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Dust of the Dandelions (2)-14A-pg17-6/21 (Page 19)

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Sheena,

Another long awaited but great update Wink

I am glad that Nachiketh has finally rid himself of all the hatred and anger that he has carried in is heart. Now hopefully Nattu & Bani can share a proper Devar/Bhabhi relationship.

I'm glad that Jai confessef his indescretions and screw-ups to Nattu, because Nattu raised Jai up on a pedestal that was undeserving and had an image of Jai that was not really true. At least now he knows that his brother also made mistakes.

Great Part Clap

Whens teh next update LOL Wink

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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Hi Ruma, Diey, Renu, Hearme21, Taz234, dmg12, Nazneen:

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I understand all of you are worried about what is going to happen to JB...but without a conflict there is no story. I have postponed and changed the conflict scenes a few times already to appease the readers at their request. I don't want to write a story without the ups and downs.

There will be the downs, there will be the conflicts, there will be twists and turning points. But in the end, I am a sucker for romance so all will be well. Big smile Big smile Big smile

Love,
-- S
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 10:56am | IP Logged
sheena di..u updated god knws where i was LOL LOL glad nattu and jai sorted their relationship out and there are no hard feelings...but me thinks in the whole process jai has forgotten about his wife and his kid and bani's feeling it Ouch bechari bani Ouch pls update soon!
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
hey sheena
awesome part..n gr8 description of Amarnath trip..

hope nachiket shares gr8 relationship wth all familly members esp. JB..

cont.sooon
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
I can't wait to read the downs and conflicts.
I'm so excited, should i prepare some kleenex Cry .
Anyway, i'm ready for read a very bad thing, i'm prepared so you can update when you want. Wink
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 2:35pm | IP Logged

Awwwwwww Shoba I am sorry for being late with my comments Ouch

Wonderful part Big smile .....loved the poem a lot Clap Clap ....so aptly penned for this part Clap Clap Clap ......JB's banter on the phone was touching......could feel how both of them were going through Cry .....hope Jai is going to fulfill his Kasamh to Bani Wink Tongue .....but as you said I can feel something bad is definitely going to happen Confused Ouch Ouch ....poor Nattu....glad that Jai took Nattu's responsibility and how he was trying to make him feel good Smile .....descriptions of Amarnath caves were fabulous Clap Clap .....thanks for the info....as always enjoyed reading your writing Clap

A poem for JBTongue

A flower grows from beneath a blanket
Of fine and purest white
It reaches toward the sun for warmth,
For heat and for the light

My love for you grows stronger still,
Despite the surrounding cold
My heart is yours, bartered gone
For yours has it been sold

Its petals shine from morning dew
Its stem grows stiff and strong
It stands strong through the freezing cold
It stands the winter long

I long for you, for your soft touch
I miss the way you smile
The longer that we stay apart
The longer every mile

The flower stretches through the snow
It reaches toward the sun
And now without you the color is gone
The flower's petals, dun

But as we talk, and as we learn
The flower comes back to life
The snow now melts and goes away
As you take away my strife

Spring is here and growth abounds
As you and I are one
We are together, we are in love
The snow for now is done

I see the future, in dreams I have
Of our life, long and true
I see the times where all I need
Are comforting words from youTongue



Edited by khushboo2006 - 22 June 2008 at 2:42pm
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Hmm althoug their banter was cute, I know he wont see his wifey.. I hope hes there for the birth, but good to see that Nattu is getting better. i hope their relationship gets better.. love how he is taking care of his younger brother- wanting to take care of everyone...
msrk Senior Member
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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Hey sheena,
Lovely update....

Bani needs jai so much..yet destiny is not making them meet...

GLad nattu has started coming out of his shell...and his feelings towards bani are changing..

WOuld love to see how nattu and bani's relationship grows..

Awesome update...continue sooner this time..

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