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cool_adeena Senior Member
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Thanksss soo much sona Tongue yeah here are loads of FFs here in FFs section so we can have difficulty but good u copied the links.now it ll not be difficult to find.ll surely update soon.thanks for liking Smile

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Originally posted by cool_adeena

Thanksss soo much sona Tongue yeah here are loads of FFs here in FFs section so we can have difficulty but good u copied the links.now it ll not be difficult to find.ll surely update soon.thanks for liking Smile

hyeeeeee Adeena What's upSmile

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Posted: 02 July 2008 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
hey sona.nothing yaar.these days was just busy with AS fanclub.now ll surely try to compile up fanfics work Smile
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Originally posted by cool_adeena

hey sona.nothing yaar.these days was just busy with AS fanclub.now ll surely try to compile up fanfics work Smile

hyeee adeena ....just great being busy with AS fanclub u hav still manage to update the FF........take ur time ...........just want to say i love reading ur FFSmile
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Posted: 05 July 2008 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
thanksss yaar sona Smile ll update this one soon too.till then enjoy the second one.
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Originally posted by cool_adeena

thanksss yaar sona Smile ll update this one soon too.till then enjoy the second one.

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Posted: 23 July 2008 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
guys.m going to update it tomorrow.got to go now.but tomorrow for sure ll update.n also tell u that this fic is going towards end.two parts are remaining now.in the next two parts,i ll compile it finally.i dnt like to drag the story.i think it shud come to end in appropriate time.hope u guys dnt find it too shortBig smile
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Posted: 24 July 2008 at 8:40pm | IP Logged

alright guys.here goes its next part......

 
PART 7
 
 
Shruti came outside in the corridor of hospital after meeting akaash.aunty moved forward to her n asked,

aunty- akaash kaisa hai?

shruti- woh theek hai.

saying this,shruti got happy smile on her face.she was just so happy that akaash is out of danger now.aunty smiled n hugged her.

aunty- tum dekhna akaash bohat jaldi bilkul theek ho jayey ga.

while hugging aunty,shruti saw her mom was standing behind.she got separated from aunty n went to mom slowly.n after the silence of few seconds,she spoke up,

shruti- mamma...m sorry.last time mein ne jo kaha woh nahi kehna chahiyey tha.mein kuch zyada rude ho gayi.m sorry.

mamma smiled affectionately,

mamma- no my sweet heart.tumhein sorry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.iss sab mein kisi ki koi ghalti nahi hai.sirf waqt ghalat tha lekin woh ghalat waqt bhi ab guzar chuka hai.ab meri beti ki zindagi mein sirf khushian hon gi.

mamma hugged her lovingly.shruti thought when did mamma hugged her last time....must be long ago....but then she jerked the stupid thoughts out of her mind n closed her eyes feeling the warmth of her mom s arms.

n then after a while,sitting there on a bench in corridor,mamma said,

mamma- shruti.beta mein jaanti hoon tumharey uncle,aunty ne apne bachon se bhi bhharr kar tumhein pyaar diya hai,lekin mein tumhein bhi jaanti hoon,i know tum bohat sensitive ho.tum ne hamesha apne mamma,pappa ki kami mehsoos ki hai.....lekin mein bohat khush hon kyunki tum ne apni saari zindagi guzaarney ke liye akaash ko choose kia hai.i know k akaash tumhein itna pyaar de ga k tum apni pichli zindagi ki saari problems bhool jao gi.tumharey liye akaash se zyada acha aur behter aur koi nahi ho sakta tha.

shruti smiled shyly.

mamma- dekho naa.akaash ka naam letey hi tumharey chehrey per rang bikhar jatey hein.aur abhi bhi aaj uss se milne,uss se baat karney ki khushi tumhari aankhon mein jhalak rahi hai...pyaar toh hota hi aisa hai...sab kuch bhula deta hai....

saying this,memories glittered in mamma s eyes in the form of tears as she remeberred her own first n last love of life....thats shruti s dad.she just kissed shruti s forhead with much love.

mamma- aaj mein tumharey liye bohat khush hoon.

seeing the tears coming into mamma s eyes,shruti hugged her.

shruti- i love u mamma.

mamma- i love u too my sweet heart.

mamma said patting her head with love.

just then uncle n rahul also arrived to the hospital.n now doctors also gave them permission to meet akaash.so they all went inside to see him inluding akaash s parents who were also present there.

