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sry...skewl has started soi m unable 2 update./......i will update tommrow for sure!...thank Rachna...dis fan-fic is writeen by rachna....

This fan fic is written by rachna

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Last week:

 

From the "squid" incident to predicting the French soap, wrong! The chuha incident….to the returning to the hotel….to the Zaara sa jhoom loon main and then finally going back home….

 

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Kumud and Garv reach their house. (I am going to call their house/mansion Sachdev Villa)

 

Sachdev Villa…

 

Kumud and Garv enter the house. Malini is waiting for them in the living room.

 

Kumud goes to take ashirwaad from her.

 

M: Baghwaan kare ki main jald hi apne pote ka muh dekh loon.

 

K2: (Shocked2) (Kumud looks at Garv. Garv just pretends he never heard that) (Notice the squared besides "Shocked")

 

M: Kya huwa? (Malini hugs Kumud) (Kumud doesn't smile at all.) Flight kaise thi?

 

K2: Ah? …Achi thi.

 

M: Garv, beta welcome back. Waise tum dono ko Paris kaisa laga? Agar acha laga to tum dono waha phir ghoom ana. Acha anyways chalo khana kha lo. Patah nahi plane mein khana tikh se khai hogi ya nahi.

 

Afterwards, in the GK room…

 

K2: (Thinks) Mummy ji ko itne jaldi—. Yeh main kaha phas gaye.

 

G: (He comes. He doesn't say anything and takes his pillows and goes straight to his "bed".)

 

K2: Garv?

 

G: Huh?

 

K2: Kuch nahi.

 

The next morning, Malini decides to give G & K their morning tea. She enters the room and sees that Kumud and Garv don't sleep on the same bed. She returns without giving them the tea.

 

In her room…

 

M: (Thinks) Yeh kaisa rishta hai Garv aur Kumud ke beech mein? Garv ne abhi tak Kali—. Aur jab main Kumud ko…tabhi Kumud khush nahi thi. Lagta hai ki mujhe hi kuch karna padega. Nahi, main kuch nahi karoongi. Yeh wo dono ki apas ki mamla hai. Yeh apne aap hi tikh ho jayega.

 

When Kumud and Garv come down…….

 

M: (Thinks) Waise in dono ko dekh kar koi nahi bata sake ga ki in dono ke beech mein kuch nahi hai.

 

G: Good morning mom.

 

M: Morning bete.

 

K2: Mummy ji….wo….main mama (Kkusum) se milna chahti hoon.

 

M: Toh is mein poochne wali kyoun si baat hai. Tum jab chaho ja sakti ho.

 

K2: Main soch rahi thi ki main abh bhi chali jao.

 

M: Ok bete. Driver ko saath mein leke jao.

 

K2: Ok mummy ji.

 

Kumud goes to Kkusum's house. (K: Kkusum)

 

K: Kumud bete kaise ho.

 

K2: Aap kaise hai?

 

K: Main tikh hoon. Waise jab tum aur Garv honeymoon par gaye the tabh tum ne mujhse mile begar chal di. Kyun?

 

K2: Honeymoon? Haha..Mama aap bhi kamal karti hai. Aap meri shaadi jabardasti karwa kar pooch rahi hai ki... I don't believe it.

 

K: Matlab ki tum abh bhi yeh manne ke liye taiyaar nahi ho ki tumhari shaadi ho gaye hai.

 

K2: Kyoun manu main? Yeh shaadi mere marzi ke khilaaf huwi thi. Papa aur aap ke rishte ke baad mujhe pyaar aur shaadi par se vishwaas uth gaya hai—

 

K: Kumud!

 

K2: Lagta hai main yaha par aakar galti ki hai. Main jaa rahi hoon.

 

She leaves and comes back to the GK mansion.

 

K2: (Walks slowly inside)

 

M: Bahu, maa se mil aaye?

 

K2: (Smiles) Haa, wo bilkul tikh hai.

 

M: Acha, maine—

 

(The phone rings. Kumud answers it.)

 

From this point onward a new character will be introduced.

 

K2: Hello

 

P: Hello, yeh koun?

 

K2: Main Kumud hoon.

 

P: Hmm….Garv hai?

 

K2: Aap koun bol rahi hai?

 

P: I'm Paakhi.

 

K2: Paakhi? Huh?

 

M: Kya kaha? Paakhi? Lao mujhe phone do? (She literally snatches the phone from Kumud)

 

Kumud is confused.

 

M: Paakhi. Kaise ho?

 

P: Main tikh hoon. Aunty main wapas India aarahi hoon.

 

M: Sach? Kabh aarahi hai tu?

 

P: Main abhi plane mein hoon!

 

M: Acha. That means ki tu shaam tak yaha ajayegi.

 

P: (The connection gets bad) Acha main phone rakhti hoon. Network kharab hai.

 

M: Tikh hai. Main gaadi airport bhej doongi.

 

P: Acha.Bye.

 

K2: (Thinking) Yeh Paakhi koun hai? Aur mummy ji is tarah se kyoun baat kar rahi thi.

 

M: (Turns around to see Kumud standing confusedly.) Bahu..Paakhi humare yaha rehne ke liye aa rahi hai.

 

K2: Mummy ji? Yeh Paakhi kyoun hai?......Garv ki bahen?

 

M: (Smiles) Nahi…hum Paakhi ko bachpan se jante hai. Wo Garv ki bachpan ki dost hai.

 

K2: Oh.

 

M: Kumud, tum Paakhi ke kamre tikh karwa do. Paakhi humare saath rahegi.

 

K2: Uske maa baap kaha hai?

