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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 39)

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Posted: 08 January 2009 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! ==Thanks..

Raj ko finally ehsaas huya ke usne kya kiya hai aur ab usse afsos ho raha hai!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch==Natural reaction kadki!!

Thank God ab sab kuch theek hai and its safe for Naina to have the baby!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==Yes..good news..

Yeh accha hai ke darnewali koi baat nahi hai magar Raj ko thoda sabar rakhna chahiye tha!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove==Haan..par ho gaya,ab kyaa kare?

Raj soch raha hai uska pyaar toh itna khudgarz nahi tha phir yeh sab kaise huya!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy==Socha padta hai..karni ka phal hai..

Usne wakai bahut bura kiya hai in kuch maheeno mein!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry==Arre..khamokha emosional naa ho kadki..

Naina is happy about this pregnancy!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Woh toh humesha se ready hai..

She is very understanding aur usne Raj ke dil mein jo jheejhag thi usse dur kar diya!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==Hmm..true life partner..

Now both are taking care of each other and life is going fine!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Hmm..really good..

Naina naa Raj ko jasoosi karti hai naa hi usse uske business mein koi dichasbi hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile==Haan..zaroor Naina kisi kisam ka daily soap nahi dekhti..isi lia Raj par shak nahi karti.....Tongue

Raj ko ab lagta hai yeh accha hi hai magar phir bhi uske dil mein phir yeh darr ghar karne laga!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch==darrna zaroori hai..

Raj is taking a lot of care of Naina!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHow sweet!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed==Sugar ki bimaari naa ho jaaye..

Raj now got attached to his child and is sure that he will be a good father!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHow sweet!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Hmm..very sweet..

He is trying to be a good hubby and a good father taaki first time jaise fail naa jo jaye!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile==Pata hai..

Magar pata nahi jab Naina ko pata chalega tab kya hoga??Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch==Mujhe nahi pata..

I loved Raj's comment about them being approved!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOLLOL==Thanks..

Raj toh abhi bhi do teen yaa char ki planning kar raha hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue==Haan..karna padta hai..

Raj vakai bahut khush hai ke uska apna baccha uska apna khoon ab ish duniya mein aanewala hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Yes,sab ko aisi khushi hoti hai..

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 08 January 2009 at 1:47pm | IP Logged

 

 

16th May,2007.

Appu saat maheeneka ho gaya hai..yeh saat maheene pata nahi kaise beet gaye.Naina is so unpredictable.Kabhi hans rahi hai,kabhi ro rahi hai..kabhi Raj par chilla rahi hai..kabhi ghar k naukron par chilla rahi hai.Naina Appu ko le kar hi cresh jaati hai.Appu ko paa kar baaki k bachche bhi bahut khush ho jaate hain,aur Appu khud bahut khush rehta hai..beech me ek din saare bachcho ko Naina ne ghar par hi bulaya tha..sab apni apni Maa k saath aaye the..achhi khaasi picnic manai gayi ghar pe.Raj ne kuchh nahi kaha,shukar hai Naina dheere dheere samhal rahi hai..ghar chhod kar jaane ki baat tak nahi ki usne.Raj ghar par hi tha..Sunita aur Kamal bhi the wahi par..pure ghar me hungama macha dia bachcho ne..Appu ko walker par bitha dia tha..Appu usike sahare pure ghar me tahelta hai aajkal.Jo auratein aai thi apne bachchon k saath woh ek doosre k saath gossip karne me busy thi..unke bachche Raj k kandhe par chadh kar naach rahe the..Raj ko bahut achha bhi lag raha tha.

