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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 6:34am | IP Logged

Hey guys i am back with another fanfic hope you like it an please reply after reading don't be so rude plss

MOST IMPORTANT NOTE:Riddhima will be played by SHILPA ANAND in my fan ficEmbarrassed

Note :AR are engaged.AA,RM have confessed that they love each other

                          PART 1

Dr Keerti:Good morning interns.Aj hamare saath ek aur intern hame join karengi

Atul:ek aur intern he bagwaan!!

Keerti:Dr Atul kya apko kuch kehna hai

Atul:Nahi maam mai kya kahunga

Keerti:Unka naam Sonia Kapoor

Armaan:Sonia Kapoor.Hmm.Naam kafi suna hua hai

Keerti:Apne kya sunna hai Dr Armaan

Armaan:Maine kuch nahi suna.Sorry maam

Keerti:Vo lunch ke baad ap sab ko join karengi.Filhal apni duties sum li giye.

Dr Atul & Dr Anjali General ward

Dr Rahul & Dr Muskaan I.C.U

Dr Riddhima Children's Ward

Dr Armaan Cancer ward aur lunch ke baad hamari nayi intern ap ke saath hongi.

All:Yes maam

Keerti:Get back to work

Just then a young girl enters and says

Young girl:Ah Dr keerti mai Sonia.Yaha ki nayi intern

Keerti:Par ap toh lunch ke baad ane wale thi

Sonia:Maam mai phele nahi a sakti

Keerti:Good muje apse yehi umeed thi.

Armaan:Abey ye yaha kaise puhchi.Mai toh mar gaya.

Keerti:Jaise ki Dr Sonia jaldi a gayi hai.Ap apni duties 15 min chalu kar sakte hai.But in 15 mins i want you all doing your duties

All:Yes maam

Keerti goes

Sonia:Hey people.Mai sonia kapoor hu

Riddhima:Hi sonia.Mai riddhima

After seeing what riddhima is wearing that is  

 salwaar hspace2

Sonia says

Sonia:Hi riddhima par mujse thodi dur rehna

Riddhima:What??

Muskaan:Hi mai muskaan hu

Sonia:Hey muskaan

Anjali:Hi i am anjali

Sonia:Hi anjali

Atul:Hi mai atul hu

Sonia:Hey atul

Rahul:Hey sonia.Mai rahul grewal

Sonia:Oh my gosh rahul tum kitne badal gayye ho.I couldn't recognise you.

Armaan:Ho gayya INTRODUCTION SESSION

Atul:Ha yaar

Armaan:Ab chale varna Dr keerti mar dalengi

Sonia:By the way tum apna introduction nahi doge

Armaan:Nahi dunga.Jo meri riddhima ke saath bura behave karega usme muje koi interest nahi hai

Sonia:Par muje hai Armaan

Anjali:How the hell do you know armaan?

Armaan:Kyuki yeh hamare saath college mai padhthi thi

Atul:Matlab tum dono ek dusre ko jante ho

Armaan:Ha

Sonia:By the way meri duty kaha hai

Armaan:Unfortunetly mere saath Cancer ward

Sonia:I like it

Armaan:But i don't

Armaan goes

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                            PART 2

Armaan:(to himself)Kyu? Why did sonia come here?Maine uska kya bigada tha.Aur ab uski duty mere saath hai.Please bhagwan muje bacha lena please

Sonia:Armaan Armaan ruko itna jaldi kyu chal rahe ho

Armaan stops

Armaan:Kya hai?

Sonia:Can you tell me Cancer ward kaha hai

Armaan:Follow me. GOT IT !!!

Sonia:Armaan yeh tum achi tarah se jante ho ki mai kisko follow nahi karti.But mai tumhe zarror follow karungi

Armaan:Hey Bhagwan

Armaan goes to the Fire exit and sits there

Sonia:Armaan Cancer Ward kaha hai?

