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-MamuKiBhanji-

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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 11:36am | IP Logged

Hello all my dear friendsSmile..Im a big fan of Karan Shilpa (Kash)..so today iv dicided to write an FF ..though im not at all a gud writterEmbarrassedSo if u get board  to reading my FF,then plz 4give meEmbarrassed..This's my birthday today & today im going to write my 1st FF..so be be wid me..do read comment but be honest wid ur commentsEmbarrassed

Intro
Kaha jata he k payaar dunia ki sabse khubsurat cheez hoti hai,aur isse vaghwan ne banaya hai,,Payaar sabke lia bana hai..yea phir payaar ke lia sab bane hai.Payaar main koi chota/bada nahi hota..payaar vo naam hai,jo namumkin ko mumkin bana chakti hai aur payaar karne baloko ek nayyi manjil de jati hai..Star
 
Part 1
 A kahani hai ek amm ladki ki,Riddima ki.Jiski sapne hai acche aur Dr.Banna.She's bubbly,she is naughty but at the same time she's caring,loving,innoccent & adorable.She wants 2make her parents proud & 4that she comes 4m a small town 2a big city Mumbai,,she get a job 1of the big hospital called 'Sanjivani' & 1of the best interns among all..In the days of internship,she made f'ship with Dr,Atul -He's very funny,Always confused & love Dr.Anjali.Dr.Anjali-Want 2be a best doctor in Sanjivani.Dr.Muskaan-Very bubbly.Talkative & Riddima's best friend..Dr.Rahul-Very hardworking & a Silent Lover of Riddima....Now here comes Hero of my story..Armaan Mallik-who is 1of the best actor of 2days tellyworld..he's like Sabke dillok Armaan,Every girl want 2be with him..& he's carefree,lively,goodlooking,smart,also without any doubt very flirtisious..But on the other hand,he's very good hearted & kind.So the story is when AR met,how their love story start & start 4never been end..

Part-2

Tring tring,[Muski call ridzs]..Ridz woke up in hurry & says Hello.M-Suva k 7baaz rahe hai,aur tu avvi tak ghar bathkar so rahi hai..R-[smile & say]Muski tu to sach main paghal ho gahi hai yaar,vala bath karte huye v koi sota hai.M-Haha..very funny..per tu hospital kab pohochaghi,yaad hai na Dr.Kirti ne humme 8-30per report karneko bola hai..R-haa mere ma mujhe yaad hai,ab agar tu phone rakheghi,tabhi main aa paunghi naa.M-ok chal bye,c u in hosp.R-bye.        (In the hosp,everybody in the locker room,Rizs entire) 

Ra-Hi riddema,Kaisi ho.R-Hi rahul,im fine.At & An-Yaar suna hai az gabbar ka mood bilkul thik nahi hai,Vo Umar vai ne unper dawa k bottle ghira d thi..M-Accha kya baat hai yaar kisiki himmat to huyi k Dr. kirti ka samna kare mere tarha..Ra-ok..to tujme Dr.kirti ki sath ladne ki himmat hai..(At & Ra creat an eye contact& coz they want 2fool m)M-Ofcoues.main unse darti thodina hu.At the time,Ra&At Say-Hello mam app yeha,humme bula lia hota..M-{she got scared & Get cloze her eyes & said]Sorry mam plz mujhe maaf kar djia,main appse dartihu na,infact sabse zyada darti hu..Ra-Come cloze 2her & said..We all know that yaar Chal abb tu ankhee khol chakti hai...muski open her eyes & saw no dr.Kirti..(everybody laughs,Muski going to rush on Rahul but that time aanauncement begins...Sare interns nurse station pe dr.kirti ko report kare]Muski saya 2Rahul-ruk badmain dikhati hu,,

Rahul give her a naughty smile & [Every body in nurse station] Dr k comes :Good morning interns.Interns:Good morning mam.Dr.k-Dr.az koi naya case nahi aya hai,so app logh aapni purane cases samhalenge but haa ek spacial case ayahai..aur..At-Mam vo app samhalenghi.right..Dr.k-Dr.atul,aindar aghar birch main bola siddhe pathlab main rectal examination karte huye nazar ayenghe..At-Sorry mam.Dr.K-Nazre atulse hatak,dr.riddima.R-Yes mam.Dr.k-A case app samhalenghi..BTW yea ek celebs k father k case hai.

Every body except Riddima-Celebs!!!!Kaun hai?KKIIIII...Kiran.I mean SRK hai Yea Rani mukhargi hai,yea phir Rajeeb khandelwal aur Hussai n hai..Dr.k-Shut up ...Kaun kahegha app logho ko dekhkar app sab Dr.s hai.Anyway dr.Riddima case mashur actor Armaan mallik ka dad ki hai,kuch serious nahi hai..but u know this celebs.Aaaawwww...Here he comes The man his himself Armaan mallik.Every1 just shocked 2see him..Anjali just faint over Atul..per atul ne use samhal lia..Muskaan Rahul ko dhakka dake,"Oyye piidde,Dhekh asa kavi chal chakegha..Everybody just look like him "Hoooooooooooooooooooooooo"But riddima's behaiviour is normal..AT the time Armaan-The rockstar catch all of them & give them a splendide smile & say "hey everybody"..& Hello Dr.kirti.u looking very much preety..Dr.k-Armaan stop being flirt ok..after all im ur di..A-& say sorry di.Dr.k-Lets come to the point.Uncle ko kya hua hai,is anything serious.A-No.Nothing big di..Actually app to janti hai papa ko sugar ki prob hai aur ghar per vo bilkul v apna khayal nahi rakhte,islia maina soccha apki hospital main admit kar du.waisa v apki hote hua mujhe fikar karne ki to koi jarrorat nahi hai,right?O haa di papa ka case app hi handle karne bale ho naa?Dr.K-Are haa...main to batana hi vul ghayi a case main nahi Dr.Riddima handle karne wali hai,Here she is...[Anouncement:Dr.Kirti general ward main report kare]O god! Armaan tum zara yaha ruko,main avi ati hu.[Dr.Kirti left & Armaan looking at Ridzs]A-Hello doctor to app hai Dr.Riddima,jo mere papa ka case handle karne bale hai.Nice to meet u.R-Same here sir..A-Naaa..I dont think so.R-Why?A-Why? ok..Kuki mujhe nahi lghta appko mujse milkar kushi huyi hai,aghar khushi hoti to phir app v apni friends ki tarha mujhe ghur rahi hoti..[Ridzs smile & others try 2behave like normally coz they was just 2shock 2see him]R-She smile & say,Pasand kaene ka matlab ghurna thodi na hai aur waisa v.....[Dr.Riddima Opd main report kare]Ohhh! sorry sir,i've 2leave now & dont worry about ur father i'll take care of him.See u later,,[After saying that riddima left & armaan lookng at her path 4a while]An-Atul baat karo na usse.At-Kya?main kya baat karu tumhe itni jaldi ho to tum baat karo na.An-Atul tum v na,kisi kam k nahi ho..[atul feel jelous now]Mussskan...muskan tu baat kar na..musskan!M-Haan!!1kya hua?kya hua?An-Kaha kho gayi thi tu,Baat karna tu usse.M-Aree ha ha.Karti hu waise v tum logho se to kuch hone nahi bale,ab dakho main kya karti hu.[Muskaan look 4word to Armmaan with her all style but that time Dr.kirti arrived there]Dr.kirti-Kya ho raha hai yeha app logh avi tak yehi hai.{At the time muskaan say mam  maine kuch nahi kia & other interns r laughing at her].Dr.k-Just shut up all of u & get back to ur work.Interns- Yes mam.[After interns left,Armaan ask Dr.Kirti]A-Di kya app hamesha un per asa hi varakti hai,Dr.k-Haa kuyn?tujhe koi prob hai.

