Ek Khoobsarat Rista Garv n Kumud Fan-Fic - Page 2

plss continue...its been like forever.

Last week:

 

The haldi, sangeet, and the marriage were followed in the same week!

 

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Kumud is being led into her "room" by her "friends". (Since I don't know what they're called…I'm going to describe them to you. You know in Hindi movies, whenever there is a wedding that is held in a 2 story hall, with stairs going down/up on both sides……well there are girls that are giggling like all the time. The "friends" are like that.)

 

The friends open the door and push her inside. Garv, who was previously looking outside the window (I don't know if he was looking at the moon or looking for a shooting star. You can assume either one of them.)turns around.

 

G: (Looks at Kumud questioningly)

 

K2: Hmm….wo….kamre ne saheliya…mera matlab hai…andar ne kamre ko…hmm….wo log to mera baat sunte hi nahi hai(She is embarrased)

 

G: It's ok.

 

K2: Huh? (She looks at the decorated bed!)

 

G: (His eyes follow hers! Realizing what she's thinking…) Tum yaha is bed par so jao aur main waha sofe par. Tikh hai.

 

K2: Par tum waha…

 

G: (He gets his pillow and eventually lies down.)

 

K2: (She takes her jewelry off and goes to sleep thinking…) Maa ke kehne par maine to yeh shaadi  kar li par abh isko kaise nibhaon? Kya maine socha tha aur yeh kya hogaya. Shaadi nahi karna chaha tha par shaadi hogaye abh aage chal kar aur kya kya hoga? Aur Garv? Main to usse janti bhi nahi, patah nahi wo kya sochta hoga. Uski baaton se to mujhe aisa lagta hai ki uske liye yeh shaadi ek muafza hai. Haaye Kumud, kya hoga re tera?

 

The next morning at 8:30...Kumud's saas (let's call her Malini) knocks on the door.

 

M: Malini

 

M: Garv beta? Kumud? Darwaza kholo.

 

K2: (She is still in bed…hears the knock and gets up…looks at the clock…looks at the sofa….no Garv there)

 

Garv comes out of the bathroom all ready to start the day.

 

M: Garv darwaza kholo.

 

G: Maa ek minute main abhi kholta hoon.

 

K2: Arre wait? (Nearly bumping into him) Tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi uthaya?

 

G: Maa abhi aya.

 

K2: (Rushes into the bathroom)

 

Garv opens the door.

 

M: Beta main itni der se knock kar rahi thi, tum kaha the aur phir Kumud kaha hai?

 

G: Hm….maa…wo bathroom mein hai.

 

M: Tikh hai jab wo ajayegi to tum usse bata dena ki muh dikhai ke liye taiyaar hojaye.

 

G: Ok mom

 

Malini leaves and Kumud comes out…goes staright to the airmore/closet and takes her clothes out hastily.

 

K2: (Talking to Garv) Agar tum mujhse pehle jag gaye the to phir mujhe uthaya kyun nahi. Shaadi ke pehle hi din main saadhe aath baje tak soi. Agar maa ko yeh pata chal gaya ki uske batane ke bavajood maine yeh kar diya to mera to ram naam satye hojaye ga. (She realizes that she has spoken a lot without realizing)

 

G: (He is amazed)

 

K2: (She walks away to the bathroom again when…)

 

G: Rukko!

 

K2: Abh kya hai? Main abh bathroom bhi nahi jaa sakti?

 

G: (Walks up to her) Tumhe mardo ki shirt pehna pasand hai?

 

K2: Huh?

 

G: (He takes out his shirt from her pile of clothes and walks away!)

 

K2: (She's embarrassed again!)

 

A while later…

 

Malini comes again and looks for Kumud. (She is getting ready)

 

M: Kumud jaldi se taiyaar ho jao, abhi muh-dikhai ke liye jaana hai.

 

K2: Main taiyaar hoon.

 

They go downstairs and the muh-dikhai proceeds. Everyone says the usual "Arre Malini, aap ke bahu to bahut sundar hai" blah blah blah

 

After that Malini goes to GK's room. (GK is the name of Garv and Kumud's bedroom)

 

M: Beta Garv. Tum kyun nahi neeche aaye? Sabh log pooch rahe the. Acha ek baat batao, tumne Kumud ko koi tohfa diya hai ki nahi?

 

G: Tohfa? Kaisa tohfa?

 

M: Abh yeh bhi main tumhe bataon? Acha koi baat nahi maine bahu ke liye ek jewelry set laai hoon. Tum usse de dena, tikh hai.

 

G: Ok maa.

 

Malini leaves.

 

Kumud comes a while later and sees Garv still reading the magazine.

 

K2: (Wants to say something but doesn't)

 

G: (He notices her) Maa ne tumhare liye yeh zewar banwai hai. (He gets up, walks over to a table, picks the case up, and reaches Kumud. He throws the set like he doesn't care and walks away)

 

K2: (Thinks) Iski problem kya hai?

 

At the dinner table…

 

M: Bahu…

 

K2: Kya huwa mummy ji? Aapko kuch chahiye?

