina:jee....

raj aur naina dono jeep k paas jaa rahe hai.

raj:waise party kaha ho rahi hai.
naina:pata nahin sir.
raj:kyaaaa???

raj ruk jata hai.

raj:u mean tumhe nahin pata k sab kaha gaye hai.tumne pucha nahin naina.
naina:nahin mujhe laga saath jana hai to... purposley nahi pucha raj samjha karo..
raj:ab kaha search karege sabko...
naina:sir ek baat kahu..
raj:ha kaho..
naina:hum ek jagah jaye.
raj:kaha??
naina:point 1857 naina ur very intelligent apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye sahi jagah choose ki..
raj:KYAAAA ??????

raj naina ko dekhta hai heran nazaro se

raj:abhi hum waha jaye yeh chahti ho tum??
naina:ha.....
raj:NO......

raj aage chalata hai aur naina raj k peeche.

naina:kyun plzz mujhe to waha jana hai..
raj:waha kuch bhi to nahin hai naina last time gayi thi na tum
naina:ha aur maine kuch pray kiya tha aaj usi k liye jana hai.
raj:accha isliye jana hai.
naina:hmmmm...
raj:thik hai chalo wahi chalate hai.
yeh raj har baat mai phele no bolega.... aur phir bade pyaar se ha keh deta hai..
naina:sach ..thank u sir.

naina raj ko gale lagane jati hai par phir sarma jati hai.aur raj use dekhta hai k woh kya kar rahi hai. control naina control..

raj:aaj tum bahot change lag rahi ho.kya baat hai naina..?? ab tumhe aaj apne dil ki baat jo kehni hai..
naina:woh naina ab nahin hai sir .
raj:kyun??
naina:woh naina apne bhai ko begunaag saabit karane k liye bani thi.ab woh naina chali gayi hai.
raj:u mean ab wahi purani naina wapas aa gayi hai jisake baare main naveen batata tha.
naina:kya bhaiya ne aapko mere baare main kabhi kuch kaha tha??
raj:ha kaha tha ek baar nahin kai baar.
naina:accha kya kaha tha?
raj:yahi k tum bahot hasati ho bahot baate karati ho gussa to naak par raheta hai tumhaare.
naina:nahin to main bikul gussa nahin karati.yeh to aap apne mann se keh rahe hai. haa raj naina ne toh ab gussa karna bilkul band kar diya jab se tum wapas aa gaye ho..
raj:are main kyun juth kahuga ,aur ha tumhaara gussa dekh chuka hoo main.i mean sun chuka hoo.
naina:sun chuke ho kab??
raj:hahaha..jane do ...
naina:nahin sir batao na plzzz..
raj:accha suno yeh baat tab ki hai jab main cadet tha KMA ka ek baar naveen ghar gaya hua tha
to maine usse baat karane k liye phone kiya,aur phone tumne uthaya.
naina:accha phir...
raj:aur maine samane se kuch nahin kaha,aur tumne jo datana suru kiya hahahaha....
naina:maine aapko data tha.
raj:ha woh bhi kya gusse se.
naina:hahahaha.....par aapne baat kyun nahin ki.
raj:pata nahin kuch bol hi nahin paya.
naina(in her mind):abhi bhi kaha kuch bol pate ho,aaj bhi mujhe hi bolana pad raha hai. apne dil ki baat chupane ki bimari hai raj ko ...

raj aur naina dono point 1857 par aate hai.

raj:lo aa gaye hum ab to khush ho na. real lrl scene yaad aa gaya..

naina waha sab jagah dekhati hai aur phir raj ka haath apne haath main leti hai,raj naina ko dekhta hai. aaj apni naina bahut strong lag rahi hai..

naina:chaliye na sir.
raj:kaha?
naina:wishing pillor k pass....
raj:kyun ? swaal bahut karte ho raj..
naina:ek wish ki thi jo puri hui ab ek aur magani hai.

raj aur naina waha jate hai.raj naina k saath bethata hai,aur naina apni aakhe bandh karati hai.aur mann main kaheti hai.

naina:aaj main yaha phir se kuch mangane aayi hoo,aaj mera pyaar mujhe chahiye mere rajveer sir jo meri zindagi hai
jinke bina apnaa aane wala kal main soch hi nahin sakati.aaj main apne dil ki baat bolane wali hoo unse plzz mujhe himmat do k main bol pau. wish puri ho jaye pls

naina apni aakhe kholati hai aur dekhti hai k raj usake pass betha hua hai aur usaki aakhe bandh hai.woh raj k pass jati hai.raj apni aakhe kholata hai.