A-Nahi bilkul nahi.thank god main dr. nahi bana..[He said it slowly]Dr.k-Kuch kaha kya?A-Nahi di.Dr.k-Accha a to bata,tu yeha per kaisa shooot per nahi jana hai kya?A-No di..no shoot 4 1month,maine break lia hai.DR.k-Walked away & said to him,Chal accha hai,ab thodi seba apni papa ki v kar..Anyway  badmain milti hu>Bye.A-Bye di.

Part-3

[Dr.Riddima with Armaan dad,in the spacial ward]

R-Hello sir. A's dad-Woke up in hurry & say..Sir??Kya hua mere sir ko? R-No sir,Apki saad ko kuch nahi hua hai,i called s i r 2u.A's dad-Ha ha ha.. kya doctor..dont be so formal,mara beta celebs hai main nahi.R-Riddima & say ok then i'll call u uncle,challeghi na?

A's dad-Perfect..R-Ok uncle..baate bohout ho gahi,ab apki chek up karlati hu..so uncle app itni mithai ku khate ho,u know naa its not good 4ur health..A's dad-I know beta per hamesha fika khana kise pasand hai..bolo.R-[Ask very sweetly]Apko sweets khana bohout acccha laghtahaina,thikh hai phir main app k lia sweet banakar le ayunghi.sugar free wala..but promiss me app mujse puse bagayar sweet ko haat v nahi lagayenge..Promiss. A's dad-Promiss..[At this time armaan entire the room]A-Kya baat hai bohout promises kia zaraha hai. R-Yes sir,Uncle ne mujhe promise kia hai k vo sweets ko haat nahi laghayenge.A-Asa kya?Main jab apke pise pada rahetahu,tab to mere ek v nahi sunte aur issne kaha baas maan gaye.A's dad-Manta kaisa nahi..tu to hamesha mere pise pada raheta hai per az tak mujhe pakad nahi paya but issne to mujhe pakad lia.[After saying that a's dad & Ridzs both r started laughing at Armaan& Ammy just bow down his head &smile].R-Ok uncle,Baad main milti hu.Mujhe breffing k lia jana hai.. bye & bye 2u sir. A-Bye.....[After Riddima leaving A's dad ,started talking with his son]A's dad-What a nice girl.Kitni kam samay main sabko apna bana leti hai..Kaash mare v asihi ek beti hoti..A-Hmmmm!Thik hai dad hospital se nikal ne k baad apki shaddi karba dette hai,aur app k lia ek asi ladki dhunte hai,jiski already Dr.Riddima jaisi ek bati ho..Whats say???? Armaan laughs.A's dad-Haat badmash.. [with smile]tu kavi nahi sudregha..& then both father & son hug eachother..

Part-4

[In the loker room all interns talking with each other except ridzs she is in changing room] 
An-Atul kitne baar bola Armaan se baat karo baat koun nahi ki tumne? At-Ku tumhari baat main ku karu?An-Ha ha..baat ku karoghe..U boys naa always so much jelouse.. Ra-excuse me,not me haa. M-[give expression like Rahool & say]Not me haa..koun piddede tu kya assmaan se tapka hai jo jalouse nahi ho saktaa.. Ra-Dekh muskaan mu samhal kar baat kaar samji nahi too...??M-Mu samhaal kar baat kar..u r right yaar!Per mere paas to 10mu nahi hai jo main samhalu.. 1hi hai,aur jo hamesha sahi bolti hai. samja pidde.Ra-O really..to jab Dr.kirti aa gayi to tere bolti koun bannd ho gayye thi haa?M-Aaa...vo...to...vo... to..main...Ra-haa ab bol..kya hua ab tu bakree ki tarha main main koun karrahi hai.. M-[looking at him with angere ]Oyye pidde!tu chup karegha aya main karau.. Ra-Koun main ku chup karu?M-Tharrza tu to ab gayya ..At & An-Stop it guys kya kar raheho tum doono. [Riddima comes out 4m the c.r]R-Stop it yaar kya karrahe ho tum logh..Mus..muskaan stop it ..stop musskaan huya kya hai?M-Aya lo..ayeha puri ram kahani khatam ho gayi or aya ake pussrehi hai seeta kaun hai?R-Musskaan!!!!M-Kya yaa!{Then she looking 4her loker]R-Atul tum batao hua kya hai?At-Arre yaar vo Armaan mallik ke sath baat nahi kar payi hai na.usski varaas hum per se nikal rahi hai.. An-Kya kaha? At-Sorry Anjali.. R-Guys..ismain ladne ki kya baat hai..jao,aur baat karo..its simple.. Anyway Dr.Kirti ke paas briffing ke lia janna hai,vul to nahi gayye naa?At-Arre haa yaar gabbar humara intezar kar rahi hoghi..main to vul hi gayya tha..R- & say...challo then i catch u all in the nurse station..[After saying this Ridzs take leave]R-Dekha kitni samajdar hai vo..aur tum donno baas Armaan k naam ke mala jabte rahete ho..At-I agree..An & M-Kya kaha.. [Then they just pour on them like rain]--[All interns with Dr.Kirti 4briffing in nurse sation]Dr.k-Ok..dr.s sab kus kaisa chal raha hai?At-Sab thik hai mam..tina,mina sab thikh hai. Dr.k-Tina...mina..kaun? At-Mere paude mam. Dr.k- Dr.atul..just shut up..maine applogho ki kam k baremai pussa,naki apki poudo ki bare main.At-Sorry mam.Dr.k-Dr.Riddima..R-Yes mam.Dr.k-Mr.mallik ki case ka kya huya,any improvement?R-Yes mam..sabkus under controlled hai..i hope vo thik ho jayenge..Dr.k-Good {looking on the other interns]Anyway dr.s azz interns of the month ka award dene bale hai hum..mujhe jankar acccha lagha k app logh apne kam ko lekar kitne serious hai. .aur haa Dr.Anjali apki perfoormence v bohout accha hai issbaar,so keep up the good work.An-Thank u mam .Dr.k-U wellcome[& then she left]Ra-Pata nahi issbaar I.O.M ka awared kaun lekar jayegha. .M-Koi v lekar jaye per tu lekar nahi ja raha hai aya baat paaki hai..At-Jo v ho per Dr.s to hom sabbhi accche hai.ku Anjali? An-Yeah!Right.At-Waisa jo v jeete party denna to paregha usse.M-Arre waah mere shaar kya baat kahi hai tune,bilkul mere mu ki baat seen li tune. .At-Hai na hai na. [At the moment Armaan join them]A-Kaun si party ki baat ho rahi hai vai!Humme to kisine bataya hi nahi.An-Arre sir app!! Vo actually humne decide kiahai jo isbaar I.O.M ka award jeetegha usse hum sabko party danne hoghi..A-Hmmmmm!To ashi baat hai,per tum logh kaise logh ho yaar?Ra-Kya maatlab..sir vo hum kuch samjhe nahi. A-Arre ghabrane walli koi baat nahi hai mere dost..main to baas yahi kaheraha tha mujhe to kisene invite nahi kia.M-[Step 4word 2him & say]To main karrahi hu na sir.. App hammare sath jarroor anna..A-Thanks Musskaan ..per tumlogh kya mujhe sir...sir..kyahe kar mera sadh kha rahe ho...Dont be so formal with me..Call me Armaan..ok?At-O really! A-Haa yaar!Main koi Amithab bacchan thodi na hu jo mujhe ji sir..ji sir karne hoghi..Waise v mujhe tumlogho se dosti karni hai,ji hoozoori nahi haa..So chill.R-App sach main hummmare dost baanna chahate hai soch lijia? A-Soch lia riddima ji.[He said it,looking on her eyes]Anyway mera abb tak tum logho k sath thik se intro: v nahi huya,to pahelle aya karle. .[Armaan & every1 looking 4word 4intro with each other,Except Riddiima..Riddima just standing 1side,looking at Armaan & smilling.]
 