Armaan:Abhi duty ke liye 5 min baki hai .So i am relaxing

Sonia:Par Armaan muje relax nahi karna

Armaan:So go to Cancer Ward and do our duty

Sonia:Par i don't know where is the Cancer Ward

Armaan:Toh kisse puch lo

Sonia went

Meanwhile Riddhima was talking to Padma

Padma:Beta muje tujse kuch baat karni hai

Riddhima:Ha ma boliye

Padma:Muje teri aur armaan ki shaadi ke bare mai baat karni

Riddhima was blushing

Padma:Arey tu toh sharma gayi

Riddhima:Ma please.Muje tang mat karo

Padma:Theek hai.Toh mai keh rahi thi ki maine panditji se baat kar li hai.Unhone bataya ki 2 mahine baad bahut acha mahurat hai

Riddhima:Bahut acha hai ma.Matlab shaadi ki arrangements,shopping karne mai time toh lagega na

Riddhima:(in her heart)WHAT!!Oh god muje laga ki kuch 2-3 hafte honge par yaha toh 2 mahine

She was lost in her thoughts when Padma interrupted

Padma:Beta kaha kho gayi

Riddhima:huh !! Kuch nahi.Ma mai chalti hu duty ka time ho gaya hai.Bye ma

Padma:Bye beta

Riddhima goes to the fire exit where Armaan was sitting.

She sees Armaan sitting in the fire exit stair case

Riddhima:Armaan muje tumse kuch imp baat karni hai

Armaan:Riddhima.Ha bolo.Kya baat hai?

Riddhima:Armaan hamari shaadi ki date fix ho gayi hai

Saying this she was blushing a lot

Armaan:What?Kab hai ?

Riddhima:Uhm 2 mahine baad

Armaan:What 2 mahine baad.I has expecting 3-4 hafte

Riddhima:I know Armaan.Lekin ma ne bataya ki voh din har 5 saal bad ata hai.And it's a very good day Armaan

Armaan:Toh chalo 2 mahine aur wait karo.Fir tum Mrs Riddhima Armaan Mallik ban gaogi

Riddhima:Armaan Ab jao apni duty ke liye

Armaan:Tum muje sonia ke paas kyu bhej rahi ho

Riddhima:Tum vaha sonia ke liye nahi Minnie ke liye ja rahe ho

(Guys Minnie is there in my fan fic)

Armaan:Ok so baad mai milte hai

Riddhima:Bye

Armaan:Bye

Armaan is about to go when Riddhima says

Riddhima:Armaan ruko

Armaan:Ha bolo

Riddhima comes close to him a gives a kiss on his cheek

Riddhima:Ab jao

Armaan:Oye hoye.

PART 3

 

In the Cancer Ward.Sonia found the Cancer Ward.And she is operating a girl

Sonia:Listen muje apna hath do muje injection lagana hai

Girl:Mai injection sirf apne boyfriend se lagati hu.

Sonia:Dekho tumhara boyfriend tumhe injection nahi laga sakta.

Girl:Kyu?

Sonia:Kyuki voh Doctor nahi hai

Girl:Mera boyfriend Doctor hai

Sonia:Nahi hai

Girl:Hai

Sonia:Nahi hai

Girl:Hai

Sonia:Nahi hai

Girl:Hai

Armaan comes

Armaan:Yeh yaha kya chal raha?

Sonia:Dekho na Armaan she's telling that she will take the injection only from her boyfriend

Armaan:Minnie isme ladne ki kya baat hai.Obviously mai tumhe injection lagauga.

Minnie:Par boyfriend yeh keh rahi thi ki tum Doctor nahi ho

Armaan:What!!!

Sonia:Tum iske boyfriend ho?

Armaan:Ha hu toh kya hua

Sonia:Oh I didn't know that

Armaan:Us baat ko chodo.Mai Doctor nahi hu.Hello mai INTERN OF THE MONTH ban chika hu and i am not a doctor na

Sonia:Seriously Armaan i didn't know ke tum iske boyfriend ho

Armaan:Toh puch lena chaiya tha

Minnie:Boyfriend yeh kaun hai?

Armaan:Sanjeevani ki nayi intern.Pata nahi yeh Doctor kaise ban gayi isse toh Beautician banna chahiye

Minnie:Tum isse jante ho

Armaan:Ofcourse

Minnie:Kaise??