naina:sir mujhe aapse kuch kahena hai.
raj:ha kaho kya baat hai naina.
naina..............
raj:kaho ....naina kya bolana hai.
naina:aap janate ho kaun ho aap???
raj:..........
naina:aap nahin janate aap kaun ho..meri life main aap aaye aur meri zindagi badal gayi.aap hi the jisane har mod par mera saath diya main aapke bina
ek kadam nahin chal pati aaj main jo kuch bhi hoo aapki wajah se hoo. start aacha kiya hai..
raj:naina..tum yeh sab.

naina raj k muh par apnaa haath rakh deti hai.

naina:plzzz.....aaj mujhe bol lene dijiye sayad phir kabhi na bol saku... ha yeh sab baatein kehna kitna difficult hota hai...

naina raj k kareeb jati hai raj naina ko heran hokar dekhta hai.

naina:aap meri zindagi main aaye aur meri zindagi ban gaye pata hi nahin chala k kab main aapko chahne lagi kab aapko apnaa maan bethi,woh naina jisake dil main
sirf nafrat aur gussa tha gam tha woh sab aapki wajah se pyaar main badal gaya jab aap mujhse dur chale gaye the tab kaise jee rahi thi main yeh main hi janati thi,par
aap wapas aaye meri zindagi main maine phir se sapne dekhe aur aaj un sapno ko pura karane ka din hai kal meri zindagi ka sabse bada din hai aur us din main apne pyaar
k saath waha khade hona chahti hoo. aakhir bol hi diya too good naina..
raj:naina........tum..
naina:ha rajveer sir main pyaar karati hoo aapse bahot pyaar karati hoo. raj jaldi se haa keh do..

naina ki aakho main khushi k aasoo hai woh raj ko bade pyaar se dekh rahi hai aur raj bas woh naina ki aakho main dekhe jaa raha hai,
naina raj k face ko apne haatho se touch karati hai,raj k kareeb jati hai naina raj k bahot kareeb hai dono khoye hua hai ek dusare main
naina raj k forehead par kiss karati hai aur jaise hi raj lips k paas jati hai. naina mai aaj badi himmat aa gayi...

raj naina ko apne aap se alag karata hai.

naina:kya hua sir..??
raj:yeh kya kar rahi ho tum...?? are yaar tumse pyaar karti hai aur kya...
naina:.........

raj turn ho jata hai aur naina raj k kandhe par sar rakahti hai.

naina:kya karu aapse bahot pyaar jo karati hoo.aapke bina rahena mujhe nahin aata.
raj:STOPID CADET SING ................yeh kaisi baate kar rahi ho tum hosh main to ho. yeh raj ko kya ho gaya hai...

raj naina se dur hatata hai.

naina:sir aap..
raj:naina mere aur tumhaare beach main pyaar kaha se aa gaya.tumne aisa socha bhi kaise?? apne dil se aur tum dono ke bich mai pyaar hi toh hai yeh sabko dikhta hai...
naina:............
raj:mere liye tum bas naveen ki bahen ho aur wahi rahogi isse jayada kuch nahin.main nahin janata kab tumhaare dil main mere liye
aisi feelings aa gayi par main tumse pyaar nahin karata. raj aise na kaho....Cry
naina:aap mazaq kar rahe ho ...hai na...dekhiye bas bahot hua. ise toh shock lag gaya hai

raj kuch nahin kaheta aur naina raj k pass aati hai.aur use hug karati hai.

naina:bahot bure ho aap aisa mazaq koi karata hai.
raj:naina yeh koi mazaq nahin hai tum pagal ho gayi ho.meri cadet ho tum bas aur kuch nahin aur koi rishata banane ki koshish mat karo mujhse. yeh raj ko kya ho gaya hai....
naina:par sir..

raj peeche turn karata hai aur bolata hai.

raj:ha sir yahi ek rishta hai mere aur tumhaare beach aur koi rishta nahin hai.suna tumne....................... are toh kal se woh cadet nahi rehegi phir sir ka rishta khatam

raj dekhta hai k naina waha nahin hai.woh waha se jaa chuki hai.aur woh wahi khada reh jata hai. naraj ho gayi na woh ab manate rehna...

next scene

sherry abhi k saath KMA main aati hai. are huda aur alekh kya mar gaye the joh is gorilla ke saath aayi ho

sherry:hey RK ki jeep abhi tak nahin aayi.
abhi:to..??
sherry:are isaka matalab raj aur naina abhi tak saath hai,iska matalab ......

sherry abhi ko dekhkar smile karati hai.