 

M: Nahi. Hum tum dono ko kuch dena chahte hai.

 

K2: (Stops her spoon mid-way and looks at Garv) Par…

 

M:  Tumhe pehle vaada karna hoga ki tum yeh gift inkaar nahi karogi.

 

K2: (Confused) Tikh hai.

 

M: Good. Abh tum dono ko Paris jaana hoga.

 

K2: Mummy ji main to yahi tikh hoon, aur phir maa yaha…

 

M: Waha par tum log apne honeymoon manane jaoge.

 

G: (This time he stops his spoon) Mom, yaha par bahut kaam hai.

 

M: Main kuch sunna nahi chahti. Maine kal ki flight confirm kar di. Tum dono kal hi Paris jaoge.

 

Malini leaves the table.

 

G: (He looks at Kumud and she looks at him) (Yo…this isn't the lovey-dovey looking….it's the serious looking…the one which says "Oh no, please don't make me do this" and "Oh God yeh kya ho gaya")

 

Afterwards Garv leaves the table. Kumud also leaves. (In other words they leave for the GK room)

 

Kumud enters the room and sees Garv sitting down thinking.

She walks up to him and Garv notices her and starts to leave.

 

K2: Garv…

 

G: (he turns around) Kya? Tum kuch kehna chahti ho.

 

K2: Agar tum chaho to main yeh trip cancel kar sakti hoon.

 

Malini is walking past the GK room and hears part of their conversation.

 

G: Kumud, agar—

 

Malini chips in.

 

M: Kya huwa? Tum log kahi trip cancel karne ki baat to nahi kar rahe ho? Kyunki aisa hargiz nahi ho sakta. Kumud tum apna vaada todh do gi kya? Aur Garv kya yeh business meri khushi se zayda kimti hai.

 

G: Maa aap achi tarah se janti hai ki yeh sach nahi hai. Tikh hai agar tum itna hi kahe rahi ho to hum Paris zaroor jayenge.

 

M: Thank You beta. Kumud, tum apne aur Garv ki packing kar lena, tikh hai. (Garv and Malini both leave)

 

K2: (Confused) Ok, mummy ji.

 

Kumud walks up to the closet/armoire and opens it.

She looks at her side and then Garv's. She starts packing. She first packs her clothes and starts with Garv's. She folds the shirts…

 

K2: (Talking aloud) Itne badi shirt, he baghwaan. Waise color achi hai. Dekhne mein bhi acha lagta hai. Agar main isse pehnungi to kaise lagoongi?

 

She wears the shirt over her salwar kameez and…

 

K2: (Imitating Garv's voice) Please have a seat. (Sympathetically) Kitni ajeeb hai yeh mulaqaat. Hum dono ki shaadi pakki ho gaye hai aur hum ek doosre ko jante bhi nahi. (Hearing imaginary applauses) Thank You, Thank You.

 

Garv who is standing right there watches everything!

Written By Rachna
Posted By ShIVU

 

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lol..did fanfic is not by me ppl..thank Rachna for d fantastic work..she is d one who did dis great work..yes as soon as Rachna continues I will post

ohh anyways it was great
plz cont soon

Last week:

Garv and Kumud are "told" to go on their honeymoon to Paris. Kumud is packing her clothes when she wears Garv's shirt over her salwar and imitates him.
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G: Ahum.

K2: (She turns around) Oh Garv! Main to sirf tumhare shirts— (She realizes that she's wearing one of them) Umm…wo main kapde pack kar rahi thi to…you know.

G: Of course, I know. Tumhe to har waqt mazak karne ki adat hai.

K2: You mean… (Malini calls Garv)

Garv goes to Malini's room.

G: Yes, mom….aap ne mujhe boolaya.

M: Haan, wo beta main tumhe kuch batana chahti hoon.

G: Kya?

M: Beta, Kumud is ghar mein naye hai, wo yaha par kisi ko janti bhi nahi hai. Wo tumhari zimmidari hai aur tumhe uske khayal rakhna hai.

G: Mujhe patah hai, par aap yeh sabh mujhe kyun bata rahi hai? Kya Kumud ne aapse kuch—

M: Nahi, nahi usne mujhse kuch nahi kaha par patah nahi beta mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tum dono ke beech mein kuch—

G: (Interupts) Oh, come on Mom. Aisa kuch nahi hai. Aap bahut sochti hai.

He leaves for the GK room.

K2: (She has finished the packing) Maa ne kya kaha.

G: Kuch nahi.

K2: What do you mean kuch nahi? Mummyji ne kuch to kaha hoga.

G: Tumhe yeh janna zaroori nahi hai.

K2: Ok, fine.

G: (Raises both of his eyebrows) Fine.

Kumud walks away.

The next day, Kumud and Garv leave for the airport.

In the airplane…

K2: (She's bored.)

G: (He's working busily on his laptop)

The hostess/whatever comes with some food trays/whatever.

G: One glass of orange juice please.

The hostess looks over to Kumud.

G: Kumud, tum kuch khaogi?

K2: No, thanks, mujhe bhook nahi hai.

