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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 5)

Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!

Poor Raj Cry Cry !!!Kitna pyaar karta hai Naina se!!!!

Aur uske Dad ko sab kuch pata hai phir bhi hamesha Raj ko nazarandaz karte rahe!!! Angry Angry

Raj ne apna kamre uski photos se bhar rakhi hai Embarrassed Embarrassed Cry !!!!Hai kitna pyaar karta hai!!!

Bas Raj ko uska pyaar mil jaye!!

yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!

Poor Raj Cry Cry !!!Kitna pyaar karta hai Naina se!!!!

Aur uske Dad ko sab kuch pata hai phir bhi hamesha Raj ko nazarandaz karte rahe!!! Angry Angry

Raj ne apna kamre uski photos se bhar rakhi hai Embarrassed Embarrassed Cry !!!!Hai kitna pyaar karta hai!!!

Bas Raj ko uska pyaar mil jaye!!

haa..woh to milna hi chahie..kyonki woh RAJ hai..
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 5:56am | IP Logged
HEY AWESOME WORK SUCH A BEATIFUL STORY LINE AND CONCEPT FANTABULOUS UD I JUST LOVED IT KEEP IT UP RAJ KI FEELING OHH..GOD PEHLI NAZAR MAIN HI PYAR HOGAYA TOO GOOD AUR WALL PE ITNI SAARI PHOTOS SUPERB.... AAKHIR WO B RAJ HAI Wink AISA HI KAREGA
YOU R WONDERFUL MY FRIEND SUCH A GREAT FF ITS A FRESH BREATH 4 ME I M REALLY LOOKIN FORWARD 4 NEXT UD Tongue
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yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 6:35am | IP Logged

Originally posted by angel khan

HEY AWESOME WORK SUCH A BEATIFUL STORY LINE AND CONCEPT FANTABULOUS UD I JUST LOVED IT KEEP IT UP RAJ KI FEELING OHH..GOD PEHLI NAZAR MAIN HI PYAR HOGAYA TOO GOOD AUR WALL PE ITNI SAARI PHOTOS SUPERB.... AAKHIR WO B RAJ HAI Wink AISA HI KAREGA
YOU R WONDERFUL MY FRIEND SUCH A GREAT FF ITS A FRESH BREATH 4 ME I M REALLY LOOKIN FORWARD 4 NEXT UD Tongue
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thanks..I will try to write up to the mark..

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 11:19am | IP Logged

"bechainiaaaaan..betabiaaannnn..yeh dooriaan.. dhushvaariaaaaaaaaa... mushkil badaaaaaaaaa..yeh pyaar hai.....yeh pyaar hai..."


TV pe yeh gana dikha rahe hai..aur Rajveer..sofe pe baith kar sharaab pee raha hai..

Raj--yeh ladki bechain ho rahi hai ladke k lia..aur..mujhe to yeh bhi nahi malum k ladki mere bare me sochti bhi hogi k nahi?..

 

achanak..Raj k andar se kisine kaha.....


"Rajveer..kyaa kar rahe ho?Naina tumhari bhabhi hai..kya tumko malum nahi?koi parai ladki nahi..tumhari sage bhai ki biwi..Ranveer tumse kitna pyaar karta hai..uske pyaar aur bharose k badle tum kyaa kar rahe ho?"

Rajveer--my foot..ab mujhe apni zindagi jeeni hai..bahut  ban chuka achha beta..achha bhai..ab mujhe bhi jeena hai..Rajveer ban k..ek azad insaan ban k..

"par azadi ka matlab yeh to nahi k tum aisi wahiaat harkat karo..sage bhai ki biwi par buri nazar daalo.."

Raj--buri nazar kaha daal raha hoon?shadi karunga main usse..main kaha bol raha hoon..k Ranveer ki biwi mere sath extra marital ..Ranveer ko chhod de..mere paas aaye..bakaida shadi karunga usse..baizzat usko apni patni banaunga..aur Ranveer kyaa de sakta hai?main sab kuchh dunga jo Naina deserve karti hai.."

