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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 42)

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Posted: 19 March 2009 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
plz update it

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Posted: 23 March 2009 at 2:10am | IP Logged
Sorry Anu i am too much late here Ouch i know par mai kya kar bhi sakti hoon yahan aa k jab bhi mai parts padhti thi tab ek baar me do se jyada nahi padh paayi khair ab maine sab padh iiya hai yahan n indeed it's awesome fic yaar. Smile
Talaash k baad maine is ko padhna start kiya tha n it's superb.Clap Ek jaise do log aur dono se Naina ki shaadi hona aur jab sach aaya Naina k saamne she was shocked Shocked but Raj ne us k liye jo kuch bhi kiya hai shayad vo aur koi nahi kar sakta tha.Approve
Par tum ne is ko update karna kyoun chod diya Confused that's amazing yaar jaldi se aage continue karo na.Smile


Edited by desaiprachi07 - 23 March 2009 at 2:15am
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Yaar..insaan ki problems hoti hai..family problems..worj pressure..padhai ka pressure.. bahut readers aise hain jinka exam hota hai tab comment nahi karte..meri bhi problems hai..varna khamokha ud naa karoon..aisa kyun karoongi??ConfusedOuch
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 31 March 2009 at 1:28am | IP Logged

I thank all of you from my heart..

digimon_pockemon,fanatic 21,vvdn,varshita,gazal_sameer,watch rajeev,prerna 1,rituka 7,Mahak,Shaina,desaiprachi..

 
 
 
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Posted: 31 March 2009 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Aditya ab bolne bhi laga hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHow cute!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==I know..

Raj ko apna bachpan wapas mil gaya aur woh apne zindagi ka saara adhurepan uske zarie pura karna chahte hai!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Very obvious..

Aditya ko sab kuch milna chahiye jo Raj ko nahi mila!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveHow sweet!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==Very true..

Aditya spoilt Raj's papers!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueNaina was angry with him but Raj is so cool about it!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileHe is really a great dad!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap==Yes..My Dady  Zindabad..

Naina ko yeh ehsaas hai ke Raj usse bahut pyaar karta hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile==Hona hi chahie..

Jitna pyaar Ranveer ne usko diya hai usse kayi zyada pyaar Raj ne usko diya hai aur yeh baat Naina bhi manti hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Arre..maanna hi chahie..

Naina feels guilty magar Sunita ne usse sahi samjhaya ke usne Raj se hi pyaar kiya hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==Sunita bahut samajhdar hai..

Naina ko identity crisis ho gayi hai!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyYeh Naina simple cheezo ko complicated kyun bana deti hai!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove==Uski marzi..

Sunita ne sahi kaha ke Naina ka aur apne bete ka bahut khayal rakhta hai!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile==Arre..sahi baat hai..

Yeh accha laga jaanke ke Naina Raj se naraz nahi hai aur usse ehsaas hai ke Raj ko kya kya jhelna pada hoga!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Arre..haan bhai haan..Naina ko pata hai..

Raj ne itna zyada pyaar kiya tha Naina se ke aate hi apni saari property uske naam kar di thi!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap==Aha..Shaina ko badi khushi hai..real me aisa nahi hota..

Ab isse zyada kya saboot de apne pyaar ka!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused==Kaun maang raha hai?

Accha huya yeh sab baatein Raj ne sun liya!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileAb Raj ko yeh pata hai ke Naina bhi Raj se hi pyaar karti hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile==Hmm..

Raj apne bete ko uski maa ki kahani suna raha tha!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL==Raj bhi shaitaan hai..

Yeh jaan kar ki Raj ne uski baatein sun li hai Naina phir se gussa ho gayi!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry==Haan..Naina ka nature hai..kuchh bhi ho sakta hai..

Aditya bahut samajdar hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileUsse pata hai uski maa kaisi hai isilye usse apne dad ke paas rehna zyada pasand hai!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile==Adi is a brilliant kid.Desh ka naam raushan karega..

Raj ne sahi kaha ke aajkal Appu itna chidha huya rehta hai ke Naina ka beta zyada lagta hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL==Raj ko maar khane ka bada shaukh hai..