Appu apni totli zuban se "MAMMA,PAPPA." bhi kehta hai aaj kal.Raj ko apna bachpan waapas mil gaya hai.Bachpan me uski Maa guzar gayi thi, chaar saal ka tha Raj..aur Raj bhi apne Dad jaisa hi hai..akele samhaal nahi paata.. jaise uske Maa k jaane k baad uske Dad helpless ho gaye the..k kaise in dono bachchon ki parvarish karenge..usi tarha Raj bhi sochta hai..k agar Naina ko kuchh hua..yaa fir Naina chali gayi,toh Appu ko kaise bada karega?Naina toh Appu ko le kar hi jaane ki baat karti hai,tab Raj bhi kaise rahega?Raj sochta hai..k agar uski Maa zinda hoti,toh shaayad uski zindagi kuchh aur hi hoti,Raj kabhi nahi chaahta k Appu bhi doosra Raj bane,Appu ko sab kuchh milna chahie jo Raj ko nahi mila.Bina Maa k Raj bada hua hai,Appu bada hoga..apne Baap k aankhon k saamne..apni Maa k saamne,Raj apni zindagi k saare adhurepan ko Appu k zarie pura karna chaahta hai ab.

Appu kuchh bhi karta hai par Raj bura nahi maanta,do din pahle ki baat hai, Appu bistar pe baith kar khel raha tha..Raj k mobile k saath,aur paas me Raj ki zaroori file padi thi,Appu ne khinchataani shuru kar di..aur file k saare zaroori papers kharab ho gaye..kuchh khidki se baahar gaye,kuchh par Appu ne doodh ugal dia.

Naina jaldi se daur kar aai..aur dekha Appu ka karnama,Naina chidh gayi Appu par..jo bhi ho,zaroori papers the..Appu ne sab bigaad dia,Naina , "Yeh Appu bhi na..kyaa kia tune yeh?Chal aaj tujhko main bataati hoon..bahut bigad gaya hai aaj kal.."

Raj--Naina..jaane do naa..woh nahi karega..toh aur kaun karega?Main yaa tum toh aisa nahi karenge..papers hi hain..fir se ban jaayenge..tum usko mat daanto...itna chhota hai..jab bada ho jaayega..samajh jaayega..tab nahi karega aisa..

Naina--Par..Veer..zaroori kaagzaat k saath aise..

Raj--Arre..maine kaha na..its okay..Appu ne jo kia achha kia..

Naina--Main toh tumhare lia keh rahi thi..khair..ab isne sara doodh nikaal dia hai baahar..saaf karna hoga...aur bistar bhi ganda ho gaya hai..

Raj--Main Appu ko dekhta hoon..tum saaf karo..


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Sunita k kamre me Naina baithi thi..apni Maa se bahut saari baatein ki Naina ne.

Sunita--Kismatwali hai Naina..aisa Pati mila hai tujhe..

Naina--Jaanti hoon..jo Veer ne kia..main usko bhool nahi sakti..par fir bhi..do saal se uske saath hoon..ek pal k lia aisa nahi laga..k woh mujhe dhokha de raha hai,bahut pyaar karta hai mujhe,main jaanti hoon,mujhe takleef me dekh nahi paata..woh kehta hai..k mere bina reh nahi paayega..par main jaanti hoon..yeh do saal..kaise beet gaye uske saath..aisa lagta tha k jaise koi kumee nahi hai zindagi me..

Sunita--Toh kis baat ki pareshaani hai?

Naina--Mujhe aisa lagta hai..k main uske saath naainsaafi kar rahi hoon.. maine usko kabhi Rajveer samajh kar pyaar nahi kia..humesha Ranveer hi samjha hai..aur..

Sunita--Naina..tumne usse pyaar kia hai..kyaa fark padta hai..k uska naam Ranveer hai yaa Rajveer..

Naina--Mujhe fark padta hai Maa..pata nahi kyon..aisa lagne laga hai..k main usko woh pyaar nahi de sakti..jis pyaar ka woh hakdaar hai..identity crisis hai Maa..main khud sure nahi hoon..k main kyaa chaahti hoon..kyaa kar rahi hoon..

Sunita--Naina..seedhi cheeson ko is tarha pechida mat bana..itna achha ghar hai tera..itna achha insaan hai Rajveer..itna pyaara Beta hai tera..aur woh bachche..jo roz tujhse milte hain..cresh me..koi kumee nahi hai Naina..teri zindagi me..