abhi:iska matalab naina ne apne dil ki baat bol dee aur raj ne bhi. are tumhe nahi pata kitna bura hua waha pe...
sherry:aaj main bahot khush hoo mujhe woh mila jo mujhe chahiye tha RK ki khushi.
abhi:aur hum bhi humare dost ko uska pyaar mil gaya aur hume aap. are sach toh yeh ki tu sirf apne liye hi kush hai...
sherry:bas ab yeh dono aa jaye phir pata chale k kisane kya kaha
abhi:chaliye hum unka wait karate hai.
sherry:ha main change kar k aati hoo ok.
abhi:ok.

sherry apne room main jati hai jaha use naina window k paas khadi nazar aati hai.

sherry:naina.....are tum wapas bhi aa gaye maine socha k abhi tak tum RK k saath hogi.

sherry room main aati hai par naina chup hai kuch bol nahin rahi aur khidaki k pass hi khadi hai.

sherry:are light to on karo aise andhre main kyun khadi ho,aur RK ko dekh rahi ho kya? are uska toh bura haal hai...
naina:..................
sherry:are plzz kuch batao na kya baat hui pehele kisane kaha i love u...
naina:maine....
sherry:lo....janati thi RK se nahin hone wala.phir kya hua..RK ne kab kaha??woh to sunkar khush ho gaya hoga abhi toh tumhe shock lagega...Shocked
bolo na kya baat hui,kaise kaha usane tumse..naina....kya hua...naina..

naina sherry ki side turn karati hai ..

naina:WOH MUJHSE PYAAR NAHIN KARATE SHERRY KUCH NAHIN KAHA UNHONE.......UNHONE KABHI MUJHSE PYAAR KIYA HI NAHIN.... karta hai naina tumhe se pyaar karta hai but uski koi mujburi hogi... but pata nahi ab kaunsi majburi hai Angry

sherry jaha khadi hai wahi khadi reh jati hai,kuch palo k liye dono ek dusare ko dekhte hai aur naina zameen par gir k rone lagati hai. mai bhi Cry

naina:koi feelings nahin hai unke dil main mere liye koi nahin....

sherry naina k pass jati hai aur usake face ko apne haath main leti hai.

sherry:naina puri baat batao..aisa kaise ho sakata hai...tumhe galatfahemi hui hogi ..RK aisa nahin kar sakata...baat suno...dekho meri side..

naina bas rote jaa rahi hai.aur sherry use chup kara rahi hai.

NEXT SCENE

abhi bahar khada hai aur baki sab bhi KMA main aate hai.

aalekh:sir aap yaha bahar kayku khade ho??
abhi:raj ka wait kar rahe hai.
hooda:kyun koi baat hui kya?
abhi:are nahin bas naina aur woh dono abhi tak aaye nahin aur hum aur sherry unka wait kar rahe hai
aalekh:bole to aaj naina bahot khush hogi.
abhi:ha aur raj bhi,i think hum sab sherry k room main hi jaate hai wahi jakar un dono ka wait karate hai.
hooda:ha sir chaliye.

sab naina k room main aate hai aur dekhte hai k naina ro rahi hai.

aalekh:naina....aye tereko kya hua. Shocked
naina:....
aalekh:naina bol na...sherry yeh kayku ro rahi hai.

sherry kuch bolati nahin hai aur waha se chali jati hai.

abhi:sherry......sherry...ruko kya baat hai... kabhi toh apni akal lagaya kar...
hooda:sherry.....
sherry:plzzz guy's abhi kuch mat pucho ...abhi mujhe kisi se kuch sawaal karane hai.

sherry yeh bolkar waha se chali jati hai aur baki sab naina k pass aate hai.

NEXT SCENE

raj apne room main betha hua hai aur sherry waha aati hai.

raj:are tum kab aayi mujhe pata hi nahin chala.
sherry:yeh sab kya hai RK...?? achese dato sherry raj ko... are nahi sherry datna mat jarur koi baat hai warna raj naina ke saath aisa nahi kar sakta.....
raj:kya main kuch samajhaa nahin tum kya bol rahi ho.
sherry:juth mat kaho sab janate ho tum main kya baat kar rahi hoo.
raj:sherry mujhe is baare main koi baat nahin karani.

sherry raj k pass jati hai.

sherry:kyun nahin karani...jawaab do RK.
raj:sherry woh naina...tum nahin janati usane...
sherry:kya galati hai usaki RK, yahi k tumse pyaar kiya.kyun toda tumne usaka dil. haa yeh sab sawal ka jawab leke jana tum...
raj:maine kisi ka dil nahin toda.maine use kabhi nahin kaha k main usse .....