 
 
 
Dev thought on grandpa s words for a long time.he just thought n thought n finally he came to take a decision that night....a final decision.
 
 
 
And that night rahul was going to his mom,dad means shruti s uncle aunty s room.he was just about to open the door when he heard voices coming from inside.he stopped there.uncle was telling that incident to aunty that dev s dad mr. yash raihund came to his office to apologise on behalf of his son.rahul got shocked by hearing that dev is son of famous industrialist mr. yash raichund....the same yash raichund whose daughter raamya studies with rahul in high school...raamya whom he used to like...may be not only like but love her,she was dev s sister.he really got sad n shocked both by knowing this.then he just went back to his bedroom walking slowly.
 
n from then he started ignoring raamya.raamya wondered on his behaviour.he just looked for the ways to stay away from her now.one day she finally asked him,

raamya- rahul.wats the problem.tum mujhe avoid kyun karne lagey ho?kya mein ne kuch ghalat kar diya hai?afterall kuch batao toh sahi k problem hai kya?

rahul- kuch nahi raamya.tum ne kuch ghalat nahi kiya hai.bas mein akela rehna chahta hoon.

saying this he got up n went from there.n raamya just looked at him still wondering that what has happened.

 
 
Those days,dev started to visit each n every place of lonavala city.he was just capturing all the beauty made by God,in his mind.he was always roaming here n there on different beautiful spots.but now he was not stressed out like before.now he seemed comfortable because he had made his decision.
 
 
 
Akaash was getting better day by day now.he has been discharged from the hospital n was back home now.shruti regularly went to meet him.no one had told akaash about that dev incident.beause he used to loose temper very soon n moreover anything related to shruti would just flare him up more quickly.he was possessive about shruti.n as he was not recovered completely till now so they did not tell him right now.
 
 
 
 
Dev said to grandpa one day.

dev- grandpa.mein soch raha hoon k mein yahin aap ke paas shift ho jaon hamesha k liye.yahan mujhe comfortable lagta hai.

grandpa- yeh toh bohat achi baat hai.mein bhi dekh raha hoon tum ab relaxed rehne lagey ho.

dev- lekin ek baar mujhe wapis jana parey ga.kuch adhoorey kaam khatam karney hein.

grandpa- lekin beta tum wahan ja kar phir se disturb na ho jao.

dev- aisa kuch nahi ho ga grandpa.mein ek final decision le chuka hoon aur uss pe bilkul comfortable hoon.

so grandpa agreed.at the time of leaving dev said,

dev- grandpa.i just want to say thanks to u.mein khud apne hi dil ki baat nahi samajh raha tha,aap ne mujhe samajha di woh baat.i love u grandpa.

dev hugged him tight.he got tears in his eyes because he knew he ll never come back here.he had lied to grandpa.then he wiped his tears so that grandpa cant see him crying.n then he started his journey to his home back.

 
 
 
That day shruti n jhilmil were sitting in the lounge when rahul came from outside.uncle n aunty were not at home then.rahul just said hello to them n went to his room silently.

jhilmil- shruti.tu ne notice kiya yeh rahul aajkal kuch chup chup aur udaas sa rehne laga hai.

shruti- haan.mein toh iss barey mein uss se baat bhi karne ka soch rahi thi.pata nahi kya problem hai jo woh kisi ko bata bhi nahi raha hai.

jhilmil- haan.aaj raat ko uss se baat karen ge.

shruti- yeah.

just then the phone bell rang.shruti picked up the receiver.n after saying hello she did not spoke even a word.but she started looking worried.seeing her face jhilmil also got worried.shruti put the receiver back without saying anything.so jhilmil asked hurriedly,

jhilmil- kis ka phone tha?sab theek toh hai naa.

shruti did not say anything.she was looking lost.

jhilmil- arey tell me.kis ka phone tha?

shruti- dev ke grandpa ka.

shruti said slowly.

jhilmil- what?lekin unho ne yahan kyun phone kiya.

shruti- woh keh rahey thay k dev ek aakhri baar mujh se milna chahta hai.ussey pata tha k mein uss se baat nahi karon gi isliye uss ne khud phone nahi kiya.