Naina--Kabhi kabhi..yeh bhi sochti hoon..k main toh anjaan thi..par Veer toh jaanta tha sab kuchh..uske lia kitni mushkil thi yeh baat..Apne Bhai ki maut ki khabar ko is tarha apne dil me daba k rakha tha usne..mere saath rahte hue usko kitne jhoot bolne pade..main toh yeh bhi nahi jaanti k..usne kyaa kyaa jhela hai..par haalaat jaise bhi rahe ho..shuru se woh mere saath tha.. Dehradun gaya tha..mujhe le kar Mumbai aaya..mujhe ek ek baat yaad hai Maa..main usse naraz nahi hoon Maa..mujhe khud par gussa aata hai.. shaayad woh mujhe Ranveer ki maut ki khabar hi dene aaya tha..par mujhe dekh kar woh keh nahi paaya..aur main bhi usko Ranveer samajh baithi..

Sunita--Tu usse wahi samajh jo ab tak tu samajhti aai hai..duniyawalon k lia woh koi bhi ho..hai toh tera apna..Naina..zindagi sab ko doosra mauka deti hai..yeh peechhli baar Rajveer k roop me tujhe ek mauka mila tha..tu is baat se anjaan thi..ab Rajveer ko ek mauka nahi de sakti tu?Us par thoda sa bharosa nahi kar sakti tu?

Naina--Bharosa..haan karti hoon..us par kaise naa bharosa karoon..jisko mujh par itna bharosa hai..?Aapko pata hai..yeh jo puri property hai..Mumbai aa kar jo shaadi humne ki thi..uske toorant baad hi Rajveer ne mere naam kar dia tha..

Sunita--Sach?

Naina--Haan..maine mana kia..par usne ek naa suni..

Sunita--Naina..sab kuchh tera hai..daulat ki baat nahi hai..yeh zindagi jo itni khubsurat hai..teri zindagi hai..Rajveer tera hai..yeh Appu..tera hi toh hai.. kyon apna mann kharab karti hai?

Naina--Pata nahi..Maa..mujhe kuchh achha nahi lagta..

Sunita--Fir wahi baat?Chal ab..bahut hua..kuchh khaa le..tujhe davai bhi leni hai..sham ki davai bhool gayi?

Naina--Haan..main bhool hi gayi thi....

Thodi der pahle Rajveer Office se lauta hai..Naina ko aur Appu ko kamre me nahi dekha,socha Sunita k paas gayi hogi..uska andaza sahi nikla..Naina wahi par thi..Appu bistar me let kar khel raha tha..aur Naina Sunita se baatein kar rahi thi..Raj ne bahut kuchh suna..Naina jo keh rahi thi..suna Raj ne. Identity crisis..Naina ko yeh pareshaani hai..

Achanak Raj ko aisa laga..k ab raaste khul rahe hain..jo uljhane thi..sulajh rahe hain.Naina..paagal hai..woh yeh kyon nahi samajhti k Rajveer ne Naina ko usi waqt apnaya tha jab Raj jaanta tha k Naina Ranveer samajh kar Raj se pyaar kar rahi hai..fir aaj Naina ko kyon itni pareshaani ho rahi hai..?Itni si baat Naina apne muh se kyon nahi bol paai Rajveer ko?Itna hi pehchana hai Naina ne us insaan ko jiske saath woh reh rahi hai itne maheeno tak?Sirf ek sach se itna fark padta hai?Kyon padta hai fark is ek sach se?Aakhir sach itna kadva kyon hota hai?


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Raat ko Naina baithi thi bistar  me..socha Raj se kuchh baat kar le..par Raj toh interested hi nahi hai usse baat karne me..Raj Appu k saath khel raha hai..Appu Raj ka naak pakad kar khinch raha hai..

Naina kuchh der dono ko dekhti rahi..aur fir thak kar sone ki taiyyari karne lagi.Achanak Raj ki awaz suni usne..Appu ko kahani suna raha tha..