Armaan:Girlfriend yeh mere college mai padhti thi.And she was one of my girlfriends.Pata nahi maine isme kya dekha ki maine mere friends ko bhi chod diya

Both Armaan&Minnie laugh

Sonia:I didn't expect this from you Armaan and she left

Minnie:Bahut attitude deti yeh mulgi(Girl)

Armaan:Isiliye maine isse chod diya

Minnie:Bata teri GIRLFRIEND kaise hai

Armaan:Achi hai.Voh abhi children's ward mai hai

Minnie:Bahut miss kar raha haina usse

Armaan:Ha Minnie.Aur the best part is hum dono ki shaadi 2 mahine baad hai

Minnie: 2 mahine

Armaan:I know

Minnie:Bahut kaam hai.Muje laga kuch honge 8-9 mahine

Armaan:Minnie

Minnie:Acha baba sorry

He put the injection and left

All duties were over and only Armaan&Riddhima were there in the Locker Room

Armaan:Hey Jaan

Riddhima:Hi

Armaan:How was your day?

Riddhima:Bahut tiring.Aur tumhara

Armaan:Same as yours.Vaise Basket.Tumhe Sonia achi lagi??

Riddhima:Nahi.Kyu?

Armaan:Bas aise hi puch raha tha

Riddhima:Par tumhe usse 'Hi' bolna chaiye tha

Armaan:Why should I say a 'Hi'?

Riddhima:Kyuki voh tumhari college Friend hai

Armaan:Usne tumhare saath bura bartav kiya.Voh hai hi aisi logo ko kapdo ke hisab se judge karti hai.

Riddhima:Toh phir tum uske boyfriend kyu bane??

                             End Of Part 3 

Precap

Riddhima:Kya??Armaan you must be joking.Tum aur Rahul.I can't belive this

PART 4

Armaan:Blackmailing

Riddhima:What!!!

Armaan:Ha riddhima.Sonia muje blackmail karti thi.

Riddhima:Par kaise armaan

Armaan:Vo kehti thi ki Armaan if you don't be my boyfriend toh mai tumhe suspend karva dungi.

Riddhima:Par voh aise kaise kar sakti hai.College uske baap ka tha kya?

Armaan:Ha.She was the Deans daughter.

Riddhima:Oh my god!!

Armaan:Uski vajah se mere aur mere best friend ke beech ladiye ho gayi.

Riddhima:Aur kaun tha thunhara best friend.

Armaan:Rahul

Riddhima:Kya??Tum aur Rahul.I can't belive this

Armaan:Ha Riddhima.Yahi saach hai

Riddhima:Ab lagta nahi ki..

Armaan:Mai aur rahul best friends the na

Riddhima:Ha

Armaan:College mai bhi kisiko yeh nahi pata tha.

Riddhima:Kaise??

Armaan:Rahul ne kaha ki agar college mai sab ko pata chal gaya ki we both are best buddies tho muje college mai saab kahege ki " Yeh dekh 'Champu' ka bestfriend"

aur sab log mujepe hasege.

Riddhima:Rahul kitna understanding hai na

Armaan:Rite

Riddhima:Toh tum logo ki dosti sonia ki vajah se kaise tuti.

Armaan:As you now rahul sonia ko college days mai like karta tha.Aur at that time jab sonia muje blackmail nahi karti thi tab mai use like karta tha.Rahul never told me that he liked sonia.Jab hamari 9th ke farewell mai rahul ne sonia ko ek rose diya aur vahi rose sonia ne muje diya.Rahul got very angry.Party ke baad hum dono ka jhada hua.Aur vo hua.

