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FF: Manzil *Authors Note* 6/16/08 (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 6:43am | IP Logged
that was a brill start...
you have to continue it...
pls...

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The next installment and so far no writers block, of course in the next update RanKan will meet!

 

Sunil might have deceived Anand into signing away his business to him, but he hadn't taken the house. The once warm and laughter filled house was suddenly cold and solemn. Kanya slowly walked around the house seeing her father everywhere she turned, she could hear his laughter, she could picture him sitting on his large leather chair reading his paper and smoking his favorite cigar but as the tears welled the image blurred and soon disappeared. Much to her dismay she had to let go of all the naukers; she couldn't possibly afford to pay them. She hadn't a clue what to do next having no extended family was also no help, and even the friends had turned their backs on her, she had nothing and no one while striding up the stairs she suddenly broke out in to sobs, she couldn't make it to her bed, she couldn't even make to her room and so she sat, sat on the stairs and wept uncontrollably.

 

The warm shower had been a relief but it didn't ease the pain in her heart. A week had passed since her divorce, she hadn't once stepped out of the house, most of the time she had cried; it was hard when no one was around to pacify or hold you but she had to step out and buy things for the house after all she had to go on…for her fathers sake!

 

Perhaps it was because of her empty stomach, perhaps it was fatigue or perhaps it was just a misconception of her eyes but she knew she felt people looking at her different, and those whispers they were driving her insane, but she strode on. The friendly shopkeepers were now giving bitter looks, the passerby's looked displeased…what was wrong? Was their something on her face? Why was everyone acting so cold? And that is when she heard it, it had come from the Mouth of Mrs. Chadda her own neighbor, a women she had known since she was a child, a women who had welcomed her into her home many times!

 

Mrs.Chadda- kaisi besharam hai, patti ne shaadi ki raat hi chod diya, na jaane isse kya bimaari hogi, dekho toh is kamzart ko budhe baap ko bhi kha gayi!

 

And that is when it all started, she heard more taunting this time from people she didn't even know they were all pointing at her, staring at her, calling her names! that was enough, that was more than enough for Kanya, she couldn't fathom it, any of it…she had to get away…she had to RUN away!

 

Two Years had passed since she sold her house it had been heart wrenching leaving the house you grew up in, but it had to be done, she couldn't move forward had she stayed she knew the everyday stares and taunts would have driven her mad, so she had picked up whatever she could and left…that day would always be etched in her mind, she watched as her house grew small in the distance and then is disappeared as her car turned at the curb. She had decided to leave all the bad memories behind and take with her only the good.

 

Godbole Interiors Inc. was started with the money she had received from the house. Interior decorating had always been a passion and what better then to make a living from that passion? At first it had only been Kanya but then Shruti had come along begging for a job. Shruti was a middle class girl who wanted in some way to help her mother in running the house, but landing a good job that too in the field of interior decorating was not an easy task in Mumbai. Kanya had immediately felt for Shruit and had hired her but once an employee had soon turned in to a friend; Kanya's only friend. Shruti did not taunt or think vile of Kanya instead she had cried with her and alleviated her pain. They had worked hard to make the business a success, landing small jobs paid the bills but it didn't not give them the recognition they needed. It was Kanya's dedication and contemporary thought process that had helped them land an interview with the MD of RN, Inc. The company was opening a new 500 bedroom hotel and Kanya had wanted badly to get a chance to decorate the hotel, the money she'd get would be huge of course but this would also help her get the acknowledgment GI, Inc. needed.

 

Ranbir woke to the sound of the alarm he had set on his cell phone. Shutting the alarm off he lazily turned and came face to face with Shonali. God she was one gorgeous piece of work, thought Ranbir, He had already planned this night the moment he laid eyes on her and she being, carefree and willing had happily agreed to a night of ecstasy.