Part-5
[All interns join Dr.kirti in hall room 4knowing who is the next i.o.m]

Dr.K-Good evening dr.s.All we know az i.o.n.ke awared dia jaraha hai ,aur aya awared jata hai..Dr.Riddima ko.

[After this announcement all other interns chearring up Ridzs & come out 4m hall room]

At-Yea!to isbar party Ridzs daghi..hai na Ridzs? Congraz. Ra-Oyye tu congraz kis baat k lia kar raha hai?Awared jeetnek lia yea party dene k lia? At-Aree haa yaar,maine congraz kis baat k lia ki!! Tum batao na Anjali. An-Shut up Atul.[then come 4word 2ridz]Congraz Ridzs,im really happy 4u. R-Thanks. M-Wait..wait..wait..Aghar app logho ki thanks & baki all that ho gayya ho to party k bare main socche. Ra-Issmain socchna kya hai,party karni hai to karenghe. M-Oyye pidde! Party karni hai to karenghe-kaha karenghe tere sare per. Ra-Dekh musskaaan tu na.... An-Wait..wait..tum dono ladho maat..i'v an idea 4it.R-Kya? An-Ku na hum Armaan se pusse.. Everybody-Armaan se? An-Hmm! Armaan se. M-Actually good idea yaar,per vo milegha kaha? At-Ab aya to hummari i.o.m.ko hi pata hogha koun? R-Haa?O..Actually im not so sure but may be apne dad ke sath ho.. M-To phir intezar kiss baat ki ho rahe hai,challo phir.

[After that they all went 2gether in A's dad cabin]

Every1-Hello uncle. A's dad-Hello. R-Uncle ab kaisi tabiaat hai appki? A's dad-Good beta. An-Actually uncle hum app se kuch pussne ayaye the? A's dad-Haa pusso beta.

An-Uncle Armaan kaha hai? A's dad-Armaan!Arre vo to mujhe baata raha tha woh tumlogho k sath kahi bahar janne bala ha? M-[push Anji & said ]To phir bahar hi hogha,challe.

An-Haa ruk mski & then said A's dad-Ok uncle hum chalte hai,bye. R-Thikh hai app apna khayal rakhna ok? A's dad-Ok beta,bye. R-Bye.

[Then they come out 4m Sanjivanni & saw that Armaan was waiting 4them on the parking laun.
 
Part-6
Armaan was standing besides his car..& when he saw them he said..

A-Tum logh ab araheho, pata hai main kitne deer se tumlogho ki intezar karrahahu,aye maassar v sayed mujse bore ho gayye.M-Sorry yaar ,ab to aya gayye hai na to ab chalte hai. R-Abbe tu ruk'challo chalte hai'pahele jana kaha hai vo to dicide karne de.M-Oyye pidde,tu hamesha mere baat ku katta raheta hai haa,ruk main tujhe... A-Chill guys,mujhe pata hai kaha jana hai.. At-Kaha? A-Batatahu yaar,aisi gagha jaha srif hum honghe aur asmaan..like a picnic trip u know. An-Give a slite push atul & say,Dekha islia hi main kaherahi thi k Armaan se pusste hai. At-Haa picnic to thik hai per picnic k lia saman cahia na u know.. R-Haa..saman hum..A-Riddima..u dont take tansion,i'll take all needed things of party & haa congraz 4won the awared. R-Thanks but appko kaisa pata k main jeeti hu Aur BTW main party de rahi huna to saman app ku laye?A-Sorry main tumhari sawal ka jabab nahi dungha.

R-koun? A-Kounki aghar tum mujhe asai respect dati rahi to main 26k umar main 62k jaroor ho jaungha ...aur tum hi batao 62ke umar main mujhe baat karne main taklif nahi hoghi kya?

Everybody laugh ..&Ridzs  & say

R-Ok..ab batao.Armaan just looking at ridzs 4a while & say on his mind 'oyye hoyye'jab tum bolti hai tab aur v khubsoorat laghti hai.R-Kya hua,ab batao v?A- & say,I did it coz u r my friend.

Riddima & Armaan loking at each other silently.at the time

muskaan say-Arre yaar batte ho gayyi ho to challe nahi to party to dur ki baat ,raat hi ayhi per beetani pareghi.Ra-Haa 4achange yea thik kaherahi hai,to challe Armaan.

A-Yea lets go. .

[After that they all set on the car & reached Armaan fav place]

A-Beauty just over here,lots of silent,open air,i just loved the place. R-Me too A-ok guys here we come here,lets party begine.At-Haa Anjali tum bilkul thik kaherahi ho.

[After that they all set up things 4party & set on a cloth]Ra-Bap re challo sab thik se set ho gayya,ab kya kare,bohout bore ho raha hai yaar.M-yea thik kahe raha hai..kya kare. An-Antakshari khele.. At-Waw Anjali kya idia dia hai,hai naa Armaan.

A-Aaaa..Ab main kya bolu.party k host se hi pusso.

[lokking at ridzs]R-Main kya bolu,jo tum logh thik samjo. M-Ok.ok.ok.Main riddima ki best friend hu na,to main bolti hu ho jaye antaksharee.

[Armaan looking at riddima but he didn't get it why?& Riddima blasshing bcoz she didn't know,what she need 2do about it ]

Part-7
 An-Main pahele shuru karti hu haa. At-Haa Anjali,tum shuru karo,u know what guys Anjali bohout accha gana gati hai. An-Accha!Tumhe kaisa pata main acchi gati hu..anyway thanks..ok guys,im gonna be sing now..[Anji started singing,& the antakshari deer tak challi,some later comes Riddima's trun]M-oyye Ridzs,ab tere badi hai ghaa.R-Arre nahi main koi <ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoN>ghana</ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoN> bana nahi ghane wali ok. Ra-Riddima,ghao na,yeha srif hum hai yaar.R-No..[& she noticed that Armaan looking at her & smileing a bit & 4this reason she not want 2sing]At-Ridzs gha naa plz,chal ab to maine plz v bol dia.[at last ridzs agree 2sing a song,she started]'Kash ek din aisa v aye,waqt ka paal paal tham jaye,samne baas tum hi raho aur saanse thaher jaye'

[Suddenly there starttted raining,Riddima ran & stand under a tree &Armaan also followe her.AR face 2 face]A-Waise tum <ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoN>ghana</ST1:COUNTRY-REGIoN> accha ghati ho. R-She looking at his eyes & could not say anythimg.

They just looking each others eyes & when time flew,they didnt understand..but after a long time Ridzs say..

R-Armaan,barish tham gayyi hai... but Armaan doesn't responds .R-Armaan!ab humme chalna chahia.A-Zaroori hai?R-Haan, chale.A-Derre se haat kar with smile..Lets go.

[After all that they all coming back in town]

Part-8
[Hole night AR couldnt sleep,Even couldnt get,whats going on with them..& then in the morning,at the hospital,all interns in the caffe tareeaa] 

At-Musskan zara coffe paas karna.M-Aya le. Ra-Riddima kal raat ki party kitni acchi thi nahi. R-Haa..[thode ghabraye hue]At-kya khag acchi thi,barish ne saddi band bajadi,pata hai party ke baad ghar aya kar mujhe kitni taklif jelni parri. An-Koun,tumhe kya hua? At-Nahi pusste to accha tha Anjali..per thik hai,U know what mere land lady ne mujhe apni store room me soone ko kaha.M- ..Store room me?koun?Aur koi ghagha nahi thi kya?At-Thi na,uski ghod main,per main assa thodi na kar sakta hu,main to srif mere Anjali ke ghodi me so chatta hu..hai naa Anjali?A-U wish! M-Arre dakho kaun ayya hai,Hi Armaan..Baitho na.

[Riddima thodi ghabra gayyi aur Armaan uske paas baath gayya]A-Haa..Thanks. At-Arre yaar kaisa hai tu..kal party main maza aya k nahi?A-Haa!Accha tha,maine enjoy kia,

Then he slitely looking on Ridzs But Ridzs feel very akword,4that she said..R-Hey guys,mujhe kus kam yaad aya ghaya hai,so i should leave.M & Ra-Haa,humme v jana hai,Dr.kirti ko report karna hai,challo sath main chalte hai.An & At-Ok..bye guys,badhmain milte hai.