Riddhima:Sonia ki vajah se

Armaan:Exactly.Us jhade mai maine kaha ki "He was loser aur muje use dosti hi nahi karne chahiye thi".Rahul was bhi kuch kaam nahi tha.So he said ki "Agar dosti hone se itni problem ho rahi hai tho dosti tod do"Tab I didn't know ki mai kya bol raha hu so even said"Theek hai ab hum best buddies nahi dushman hai".Ise tarah hua sonia ki vajah se jhada

At that time Rahul entered

Rahul:Hey guys

Armaan:Hey

Riddhima:Hi rahul

Armaan:Muje tujse kuch kehna hai rahul

Rahul:Ha bol kya baat hai

Armaan:I'm sorry rahul

Rahul:Kis baat ke liye

Armaan:Remember 9th farewell party,jhada.Uske liye

I'm seriously sorry rahul.I don't know muje kya ho gaya tha.

Rahul:Jalti to meri bhi thi.Even I'm sorry

Armaan:So dushmani khataam.Dostui shuru

Rahul:Ha.Mere college ke best buddy.

They both hug

Muskaan,Atul.Anjali cum.And see Armaan and Rahul hugging

Atul:Hey bhagwaan yeh kya ho raha hai?

Muskaan:Ye jya hai ji??

Anjali:Oh my god tum dono hug kyu kar rahe ho.

Armaan:Kyuki yeh mere best buddy hai

Atul,Anjali&Muskaan:KYA!!!!!!!!!!

Rahul:Ha hum toh college se he best buddies the.Bas bada jhada hua "SONIA" ki vajah se.Aur ve became dushman

Muskaan:Kya baat kar rahe ho.

Atul:Armaan agar ye tera best buddy hai toh mai kya hu.

Armaan:Tu mera CHAMP aur BHAI hai

Atul:Thank you armaan

Anjali:Par tum dono ka jhada hua kaise

Riddhima:Bahut lambi story hai di

Anjali:Tumhe pata hai ridz

Riddhima:Ha armaan ne pucha ki muje sonia achi kagti hai ki nahi aur hum dono bate karne lage is baat mai armaan ne bataya ki rahul aur armaan best buddies hai

Sonia enters

Sonia:Hey guys

Riddhima:Hi

Sonia:Listen miss maine kaha na mujse dur raho.Aur a bhenji.And i don't talk to bhenji's

Armaan:SONIA!!(VERY ANGRY).Tum apni hade par kar rahi ho.

Sonia:TUmhe is bhenji ki itni fikaar kyu hai.

Armaan:Cause vo meri fiance hai

Sonia:What!!Dekho don't joke with me.

Armaan:Mai joke nahi kar raha hu.Riddhima mera pyaar hai.Aur agar tumne kuch bura bhala kaha.Then just watch out.

Sonia:I didn't know ki tumhari choice itni buri hai saying this she left.

Atul:imitatting sonia"I dind't know ki tuhari choice itni buri hai"Kitni buri hai ye yaar

Anjali:Uski himmat kaise hui mere behen ko bhenji bolne mai

Armaan:Chill anjie vo aise hi hai

Muskaan:Chalo ji bahut raat ho gayi hai.Bye mai chalti hu

Every one:Bye

Anjali:Chalo ridz(a bit annoyed cause of sonia)

Riddhima:Ha di chalye

Anjali:Bye guys

Riddhima:Bye

Atul:Bye anjali.Bye riddhima

Armaan:Bye(Angry cause of sonia)

Atul:Chal armaan mai bhi chalta hu

Armaan:Bye

Atul:Bye

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Precap

A medical camp

 

                         PART 5

 

Next day

 

Dr Keerti: Good Morning interns

All: Good Morning

Keerti: Mai ap sab ko yeh batana chahti hu ki kal ap sab medical camp par jaige. Toh ap sab ki duty 7 baje khatam ho jayegi.

Riddhima:Maam hum camp ke liye kaha ja rahe hai???

Keerti:Hum sab Delhi jane vale hai. Aur yeh 7 din ka camp hoga. As Sanjeevani ki delhi branch mai kuch doctors chahiye. Aur vaha koi mazaak nahi karega. Ap sab yaha 6 baje repot karenge.Ab apni duties sunli jiye

Armaan:Hey baghwaan please meri sonia ke saath duty maat rakhna

Keerti: Dr Armaan ap Dr Riddhima ke saath Cancer Ward mai. Dr Rahul ap Dr Sonia ke saath General Ward mai.Dr Anjali aur Dr Atul Children's Ward.Dr Muskaan Path Lab. Back to Work.