 

M: Wo log America mein rehte hai. Beta tum Paakhi ka kamra –. Mujhe wo kuch cheeze laana hai to main jaa rahi hoon.

 

K2: Tikh hai. Aap jaiye.

 

Kumud goes and fixes the room. She goes in the kitchen. A naukar was already there. Let's call him the usual Ramu. (R: Ramu)

 

K2: Ramu, kya Paakhi yaha hamesha yaha par rehti hai?

 

R: Memsaab, Paakshi jab bhi India aati hai wo yahi rehti hai.

 

K2: Oh! Toh kya wo humari shaadi mein aaye thi?

 

R: Nahi, shaadi ki baat bahut jaldi hogaye. Usse kuch nahi maloom hai.

 

K2: Oh! (Confused) Tikh hai.

 

She leaves.

 

In the afternoon, Garv comes home from his office.

 

M: Tum jante ho ki abhi koun ayegi?

 

G: Maa, ghar par koi aaraha hai kya?

 

M: Paakhi India aarahi hai.

 

G: Paakhi? Sach mein? Kabh?

 

Kumud is drinking tea and watching the scene.

 

M: Wo aaj hi aarahi hai. Aur wo humare saath rehne aarahi hai.

 

G: Mujhe to yakeen nahi ho raha hai.

 

M: Kumud, tumne kamre tikh karwa li na?

K2: Haan, sabh tikh hai.

 

M: Wo aane wali hogi.

 

P: Main aagaye.

 

M: Paakhi? Tum sach mein aagayi.

 

P: Yes. (She goes running to Malini and hugs her.)

 

M: Kaise hai tu?

 

P: Tikh hoon. (Her eyes wander around. She sees Garv and goes and hugs him.) Do saal? Do saal mein bhi tum nahi badle.

 

G: Kya karoon main aisa hi hoon. Waise tumne pehle kyoun nahi bataya kit um aarahi ho. Main tumhe airport pick karne ajata.

 

P: It's ok. (She sees Kumud, who is still sitting and drinking tea.) Hmm…yeh koun hai?

 

M: Yeh meri bahu Kumud hai.

 

K2: Hello.

 

P: Bahu? (Her expressions change) Matlab Garv ki—

 

G: Sorry, Paakhi. Wo sabh kuch itna jaldi hogaya ki main tumhe batah nahi paya. I'm really sorry.

 

P: (Walks over to Kumud) Jab maine phone kiya tha to tumne hi phone uthaya tha right?

 

K2: Haan, wo main hi thi.

 

P: Ooh. Patah nahi tum janti ho ya nahi par main bhi bata deti hoon ki mera aur Garv ka rishta bees (20) saal ki hai.

 

K2: (Confused)

 

M: Tum log kadhe kyoun ho? Baith kar baat karo. Main abhi aati hoon.

 

G: Aao, Paakhi.

 

Kumud goes to the GK room and isnt engaged in this conversation.

 

In the living room area…

 

P: So you're married. I cant' believe it. Love eh?

 

G: Nahi. (Smiles)

 

P: Arranged! Tabhi to main bolu ki tum Kumud jaise ladhki se shaadi…a married man—

 

G: Abh tum apne baat karo? Tumhare life mein bhi koi hai ya nahi?

 

P: Tha.

 

G: Tha? Matlab?

 

P: Abh uski shaadi ho gaye hai.

 

G: Oh! Better luck next time I guess. Acha main chala bahut der hogaye hai phir mujhe kaam par bhi jaana hai.

 

P: Ok, Good night.

 

G: Good night.

 

P: (Thinks) Garv ki shaadi hogaye hai aur usne mujhe bataya nahi. Wo bhi Kumud se! Kumud! Nahi, Garv Kumud jaise ladhki ko kabhi pyaar nahi kar sakta. Main unke rishte ke baare mein patah kar ke rahungi.

 

Garv goes to the GK room.

 

G: Kumud, waise Paakhi ke baare mein tumhari kya khayal hai.

 

K2: Paakhi? Bahut hi achi ladhki hai.   

 

G: Tabh to tumhe usse dosti karni padegi.  

 

K2: No, no, no.

 

G: Kyoun? Tumhe wo pasand nahi hai.

 

K2: Wo meri type ki nahi hai. She's very modernized. Abh mujhe hi dekh lo. Agar main New York mein pandra saal rahe kar bawajood, shaadi ke baad yeh saree pahen rahi hoon to tum hi socho ki mere aur Paakhi kitna alag alag hai.

 

G: To tum Paakhi ke tarah kapde pahenna shuru kar do. Main nahi kuch bolunga.

 

K2: Nice joke but I'm sorry. Mummy ji ke samne aur shaadi ke baad yeh sabh ladhkiya nahi pahenti.

 

G: Whatever.

 

K2: Main sone jaa rahi hoon. Good night.

 

G: Goodnight.

 

In the living room, Paakhi is still sitting around thinking.

 

P: (Thinking) Kumud ko main nahi chodungi. Maine Garv ko bachpan se chaha hai aur abh yeh Kumud koun hoti hai humare beech mein aane waali. Isko to main dekh loongi.

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Posted: 21 October 2005 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
Writen By Rachna..plz..post ur replys so v know how u guys like it!

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Posted: 21 October 2005 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
lovely...so paakhi will cause havoc in the already confused relationship the 2 have?? continue soon pls.

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Posted: 21 October 2005 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
great job guys...i hope garv and kumud fall in love soon and paakhi doesnt mess up their relationship...anyways great job...keep it up and continue soon

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awesome continue soon!

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Posted: 23 October 2005 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
thankx i willpost rachna next update tommorow...thank rachna for her hard work

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