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Posted: 23 September 2005 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
I'm going to start from the beginning of the leap…….

After Kkusum left Abhay after seeing the Mahi-Abhay fiasco she somehow managed to soar higher. (Aka…leaving her middle class jhanjat) Kumud is born and the mother and daughter live happily. (Ever after? Lets see)

Kumud-
Has her mother's upbringing and does not believe in marriage. (Hmm...very unlike mother)

Kumud comes home after her studies.

K1: Kkusum
K2: Kumud

K2: Maa, I'm back.

K1: Welcome back!

K2: ( She gives her a rose and a hug)

K1: Main bhi tumhare liye ek khushkabhri laai hoon.

K2: Oh really? Batao kya hai mera surprise.

K1: Maine tumhari shaadi pakki kar di hai.

K2: (Eyes go big and the mouth opens wide) Shaadi! Maa, aap yeh kaise kar sakti hai, aapko to patah hai na ki mujhe shaadi shabd se nafrat hai.

K1: Abh tumhari umar hogaye hai, aur phir agar tum yaha ghar baitho gi to bahar waale kya sochenge? Yahi ki main apne beti ki shaadi karna hi nahi chahti.

K2: Wo jo sochna chahte hai, soch sakte hai. Mujhe shaadi nahi karni.

K1: Akhir kyun? Tumhe jeevan mein ek saathi ki zaroorat hai.

K2: Jeevan saathi? Agar jeevan saathi ka matlab hai ki do kadam chalna aur do kadam par saath chodhna to main akele rehna chahti hoon.

K1: Kumud! Main kuch sunna nahi chahti hoon. Maine agar yeh kaha hai ki tumhari shaadi pakki ho gaye hai to ho gaye hai and that is final.

Kumud runs upstairs to her room. Kkusum is furious.



Kkusum calls the grooms' side and tell them that tomorrow they're coming with the tilak.

Jumping ahead to the next day, Kkusum and her "troupe" goes and does the necessary rituals. The groom is apna Garv.

His story……

He loved this girl named Kali but she loved this other dude named Nakul. So under depression, his mother sought the opportunity and made him agree to this marriage. (Kya yahi mamta hai?....lolz)

After everything is done and everyone is gone, Garv asks him mother if he can at least meet the person he is marrying. His mom calls Kkusum and both the mothers fix the date for the "date".

K1: Kumud tumhe patah hai ki aaj tumhe Garv se milne jaana hai?

K2: Garv? Koun Garv?

K1: Tumhara hone wala pati, aur mera hone wala damaad.

K2: Is mein khush hone waali kya baat hai? Shaadi to mujhe karni hai par sabh cheez to aap kar rahi hai.

K1: Kumud! Tum phir se….(Pauses) Garv tumhe saath baje Z Lounge mein boolaya hai. Main tumhe waha drop kardoongi.

K2: (Leaves)

At 7 o' clock, Kumud reaches the venue. The waiter escorts her to "their" reserved table. Garv is already sitting at the table.

G: Garv

K2: Hmm…main…woh…main Kumud hoon.

G: Aur main Garv. Please have a seat.

She sits down.

G: Tum kuch lo gi?

K2: No, thanks.

G: Kitni ajeeb hai yeh mulaqaat. Hum dono ki shaadi pakki ho gaye hai aur hum ek doosre ko jante bhi nahi.

K2: Main ek sawal puchu?

G: Yes?

K2: Tumne yeh shaadi ke liye haan kyun ki?

G: Kyun ki maa  yeh chahti thi. Main to kisi aur ko chahta tha, par wo kisi aur ko pasand karti thi.

K2: Matlab ki tumhare liye yeh shaadi yeh majboori hai, right? To tum yeh shaadi se inkaar kar sakte ho.

G: Kar sakta hoon par karoonga nahi. Maa ne mujhe kasam di hai.

K2: (Saddens) Oh!

G: Kyun? Kya tumhe is shaadi se aitraaz hai?

K2: Chalo kuch khaane ke liye order karte hai mujhe achanak bhook lag gaye hai.

After eating a little bit of nothing Kumud decides to go home and the "date" ends.

The next day they have the haldi and the sangeet and the wedding!!!!


Next week:

Check out Kumud's life after marriage!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 23 September 2005 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
that was great plz continue soon
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Posted: 24 September 2005 at 12:01am | IP Logged
wow..awesome plz continue soon
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Posted: 27 September 2005 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
i dont appreciate u guys posting other peoples fan-fiction with out giving em any credit.
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Posted: 27 September 2005 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
yo guys that's my fan fiction.......but shivani has asked for permission so it's ok..........for those u dont know me........i'm rachna.......lolz i hope that's enough
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Posted: 28 September 2005 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
plz continue soon yaar....i cnt wait to see wat happens next Big smile
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please post soon i love this fan fic
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when r u gonna continue yaar???

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