 

Shonali- (sleepily) Morning

Ranbir- You have exactly 10 minutes to clean up and go (smiling)

Shonali- what? (Confused)

 

Ranbir gets up and starts to tie his robe "you heard me you have 10 minutes to clean up and leave I am going to go take a shower, and oh please clean up your clutter…I hate a mess that is not made by me"

 

Shonali- how can you be so shameless, we have just spent the night together and…

Ranbir- (cuts her off) we had only agreed to a night and that night is now over, so please pick up your things and get out!

 

Shonali groaned in anger and quickly pick up her things to leave but before slamming the door she gave him one stern look and yelles "YOU ARE DESPICABLE" Ranbir only gave her his award winning Grin and headed for the shower.

 

Ranbir had a meeting with Keisha, no Kaya oh whatever her name is at 9 but before that he had to go meet his mother and grandmother at the Nanda Mansion. He often stayed in one of his hotel suites whenever he had a date, everyone knew not to disturb him when he was busy with his "guest" His mother and grandmother knew of his antics and didn't approve a bit but there was no stopping Ranbir. His mom and Big D were the only women he loved in the world, all the others he despised and used merely for pleasure, but no matter how much he loved his two ladies it didn't mean he always had to listen to them.

 

Malika was praying when her son walked in, she had not seen him for 2 days but knew the important "work" he had to do. As per ritual she took the "aarti ki thaali" to him and put a "tikka" on his head, secretly praying that may he change his ways and find a good girl soon to settle down with. It was the same thing she had asked from god everyday and Ranbir knew that but chose to ignore it. He didn't want to settle down and there was no such thing as a "good girl" They were all the same greedy and selfish. Marriages led to only one thing and that was divorce!, sooner or later people would get tired of each other and move on to someone else…his father did. Malika saw the hint of anger flash into her sons eyes, she knew what he was thinking and she couldn't do anything to change that.

 

Malika sighed and continued- Big D apne kamre main hain, kal se tumhe bahut yaad kar rahi hai, jao pehle un se mil aao main breakfast lagati hoon

 

As soon as Ranbir started to walk upstairs his mother called out to him, he walked back to her and was about to question when Malika held his face in her hands and kissed his forehead. He could see the tears and feel their pain.

 

Ranbir- come on Mom (engulfing her into a hug)

Malika- (sobbing) yeh bhi koi baat hui Ranbir tu do din se ghar nahi aaya, patah hai hum kitne taras jaate hai tujhe dekhne ke liye

Ranbir- I know I am sorry mom, woh mera kaam…

Malika- haan haan mujhe sab maloom hai tere kaam ke baare mein

 

Ranbir only grinned, of course his mother knew but still talking about your escapades with your mom was not the best thing to do

 

Big D- Ranbir tu aagaya puttar

 

Big D was already making her way down stairs, though they had a elevator in the house, Big D had refused to use it, if told she would retort back and say "main koi budhi thodi na hoon"

Ranbir instantly ran to his grandmother and touched her feet

 

Big D- jeeta reh puttar, chal do din ke baad hi sahi, lekin tu aaya toh

Ranbir hugging her now "sorry sorry sorry Big D, who mein thoda busy ho gaya tha"

Big D- haan puttar main sab samjhti hoon, chal naashta karle

 

Big D and Malika forced three aalo parantha's down Ranbir's throat, they fed him lovingly with their own hands, Ranbir had no option but to eat. They chatted at little with the two women still bringing up his marriage here and there. An hour passed and Ranbir had only 20 minutes to make it to his meeting with Keisha or Kaya or whatever her name was.

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 8:50am | IP Logged
great part
continue soon
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 9:05am | IP Logged
great FF!
continue soon
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wow sucha good start luv it allready ...

plese update soooooooon im waiting:::D
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 11:03am | IP Logged
very cool...
pls continue soon
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Thank you guys appreciate the support and feedback!! Tongue
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keisha or kaya, or whatever her name was LOL
tht displays attitude babes!!!
and ya oh wow!! ranbir is a pure playa here!!waiting!

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