Sukhar hai subah everything was back to normal!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==Hmm..

I hope Naina jaldi hi Raj ko apni zindagi mein woh jagah dede which he rightly deserves!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==Hope so..

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 31 March 2009 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hey sorry Anu,SmileSmileSmile

Mujhe time nahi mil paa raha tha .OuchOuchOuch Pad to maine liya hi tha par ab mujhe time mila to mai reply de rahi hoon.==It's okay..

Naina ka sochna apni jagah par sahi hai. Mujhe lagta hai ek ladki ho kar us ko ye ehsaas hona obvious hai ki jis se us ne pyaar kiya ye vo insaan nahi hai ApproveApproveApprove par shayad Ranveer se jyada pyaar Raj ne us ko diya hai aur ye baat Naina bhi maanti hai.WinkWinkWink Naina ki maa bhi sahi keh rahi hain ki Naina ka bahut khayal rakhta hai Rajeev aur apne bete ka bhi.ApproveApprove ApproveRaj ne to itna jyada pyaar kiya tha ki aate hi apni saari property Naina k naam kar di thi ab is se jyada apne pyaar ka kya saboot de vo.UnhappyUnhappyUnhappy ==Haan..par Naina needs some time..
Raj ki bhi aadat bahut gandi hai apni biwi aur saas ki baatein chip kar sun raha tha naughty nahi to.LOLLOLLOL Vaise ek baat to hai kam se kam Raj ko ye pata hai ab ki Naina bhi Raj se hi pyaar karti hai TongueTongueTongue ye alag baat hai ki bus gusse me kabhi kuch ka kuch kehti hai  aur is k saath hi saath bahut jyada confuse bhi rehti hai. LOLLOLLOL Tabhi apne bete ko Raj apni maa ki kahani suna raha tha aur sahi keh raha tha.TongueTongueTongue==Raj ko maar khaane ka bahut shaukh chadha tha..LOL
Bus ab dekhna yahi hai ki madam Naina kab Raj ko apni zindagi me vo jagah deti hai jis ka Raj vaastav me hakdaar hai.ConfusedConfusedConfused==Hmm..let's see..
 
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Dus din baad ki baat hai,26th May,

Raj ghar waapas aaya..dekha,,Appu Sunita k goad me so raha hai..

Raj--Maa..Naina kaha hai?

Sunita--Matlab?Woh tumhare saath nahi hai?

Raj--Jee?Nahi toh..

Sunita--Pata nahi..cresh se waapas aai..Appu ko mere paas rakh kar gayi.. yeh keh kar k tumhare paas jaa rahi hai..tumhare office..

Raj--Kab gayi hai?

Sunita--Do ghanta pahle..

Raj--Uske mobile par phone kijiye zara...

Par Naina ka phone nahi lag raha hai..unreachable aa raha hai..Raj ne har jagah phone kia..Raj fir se baahar nikla..par Naina ka kahi koi pata nahi..ab aise waqt par Naina k Dad bhi nahi hain..unko kisi kaam se Dehradun jaana pada..Sunita akeli hai,Appu hai unke saath..Raj ko ghar lautna pada..ghar laut kar jab Raj Parvez ko phone kar k sab bataane laga..tabhi Naina aai..Raj ne dekha ..Naina ko..

Sunita aage badh kar Naina ko daantne lagi..is tarha ki harkat ka kyaa matlab?Appu ro raha hai..ghar k baaki log pareshaan hai..bata kar jaana tha..jhoot kyon bola..phone kyon nahi kia?Naina ne sirf itna kaha ,"Zaroori kaam tha.."

Raj ko bahut gussa aa gaya hai..is tarha pure ghar ko pareshaan kar k is tarha Naina ka react karna..koi afsos nahi..koi dukh nahi..par abhi Sunita Naina ko baatein suna rahi hai..Sunita k saamne Naina ko kuchh bolna theek nahi rahega..Raj ne kaha ," Apne kamre me jaao..main aata hoon.."


Raj k mobile par uske Vakil ka phone aaya...