G: Are you sure? Humein abhi kaaf der tak yaha rehna hai.

K2: Yes, I'm sure.

G: Ok

About 5 hours later they reach the Paris Airport. They check-in at their assigned hotel. (Yeah, Malini had already reserved them a room.)

They enter the room.

The hotel attendant brings their samaan.

K2: Garv…hum yaha par kitne dino ke liye aaye hai?

G: Patah nahi.

K2: Oops, main to bhool hi gaye thi. Tumse to sawal poochna hi bekar hai.

G: Toh phir poochti kyun ho?

K2: You're right. Is mein kasoor mera hai. Par tum fikar mat karo abh main tumse kuch nahi poochungi. Nothing at all!

She goes and changes into western clothes. Garv is looking out the window. (I don't know what he's thinking about every time.) Kumud goes leaves the room and Garv just hears the door bang behind her.

Kumud wanders around and finally reaches a bar. She goes and sits at a booth. She thinks about Kkusum and how she got forced to get married. And then she thinks about how Garv is stiff character wise. She gets frustrated and drinks. (Daaroo! Whisky!)

Back to the hotel room…

Malini calls and this is how the conversation goes.

G: Hello.

M: Garv.

G: Mom? Aapko yaha ka number kaha se mila?

M: Maine hi yeh hotel book kiya tha. Acha, tum dono tikh tarah se pahuch gaye ho right?

G: Haan, hum tikh hai.

M: Kumud kaha hai?

G: Kumud? Wo…maa…Kumud…hmm…

M: Kya hua? Tum is tarah se kyun—

G: Wo maa, Kumud bathroom mein hai.

M: Oh, acha koi baat nahi. Acha beta mera wo baat yaad rakhna. Kumud abh tumhari zimmidari hai. Usse sambhal kar rakhna.

G: Haan maa.

M: Acha to main phone rakhti hoon.

They hang up.

G: Phew! Bach gaya. Yeh Kumud bhi kaha chali gaye.

He remembers her mother's philosophical words. "Kumud abh tumhari zimmidari hai."

So he goes out searching for her.

Back to the bar place…

Some drunken French men/boys approach Kumud but Garv reaches there before they do, so they leave.


G: Kumud, tum yaha par kya kar rahi ho.

K2: (She squints her eyes to see if it's really Garv. She's drunk.) Garv? Tum yaha. (She stands up, almost falling.)

G: Aao mere saath.

K2: Ok. Yes boss. (She salutes him)

G: (He holds her arm and takes her to their room.)

In their room…

G: Kumud, kya zaroorat thi sharaab peene ki?

K2: Sharaab? Maine?

G: Tum hosh mein nahi ho. Kal baat karenge.

He helps her on the bed.

G: (On the sofa.)

Two of his consciences appear. One is the evil one and the other is a non-evil one.

E: Evil
N: Non-Evil
G: Garv

G: Maine maa ki baat nahi maani.

E: (He appears) To kya huwa, tumne yeh shaadi apne marzi se nahi ki. Yeh shaadi karwai gaye thi. Yeh sirf ek samjhota hai. It's just a compromise.

N: To kya tum abh bhi Kali ko chahte ho? Wo to sirf Nakul se pyaar karti hai. Tumhe aage badhna hai Garv, beete huwe kal ko bhula kar.

G: Par main Kumud ko pyaar nahi karta. Main to usse janta bhi nahi.

E: To phir kyun is shaadi ke bandhan mein bandhe ho. Todh do yeh shaadi.

N: Kya tum apne maa ke khilaaf jaoge? Tumhari maa ne kai sapne dekhe honge.

E: Shaadi to tumse huwi hai to maa kyun faisla karegi.

N: Soch samajh kar faisla karna.

E: Is mein sochne waali kya baat hai?

Non-evil and Evil both disappear.

Garv walks over to Kumud.

G: Patah nahi tumhari kya majboori thi.

All night he thinks about everything, the consciences, his mom, himself etc.

The next morning…

K2: (Wakes up. Has a headache from the drinking.)

G: Kumud yeh lo. (He gives her nimboo-pani)

K2: Yeh?

G: Tumhari sar dard kam karega.

K2: (Thinks) Isko kya ho gaya, achanak meri tabiyat ki itna fikar.

G: Lo.

She takes it and drinks.

G: Waise kal raat ko tumne kuch zaada hi pi li thi.

K2: Maine? Really?

G: (Thinks) Isko to kuch yaad hi nahi hai. Yeh iski pehli baar thi?

K2: Kahin maine kuch—

G: Nahi, anyways main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon.

K2: (Thinks) Mujhse? Isko kya ho gaya. Ram ram ram ram.

G: Wo Kumud…

K2: Kaho

G: I'm sorry.

K2: Huh?

G: Maine tumhare saath tikh tarah se pesh nahi aaya isiliye. Main ek naye shuruwaat karna chahta hoon, to friends? (He extends his hand out)

K2: (Thinks) Thank God, maine to socha tha ki yeh mujhse…anyways…(Back to reality) Friends.

They both shake hands.

continue good so far 😃
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