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Thoda pyaar thoda magic!(AKff)Part3 P1

kdrs Goldie

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 8:14am | IP Logged

Hey Guys,

I am going to write a FF in my style with help of the upcoming movie Thoda Pyaar Thoda Magic. Characters will be Angad and Kripa with 3 kids.

What happens when 3 kids don't get love from their aunt and uncle and need love? What happens when an angel sees them and decides to help them? What happens when she comes like a nanny but falls in love with their uncle?


Character Sketch

Main ones:

Mr.Angad Khanna: Arrogant. He's got a big bussiness but has to stay home and work because of 3 children. He's the one with too much ego just because of a miserable past.

Ms.Mishti Khanna: Armaan's sister and like a mother to 3 children, she loves them a lot but can only show it when his brother's not seeing. She decides to bring a nanny for them and convinces her brother.

The 3 kids:

Riya: She's 7 yrs old. She hates her mamu because he always shouts at her and her 2 brothers always conspire against her. Whenever Anjali's around, her brother's don't trouble her but when she isn't they do.

Harsh: He's 9 yrs old. He loves his brother a lot and his sister too but she's a girl and the girls never play with boys. He gets irritated when his sister plays with dolls so he and his small brother trouble her.

Ishaan: He's 8 yrs old. He's the one who loves Minnie and Gappu the same. But Gappu is the elder one so he has to obey him.

And the Angel:

Kripa: She's the angel to nanny girl. Very caring and innocent! She makes everyone smile by just talking sweetly to them.


So, How did you all like it! Hope you all like it! Plz comment or criticize!

Edited by kdrs - 29 June 2008 at 10:09am

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kdrs Goldie

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 8:15am | IP Logged

Part 1:


The alarm clock woke up Mishti in the grand house she lived in. She got ready within minutes and was standing in the kitchen. She knew today again she'll be late but this is what happens when 1 person stays with a punctual person.

Mi: Shit, Late again. Bhaiya's going to kill me.

We see a young man walking down from the staircase to the dining table.

An: Mishti, you're late. Where's my breakfast?

Mi: Bhaiya, I told you to get me a helper but..

An: But I have already interviewed many and all seem to be behind money.

Mi: You tell this to me always.

An: Where are the kids?

Mi: Hmmm...Bhaiya...


The house was like an earthquake being awakened. Then we see a toys decorated room but in the 3 beds no kids. They heard the everyday voice and hurried to the bathroom. Coming out from the bathroom, fresh.

Ri: Ye Mamu bhi na.

Ha: Is earthquake ke saath kyon utha te hain

Ish: Pyaar se uthaenge to kya jaega.

Mi: Bacho, niche ao.

Kids: Aaee!!

They ran down to get another lecture from their Mamu.

An: Bhag ke aane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Ha: Riya ne idea diya.

Ri: Maine? Nahi Mamu.

Poor Riya gave a sad look to Mishti who understood everything.

Mi: Ok, Ab chup chap baith ke breakfast khao.

Let's see how our angel had her good morning.

We see a girl sleeping on a heavenly bed but she gets disturbed by her Private assistant after all she's the daughter of the King of Angels.

Prith: Kripaji Uth jaiye, 9 baar a chuka hoon par ab bad 10 nahin hone doonga.

Kr: Tum mere P.A. ho na to jao aur badme aana.

Prith: Plz uth jaiye.

Kr: JAO!

Prith: Theek hain.

After 5 min, he again reappears but with a frightening face.

Prith: Kripaji, Maharani aur Maharaja padhar rahe hain.

Kr: To?... KYA!

Prith: Jaldi ready ho jaiye.

Kr: Haan. Haan.

After a couple of minutes, Kripa gets ready but when she comes to her bedroom.

Kr: Papa aur Mama?

Prith: Aake chale gaye.

Kr: Ok, Chalo thora ghoom kar aate hain.

Prith: Kahaan?

Kr: Niche chalte hain.

Prith: Nahin, Bahot dangerous hain.


Prith: Theek hain Kripaji.

Back to the Khannas, Angad was in his study working, Mishti was watching TV with Riya playing on the floor. The boys were upstairs playing cricket.

Suddenly, a white cycle came running through the sky with another just behind but with less speed. Riya thought something was wrong.

Ri: Massi, mein abhi aye.

Mi: Jaldi.

