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hinz Viewbie

Joined: 13 September 2005
Posts: 28820

Posted: 23 May 2008 at 3:47am | IP Logged

Hello everyone

I'm sure a lot of u all know me by now,I'm Hina di as a lot of my little teenager readers call me

I will be continuing my FF Addictive in here and have called it 'Obsessively Addictive' looking at the response I got previously

Here's the link to the previous post if you wanted to start from there PN=1

The above thread  also an intro to the story and characters there,so plz read it if you are new

and to all my old followers

Here I am to entertain you again

I initially started a short  Holi Prediction ,then came the All week FF which turned into Addictive and now Obsessive in just 2 months today

Hope it remains the same way here and I  get all the love and appreciation I've been geeting all this time

I actually feel addicted to your love

Okay,so I will start here with the rain sequence  to make it easy for everyone to follow

So,come on guys!

Lets all join in the fun of the monsoon and carry it on to  the much anticipated Sagai of Sanjeevani

Love you all for being so lovely to me and my ffs



Recap Part -Page 1

Part One-Page 4

Part Two-Page 9

Part Three-Page 14

Part Four-Page 20

Part Five-Page 25

Part Six-Page 32

Part Seven-Page 37

Promo -Page 47

Part Eight a:Page 49

Part Eight b:Page 50

Part Nine:Page 57

Part Ten a:Page 64

Part Ten b:Page 67

Part 11:Page 71

Part 12:Page 74

Part 13:Page 79

Part 14:Page 84

Part 15:Page 88

Part 16:Page 93

Part 17:Page 97

Part 18:Page 105

Part 19:Page 112

Part 20a:Page 120

Part 20b:Page 121

Part 21a:Page 124

Part 21b:Page 129

Part 22:Page 132

Part 23:Page 136

Part 24:Page 140

Part 25:Page 145

Edited by hinanaziri - 25 June 2008 at 5:39am

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hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 3:48am | IP Logged
hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 3:48am | IP Logged

Recap part:

Barsaat ke din aaye

Mulakaat ke din aye…………………………

Hum soch me they jiske

Us raat ke din aye.......................

At the beach:

The sky pours down

and the rain drops add to the romance

Atul wraps Anjali in his arms

Anjali snuggles up

As they walk to the car enjoying their first monsoon
in love

The light drizzle turns into powerful rain drops

And they get almost drenched now

Atul goes

Anjali jaldi karo

Warna tum beemar ho jaogi!

She stops ,gives him a sweet smile at his concern

and looks up to the sky

Feels the raindrops tickle her face and body

She starts swinging round and screams


Ye hamare pehle pyaar ki pehli barish hai!

I wanna make it memorable

Ao na?

Atul smiles to see her so happy

and says lovingly

Haa Anjali!

Is saawan ka mujhe bhi kab se intezaar tha

and holds to swing her in his arms

Anjali dances like a bird dances at the onset of spring

And Atul adores her frolicking away in the rain

At the other end of the beach:

Shubh and Keerti get tickled as the first drops of rain fall on them

Shubh goes


and smiles to think of its possible consequences

and says

Keerti tum yahi ruko,

Mai abhi gaadi se chaata le ata hoo

Warna tum bheeg jaogi

Keerti says Okay! and waits there feeling the raindrops soak her body and emotions

Shubh runs to the car and gets his yellow umbrella out

Turns to run back to cover her

He looks up to see a dusky serenading Keerti

clad in his favourite yellow saree

flaunting her wet curvy body outline

His eyeballs pop out in amazement

But he tries to keep his calm and control over his
palpitating heart and nerve-tickling urges

He tries to remain as subtle as possible


Runs up to her and shades her under the umbrella

She gets cosy and warm with him on her side

as they walk along the beach

enjoying their first rainfall of the season

Keerti sings

Rimjhim rimjhim

Rumjhum rumjhum

And he sings

Bheegi bheegi rut me

Tum hum hum tum

Chaltey hai….

Chaltey hai……..

And they walk away sweetly under the yellow umbrella to the end of vicinity like a romantic bollywood couple


The sinners on the verge of committing the sin:

Jadu hai nasha hai


Tujhko bhula ke ab jaoo kaha

sings Armaan's heart aching with passion

Shamma tujhko khechti hai

Apni ore


Parwaney meri baaho me aa……………………

sings Riddhima as the fire of desire ignites

Armaan lifts her off the footstool

and pulls her onto himself

He makes her sit on his thighs

Looks at her enticing eyes

Strokes her hair

Runs his hand on her face and ears

Takes her arms and puts them round his neck

Pulls her closer from the waist

and sighs with his heart racing high

She then rests her head on his forehead

Feels connected to the love engine

He gives her a peck on her cheek

Then moves to her neck

undoing her top button, travels a bit further down

he then looks up to a see Riddhima  lost in ecstasy

and her lips,face and body are irresistably inviting

He brushes her lips with his

and a chilly current runs down her body

She opens her eyes

to see him high on passion

Armaan this time just can't resist anymore

And grabs her face wildly

and snogs her like crazy

She feels a little fear creep up with his madness

and is scared of committing the sinful

as he gets wilder by the second

She trusts her instincts

and pushes him off with a jerk

And gets up to run away

Armaan sits there in the chair feeling guilty to have been so hasty

He then gets up  to look for her

And finds her hiding behind the door

Trying to absorb her tempting emotions

Armaan limps his way to the door

where she hides  feared with her own self more than him

Armaan hears her heart throbbing as he goes near her 

He stops by the door

feeling disgusted with himself and his hasty actions

He says


I'm sorry! in a shameful way

Riddhima stands there mute with her heart pumping loud

Armaan says

Lagta hai mujhe abhi nikalna chahiye

Riddhima wants to stop him
to let him know that its not him she fears but her ownself
and to tell him not to be sorry for anything

She peeks out from behind the door to see him go

He turns around to see a sorry Riddhima watch him

He says

I'm sorry and I love u!

in sign language

Her eyes moisten as she comes out to the hall and


I love u too!