R-Bye. [Armaan wants 2talk with Riddima,so he was looking 4her & at last he come to know she's in pathlab,going there 4collleting some report]

A-Hi,Riddima. R-Hi, Tum yeha.A-Haa! O mujhe tumse kal raat k bade main kuch baat karni hai.R-[Tried 2avoid him]Armaan..im little busy,mujhe mam ko aya report dene jana hai,to badh main baat kare.A-Per..Ridd...R-Bye,Armaan..[Armaan couldn't talk 2her that time,he just looked on her path]  *{Announcement:Dr.Riddima Waiting room maaya gayia.]*R-Waiting room!!Mujse milne kaun ayya hogha?[After that she went 2waiting room & saw there is no another1,its Armaan]R-Armaan!Tumne mujhe yeha kis lia bulaya hai,kya tumhe pata nahi k yea ek hospital hai aur yeha hum kam karne atte hai?A-Haa..Mujhe pata hai,per main kya karta..tumse milne gayya tha na main,tumne to mujhse baat tak nahi ki..ulta mujhe bagha dia..

R-[looking at him in anger & said]OOOO!!!Islia tum mujhse baat karne ke lia assa rasta apnaoghe? A-Riddima!Im sorry,if u hurt bcoz of me,per mera tumse baat karna bohout zaroori tha.Isslia....R-Thikh hai,jaldi bolo..mujhe jana hai.A-[Come cloze 2her..Riddima shake..Armaanut her hand on his hand & looking on her eyes]Riddima,I dont know why i feel it,but last night i cant sleep,mere sath aisa pahele kavi nahi hua..per jabse tumse mila hu...pata nahi...aisa laghta hai sab badhal sa gayya hai...i think im in.????..i know its too hurry but may be its my true feelling,aur mujhe laghta hai tum v mere lia wohi mahesus karti ho jo main tumhare lia karta hu..plz Riddima say something.. R-Main.. At the time,some1 in the door & she said AR-Hi guys. R-[Just look on her & then ask]Who r u?

The girl step 4word,with smile & said-Im Disha,Armaan's girlfriend..
 
Part-9

[Riddima just put her hands off 4m Armaan & then Armaan ask that girl]

 A-Disha!Tum yeha?..T.u.m...yeha kaisi aayi?D-Give him ahug & say..to kaisa raha mera surprize?Tumne to mujhe bataya v nahi k tum 1month tak shooting nahi kar raheho to maine v chutti le kar tumse milne chali ayyi.[Till now R just listening their conversation & seeing a's expression but now she spoke up]R-Armaan,bura na mano to,can i ask u something?A-Ha?..Haa,pusso.R-Aya kaun hai?A-Yea..Yea mara sath kam karti hai...we r friends.D-Kya Armaan tum v naa!Hamesha aisa hi karte ho..media k samne thik hai but i guess,yea to tumhari dost hai naa..to issa batate hua kya saram?..R-1min:Main kus samji nahi,kya matlaaab hai appka?A-vo iska mattlab...D-Tum rukko,main batati hu...actually we love each other.[Riddima just very angry 2hear that,give an angry look towords Armaan,she said]R-Ok..applogh batte kighia,mujhe kus kam hai,so i'll take a leave.bye.

D-Bye doc.A-Riddima mere..baat..

[Riddima left & Disha ask 2him]D-Kya hua?A-[he was very feeling akward but said]Kuch nahi... [Riddima with A's dad in his cabin,she was very upset coz whatever happen with her]A's dad-Kya hua beta?Upset lagh rahi ho?R-Nahi uncle,aisi koi baat nahi,mainto baas!..A's dad-Anyway soddo uosetness ko,mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai.

R-Kya..?A's dad-Pahele baitho to.[R set & a's dad give her abox]R-Uncle,issmain kya hai?A's dad-Tum kud hi khol kar dakh lo.[R open the box & saw there was some traditional jwellary]R-Uncle yea to..A's dad-Yea Armaan k maa ki kuch gahene hai,jo tumhe main dena chahati hu.R-Uncle,thank u very much..per a sab app mujhe koun dena chate hai?A's dad-[smile]Dear,mere koi beti nahi hai,pre tum mujhe bilkul mere bati laghti ho,isslia maine soccha k...R-Thanks uncle k appne mere lia itna soccha aur mujhe appni bati samjha but main appse yea sab nahi le chattti,sorry.A's dad-Per koun beta,kya hua?R-nothing uncle..per haa aghar mujhe app kuch dena hi chate hai naa,to apni aashirwaad dizia,k main ek accha Dr. baan chakku.A's dad-Main tumhari baat se bohout kush hua beta,god bless u.

[Announcement:Sare interns Dr.Kirti ko report kare]

R-Oopss!Announcement,Bye uncle main appse badh main milti hu.[After saying that she left but the best part of this conversation is Armaan heard everything about it,standing outside & After here all that he make his mind that she's the1,till now which person he looking for]  

 [All interns with Dr.kirti]

M-Hi Riddima,kaha thi abtak,caffetarea k badh milihi nahi..R-Haa!Vo..Main..

Ra-Oyye!Hospital main kam hota hai,ab sab tere tarha kamchore thodi na hai.M-Oyye pidde!Tu ne phirse mere baat kati,Tere problem kya hai haa?Chupchap nahi baith chakta kya?An-Chill guys..tum logh thodi santi se nahi baith chakte kya?At-Anjali per yeha to zameen hai...thik hai aghar tum kaho to main baith jata hu.[Atul trying to set down but Anjali caught him & said]An-Shut up Atul..Then looking on Ridzs Kya huya Ridzzi tumhari shakal itni utri huyi koun lagh rahi hai?R-Kuch nahi..Baas Asai..M-Haa!Riddima kya huya?Kisi ne kuch kaha kya?Kuch kaha to mujhe bol main to usski..

[At the time Dr.K came]

Dr.Hello interns.Interns-Hello mam.Dr.k-Az koi nayi case nahi ayyi hai to app sab purane case hi follow up karenghe,any confusion.Interns-No mam.Dr.k-Good..Aur haa..Dr.Riddima..App ko Sayed az Lonabla jana paregha,Woha hamari sanjivani orfanez main kuch problem ayy gayyi hai..to app plz woha ghayia aur dakhia kya probs hai.M-Mam,per vo akali kaisa jayeghi,bohout dur hai u know..
Dr.k-Arre haa!Maine to iss bare main soccha hi nahi..App ke sath kisi aur ko vagh v to nahi chakti kounki kahi Dr.s chutti per gayye hua hai..[At the time Armaan come there & Dr.K said to him]Arre Armaan..I need a favour 4m u.A-Haa di bolia.Dr.k-Kya tum Dr.Riddima k sath lonavla jaa chako ghe 2/3din k lia.[After here that R trying 2stop Dr.k,so she said]R-Nooo..its ok mam i handle,mere sath kisiko chalneki jarrorat nahi.
Dr.k-No Dr.Its needed.Armaan appke sath jayegha.Armaan tumhe to koi probs nahi hai na..A-No di..R-Per mam..Dr,k-Dr.Riddima...Its an order..R-Yes mam....
[Then Armaan & Riddima both starting eyes talk..Armaan want 2apolozise with her but she dosen't agree to hear anything]