raj bolate bolate ruk jata hai.

sherry:bolo na RK chup kyun ho gaye.kya tum naina se pyaar nahin karate.batao mujhe...saaf nazar aata hai tum usse pyaar karate ho
raj:nahin karata main naina se pyaar. itna jhooth kyu bol rahe ho raj tum..
sherry:ohh really..to phir kyun itana sabkuch kiya ek cadet k liye kyun apni jaan ki parwaah nahin ki.is baat ka kya jawaab doge . good question..
raj:woh sab maine apne liye aur naveen k liye kiya hai aur kisi k liye nahin.
sherry:accha to kyun naina ko dekhkar tum khush hote ho kyun use hamesha sab se bachaate ho,yeh pyaar nahin to aur kya hai. are pyaar hi hai....
bolo RK k tum pyaar karate ho naina se bolo aaj tumhe bolana hoga mujhse juth nahin bol sakate tum
raj:HA KARATA HOO BAHOT PYAAR KARATA HOO.......... aakhir aa gayi na dil ki baat juba pe...

raj ki baat sunkar sherry khush hoti hai aur raj sherry ki taraf turn karata hai .aur dekhta hai k bahar darwaze k pass naina ur baki saare cadets khade hai.
naina raj k pass aati hai.

naina:agar mujhse itana pyaar karate ho to phir kyun mujhse dur ho aap.
raj:tum galat samajh rahi ho cadet sing main tumse nahin KISI AUR SE PYAAR KARATA HOO..... are koi ise roko yaar yeh kyun aisa kar raha hai...

sab yeh baat se heran ho jate hai,aur naina woh kuch bol hi nahin pati.


naina:nahin.....juth bol rahe ho aap.kaun hai batao mujhe kaun hai woh jisse aap pyaar karate ho.
raj:...............
naina:boliye na agar koi hai to kaun hai.naam to bata sakate ho na. ha ab batao naam... agar ho ga toh batayega na.
raj:naam batana main tumhe zaruri nahin samjhta. hai hi nahi toh kya batayega...
naina:iska matalab koi nahin hai.

sherry naina k paas aati hai.

sherry:naina chalo plzz.
naina:nahin sherry jab tak sir naam nahin batate main nahin jaugi.
sherry:chalo naina...maine kaha na ...
naina:mujhe nahin jana...suna tumne koi nahin hai yeh inki life main main janati hoo.

naina sherry ki baat nahin sunati aur sherry zor se kaheti hai.

sherry:NANDINI NAAM HAI USKA........BAS SUN LIYA NAAM TUMNE AB CHALOGI TUM..... are sherry ne aisa kyun kiya use toh malum hai ki nandini ka topic khatam ho chuka hai...

sherry ki baat se sab shock ho jate hai raj bhi is baat se heran hota hai k sherry nandini k baare main kaise janati hai.
pure room main khamoshi hai.naina raj ki taraf kuch der dekhti raheti hai aur raj apni aakhe neache kar leta hai.aur phir naina jhooth kaha hai toh nazare toh niche hi karna padega naina ki aakho mai dekh kar raj sach nahi chupa sakta...
bina kuch bole waha se chali jati hai.aur baki sab raj ko dekhte hai...

raj:ab aap sab mujhe akela chodege...bahot raat ho gayi hai...good night.

raj ki baat se sab waha se chale jate hai.aur raj apne room ka darwaza bandh kar leta hai. ab mujhe pata hai ki aap khub royege..... par apne dil ki baat naina ko nahi batayege..

tumne toh aaj mujhe bahut rula diyaCry.... mai comment likhte waqt bhi ro rahi hu... phele toh tumne sherry se haa kehla  di... us jhatke se bhaar bhi nahi nilkali thi ki  raj ne naina ko na keh diya aaj ki ud mai toh dono side ulta hogaya jisko na kehni thi usne ha keh di aur jisko ha kehni thi usne na keh di... tumne toh mera dil hi tod diya... well story ke according lag toh raha hi tha ki sherry abhi ko ha kahegi but raj ki na ne toh naina ke saath mera bhi dil tod diya....Cry...... apart from this i think ki sherry ke mind mai koi bahut baadi baat hai isliye sherry ne  abhi ko haa kaha... b/c  clearly sherry ke actions baata rahe hai ki usne sirf raj ke liye ha kahi hai she dosen't love abhi... joh mere liye ek satisfaction ki baat hai filhaal b/c aage tum kya karti ho woh uspar depend karta hai.... par definatley sherry dosen't love abhi...Clapiske aage mera comment karne ka bilkul bhi man nahi kar raha hai... but  raj kyun aisa kar raha iske liye mujhe aage ke ud padhne hai aur un par mujhe aache comments dene hai..... no complaints to u b/c tumne toh story ki demand pe sabkuch likha hai... well mai 2nd oct ka wait kar rahi hu.... but usdin tum ud kar paogi ki nahi b/c usdin toh eid hai nai.. so happy eid in advance... aur pls next ud mai mat rulana ..Cry