Raj--Hello..

"Mr.Malhotra..aaj Mrs.Malhotra aai thi ..mere chamber me..I am sorry..bheed zyada thi..unko kafi der tak intezar karna pada..par ajeeb si baatein kar rahi thi..keh rahi thi poori jaidad waapas aap k naam karni hai..main kuchh samajh nahi paaya.."

Raj samajh gaya..usne kaha ,"Theek hai..aap ne bata dia..main baad me baat karta hoon..thank you.."..


Naina ka yeh pagalpan itna badh gaya hai..Raj pareshaan ho gaya..ab property hand over karne ki baat bhi aai..kyaa karega Raj?Naina k lia kya koi saboot kaafi nahi?Ab Raj se bardasht nahi hota..aankhon k saamne Naina is tarha khud par zulm karti hai..yeh baat Raj seh nahi paata..Raj rona chaahta hai..par rone k lia bhi toh kisika kandha chahie..aisa koi hai bhi nahi..

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Naina apni almaari saaf kar rahi thi..Appu bistar me so rah tha..raat k 11 baje hain..

Raj aaya..bola,"Kuchh baat karni hai..tum Vakil k paas kyun gayi?"

Naina--Pata chal gaya?Vakil Saab ne puri baat nahi batai?Batana toh chahie..

Raj--Tumhe hua kyaa hai Naina?Bar bar kahne par bhi ek hi zid le kar kyun baithi ho??

Naina--Jo mera nahi hai..woh main apne paas nahi rakh sakti..

Raj--Tumne mujhe Rajveer samjha yaa Ranveer..isse kyaa fark padta hai?Maine tumse tum samajh kar hi pyaar kia..shaadi ki..jo kia tumko Naina jaan kar hi kia..tumne mujhe koi dhokha toh nahi dia..

Naina--Nahi..yeh ghalat hai Raj..

Raj--Naina..please..ab khatam karo..

Naina--Main bhi toh wahi keh rahi hoon.

Raj--Okay..tum karogi kyaa?Mujhse alag hona hai..fine..uske baad?Kisi aur se shaadi karogi?

Naina--Nahi..do shaadian kar chuki hoon..teesre ki khwaish nahi..

Raj--Fir?Mil jaayegi tumko shaanti?Mujhse alag reh paaogi?Aur..Appu..uske baare me nahi socha?

Naina--Usko..tum rakh lo..tum uske bina jee nahi sakte..tumhare paas rahega woh..

Raj--Yeh kyaa laga rakha hai tumne?Behoodi baatein karne lagi?Apne Bete se door hona tumko manzoor hai..fir bhi mere saath rehna manzoor nahi.. kyaa paagalpan hai Naina..?

Naina--Mujh par pahle se bahut ehsaan kar k rakha hai tumne..ab nahi.. please..

Raj--Ehsaan?Ehsaan kaisa?Maine tum par koi ehsaan nahi kia..main khud tumko har haal haasil karna chaahta tha..jis din se tumhari tasveer dekhi.. main deewana ho gaya..aur tumko yeh lagta hai k maine tum par ehsaan kia?

Naina--Main kuchh sunna nahi chaahti..

Raj--Nahi..tum is tarha meri baaton ko ansoona nahi kar sakti..

Naina kamre se chali gayi..Raj bhi neeche apne study me chala gaya..kuchh zaroori files dekhne hain..Naina se bahes karne k ilva aur bhi bahut se kaam hai..

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Appu kamre me akele tha yeh baat Raj k dhyaan me hi nahi tha..kuchh der baad yaad aai yeh baat..Raj daur k kamre ki taraf aaya..dekha Naina Appu se lipat kar so rahi hai..kareeb jaa kar dekha aankhon me aansoon k nishan hain..kaafi roi hai..Raj ko bura laga..bahut bura laga..Naina ki is haalat ka zimmedar wahi hai..Naina dukhi hai...kyunki Raj ne sachchai chhoopai..Raj is baat se inkaar nahi kar sakta...achanak se Naina ko baahon me le ne ki ek ichha jaagi Raj k mann me..