Part-10

[B4 going lonabla,Riddima in A's dad Cabin & some while later Armaan also entre in the room]R-Uncle.im going lonabla 4 2/3 days,so apko appna kayal kudhi rakna paregha,ok.A's dad-Ok..beta..per tum woha kya aakeli jaa raheho?Kisiko sath lekar jana..R-Nahi..main to aakali hi jaa rahethi,per Dr.kirti ne strick order dia hai k Armaan k sath jana hai..To..A's dad-Armaan k sath?..vo razi ho gayya?[Ammy entred & ridzs said]R-App kudhi puss ligia..anyway uncle,main chalyi hu,mujhe baki sabko v bye bolna hai..bye & take care.[She left.Ammy tried to stop her but failed]A's dad-Arre!Kya baat hai Armaan koi aghar hazaar baar v tujhe appne sath chalne ko kahe to v tu nahi chaltahai,aur az aisa hi chalraha hai,kya baat hai?A-[Slitely smile & said]Aisi koi baat nahi hai dad,main to baas ..A's dad-[put his hand on his son's head]Dakh beta main tere pita hu,tere maa k jane k badh,tujhe maine hi pala hai..to mujse tu kuch maat chupa..A-Dad..!Pata nahi koun az kal mere life mujhe bohout complekating laghta hai,pahele to main kisiko kavi v apna bana leta tha,per ab aisa koun nahi ho rahai,dad?A's dad-Hmmm! Yea to bakai main bohout serious prob hai,waisa issbaar vo ladki hai kaun?Wait..wait..wait..kahi vo Riddima!Kya tu Riddima se payaar karta hai?A-Pata nahi dad..per uske sath rahena mujhe accha laghta hai,pata hai dad..vo baki sabse allagh hai.A's dad-Armaan tu mujhe pahele ek baat bata,kya tu usse sacch main payaar karta hai,yea?A-Haa dad.Mujhe vo mill gayyi hai,jiski mujhe talash thi & this time its true love.A's dad-Superb!Im very happy 4u my dear,vo mujhe bohout pasand hai..she's a very nice giel.A-Kya farak parta hau dad..woh to mujse baat tak nahi karti.A's dad-Koun?A-Woh dad..kal main ussse baat karraha tha,tabhi woha Disha aya gayyi.A's dad-Disha!Arre main to vul hi gayya tha,k Disha tere g.f.hai.Ab tu Riddima ko payaaar kaisa kar chaakta hai?[kidding]A-Dad!Plz mazak sorea na,waisa v ek aur prob hai,Disha v hammare sath lonavla jana chahati hai..A's dad-Usski fekar tu maat kar,main kirti ko bolkar,usse janne se rok lughi..per ek baat ..Ridzs ko kavi dukh maat pohochana,woh bohout siddi hai.A-Dont worry dad,i'll make her always happy but dad,appkelia to ab mushkil hoghi.A's dad-Kya?A-Abb app dusri shadi nahi kar payenge,kounki Riddima jaisi bahu jo beti baan kar apke ghar anne bali hai.A's dad-Tu jata hai k main...A-[with smile]ok..bye dad,cu soon.. [Riddima with other interns,saying them goodbye]R-Bye Musskan,appna dayn rakhna..ok.M-Tu mera fikar maat kar apna dayn rakhna..kana thik se kaa lena..patients k fikar v maat karna,main unhe samhal lunghi.[Armaan came in car & stop]A-Riddima chale,bohout daar ho chuka hai.R-Ok..guys,Atul.Di,Rahul take care ok.Ra-Riddima[Give her a Ganpati murti with lots of silent love in rhi eyes]inne hamesha apne sath rakhna yea tumhari raksha karenghe.R-{give him a hug & wth a smile said to him]Thanks Rahul & bye gyes.[Armaan didn't understand Rahool's behaiviour,so he gives a smile & said bye 2all] [Riddima just reached to the car that time Disha came along with Dr.kirti]D-Armaan!Deakhona yea dr. kya kahera he hai k main tumhare sath nahi chal cakti,kounki bahar bohoy polution hai..so baby..dont mind haa.[Armaan happily looked at Dr.k & she gave him a]A-Dont worry baby,i wount mind,aakar milte hai naa,bye.[After all that Riddima siited on the car,then finnaly they started their journey 4lonabla.]

Part-11
[In Sanjivani all interns r in the loker room]An-Ridzs chali gayyi,kitni suna laghraha hai nahi?Ra-Tumne bilkul thik kaha Anjali,jaisa sharir se jaan hi chali gayyi ho.M-Oyye Rahul!Tu to baat aisa karraha hai,jaisa k usse payaar karta hai.At-Kya sahi baat kahi hai..yaaaaar!Aur dakha tha na,jab Ridzs jaa rahi thi,tab isska shakal kitni murghayi huya laghraha tha.[Rahul behaved like a thife & he says]Ra-Tum logh kya sab bol rahe ho yaar,main to baas usski jane k bare main baat karraha tha..aur tum..!M-Aisi baat thi kya?Ok..sorry haa,Per yaar tu pareshaan maat ho,vo to gayyi hai,Armaan-The great ke sath,sab thik hi hogha..[After saying this,she looked 4word to her lockker & Anji said]An-Hey guys,ek chizh notice ki,jab vo logh jaa rahethe,ek ladki aai thi..aur vo aisa baat karrahi thi..k...Ra-Jaisa uski g.f. ho?An-Exactly!At-Haa yaar,woh Armaan ki gf hi thi,Ridzs ne mujhe bataya tha..M-Accha!To chal na,milta hai ussse..An-Haa guys,lets go..[Announcement:Sare interns Dr.K ko report kare}At-Yea lo..chalo ab to gabbbar se milne ka waqt ho gayya hai..Everybody- LOLLOLLOL[Here AR reached to Lonavla but in the path R didnot talked with Ammy,though A try harder]Riddima get down 4m the car..A-Kya huya Riddima tum mujhse baat koun nahi kar rahi?..aur,yea kya?..bag..!Yea bag mujhe dedo..Ridd..Riddima.R-No thanks sir,i can handle my self..mujhe appki help ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.[Then she started walking 4m there]A-O god!Ab phirse tumhe kya huya,tum mujhe?...Tum mujhe sir koun bol rahi ho?R-Sorry...kya kaha apne?Main appko sir koun bularahi hu?Ap sayed bhul rahe hai k app ek actor hai..A-Nahi,main kus nahi vul raha..per tum vul rahi ho k ham ab dost hai.. R-Nahi..hum koi dost nahi hai..main hi paghal thi k samajlia ek actor v dost baan chakta hai,per main vul gayyi k acter hamesha acting hi karta hai..chahe vo real life main hi koun na ho..[Then she left & Armaan said on his mind]A-Nahi..tumne thik kaha hum dost nahi hai,Hum dost se v kahi zyada hai aur yea baat main tumhe samjakar rahungha,& thats my promiss to u..
 
