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Love in the Time of Orkut - Pt 6 - Pg 16 (Page 16)

EkPahelii IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by k-ekta fan

well written part aahana.

thx god pratik save her..

wht dis deepika is 2 much.

1 he did favous 2 her..

2nd she shwed her own attitude

u no mona sometimes things happen

same is d case here

thou u may have good intentions however the fruits of it may not be always so gr8

ppl only believe what they see so deepika who was like nauseas  felt tht it was wrong of pratik  to do somehing like tht as she doenst know d truth

n sometimes ppl r spoiled cause of a lot of reasons

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kanan_26

itsr rocking!
amazing fantabulous!
im loving it!
never seen such perfection!
to update soon!
waiting for hits entry!
Clap Clap Clap

thx kanan EmbarrassedSmile

ur wish fulfilled HITZ ENTERS  Big smile
EkPahelii IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 4:15am | IP Logged
sorry 4 the late update guys Embarrassed
EkPahelii IF-Stunnerz

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Chapter 6: Morning Wake ups are a Disaster.

In the galaxy apartments on the 9th floor of a plush duplex flat that was handsomely decorated, rang a bell when a middle aged lady who was preparing the breakfast table excused herself from her work to answer it. (Smriti Irani aka the original Tulsi who replaced her replacement in Kyunki saas …)

She was wearing a peach colored salwar kameez & a light jewelry of earrings a chain with a diamond studded gold pendant & a huge watch on her left hand while a light bracelet in the other.

She opened the door to a tall muscular guy smiled as she answered it wishing her a good morning aunty.

He was in good shape had a naughty twinkle in his eyes & smile, wearing a track suit, in the colors of red & black was in the prime of his youth. With a slight beard & properly trimmed hair he was a shining example of a hunk.

Stepping inside the apartment as he did he asked the lady so aunty what's up?

Well everything but your friend isn't go & wake him up will you Aakash, she said.

A: what? Mujhe itni jaldi bula kar khud ab tak so raha hai tht weasel I'll show him.

Barging into a room at the left side that was the last on the corridor, he opened the door to a room which was pretty nicely disorganized for its own good.

On the left side was a computer table that nested a PC with all its other equipments like a sound system, printer, scanner, and couple of documents.

On the farthest end of the room that was painted in pastel shades of yellow were 2 huge closets, along with a small one on the left side that also acted as a TV unit, above which a plank housed a DVD system with high end speakers & a mega bass amplifier.

Towards the right side of the PC was a huge window with some lovely tapestry curtains that complimented the room.

Across the window was a huge king-size bed on which a guy was sleeping face down hugging his pillow with his blanket even covering his head, due to the cold cause of the AC which was right across his bed on the window.

Towards his right was a huge study table, laid close to the wall with a lamp shade & a couple of huge fat books that adorned his shelf as well as laid spread across the table with the stationery. Besides it near the bed was a huge mirror

Near the study table was the door to a spacious bathroom. A little corridor made way to a whole personalized world of Rishabh' room to which aakash opened the door.

The room was his world because Rishabh had everything in the room as per his choice and ideas. Pictures of him rested on a side table besides his bed along with a lamp, a water flask, a glass & an alarm clock he so despised.

The wall above his bed' headboard adorned a large size beautiful painting he drew. The painting was a scenic picture with a rich use of tints.

It was a landscape of a cliff high above the sea that was greeting the new day with a sunrise, where waves were in motion to meet the rocks that they splashed across hard only to be scattered into tiny droplets to reassemble.

Birds were spreading their wings & flying happily at the crack of dawn, while on the cliff covered in flora were two small figures facing the sun rising in the picture.

They were cuddled together as they sat on the prairie, with the girl' head resting on the boy' shoulder n their arms around each other.     

As beautiful as the painting was so quietly and serenely was its maker sleeping right under it when in what u may describe as a sudden typhoon the blanket that so lovingly was shielding him from cold n light were removed exposing the target to terrors such as sunlight, cold AC aerate & a very angry friend who had woken up all the way in the early morning at 6'o clock just to play a game of squash but had been stood up.

As soon as the protective shield of the blanket was gone Rishabh felt cold n sunlight he tried to hide his face under the pillow however that wasn't much of a help in the case of the cold.

His hands went searching for a blanket he had lost when suddenly out of the blue he felt a hard hit of a cylindrical object on his Butt & a second later he was hearing what really awakened him.

Next chapter: Bachelor Pad

Edited by aahana86 - 08 June 2008 at 4:16am
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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 5:40am | IP Logged
it was wonderful part aahana..

rishab at last his entry.

man he hve a gr8 hoice. d way his room is desing. gr8.

aahana ju expalin all his room so well.

kudos 2 ju Clap Clap Clap
luv_pavi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 6:42am | IP Logged
ohh goshh rishabzzzz choicee iz Clap well di an awesummm updateeeee Clap
kanan_26 Senior Member

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 6:49am | IP Logged
wow simply fab man!
fantabulous excellent!
im out of wadjectives wowowowo!
thanks for bringing hits in!
loveing it miss perfect!
keep it up and god bless!
loveabletwinz Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2008 at 10:43am | IP Logged
oh wow ahaana...u actually know people as dumb as deepika ? phewww...lolz..
ok now to part that brilliant or whatttt ?!?!?! wow...i couldnt have put the discription of the room any better...finally, akash and rishab :] yayyyy...lolz..but yeah...beautifully written the flow it had, everything was so specific and wonderfully put...good job with this an absolute fan :] or should i say "we are" lolz

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