She just took a stroll in the garden, as she was going back she heard a "whoosh! and whoosh!". Meanwhile in the cycles were Kripa and Prithvi who were having fun seeing a girl finding them.But as luck wanted it, Kripa fell and Prithvi could not take the chance of showing himself to a human. Riya heard the falling voice and went towards it only to find a princessly girl dressed in white. Being helpful in her nature, she decided to help her.

Ri: Aap theek to hain na?

Kr: Haan.

Ri: Aap kaun ho?

Kr: Koi nahin.

Ri: Bataye na.

Kr: Jao!

Ri: Bhoot!!!!!

Riya ran home and.

Ri: Maine bhoot ko dekha, wo bahaar thi.

Mi: Riya bhoot nahin hote.

Ri: Hote hain, maine unhe bahaar dekha.

Mi: Riya! Stop it! Bola na bhoot nahin hote.

Riya just runs away and locks herself in her room. She doesn't come out till noon for lunch.

An: Riya, What happened?

Ri: *silent*

An: Riya, main aap se kuch poonch raha hoon.

Ri: Kuch nahin.

Mi: Wo bol rahi thi ki usne bhoot ko dekha hain.

An: *laughs* Riya bhoot nahin hote. Ok?

Ri: Ok.

Mi: Cheer up Riya.

Night falls and everyone get ready to sleep meanwhile Riya just stares at the sky, Ishaan notices it and calls Harsh to accompany him.

Ish: Kya hua Riya?

Ri: Mujhe ek Angel chahiye, sirf mere liye.

Ha: Woh to mujhe bhi chahiye.

Ish: Mujhe bhi.

Ri: Chalo na, pray karte hain.

All three kids pray:

Please God, humare liye ek achi si angel bhej do. Hume uski is ghar mein bahot zaroorat hain. Please God.

At the same time, Kripa sees them. She came there to apologise to Riya but found her and 2 other kids with her praying.

Pre-cap: Kripa tries to go down to help but....


Part 2:

Kripa was standing outside the big Khanna Mansion thinking how to aproach them. She can't use magic except for special things and thinks how did she end up here.


Her father inmediatly calls her.

Sur: Ridhima, I want you to go down to Khanna mansion, We've got orders.

Kr: Dad, I wanted to go to another place.

Sur: I want you to go where I want, Make a good appearance for a suitable nanny and take Prithvi with you.

Kr: Prithvi?

Sur: Yes, as your helper. I don't want you to do all the work.

Kr: You sure they will not mind.

Sur: I didn't tell you to ask me questions which are no use to you.

Kr: Ok, When do I have to leave?

Sur: Tomorrow morning.

Kr: I've hardly got time.

Sur: Get ready then.

Kr: Bye Dad.

Sur: Take care.

*Flashback ends*

Where did she want to go and where she was. And again with Prithvi. He was standing with her looking extremely nervous which was being seen because he was bitting his nails.

Kr: Stop it!

Pr: Sorry!

She entered in and rang the bell, a woman of barely 22 opened. Both were surprised while Prithvi was looking at them with a questioning face.

Mi: Yes?

Kr: Actually, I saw the newspaper and I came to know you needed a nanny?

Mi: Yes, but I never advertised it. Can I see the newspaper?

Kr: Sure.

Kripa quickly mumbled something and there came a newspaper with a big advertisement. Mishti took it from her, examined it and thought that maybe Angad did it. She let them in.

Mi: Even I need help with 3 kids in the house.

Kr: Three?

Mi: Yes, I'll just call them.


Mi: May I know who's this?

Kr: He's.. my helper and friend, Prithvi.

Mi: You'll surely need help from him with the boys but Riya will like you.

At that time, the 3 kids come down. Riya got the shock of her life to see that mean angel in her house and Kripa was surprised to see the cute little girl in this house.

Mi: This is Riya, Ishaan and Harsh.

Kr: Hello.

All 3 kids: Hello.

Mi: She's come for an interview to become your nanny. Shall we make her?

Kr: Can I talk to them? Privately?

Mi: Sure.

Mishti excused herself while Prithvi occupied himself with the boys while Kripa took Riya aside.

Kr: I'm really sorry for yesterday.

Ri: Why are you here?

Kr: Well, I saw you and your brothers praying for an angel yesterday night when I came to say sorry to you. I am an angel and my father sent me here to make you all happy, to make You happy.

Ri: Really?

Kr: 100 %

Ri: So I'll tell Massi to make you my nanny.

Kr: Thank you!

Ri: Then we'll play and go to garden and...