"Naina kyon aayegi tumhare paas?Ranveer k saath bahut khush hai woh.."

Rajveer--my foot..Naina..nahi..usko mere paas ana hi hoga..

"jo kabhi ho nahi sakta..uske bare me sochna chhod do Raj.."

Rajveer ..tab ek glass utha kar fek mara..aur kamre ka jhoomar toot gaya..


"Raj..kyaa hua Sunny?"

Raj k dad apne kamre se daur k aaye..

Raj ne apna haath bhi zakhmi kar lia hai...

Dad--Raj..don't do it..yeh ghalat hai..Sunny..yeh sach hai k maine saari ummeede tumse lagai..ok..ab tum jo marzi karo..jisse chaahe shadi karo..but woh tumhari bhabhi hai Raj..Naina Ranveer ki biwi hai..

Raj--I don't mind..and I really don't care..dad..

Raj k dad..pareshaan hue..

unhone khat likha Banaras..

Raj ko is bare me koi khabar hi nahi..

"Ranveer,

         jab kisi k ghar pe judwa bete paida hote hai..unko bahut khushi hoti hai.par meri kismat me yeh sukh nahi.jaanta hoon..maine tumko khud se door rakha..ghar par ane se rok laga di maine..par iske pichhe wajah thi tumhari patni Naina.agar tum Banaras se akele laut te..to baat aur thi..par tumko Naina se behad mohabbat hai..jaanta hoon..tum Mumbai mat aao..kyon ki..batate hue sharam aa rahi hai..Rajveer Naina se pyaar karne laga hai..uska pyaar uske lia junoon ban chuka hai.maine mana kia tha tumko k Naina se related koi bhi chees ghar par mat bhejna..par tumne uski tasveer bhej di..Sunny ne jis din se Naina ko dekha hai..usi din se Sunny paagal ho chuka hai ..Naina k pyaar me...pata hai..jab tum dono paida hue the..tab doctor ne yeh kaha tha..k jo tumko pasand aayegi wahi chees k lia Rajveer bhi diwana hoga.dono ki pasand ek jaisi hi hogi..par itna simmilar hoga..maine socha nahi tha..Rajveer ko tumhari hi patni se pyaar hoga..yeh bhi nahi socha tha.Ranveer ab tak  tumne meri koi baat nahi maani..ek akhri baat maan lo..jitni jaldi ho sake Banaras se shift ho jaao..main Delhi k JNU me tumhare lia sifaarish kar dunga..tum wahi chale jaao..Naina ko lekar..aur khabardar Rajveer ko mat batana k tum kaha gaye..aur bhul kar bhi Naina ki mulakat na ho paye..Raj se ..is baat ka khayal rakhna.tum 2 4 saal Delhi me raho..tumhara koi bachcha ho jaye..is bich main Raj ki shadi karane ki koshish karta hoon.But make sure..is bich Naina yaa tum Raj se nahi miloge.promise me.Naina par Raj ki nazar pad chuki hai.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Dad"

 

2 din baad yeh khat Ranveer k paas pahucha speed post me..sath hi JNU me Interview ka letter..likha hai formallity k lia hai..uski appointment fixed hai.

par dad ki chitthi padh kar Ranveer thoda hairan hua..

Raj is in love with Naina?

how can it be possible?

Ranveer ko yaad aya..Rajveer kitna desparate tha Natasha k lia..jab k sirf baat hui thi Natasha k sath Ranveer ki shadi ki..

lekin dad ki baaton se lagta hai k Rajveer ne is baar had paar ki hai..

kahi Rajveer Banaras aa gaya to?Naina k lia tamasha zaroor karega..

Ranveer ne ..Naina ko Dehradun bhejne ka faisla kia..par usko kuchh nahi bataya..

Naina--nahi mujhe Dehradun nahi jana..abhi humara marriege register karna hai..

Ranveer--trust me..JNU ka interview de ke wapas aaoon..fir main khud aaonga tumko Dehradun se lene..please Naina..its a very good opportunity.. please..main yeha nahi rahunga..tum thode dino k lia jaao..apni mummy k paas jaake raho..fir to hum saath Delhi me rahenge..please..