Part-12

[In the morning,A wake up 4m the bed & get outside & saw R was chacking up all the kids]R-baccho,thik se kare raho.1of the kids-Didi,apke samne,koi thikse kara ho chakta hai hai kya,app itnee khoobsurat jo ho.R-Ummm!Raz,stop flirting..ok,lo yea madicine pilo.[At the time,A come & says]A-Yea thik hi to kahera hai.to chup koun kare [R just got up 4m the chair with anger but the kids looking so ti seeing Armaan & 4that they all said-The actor Armaan mallik,Di appke sath ayye yea,Di app inhe janti ho.R-Haa..vo...A-[1of them taken on his lap]Haa baccha logh,main tumlogho ki di ka sath hi ayya hu aur yea mujhe jante v hai..1of d kids-Didi appne bataya koun nahi,very bad haa..pata hai Armaan hum sabki fav actor hai..A-O thanks kiddo!R-Thik hai,yea tumlogho ki faaaaaav actor hai na to tumlogh iske sath hi raho aur jab mere zaroorat pare tab mere pass aa jana.[She left 4m the place]A-Oh !! yea to phirse muhse naraz ho gayyi..Kids-Di apppse naraz hai!..Fikar maat karo hum sab hai naa tumhara madat karne k lia..A-Looking,tumlogh kya karne wale ho..Kids-Behaved smartly & said..dakh lena..per tumhare v help chahiye..A-Ok.. [R in kitchen,with her so called aunt]Aun-Riddima beta,zara woh zira dena...R-Yea lijia..Aun-Tumhare parents kaisa hai?Unsse baat huyi?R-Ji,aunti,srif baat hi ho payi,hosp ke duties k wazayse ghar nahi jaa payi..Kids-[4m another room]DIDI..DIDI..Aun-Jao beta,kya pata woh saytannoko,ab kya chahi yeR-Ji abbhi jati hu..[she take a leave]R-Kya huya..arre yeha  to koi v nahi hai,baccho kaha ho app sab...??[like rain,lots of flowers pour on Riddina on the top]R is smilling & suddenly all kids came out-Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!R-[set down on her leg with a smile]Arre yea sab kya hai..Kids-Apppke smile k samne yea sab to kuch v nahi, waise app khussh to huye na,..R-[R gave 1of them a hug & said]Bohout khussh hu main,Thanks.Kids-Thanks!!!!!Woh to app Armaan vaiya se kahiye..R-Armaaan se!![Till now Armaan just seeing all these 4m outside]Kids-haa! Armaan vaiya se!Vaiya andar aa jao..[Armaan came inside & all kids gone outside..R stand up & she also trying to get outside too but Armaan hold her]A-[Giving a silent,romantic & serious expression,he ask]Kaha jaa rehi ho tum?R-Tumse matlab!Aur mera haat soro..A-[A hold her hand even tighter &  slowly push her on the wall,ask]Koun,koun soddu main tumhe,kya tum mujse payaar nahi karti?R-Nahi...nahi karti..A-Acchha!Aghar aisi hi baat thi to,jab ussdin Dishak aanne k baad tum aisa koun chali gayyi thi,haa?Answer me?..R-Main kaisa v jaau,tumhe usse kuch farak nahi parni chahiye,abb soro mujhe..A-[He's looking very upset]Haa Riddima!Farak to nahi parni chahiye,per abb main kya karu,farak to mujhe per cukahai..Mujhe tumse payaar ho chuka hai.. 'I Love U' [Riddima looking on his eyes,A drop of tear fallen on her cheek,Mat be this time the love story begain]

Part-13
R-Armaan..!A-Sshhh!Kuch maaat kaho.[Take his finger,on her lips]Riddima..main janta hu tum mujhpe trust nahi karti,kounki acter hu naa..[smuling but tears is also in his eyes]Per main tumse sacch main payaar karta hu,mujhe nahi pata yea sab kab huya..per mera yakiin mano..R-Armaan plz...A-[Leave her & said]Im sorry..Thik hai aghar tumhe mujse payaar nahi hai,,i promise,main tumhe dubara tangh nahi karungha..nahi karungha..[Armaan left 4m d room,he's still crying..& Riddima set down in d floor & said Armaan...(Nothing word left 4her)] {Night has been over,next morning also over,Riddima thinking abt it all d time,then she decided talked to Armaan abt it..Armaan was sitting outside on d chaie & Riddima came slowly]R-Armaan..A-Haa Riddima![He trying 2act that everything is normal]R-Armaan main tumse vo kal raat k..A-OH ho..Riddima..raat gayyi baat gayyi..vul jao sabkus..Waise v tumhe kya farak parta hai..{all immotion in A's eyes & voice but R couldn't stop her immotion & she cried }A-Riddima..kya huya..tum ro koun rahi ho..Riddima..R-Dont touch me..A-Riddima..R-Maine yea sochkar tumhare paas ayyi thi k tum ..per tumhe to mujhe hurt karne k sibha kuch atti hi nahi..A-Riddima..mere baat suno..R-No..[Riddima takes her step back but Armaan cauth her & ask,TEar is also in his eyes now]A-Baas!Bohout ho gayya..Ab mere baat suno,Koun tum mere sath aisa kar rahe ho..koun..koun nahi kahe dati tum hare dill main kya hai..[Riddima just lost on his eyes,they just getting really clozer ]A-Kuch bolo Riddima..R-I Love You..{Armaan was shocked to here it suddenly & then They both clozed with each other]A-[smile & say]I love you too...[Their love is in d air now..&  they both r smilling}
 
Part-14

A-Oyye hoyye!R-Kya huya?A-Kuch nahi..yehi socch raha tha ki,Akhir ekraar kar hi diya..[Ridzs blashing]A-Oyye hoyye! Tum sarma rehi ho..Hmmm..Ek baay batao,aghar payyar tha mujhse to bataya koun nahi..R-Payaar !! Aur mujhe tumse! Yea tumse kisne kaha..[smiling]A-[Tring 2get naughty]O really,ha aha..[noe they r in a race,Armaan tring to caught Riddima & after a long race A caught her & tring to kiss her but R stop her & say]R-Armaan,bohout raat ho gayyi hai,anndar chale..[blashing] [Armaan says ok..Riddima left 4m there & A take a long breath & said..i her] A new morning,A new day,A new love story...Riddima was sleeping..Armaan entre her room & sit beside her bed....... A-Kitni koobsoorat ho,aur kitni aalag..thanks God,Mujhe mer e sachhche payaar se mila ne k lia..I love her..[Then he kissed her 4head]Suddenly R woke upR-Armaan..Tum yeha !Kya kar rahe ho?A-Kuch nahi,,Koun kuch karu? R-Armaan!Tum v naa..Anyway abb tum jao,mujhe taiyar hona hai.A-Uss main kya hai?Taiyar ho jao.. R-Ahhhhhhhhhhha1 [seet anger]Tum jatte ho yea..A-Ok..ok..ok..jata hu..[smile]But suno..R-Immmhi!Ab kya huya?A-I Love You.. R-Ab jao..[After all that Riddima with her so called aunt in her room]Aun-So Riddima..yeha ka sab kam pura ho gayya to tum jane ki baat  koun kar rahe ho..kuch der ruko na ham sab k sath..R-No,Aunti aisi koi baat nahi hai,Hospital main bohout kaam hai,nahi to zarror rukti.Aun-Ok..Per aghli bar jab aaoghi,waqt le kar aana..R-Sure aunti.[At that time Armaan came there]A-Kya baatein chal rahe hai vai,humme v to batao.Aun-Arre!Armaan,baitho..kuch khass nahi..bass Ridzs ko kuch aur din yeha rukneko bol rahi thi..per yea to..A-Dont worry aunti,Hum donno phir yeha ayenghe,woh v sath main..R-Sath main koun?A-[A said her slowly in her ear]Kounki shaddi k baadh hum yehi aane bale hai pahele,hummari payaar ki pahela sawan yehi jo biti hai..to bata du anti ko..R-Armaan chop karo..Aun-Kya baatein horahi hai..A-Kuch nahi aunti...[He is smiling looking at Riddima]Aun-Ok..Bacchcho..ab tum logh so jao..kal suva suva nikal ni hoghi naa..R-Ji..anuti..ok good night..Aun-Good night.{after anunti's leave]R-To kya kaherahe the tum,kya batao ghe aunti ko.. A-Kuch nahi!Main kya bataungha..R-Oh really..A-Haa.[Trying to get cloze to Riddima & looking at her eyes]Riddima..R-[Riddima just lost in his eyes]Armaan..A-[getting too cloze to her,then said]Kaal jaldi se taiyar ho jana,nahi to daar ho jayeghi.R-Armaan tumhe to main.. A- [he left 4m the room & R said]R-I Love him.. [In d morning,Armaan was sitting on his car..Ready 4 leave Lonavla & Riddima saying good bye to every1]R-Ok..Kids..Apna kayal rakna,koi saytanni nahi..o.k..Kids-Ok didi..bye Armaan vaiya..A-Bye,,kids..Thanks 4ur all help..Kids-R-Ok aunti,chalti hug ok bye every body..Then she set in2 d car & Start their journey 4Mumbai.