Naina ki zulfen uske chehre ko dhake hue hain..Raj ne zulfon ko hataya.. Naina ki ankhe khul gayi..Naina abhi bhi ro rahi hai..Raj ne kaha,"Kyun ro rahi ho?Kyun khud ko aur mujhe taqleef de rahi ho?"

Naina roye jaa rahi hai..Raj ki unglian Naina k zulfon k andar chalne lagi.. Naina k aankhon k aansoon uske gaalon se bahne lagi..Raj ne aansoon pochhe..Appu k ek side me sulaya Raj ne..aur Naina ko apne neeche lia.. Naina ne kuchh der k lia khud ko chhoodane ki koshish ki..par woh koshish dil se nahi kar rahi thi..Naina ne Raj ko hataya apne upar se..aur khidki k paas jaa kar khadi hui..

Naina ne apne nighty upar se apne bra k hooks khole..aur nighty k andar se bra nikaal kar fek dia zameen ki taraf..nighty kaafi transparent thi..kamre me andhera tha par baahar se chandni andar aa rahi thi..chandni me Naina ka figure prominently samajh me aa raha tha..safed nighty k andar se uska brown aur prominent nipples dekhe Raj ne..Naina ki panty bhi dikh rahi thi.. Naina ka har curve samajh me aa raha tha..Naina  doobli thi..is baat ko le kar Raj ko humesha shikayat thi..par Maa banne k baad Naina k jism me jo badlav aaya hai..Raj ne aaj pehli baar mehsoos kia..sab se pahle nazar padti hai Naina k breast par..pahle Raj ko itna achha nahi lagta tha..par Appu k aane k baad ..itna khubsurat shape bana hai iska..Raj khud ko resist nahi kar paata..Naina ki udti hui zulfon ko dekh kar Raj ka khoon garam hone laga.. khud se yehi kaha Raj ne ,"Bahut dino se theek se pyaar nahi kia..I didn't make love  properly for a long time.."..Raj ne apni shirt utaari..


Raj Naina ke peechhe aa kar khada hua..Naina k kandhe par se Naina ki nighty ko neeche kia..aur chumne laga..Raj ka haath dheere dheere Naina k nighty k andar jaane laga..Naina k pet k ird gird ghoomne laga..fir dheere dheere Naina k seene ki taraf gaya Raj ka haath..Raj ne Naina ko apni taraf moda..aur Naina k kandhe se nighty  puri tarha utaar dia..Naina k breast par Raj k honth ghoom rahe the...Raj ka ek haath Naina k left breast ko cup kar raha tha..aur Naina k doosre breast ko Raj chum raha tha..dheere dheere Raj ne Naina k nipple par apni unglian firaani shuru ki..Naina ka nipple stiff ho gaya..

Raj ne ab Naina k honthon par dhyaan dia..Naina k honth itne naram pahle kabhi nahi lage..Naina k gaalon par lage aansoon Raj ko meethe lage.. dheere dheere Raj k honthon ka pressure badhta gaya..Raj ne apni zuban se Naina ki zuban ko kaid kia..itni achhi tarha se Raj ne pahle kabhi smooch nahi kia tha Naina ko..aaj Naina jaanti hai k jo hai woh Raj hai..Raj aasaani se dil khol kar apni mohabbat ki inteha dikha sakta hai..Naina k haath Raj k peeth ko sehla rahe hain..Naina k mann me yeh baat hai..k yeh Ranveer nahi Rajveer hai..par kyaa fark padta hai?Itne dino tak issi admi k saath Naina yeh sab karti aai hai..kanooni taur par yehi Naina ka Pati hai..aur Naina k Bachche ka Baap bhi..Naina ka peeth deewar se lag chuka tha..Raj buri tarha se usko choom raha tha..uske honthon ko..uske chehre ko..uske seene ko..is tarha choomne laga..k ab Naina bolegi ,"Please..rahem karo.. chhodo mujhe.."..