Naina--main bhi tumhare saath ja sakti hoon..Delhi..

Ranveer--please..Naina..meri baat maano..

Naina chali gai Dehradun..

Naina Dehradun gai 24th October,2004 ko..

Ranveer Delhi k lia rawana hua 26th ko..

30th October..Delhi se wapas aa raha tha Ranveer..bus se Banaras town tak pahuchne wala tha..aur..accident hua..

hospital me jab hosh aya..tab pahla khayal..Naina..uska kyaa hoga?

jinhone usko admit karvaya tha..unhise kaha Ranveer ne..k mere bag me mere bhai ka number hai..usko phone karo...

Rajveer Pune jaane wala tha..airport me tha..tab uska mobile baja..

khabar mila..Pune ki ticket cancel karvake..pahucha Lucknow..fir waha se car se gaya Banaras ..hospital..

Raj ne dekha..Ranveer akhri saanse geen raha hai..

Rajveer--bhai..

Ranveer--bhaiya..mera waqt pura hua..

Rajveer--nahi bhaiya..

Ranveer--maut se nahi darta.par Naina ka kyaa hoga?woh to Dehradun me mere intezar me din kaat rahi hai..

Rajveer--usko khabar kyon nahi kia?

Ranveer--bardast nahi kar payegi..

Rajveer--main abhi usko phone karta hoon..

Ranveer--nahi bahut der ho chuki hai..par Naina k lia..ek wada kar..uska khayal rakhega..

Rajveer--haa..

Ranveer--janta tha..tu pyaar jo bahut karta hai usko..

Rajveer ko bahut bada jhatka laga..

Ranveer--dad ne khat likh kar sab bataya tha..isi lia main chaahta tha..k usko tujhse door le jaaoon..aur dekh,..main khud hi usse door janewala hoon..

Rajveer rone laga..

Ranveer--jab accident hua..tab Naina ka khayal sab se pahle aya..aur teri yaad aai..mere baad..agar mujhse bhi zyada koi usko pyaar kar sakta hai..to woh tu hai Raj..wada kar..Naina ko dukh nahi dega kabhi...dad se bhi zyada bharosa karta hoon..tujh par..isi lia usko tere hawale kar k jana chaahta hoon..Rajveer..


Ranveer ki saanse phool ne lagi..

Rajveer--nahi bhaiya..suno..

Ranveer--dad ki baato se dar laga tha..par aaj koi darr nahi..sun..mere antim sanskaar k baad..Dehradun jana..aur...aur..

Rajveer--bhai..bhai....kyaa hua..doctor.....


Doctor aya.."he has just passed away.."


Rajveer ne phone kia apne dad ko...

unhone akar Ranveer ki laash dekhi..

Ranveer ka antim sanskar kar k wapas aaye..Mumbai..


4th November..

Raj subha uth kar dad ko good morning bolne gaya.....

ek kagaz zameen pe pada hua mila..

"Raj
    Ranveer ki wajah se main Naina ko door bhej raha tha..par ab uska kyaa hoga..Ranveer to nahi raha..Naina ko apna lena..yehi meri akhri ichha hai.. isko puri karna.."


Raj ghabra kar dad k paas gaya..

Doctor ne kaha..unki maut neend me hi ho gai..bahut sukoon se mare hai woh..


pahle bhai ki maut..aur fir baap bhi aise chala gaya..

Rajveer ka man uub gaya is sab se...

par humesha Ranveer ki baatein..dad ka khat..na Raj ko sone deta..na chain pane deta..


                                                           


 



Edited by yakkudimag - 05 August 2008 at 8:00am

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 11:50am | IP Logged
oh my god
awsome
superb
too good
just loved the update
u rocked di
great going
waah!kya situation create kiya
nice plot
waiting for u'r next update
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
o god...what a touchy and a emotionful update...i m feeling like crying...amazing indeed...thanks di for this terrific update Claphats off to u di
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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
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