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Dust of the Dandelions (2)-14A-pg17-6/21 (Page 19)

Miss_Diey Goldie

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Posts: 1767

Posted: 22 June 2008 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
I can't wait to read the downs and conflicts.
I'm so excited, should i prepare some kleenex Cry .
Anyway, i'm ready for read a very bad thing, i'm prepared so you can update when you want. Wink

khushboo2006 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 29 November 2006
Posts: 4351

Posted: 22 June 2008 at 2:35pm | IP Logged

Awwwwwww Shoba I am sorry for being late with my comments Ouch

Wonderful part Big smile .....loved the poem a lot Clap Clap ....so aptly penned for this part Clap Clap Clap ......JB's banter on the phone was touching......could feel how both of them were going through Cry .....hope Jai is going to fulfill his Kasamh to Bani Wink Tongue .....but as you said I can feel something bad is definitely going to happen Confused Ouch Ouch ....poor Nattu....glad that Jai took Nattu's responsibility and how he was trying to make him feel good Smile .....descriptions of Amarnath caves were fabulous Clap Clap .....thanks for the info....as always enjoyed reading your writing Clap

A poem for JBTongue

A flower grows from beneath a blanket
Of fine and purest white
It reaches toward the sun for warmth,
For heat and for the light

My love for you grows stronger still,
Despite the surrounding cold
My heart is yours, bartered gone
For yours has it been sold

Its petals shine from morning dew
Its stem grows stiff and strong
It stands strong through the freezing cold
It stands the winter long

I long for you, for your soft touch
I miss the way you smile
The longer that we stay apart
The longer every mile

The flower stretches through the snow
It reaches toward the sun
And now without you the color is gone
The flower's petals, dun

But as we talk, and as we learn
The flower comes back to life
The snow now melts and goes away
As you take away my strife

Spring is here and growth abounds
As you and I are one
We are together, we are in love
The snow for now is done

I see the future, in dreams I have
Of our life, long and true
I see the times where all I need
Are comforting words from youTongue

Edited by khushboo2006 - 22 June 2008 at 2:42pm
Hkaurk22 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 May 2005
Posts: 7934

Posted: 22 June 2008 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Hmm althoug their banter was cute, I know he wont see his wifey.. I hope hes there for the birth, but good to see that Nattu is getting better. i hope their relationship gets better.. love how he is taking care of his younger brother- wanting to take care of everyone...
msrk Senior Member

Joined: 01 August 2005
Posts: 959

Posted: 22 June 2008 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Hey sheena,
Lovely update....

Bani needs jai so much..yet destiny is not making them meet...

GLad nattu has started coming out of his shell...and his feelings towards bani are changing..

WOuld love to see how nattu and bani's relationship grows..

Awesome update...continue sooner this time..
moonlitnight IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 August 2007
Posts: 4914

Posted: 23 June 2008 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Hi Di
wonderful update
glad that Nachi is coming round
now waiting to see how Jai manofies Bani Tongue
hope he makes it on time Tongue LOL
great part Clap
plz cont soon

PS- are you rushing the story? Confused
divan IF-Rockerz

Joined: 13 February 2007
Posts: 6331

Posted: 23 June 2008 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
MMMmmm...great update. You know the brothers bonding...even though our poor Bani has been left alone. But I am sure the sacrifice JW made will be worth it na...

As usual the travelogue of the trek is great...and I can't go Cry

I am looking forward to the bros coming home and hope there will be some nice bonding happening between the JB too... Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
ragamthalam0 Goldie

Joined: 29 August 2007
Posts: 1227

Posted: 23 June 2008 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
He left bani when she pregs,, she must be upset ,, nachiket is finally coming around pls continue soon
amiee IF-Dazzler

Joined: 27 August 2006
Posts: 3503

Posted: 23 June 2008 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
wonderful part finally nachiket is coming around i hope jai and bani meet soon and nachiket also accepts bani as his bhabhi

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