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Love in the Time of Orkut - Pt 6 - Pg 16 (Page 8)

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Chapter 2: What the Hell, Single at 22

The day had been tremendously hot as summer had just gone from bad to worse & had been taking quite a toll on the people.

NJ preferred a nice walk after their dinner rather than sit home n watch K- shows

as after a point they all had seemed so very boring, people dying & coming back from death, unusual plastic surgeries, replacement signs, immortal characters & a list of kids that would even confuse their on-screen parents as well as the kids as all looked alike were too much for the 2,

Cause anyhow their mom' updated em so didn't matter as much, both however loved to watch their favourite show F.R.I.E.N.D.S

Besides some good romantic n comedy shows, both were huge ardent Harry Potter Fans & watched all the parts released so far so many times that they had actually summarized the whole collection with the dialogues.

As they walked again in their premises on the grounds of their complex, once again the topic of their future sprang into action.

J: I loved the bag Pratik gifted u, yeh wohi bag hai Na Jo humne parso mall main dekhi thi?

N: ha usne humme dekha tha and he bought it for me as a gift

J: how sweet mera bada bhai hai aur tera chhota par phir bhi dekh mera bhai kabhi bhi meri gift meri pasand ki nahi laata naam mera hota hai aur use khud karta hai like parso jo I- pod usne mujhe diya

N: par I-pod toh tu bhi use kar sakti hai na phir?

J: ha par usne bahna bana liya

N: kaisa bahna?      

J: bola tere vacation hai abhi toh tab tak mujhe de pls job par jaate hue I will listen to music on the way. Aur le Gaya besharam

Both had a nice laugh on that comment n then J asked N d same thing as N had asked P as to how was he there? And she gave him the same answer that he was with his girlfriend Karisma, both took a deep breath & looked up t the sky above sitting quietly 4 a few moments before they once again began their talks , discussions, debates about their lives.

Pratik was younger to Neha so obviously was he to Jessica it seemed so miserable to both to be older n yet not have a boyfriend even once forget love while Pratik younger to em had already taken to the greener pastures in the dating grounds overtaking em.

It seemed sometimes the two felt older beyond their age as compared to em Pratik who was younger was completely ahead in this area where the 2 lagged behind seriously.

N: jess kya phir tu wohi sooch rahi hai?

J: hmmm aur kya karoo yaar kya hum itne bhure hai ki we haven't even had 1 boyfriend so far seriously it's so annoying sometimes 2 be single

N: tell me about it aur us par yeh nalayak Pratik kehta hai main buddhi ho rahi hu sometimes even I have nightmares gees this is really pathetic

J: ya I know

N: oh well but atleast we can be happy about the fact that we have no tensions tht r so frustrating, u no what if mom dad find out? What if they don't approve? Keeping up with your BF' demands besides atleast so what if we haven't found our so called Mr. right atleast we didn't bump into Mr. Wrong

J: ya thts true but still it would have been great to just have someone or else I think mom n dad would just marry me off to a boy of their choice n I'll go thru life without ever having dated even once

N: ya I know mom n dad been so behind me as well they wanna start looking 4 a boy ASAP they have been bugging me now 4 a week

J: u 2?

N: why is it happening with ur folks 2?

J: are you kidding me mom even out my profile on even without telling me I just found out & man did I ever have a huge fight with her

N: oh my god what r u serious?

J: of course man do u think I m kidding here it's my life at stake here

N: oh god I m thankful atleast my maa cant operate a PC or else I would have had a profile by now 2 ….. Gees jess what's happening with our life?

J: I wish I knew 2

N: damn another lonely birthday another year n here we are still alone, single & virgins that have never even kissed even at 22, what the hell!! Damn life sucks!!!

J: ya it does, big time.

Next Chapter: Oh! Brother, Life Sucks!!!

Edited by aahana86 - 28 May 2008 at 10:16am

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 6:55am | IP Logged
omg..m plzz..write..long..i love LOL ..n plzz..enter our heer..plz...fankx..for d part.. Embarrassed
kanan_26 Senior Member

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 7:01am | IP Logged
amazing amazing fantabulous!
i agree about the k soaps part!
i am eagerly waitig for hitens entry!
keep up the good work!
ud soon !
u rock miss perfect writer! Clap Clap Clap
princessunara IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 8:58am | IP Logged

aahana..ts jst so cute..dts da exact thn i felt..Embarrassed

lol..neha n jessica seems a lot lyk me..i can totally relate 2 them..watching friends,,harry potter,single @22(lol im nt even 20 anywaLOL)neha even has a kiddie bratty bro js lyk meLOL

i mean dis tm t seems so realastic..hw ur parents thnk..specially moms n future planning f da mariageLOLn da pc using thngy abt naha's mom..i jst luved every moment f continue still giggling while typing thisLOL

keep t up galClapClapClap

EimenEnchanted Goldie

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
wow! Wonderful ud!
Neha's choices are so like me!!!
loved the part.
pls ud soon...and pls a big one
loveabletwinz Goldie

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Posts: 1813

Posted: 28 May 2008 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
aahhhhh...i luved every moment of it aahana...briliantly written chicka....i love the way the story flows...well put...ahaha...i sooo agree with the K-soaps part...but what to do..ekta has made some UNFORGETTABLE couples..pheww...if it wasnt for them , none of us would writing or reading such wonderful FF's...well done aahana....:]
loveabletwinz Goldie

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Posts: 1813

Posted: 28 May 2008 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
and yes...uve got two new fans here...Annet & Janet...and we're reading ur FF :]
luv_pavi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 May 2008 at 8:06pm | IP Logged
Clap awesummm bothh r reallyy worriedd aboutt BFZ plzz get dem soonn LOL LOL LOL butt reallyy it wazzz superbb Big smile

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