She goes

Armaan:Yes.Aj sonia ke saath no duty yahoo

Sonia:What!!!

Atul:Armaan.Chal duty karne

Armaan:Champ sunna nahi meri duty Riddhima ke saath hai

Anjali:Ha Atul tum armaan aur ridz ko dur kyu kar rahe ho.(teasing)

Riddhima:Diiii!!!!!

Armaan:Chale meri pyaari,sweet

cute basket

Sonia:Who's Basket??

Armaan:My riddhima.Mere siva usse koi basket nahi bula sakta.

Chalo na riddhima Minnie tumse milna chahti hai

Riddhima:Chalo

All go for work

BREAK(All in locker room)

 

Sonia: Oh God. This case so difficult.

Riddhima:Can I help you??

Sonia:You bhenji.Muje tumhari koi maddad nahi chahiye

 

Armaan:Sonia you dare call riddhima a bhenji

Riddhima:Chooda na armaan

Sonia:Ya rite.Khod ko protect nahi kar sakti na

Anjali:Ridz apne ap ko achi tarah se protect kar sakti hai.And if you call her a bhenji I will give you a slap

Sonia:Kahungi mai isse bhenji kahung.Riddhima is a bhenji and she left

Riddhima is angry but doesn't show it to anyone

Muskaan:Ye apne ap ko samjhti kya hai

Anjali:I know how dare she

Atul:Iska kuch karna padega.

Rahul:Ha Atul to theek keh raha hai

Armaan:Iski toh mai

Riddhima:Stop It guys.Tum sab mai se koi kuch nahi kahega.

Armaan:Par basket

Riddhima:Ise toh main mazza khaugi.

Atul:Kaise??

Riddhima:Vo toh dekh lena

DUTY OVER

Riddhima:Sonia tumhe lagta hai kit um duniya mai sabse hot ladki ho?

Sonia:Yes I am the hottest girl in the world.Infact universal

Rahul: (whispers)A donkey praises it's own tail

Muskaan hears it and laughs

Sonia:Please miss bhenji

Riddhima:Stay away.Rite

Sonia:Rite.Bye guys.Muje kal ki packing karni hai

All:BYE!!!!!!!!!

Anjali gets a page

Anjali:Oh God meri duty 9 baje tak hogi

Riddhima:Perfect

Muskaan:Kya??

Riddhima:Kuch nahi

Anjali:Tum chali jao

Armaan:Nahi mai basket ko drop kar donga

Riddhima:Nahi armaan mai khud jaogi.Di ne muje driving sikha di hai

Armaan:u sure

Riddhima:Ha I am sure

Riddhima:Bye guys

All:Bye

Armaan:Bye jaan

Riddhima went for shopping and bought western dresses.After shopping she reaches home

Riddhima:I hope jo maine liya it's perfect

She starts packing her bag.When she finishes Anjali enters the house.

Anjali:Hey Ridz tumne meri packing kardi kya?

Riddhima:Nahi di mai meri packing kar rahi thi

Anjali:Ridz tumhe packing karne mai 2 ghante lagte hai.Tumhari packing toh 30 mins mai khatam ho jati hai.

Riddhima:Di mai shopping ke liye gayi thi.

Anjali:Shopping????

Riddhima:Di voh actually maine sare western kapde liye hai

Anjali:WHAT!!!Ridz tum pure trip mai western pehnogi??

Riddhima:Ha di except 1 din.

Anjali:Vo kaunsa din hai

Riddhima:Armaan ka birthday

Anjali:Ha 2 din mai armaan ka birthday hai

Riddhima:Mai us sonia ko yeh dikhaana chahti hu ki voh duniya ki sabse hot ladki nahi hai

Anjali:Par Armaan

Riddhima:Isliye toh muje darr lag raha hai ki armaan mujse naraz ho gaya toh.