He turns back to leave after giving her a flying kiss


Thunder strikes
With lightining

Riddhima shrieks out in fear

and runs to her Armaan

She hides in him arms to find  solace

Armaan comforts her

wraps her in his arms and take her towards her room

And sings the song n a teasing naughty way 

Badal yu garajta hai

Dar kuch aisa lagta hai

Chamak chamak ke

Lapak ke ye bijli hum pe gir jayegi!

And now Riddhima feels safe but naughty

She's not scared of the thunder outside

But again fears the storm of their erotic emotions roaring inside

As the song goes

Bahar bhi toofan,andar bhi toofaan............


The bike ride:

Muskaan loving it with Rahul

She takes of the helmet to enjoy the cool breeze

Her curly hair fall fly all over

and he takes his helmet off too

to feel her hair come onto his face

Muskaan loves masti


Rahul loves her in her masti 

Then the  rain drops  pitter patter on them

Muskaan gets super excited to witness the first rain of the monsoon with her Rahul

She streches out her hand to feel the naughty droplets

stir her feelings

Rahul looks at her in the mirror and

feels his pulse rise

Her gorgeous innocent cheeky face

menaces his soaked emotions

He is blown away with her charm

And he sings

Tip tip tip tip barish

Shuru ho gayi

Maane ya na mane

Meri tu ho gayi!

Mai tera hoo

Tu meri ai ai ai...................


Now to the budape me jawani:

Shashank and Padma come out of the restaurant

To see monsoon's come through

Shashank goes

Padma,tum yahi ruko mai gaadi se chata leke aata hoo

I think there's one in the car somewhere

Padma says ok

And Shashank goes to the car and finds a big black umbrella

He hops back to fetch her

And a little boy comes to sell flowers

He goes

Sahab lelo na

Memsaab ko is barsat ka pehla tohfa dedo

Wo bohot kuch ho jayegi sir

Padma smiles

and Shashnak goes


Memsaab khush to hongi na?

The little kid goes

Arey saab ye baarsaat sab ko pyar karna sikha deti hai

Padma goes


Bohot badi baateein karta hai

Tumhe kaise pata ye sab?

Shashank goes

Acha ye lo and pays the kid

and buys her a big bunch of roses

and the kid runs away in the rain with his money

Padma says

Thank You! sweetly

Shashank smiles and offers the umbrella

Padma fits under it with his so close

and they walk to the car

With this in the background

Pyaar hua Ikraar hua hai

Pyaar se phir kyu darta hai dil

They reach the car and sit in

and the song continues

Kehta hai dil

Rasta muskhil maloom nahi hai kaha manzil

Sings padma

And they open up to each other through the song

and express their hearfelt emotions


At Sanjeevani:

Lovely finishes her lovely life story

and Nana sympathises with her after knowing her hopes and dreams

He then goes

Chal ye to hui teri jeevan khatha

Ab meri sun

Lovely goes

Oji sunaiye na?

Nans starts

Jab bai chota bacha tha

Badi shararat karta tha

Meri chori pakdi jaati................


and stops

Lovely goes

Kya hua ji?

Gana to poora kijiye na

Nana goes


And tries to listen to the  rain fall and thunder 

He jumps up to find the closest window around 

and  looks out of the window to enjoy the rain

He imagines Keerti for one last time

And sings with all his heart painfully

Lagi aaj sawan ki phir wo jhadi hai!

Wahi aag seene me phir jal padi hai!...........................................

Lovely watches him and feels sorry 
without knowing what he's mourning over

She decides to leave him alone

and goes upto the terrace to have her little bit of monsoon fun

She is longing for her love and the rain heightens her desire to be with him

and she sings like a carefree soul

Mere khaabo me joo aye

Aakey mujhe ched jaaye

Ussey kaho

Meri neend na churaye!......


Edited by hinanaziri - 23 May 2008 at 4:44am

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mehma24 Senior Member

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 3:51am | IP Logged thread started Dancing
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 3:54am | IP Logged

yey me luved the name obsessively addictive LOL so true

congratz for the new thread...n i m now waiting for your update hmm..

Edited by pari0706 - 23 May 2008 at 3:55am
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congo 4 new thread
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oye hoye,
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hinz Viewbie

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Posts: 28820

Posted: 23 May 2008 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Hey Thanks

Mehmu,Ankita and Soniya

I'm glad u've followed me across here

I have started typing the update

Bas aaj ka gaana sunna baaki hai

Edited by hinanaziri - 23 May 2008 at 4:23am

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