jhilmil- wat a crap....jaise uss ke ya uss ke grandpa ke phone karne per tum uss se milne chali hi jao gi.

jhilmil said with hatred.but shruti said slowly,

shruti- shaid mujhe jana chahiyey.

jhilmil was shocked to hear this.

jhilmil- pagal ho gayi hai tu.dev se milne jao gi.last time kya hua tha woh bhool gayi kya.

shruti- woh keh rahey thay ke dev bohat badal gaya hai.aur woh sirf ek baar mujh se milna chahta hai,akhri baar.

jhilmil- woh keh rahey thay aur tu ne maan liya.agar yeh uss ka koi naya natak hua toh...??

shruti- jhilmil.mein uss ke grandpa se mil chuki hoon jab woh yahan aaye hue thay,mein unn ki awaz pehchanti hoon.

jhilmil- jo bhi hai.jo kuch uss dev ne terey saath kiya uss ke baad toh woh aakhri saansein bhi le raha ho tab bhi tujhe uss se milne nahi jana chahiyey.

shruti- jhilmil.aisa toh mat bol.

shruti has met dev s whole family.n his younger brother neil once told her whole life history of dev from his childhood.knowing all that shruti thought that it was not totally dev s fault.it was his destiny so that he has became this way.she still got a soft corner for dev in her heart.

jhilmil- mein tujhe uss ke paas nahi janey doon gi n thats final.

but shruti insisted so much.so jhilmil had to agree.

jhilmil- theek hai lekin phir mein bhi terey saath chalon gi.mein bahar rukon gi.

shruti- ok.

so they both went to dev s house.jhilmil stood outside the gate while shruti went inside to meet dev.a servant lead her to dev s room upstairs.n leaving her at the door of room,the servant went back.shruti knocked on the door but no response came from inside.when no answer came after knocking twice,she opened the door herself n slowly walked to inside the room.she saw dev was sitting there on the couch.seeing shruti he tried to get up slowly.but when he got up,he numbled suddenly n hold the table to stop himself from falling.he was not in full consiousness.shruti thought may be he is drunk.she got a little scared.dev was slowly coming towards her.

dev- mujhe...mujhe laga tha tum...nahi aao gi.

he said stuttering.he was even not able to stand or speak properly.

shruti- tum iss waqt baat karne ki halat mein nahi ho.mein phir kabhi aa jaon gi.

she turned to leave when dev suddenly moved to her n hold her hand.

dev- nahi...please mat jao.

shruti became horrified now.but before she could try to free her hand,dev himself let go of her hand.

dev- m sorry...but please...aaj meri baat sunney bina mat jao.mein...mein yeh sab phir kabhi nahi keh sakon ga.please....

shruti- okk.kaho.

dev- thanks.merey paas kehne k liyey kuch zyada nahi hai.i just....want to say sorry to u shruti.agar ho sakey toh tum please mujhe....maaf kar dena.

he could not balance him standing n fell on the couch behind.

dev- shruti mein ne tumhein bohat hurt kiya but....beleive me i truly loved u n i ll always love u.merey pyaar per kabhi shakk mat karna.shruti merey paas zyada waqt nahi hai....

shruti got shocked on this sentence.n the thought clicked her mind....if dev has done something wrong.she looked here n there n finally she spotted the sleeping pills bottle placed there on couch near dev.she hurriedly took the bottle in hand n it was empty.

shruti- dev....tum ne sleeping pills le li...??

she said in shock n she was about to run outside the room to call someone when dev again hold her wrist.

shruti- dev.leave my hand,let me call someone.u need a doctor.

dev- nahi.shruti please dnt try to save my life.i...i just can not live anymore now.i just want to say sorry to u.forgive me n always remember that i love u n ll always love u...even after my death.

shruti- dev.....

shruti got tears coming out of her eyes.just then dev s grip on her wrist got lighter n finally his arm fell down on couch leaving shruti s wrist.he was unconcious now.shruti immidiately ran outside the room now to inform someone.

 
 
okk guys thats done for now.please do tell how is it.more ll come in next part.....n yeah next would be its last partSmile


Edited by cool_adeena - 26 July 2008 at 5:41pm

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