Anjali:Don't worry sab kuch theek ho jayega.Now chalo meri packing karne mai help karo

Riddhima:Ha di chaliye

NEXT MORNING

Gupta Residence

Riddhima:Di mai achi lag rahi hu na

Anjali:Yes ridz you are looking toooo good.Muje nahi pata tha meri behen western mai itni achi lagti hai

Riddhima:Thanx di.Ab chale its already 5:30 am

Anjali:Chalo

In Sanjeevani(In the locker room

Every one except sonia,armaan

anjali,riddhima

Atul:Arey yaar meri anjali kab aegi(come)

Rahul:Vo aegi Atul riddhima ke saath aegi

Muskaan:Ha yaar thand rakh

Armaan comes

Armaan:Hey guys

Armaan ne peeche riddhima comes wearing this

 

Note:Armaan is behind ridz so he can't see her

 

Sab ke muh(mouth) khule reh jate hai

Armaan:Kya hai muje dekh kar itne shock kyu ho gaye

Atul:Peche dekh armaan

Armaan:Kya??

He looks behind and see's riddhima in western

Armaan:Oh My God!!!!!!!

Riddhima:Kya hua guys???

Muskaan:Riddhima tune western pehna hai.Tera salwaar kaha gaya??

Rahul:Ridheeema yeh apne kya pehna hai??

Atul:Riddhima tum theek ho na

Riddhima:Guys mai 1 hafte tak western pehnugi. Except 1 din

Armaan: Excuse me ap kon hai??Oh ap meri western riddhimaa hai.Par mai ap ko 1 baat bata du ki muje meri Indian riddhima wapis chahiye.Par western riddhima achi lag rahi hai.

Riddhima just loved the way armaan spoke she knew what he meant.He meant he likes her in Indian only but is looking good

Riddhima:Don't worry Indian riddhima tumhare birthday par vapas aygi.

Muskaan:Riddhima you told par tum yeh saab kyu kar rahi ho??   

Riddhima:Miss Sonia Kapoor ko batane ki vo duniya ki sorry sorry universe ki hottest ladki nahi hai

Just then Sonia comes

Sonia:Yeh kaun hai??(pointing towards riddhima)

Riddhima:Miss Sonia Kapoor mai riddhima hu.Your BHENJI

Sonia is about to faint

Riddhima:Tumhe laga ki tum universe ki sabse khubsurat ladki ho then your are wrong.

Muskaan:Vah riddhima tune kya jawab diya

Riddhima:Muje nahi pata tha ki tum itni cheap ho sakti ho sonia.I didn't know ki tum armaan ko college APNE college mai blackmail karti thi taki armaan tumhara boy friend banna rahe

ALL:(Except armaan,Sonia)WHAT!!!

Riddhima:Ha yeh armaan ko blackmail karti thi.Kehti thi ki armaan agar tum mere boyfriend na bane toh I will suspend you kyuki college uske papa ka tha.

Anjali:I don't belive this

Rahul:Armaan yeh saach hai

Armaan:Yup dude hamare jhagde ke baad I told her I am dumping her so she started blackmailing me

Riddhima:Par ab mai tumhe suspend kar sakti hu

Sonia:Vo kaise

Riddhima:Mere papa is hospital ke dean hai

Sonia:KYA!!!!!

Riddhima:So don't try to act smart with me.GOT IT !!!!.Chale guys camp ke liye late ho raha hai

All go to the bus

IN THE  BUS (seating arramgement)

 

Armaan-RiddhimaJ

Rahul-MuskaanJ

Atul-AnjaliJ

Shubanker-KeertiJ

Sonia(alone)L     

 

 

                   



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SORRY GUYS BUT I THINK NO ONE LIKED IT AS IT HAS ONLY 1 reply 30 views so guys i won't continue and thanx
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Hey!
I lieked ur ff!

Dont stop...plz continue....n do PM me wen u do if u cn!

Thanx!

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please do continue without fail...

and dont worrii.. forever Dr Riddhima Gupta will be Shilpa Anand...!

i loved it... and this sonia kapoor toh main...  AngryAngryi dont like her 4 being rude to riddhima.. and i loved armaan being soo like macho and saying i dont like ppl who are rude to my ridz...! superb!

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