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Crykyun hua aisa?????????.....sab khatm hogaya....naina aur raj ek nahin huye..Cry
me tumhe aj dopehr ko 3 parts ke comment dungi.par aisa kyun hua.jaan???Cry

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NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII YE KYA HO GAYACry RAJ AASA KAISE KAR SAKTA HAI NAINA KE SAATH Cry MAIN JAATI HOON RAJ JUTH BOL RAHA HAI KI WOH KISI AUR SE PYAAR KARTA HAI WOH SIRF NAINA SE PYAAR KARTA HAI NA AASA KYUN HOTA HAI KI RN MILTE-MILTE REH JAATE HAI AAJ TOH TUMNE MUHJE RULA DIYA Cry HOPE KI NEXT PART MEIN SAB THIK HO JAAYE EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KRIZZY

i'm really shocked
raj ne mana kar diya?
but kyun everybody knows ki vo sirf naina se pyar karta hai. nandini was just a past.
god, yaar ab jaldi ud karna varna me possible age ki story soch- soch ke apne exam nahin de paungi.
tooo good
 
 
hii karishma......
 
yes raj ne naina ko mana kar diya....CryCryCry
ha raj ka pyaar bas naina hai nandini nahin but usane aisa kyun kiya yeh sab pata chalega...Confused
aur ha tum plzz jayada sochna mat dear exam hai na so plzz..tum bas padhai karo main nahin chahti tum mere FF ki wajah se exam par dyaan na do ok Smileall the best 4 ur exam...Thumbs Up
thanx 4 comment.
 
                                      lots of love
 
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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinal60

hey sana
yeh kaya kiya
i hope raj ke pass aisi koi reeason hoga jise woh naina se door ja raha hai.
i hope who reason naina ke parents na ho aur jaldi se done ko milao yaar
 
hii hinal...
 
are jo aage ki story sochi wahi kiya.....
yes raj ka kya reason hai naina se dur hone ka woh next UD main pata chal jayega...
bas next UD ka wait karo.....
thanx so much 4 comment.Smile
 
                  lots of love
 
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tooo good......

i really thought something like dis gonna happen..........i think raj is rit at his place.........just felt bad for naina.........but dos wer really good dialouges der......dat rn convo was awesome......
Clap

also dat hes lying it must 've been really hard for him d way he behaved.......par agla ud jaldi se.....

plzzz cant wait



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Originally posted by rlrl

Crykyun hua aisa?????????.....sab khatm hogaya....naina aur raj ek nahin huye..Cry
me tumhe aj dopehr ko 3 parts ke comment dungi.par aisa kyun hua.jaan???Cry
 
 
hiii riti...
 
jo hota hai usake peeche koi wajah hoti hai..aur wajah saamne aayegi bas tum aage ki UD ka wait karo...aur ha comment karo to plzz short karana ..main aisa kyun bol rahi hoo tum janati ho.....thanx so much 4 comment.
 
                                           lots of love
 
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Posted: 30 September 2008 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepanwita

NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII YE KYA HO GAYACry RAJ AASA KAISE KAR SAKTA HAI NAINA KE SAATH Cry MAIN JAATI HOON RAJ JUTH BOL RAHA HAI KI WOH KISI AUR SE PYAAR KARTA HAI WOH SIRF NAINA SE PYAAR KARTA HAI NA AASA KYUN HOTA HAI KI RN MILTE-MILTE REH JAATE HAI AAJ TOH TUMNE MUHJE RULA DIYA Cry HOPE KI NEXT PART MEIN SAB THIK HO JAAYE EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
UPDATE SOOOOON DEAR
WITH LOVE
DEEPA.
 
 
 
hii deepa...
 
i know k tumhe UD bahot buri lagi b/c sad jo thi...mujhe bhi likhate time bura laga...Cry
 
aur tumne sahi kaha RN hamesha milate milate reh jate hai....CryCryraj ka pyaar naina hi hai par usane jo bhi kiya kyun kiya woh sab next UD main pata chal jayega.......thanx so much 4 comment.Smile
 
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