Part-15
[Ar reached in Mumbai & their friends waithing 4them in front of d hospital]An-Hi Ridzs,How r u? Safar kaisi thai...Oh! How r u Armaan?AR-We r fine,appplogh kaisa ho?M-Hum sab changge hai.Tu bata Riddima,masti ki na bohout Lonabla main? A-Haa!Masti to bohout ki issne,mujhe bohout sataya,Hai na Riddima? & R-Ra-Sory Armaan,I dont agree,Riddima kisiko nahi satati.. A-Oh!Hi buddy hoe r u,,[A was feing lil bit weired coz last time he huged ridzs..so he's tenced..]At-ok..ok..ab andar chale..R-Haa![Everybody entre to d hospital] (Announcement:Sade interns Dr.Kirti ko report kare)Dr.k-Hello Drs & hello DR.Riddima..Kaisi hai app?R-Im fine mam..Dr.k-Lonabla main ab sabkus thik hai naa..koi problem to nahi..R-No mam,Everything is fine now..Dr.k-Ok..to ab duty ki baat karte hai.Dr.Rahul & Dr.Musskan.Children word..Ra-O god! Phirse isk sath koun fasa dia.. M-Oyye pidde!Mujhe v tere sath kam karneka koi shokh nahi hai,samjha..Dr.K-Kya baatein chalre hi hai woha..Ra-Kuch nahi mam..Dr.k-Kuch nahi to,chupchap kade rahiye..,Dr.Atul..pathlab &Dr.Anjali..Cancer word..Dr.Riddima..app apni cases Dr.Muskaan se take over kar li jiye Aur  Ek nayi accedent case aayi hai,spacial word main woh app samhalenghi..Everything is clear..Interns-Yes mam..Dr.k-Good..back to work...[All Interns in their own own duties..Riddima with A's dad]R-Hello uncle,how r u?A's dad-Im fine beta..How r u? Aue yea batao..Trip per kya huya..?[Ridzs was quite confused bcoz of this question]R-Haa,,Trip acchi thi.. [At that time Armaan entre in d room}A-Hi dad,how r u?Appki tabiat ab kaisi hai.. A's dad-Sab thik hai betaThen slowly ask him in A's ear..Baat bani kya? A-Everything is perfact da...Oh haa!Dr.Riddima..Dr.Kirti appko dundrahi hai..R-Ok..Per kaha?A-Firescap main..R-Firescap main!! Mam ne mujhe woha koun bulaya hogha..Anyway thanks..ok bye uncle..i'll c u later..A's dad-Bye beta..Ridzs left..Himm! to Armaan..Dr.Kirti ne Riddima bulaya tha..haaA-No dad,maine bulaya hai..dakhiye naa,kabse milna charaha tha..per uske paas to time hi nahi..to..u know what i mean?A's dad-Ok..ok..U stupid..ab yeha baitha kya hai..jaldi ja..nahi to woh chali gayeghi.. A-Oh!Main to vul hi gaya tha..ok bye dad,,cu later..[Ridzs in firescap..confused to see,no1 was there.At d time A reached there]R-Armaan!Tum yeha..Jaldi jao,naho to Dr.Kirti aa gayeghi..aur tum ne to bataya tha Man yeha mere wait kar rahe hai..per woh to ab tak nahi ayyi..A-[A step 4word to R & Hold her hand & take a seat on d stare,with a romantic expression}Oyye Hoyye!Kitni bholi ho tum,I it..R-What love it??!!Zaldi jao..nahi to mam ne dakh lia na..A-Oyye mere Sweet,Bayukub,Gorghious & innocent Love!..Koi man ne nahi bulaya hai..maine bulaya hai,tumhe yeha.. R-Ahh!Very bad Armaan..pata hai mujhe kitni kaam hoti hai..tum v naa,challo ab mujhe jane do..A-Thik hai aghar tum mujhse payyar nahi karti to tum gha chakti ho[giving a fack gussa wala expression]R-& say-My dear,,Shaytaan,Clever bt true love..Payaar karti hu,isselia hi to tumhare paas hu..Then they both & each other..A-sunno..tum bohout khoobsoorat lagh rehi ho.. R-Accha!Ussmain kya hai..khoobsoorat to main hu ti.. A-Accha! Yea baat hai!He's tring to get naughty bt taht time Disha came there..D-Armaam kaha the tum,pata hai kabse dunrehi thi tumhe aur tum!Aake mujhse mile hi nahi..Then she him..Armaan was totally shut,he had no word to say..& Riddima was shocked & feeling cry coz how can she love Armaan coz she knew Disha in love with Armaan.
 
Part-16
D-Oh! Sorry Riddima,tum v yeha per ho..waise tum yeha kya kar rahe thi? Ridzs trying to be normal..R-Vo.main..main Armaan se usski dad ki bare main baat kar rahe thi..Armaan was geeting so confused to heared this,he couldnt get that why she lying..A-Riddima tum..tum..R-Baas Armaan!Mujhe tumse aur kuch nahi kahena hai..anyway u guys enjoy..bye Disha.D-Bye Riddima..Riddima left..D-To Armaan ab batao,tum akar mujhse mille koun nahi..A-Plzz Disha,main tumse badh main milta hu..[He was very upset & coz of that he left 4m there without giving her ques:ans: Every body in cafeteria except Riddima..Armaan reached there..M-Atul zara vo pani paas karna ..At-Yea le..Anjali tumhare lia kuch lau..Armaan reached..A-Hey guys!..Riddima ko kahi dekha kya?An-Hey Armaan,baitho na...A-No thanks Anji..Plzz batao naaa,tum logho ne Riddima ko kahe dakha hai....Ra-Haa!Per tum koun puss raheho..A-Yaar..RaHul..o sab main badh main batata hu..pahele tu..Ra-Ok..ok..Usse maine locker room ke taraf jate huye dekha tha..A-Ok..thanks..Then he runs..Ra-Yea Armaan,Riddima k bare main aisa koun puss raha tha....M-Oyye Gharu k tinke..tujhe har baat main tang aarani jarrori hai kya?Kudh v shanti se baith,aur usse jo karna hai,usse vo karne de,Waise v woh ab hamara dost hai..An-Musskaan is right Rahul..so chill.But Rahul's mind dont want 2believe this so he also followed Armaan.Armaan reached to d locker room & saw Riddima was sitting on d table & she's crying..A-Riddima!R-Just trying to weap her tears & say...Tum! Tum yeha kya kar rahe ho..A-Riddima try 2understand,tumne joi dekha..R-I know Armaan..tumhe mujhe batane ki zaroorat nahi..maine jo v dakha vo sacch thaA-Riddima...plzz aisa maat kaho..tumne jo v dakha woh mera kal tah aur aisa kal jise maine kavi sayed payaar v nahi kia..main srif tumse payaar karta hu..R-Plzz armaan, Mujhe tum akele sore doh..mujhe iss waqt tumse koi baat nahi karni..Armaan is lil bite serious & Heart now,he said..A-Oh! to tumhe mujhse avi bhi varosa nahi hai..aur sayed iss lia tum mere sath aisa kar rahe ho.. Ok..Riddima,issbar main tumnhe varosa dila kar hi rahungha..After saying this,he trying to left 4m there but Riddima ask..R-Kaha ja ra heho tum?A-Jaha iss waqt mujhe hona chahi ye..then he left..Till now Rahul was standing outside of d locker room & heard all convo between them,he was very upset to here this that AR love each other..bcoz he loves Riddima also Bt his love is always silent..After Armaan left Riddima was also very upset & crying,That time Rahul called her..Ra-Riddima..Ridddima was shocked to heared Rahul voice & she stand up..R-Rahul...tu..tum kab ayye..Ra-Yea hi..kus der pahela..jab tum Armaan se baat kar rahe thi..Tumne yea sab koun chupaya Riddima?R-Rahul..tum yea sab kya kahe rahe ho,mujhe kudh samaj nahi aa raha hai..main kya supaunghi..R-Dekho Riddima..maine sab sun lia hai..to ab tum mujhe kus batao yea naa batao,isse kuch farak nahi padne wala..Per main tumhe kuch batana chahungha..aur yea hai ki..Tumne Armaan k sath thik nahi kia..Riddima cried up..R-Rahul tum v!Ra-Plzz Riddima mujhe galat maat samajhna,per maine Armaan ki ankhomain tumhare lia saccha payae dakha hai..isslia main tumse yea sab kahe raha hu..Woh tumse sacch mucch bohout payyar karta hai..Riddima under stand d whole thing & then ask..R-Rahul..tum sacch kahe rahe ho naa..Ra-Ofcourse,Tum mere dost ho naa,to main tumse ghut koun bolungha..& now tum Armaan k paas jaoghi aur usse mafi manngo ghi..thik hai!Finnally Ridzs smile & ask..R-Rahul...Armaan mujse bohout gussa ho gha naa..Ra-Immm!Woh to thoda hogha,per dont worry,woh tumse bohout payaar karta hai..to woh zaldi maan jayegha..ab tum yeha kadi kya ho zaldi jao..go..R-Yeah! Ok bye..Suddenly Ridzs stop & say Thanks Rahul & gave him a After that Riddima left..& Rahul said in his mind"God usse hamesha kush rakhna"
 