Kr: Ok! Here comes your Massi.

Mishti came and saw the kids were really enjoying with these people.

Mi: I'll talk to my brother till the time you both can settle in the servant quarters.

Ri: No, She'll sleep with me.

Mi: Riya!

Ri: Please Massi.

Mi: Alright! So, Prithvi you'll sleep with the boys. Is that ok?

Pr & Kr: Thanks!


Part 3

Kripa and Prithvi settled themselves in the house. Kripa with Riya and Prithvi with Ishaan and Harsh. Mishti came and informed them.

Mishti: Kripa, Prithvi. My brother has just gone out but he gave the permission to both of you.

Kripa: Thank you, Can you just explain me what will I have to do?

Mishti: Sure, Come.

Kripa: Prithvi, Let's go.

Mishti showed them the house, Kripa would make the food and Prithvi would water the garden.

Mishti: There is hardly any work, Even I only have to make the breakfast in the morning as per my brother's instructions. Some servants come to clean the house and go, Just food and garden which is not well taken care of.

Kripa: No problem, I love to cook and Prithvi loves Greenery.

Prithvi: Thank you so much!

Mishti: You both are lucky.

Mishti received a call and excused herself as Prithvi and Kripa went to their work.

Prithvi went to the garden and started to check each and every plant while Kripa just went to cook food. Mishti came in as she entered the kitchen.

Mishti: How is it going?

Kripa: As today's my first day, I wanted to know what does everyone like?

Anjali: Everyone together like Aloo ka parathas.

Kripa: Aloo ka paratha? Even I like it.

Mishti: So if you want you can make that.

Kripa: Thanks!

Kripa started cooking and the aroma soon filled the house. The children came running downstairs and sat at the dinning table. Prithvi entered the kitchen to help Kripa. Mishti sat waiting for food to be served. Lastly, Angad entered the house angry but it soon melted as he freshened himself and sat for lunch.

Angad: Mishti, Who's making food?

Mishti: The new nanny.

Angad: Wow!

Angad smiled as he would eat Aloo Paratha's after many years. The last time he ate was with... A lone tear escaped his eye and Mishti saw it.

Mishti: Bhaiya, Relax.

Angad: Ya, I'm eating the first one.

Riya: No Mama, She's my Nanny. I'm eating.

Angad: Ok Riya.

Prithvi came with a couple of paratha's with him and served.

Angad: Wow, everyone's having the first one.

Prithvi: Kripa makes the best Aloo paratha's.

Mishti: That I can really guarantee.

Kripa went on making, Prithvi served and everyone ate. After a while, they all finished food.

Riya: Krips ne kiya mast khanna banaya.

Mishti: Krips?

Riya: Pet name Massi.

Mishti: Oh!

Angad: Mishti, Do tell her, The food was delicious and it reminded me of someone.

Mishti: Sure.

Kripa made food for her and Prithvi while Prithvi and Mishti cleared the table. Both started to talk.

Prithvi: The plants were not taken care of.

Mishti: There wasn't anyone. Only she was but...

Prithvi: Any problem?

Mishti: No, Missing her today.

Prithvi: Who?

Mishti: My sister.

Prithvi: Another sister?

Mishti: Ya. Leave it, I'm going out. You and Kripa eat food.

Prithvi: Ok.

Prithvi entered with the dirty plates and placed them near the sink. He sat on the little table there.

Prithvi: Kripaji, Bahot bhook lag rahi hain.

Kripa: Kripa bolo, Aur sabko khana acha laga?

Prithvi: Haan.

Kripa came with the plates and sat with Prithvi.

Prithvi: You know, there was 1 more sister in this family.

Kripa: What? 1 more. Where is she?

Prithvi: Couldn't ask more.

Kripa: Oh,Ok.

Mishti came running inside.

Mishti: Kripa, Forgot my mobile and forgot to tell you 1 thing.

Kripa: What's that?

Mishti: Bhai liked your food very much and he said you reminded him of someone.

Kripa: May I know who?

Mishti: Our elder sister, Ok, Bye!

Kripa: Bye!

Prithvi heard the conversation and questioned Kripa.

Prithvi: I need to know who's this elder sister?

Kripa: Then ask the...

Prithvi: Kids?

Edited by kdrs - 29 June 2008 at 10:08am
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Character Sketch posted!!
kdrs Goldie

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Plz comment!
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
nice concept

lukin fwd for u to start

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