Par Naina ki taraf se aisi koi baghavat nahi hui..woh Raj ko aur kareeb khinchne lagi..Raj ne jab Naina k nipple par pinch kia,Naina ne sirf itna hi reaction dia.."Ouuch.."..Raj ki himmat aur badh gayi..usne poochha.."Appu ko doodh peela dia?"Naina ne kaha ,"Hmm..peela dia..usko aaj raat meri zaroorat nahi padegi.."..Raj.."Hmm..aaj humen ek doosre ki zaroorat hai..Naina...ohh..main..bata nahi sakta..hmmm..."..Raj ne Naina k nipple ko choomna aur suck karna shuru kia..chandni me Naina ka breast aur bhi safed lag raha tha..Raj ki tadap aur badh gayi..Raj ne apne daant bithaaye Naina k breast par..Naina ne kaha ,"Raj..it's hurting..aauuch.."..Raj ne fir se Naina k breast ko cup kia..Naina Raj ko apni aur khinchne bhi lagi..aur shikayat bhi karne lagi.."Raj..nahi..dard ho raha hai.."..

Achanak Naina ne feel kia..k Raj ka ek haath Naina ki nighty ko upar utha raha hai..Naina ne haath roka..Raj nahi maana..Naina ka doosra inner wear bhi utar gaya..Raj Naina ki kamar par haath firaane laga..sirf ek nighty beech me hai..aur kuchh nahi..Naina ne kaha ,"Nahi..aisa mat karo.."..Raj itni door aa kar ab peechhe nahi hat sakta..aur naa hi woh peechhe hatega..Raj ne apne baaki k kapde utaare..Naina ki nighty bhi zameen par jaa kar geeri.. Naina deewar se lagi hui thi..aur ussi haalat me..sab kuchh hua..jisko conventionally kahte hain.."He entered hers.."

Naina paseena paseena ho gayi thi...Raj bhi..Naina zameen par se apni nighty uthaane lagi..Raj ne fir usko khinch lia apni taraf...fir ek baar paagalon ki tarha kiss kar raha tha..is baar dono zameen par the..Naina neeche thi..Raj upar tha..Raj k peeth me khoon nikal raha tha..Naina ne itni zor se pakda tha..aur fir se..hum yehi keh sakte hain,"He entered hers.."..Naina k honthon se khoon nikal raha tha..Raj k gale me bhi Naina k nakhoon choobhe the.. insaan ka nangapan itna khubsurat ho sakta hai..pahle dono ne kabhi realise hi nahi kia..aaj pehli baar..Raj ne bejhijhag Naina se pyaar kia..Rajveer ban kar..koi mukhota nahi..koi darr nahi..aaj Naina jis mard k aghosh me thi.. Naina kisi dhokhe me nahi thi..usko pata tha k yeh Rajveer hai..isse pahle itni khushi nahi mili..Raj itna satisfied kabhi nahi hua..Naina bhi nahi..humesha kuchh kumee rehti thi..

Raj ne bistar se chadar lia..aur khud par aur Naina par odh lia.Appu bistar me hi soya tha..Raj Naina k upar tha..zameen par hi..Naina k gale me apni naak ragad raha tha..kahne laga ,"Tumhare paagalpan ka yehi ilaaj hai mere paas...jab bhi jhagda karna shuru karogi..issi tarha pyaar karoonga..ghar chhodna..yaa mujhe..kabhi in sab k baare me sochna bhi mat..jahan chali jaaogi..wahi par aa kar issi tarha pyaar karoonga..main jo bhi ban kar aaya tumhare saamne..main ,main hi tha..tumhi se pyaar kia..aur kissi se nahi..par aaj main khul kar saamne aaya..Rajveer ban kar kabhi is tarha pyaar nahi kia tumko.."

Naina--Tum mujhse itna pyaar kyun karte ho?

Raj--Bas..karta hoon..wajah nahi jaanta..jaanna chaahta bhi nahi..par aaj jitna achha laga..pahle aisa nahi laga..aaj mann me koi darr nahi tha..tum pahle se zyada nazook ho gayi ho..

Naina ne aur kuchh nahi kaha...raat kab kat gayi..pata hi nahi chala..Subha Appu k rone ki awaz se Dono ki neend khuli..

 
 
 

 


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