Part-17
Riddima was searching 4Armaan,after a long search she come to know that he'snot in d hospital,he's in Disha's house..1stly,she find it lil difficult but later she made her mind & dicided to go Disha House...On the other hand Armaan reached in Disha's house..He was verty upset 4Riddima's behaiviour so he wanted to sort out everything with Disha..Armaan is Disha's sitting room..A-Disha!Disha!Disha was geting ready 4sleep bt after headed Armaan voice she came out..D-Armaan tum itni raat ko yeha?..A-I know its preety late..but mijhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..D-Disha come clozer to him,keep her hand on his sholder & said-Accha..itni raat ko tum srif baaten karne aaye ho.A-Armaan put her hand out of his shoulder & said..Plzz Disha..I need to talk to u..D-Ok..ok..Baby..Why r u looking so upset..What happen? A-After a long try..Disha main tumse payaar nahi karta,main kisi aur se payaar karta hu..& she loves me a lot..D-Oh Armaan,u must be joking right?A-No Disha Im serious..Maine tumse kavi payaar nahi kiya,hummare bitch jo v hai woh hamesha se hi dosti thi,per tumne uuse kuch aur hi naam de dia..az tak maine kuch nahi kaha kuki mujhe koi farak nahi parta tha..per ab farak parta hai..I hope u understand..D-Kaun hai woh?A-Riddima.D-Riddima?A-Haa!Riddima..I love her a lot..D-Per Armaan main tumse.A-I know tum mujse kya kahoghi..but im sorry..D-Per mere baar to suno,main tumse...She was trying to sat something but she saw Riddima was outside of her house & she is comimg..So suddenly she behaived normally..Main tumse yea kahena chati hu k i understand..Toh aakhir main mere dost ko kisise saccha payaar ho hi gayya..toh its timne 4celebration,whats say? A-Armaan is very happy 2c Disha is understand his thought..& he said Thanx to her.A-Thanks DishaD-Sorry sweety,srif thanks se kaam nahi chalkegha,i need a hug..Then they huged each other..Bad luk that Riddima saw this & thought Armaan is cheating with her..Suddenly Disha said Riddima..Armaan look back to her & saw Riddima was crying..R is ran 4m there & A follow her..A-Riddima!Rukko..Then finaaly he caught her..R-Leave me armaan...leave meA-Riddima..tumne jo andhar dekha vo saach nahi tha,..main to srif Disha se yea kahene aaya tha k main tumbe payaae karta hu..R-Mujhe tumse kuch nahi pata karni,,,chahe vo joot ho yea saach. Leave me. A-Riddima..tum aiasa koun kaherahi ho..kya tumhe mujper varosa nahi hai..Trust me Riddima,tumne jo v dakha vo saccha nahi tha.R-Trust U!!Haah!Trust woed ka matlaab v pata hai tumhe.. Actually pata kaisa hogha,tum to uss ladko ki tarha ho,jo kavi kisi ek ladki k sath kush rahi nahi chakta..tumhe to pata nahi kitni ladkia chahia.. A-This time Armaan couldnot stop his anger,he give her a slap..Tum aisa sooch v kaisa lia..k main.. R-I hate u armaan I hate u..Then she left 4m there..Whole night,both couldnot sleep..Next morning in hospital's locker room..M-Hi guys..kaise ho sab? At & An-Hi Musskan..we r fine.. M-Musskan put her bag in lokker & Ask..Yaar,azkal Riddima kaha hai..kab ati hai,aur kab jati hai,patahi nahi chalta.. Ra-Yea lo,Naam lo aur banda hazirHi Riddima..R-Hi Rahul..M-Kya baat hai yaar..tu to apni best friend ko vul hi gaayyiR-Musskan..Aisi koi baat nahi hai..main to baass..Announcement:Sare interns,DR.Kirti ko report kare..At-Challo gaabbar ne bulaya hai..M-Aur hummari majduri ki waaqt v aaya hai..Everybody laugh Except Riddima,Rahul noticed that.After Evey1's leave..Ra-Riddima..Rukna zara..R-She stop & Say..Haa bolo Rahul..Ra-Kya huya..Itni upset ku laghrehi ho..Mijhe pussna to nahi chahiye but kai tum Armaan se baat karne wali thi naa,kya huya?R-Rahul plzz..mujhe uss bare main kuch baat nahi karni..Vo..Dr, Kirti wait karrahi honghi...Toh challe..Ra-Haa..All interns with Dr.Kirti..Dr.k-Hello Drs..Interns-Hello mam..Dr.K-Dr.Anjali App Dr.Atul k sath general word main rahenghi..An-Ok mam.At-Thank u mamAn-Ab hasna bandh karo nahi to Dr.Kirti daat tood deghi..At-Jo tum jaho Anjali. Dr.k-Dr.Rahul & Musskan..Children word..RA<M-Yes mam..Dr.K-Dr.Riddima..Caediologhy ward..R-Yes mam.Dr.K-Dr.Riddima app thik to hai..Upset laghrehi hai..R-No mam,aisi koi baat nahi hai..im fine..Dr.k-Good,Haa woh..Armaan ki dad ki case ka kya huya..R-Everything is fine mam..az afternoon tak uunhe discharge kar dia gayegha..Dr.K-Thik haiOk guys..back to work.....Every1 is doing their own work,Armaan came in Riddima's work place..A-Riddima..mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..R-Behaived normally..Oh!Hello sir..accha huya mujhe app yehi mill gayye..A-Riddima..whats wrong with u?Tum mujhse aisa baat koun kararhi ho..R-O..Im so sorry sir aghar appko bura lagha ho to..Armaan Hold her hand..& take her in firescap..R-Armaan.. haat soro mera..leave me..A-Riddima..kya huya hai tumhe Im really sorry 4my yesterday behaiviour..R-Oh! Yea app kya kahe rahe hai sir..mujhe appse sorry kaheni cahiya,kuki maine appse payaar karne ki ghalti ki..A-{Almost crying]Toh tum kahena chati ho,mujhse payaar karke tumne ghalti ki..R-Riddima silent..she is also feeling bad but she hide her immotion & said..Yes..u r right..BTW,main jo apko batana chati thi..az uncle ko discharge kar dia gayegha..So.Bye sir,its really nice to meet u. Then she left 4m there & Armaan said,yes its nice to met ur decision..
 
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Hey guyz 4m now u can read "Payaar to hamesha rahegha" s other parts here..
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heyyyyyyyy nice intro.........curious to knw abt d story......plzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooon.........n wish u a very very very happy birthday......may u have a great day!!!!!!!!!!!
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Nice Intro....looks really interesting Wink It'll b really nice to c how Luv shapes up between Armaan n Ridzi....Hey Pia plzz continue....n HAPPY B'DAY.... Party

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