"Ek paagal ladki thi,Naina..jo bina soche samjhe hi kaam karti thi..bina kuchh sune hi react kati thi..saamnewale ki bolneka mauka nahi deti thi..apni alag hi duniya me rehti thi..pata nahi kyaa kyaa sochti thi..achanak ek aadmi aaya uski zindagi me...Rajveer..jo usse bahut pyaar karta tha..par Naina ko simple cheesen pasand nahi thi..humesha cheeson ko complex banane me usko maza aata tha..Raj usse itna pyaar karta hai..Naina ko fark nahi padta hai.. Naina ko identity crisis jo hai.."

Naina ne socha,yeh baatein toh jaani pehchaani lag rahi hai..yehi baatein toh apni Maa se kar rahi thi woh..iska matlab Rajveer ne sab kuchh sun lia hai?Yeh Rajveer ,nahi sudhrega..

Naina uth kar baith gayi..Raj k paas gayi..aur Appu ko uski goad se utha lia..bolne lagi , "Appu..Beta..kuchh logon ki aadat hai..chhup kar baatein sunna.."

Raj ne dekha maamla bigad raha hai...woh bhi khada ho gaya..bolne laga, "Naina..I am sorry..main toh tumko chidha raha tha..suno.."

Naina--SHUT UP..

Raj hansne laga..

Appu ki tabiyat thodi kharab hai...uske daant nikal rahe hain,isi lia humesha chidha hua sa rehta hai..woh chillane laga..kyonki apne Dad k saath woh masti kar raha tha..aur uski Mummy ne usko waha se utha lia..Raj ne usko fir se apni goad me lia..

Naina let gayi bistar me..Raj Appu ko lekar sone aaya..bulaya,"Naina..so gayi kya?"

Naina--Hmm..

Raj--Naraz ho?

Naina--Nahi..

Raj--Fir?Aise kyon leti ho..meri taraf dekhogi bhi nahi?

Naina--Neend aa rahi hai..disturb mat karo..pura din yeh..aur ab tum..please..

Raj--Dukh isi baat ka hai Naina..k tum mujh par bharosa nahi kar paai..itne din se hum saath me hain..fir bhi aaj mujhe yakeen dilana padta hai..apni mohabbat ka..dil ki baat tum mujhse nahi kehti..ek baar yakeen kar k dekho Naina..ek baar..dekhna..sab theek ho jaayega..I promise..

Naina--Main ab Kasme Vade film dekhne ki mood me nahi hoon..

Raj--Naina..suno toh..achha,yeh Appu aaj kal itna chidha hua kyon lagta hai?You know..aaj kal yeh tumhara Beta zyada lagta hai.

Naina--Uske daant nikal rahe hain..

Raj--Tabhi..main sochta hoon..kaantne ko kyon daurta hai..main bhi hairan ho jaata hoon..k achanak Appu me tumhari atma kaise ghoos jaati hai..

Naina--Rajveer,main faltoo joke sunne k mood me nahi hoon..

Raj--Achha?Fir..kyaa karne ka mood hai?

Naina--Sone ka..good night..

Raj--Naina..suno toh..

Naina--Good night Rajveer..

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Subha,Raj ki neend khuli toh usne dekha sab kuchh normal hai.Appu walker k sahare chal raha hai..Naina cresh jaane ki taiyyari kar rahi hai..Raj ne chain ki saans li.

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 08 January 2009 at 3:42pm | IP Logged


finally an update

i hope u and ur  net remain fine


another  happy update

mjs ke ache din chal rae hain

very nice udd

so naina ko identity crisis hai thats sad

par use raj par gussa nahi hai thats good

jaise raj ne kaha rahein khul rae hain

awesome ud anu

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Posted: 08 January 2009 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
back wid d bang..........

awesome ud...

a very happy new year to u
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Posted: 08 January 2009 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
awesome
yeh naina bhi kuch ajeeb hai
bechara raj.
update was good
update soon.............
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 2:35am | IP Logged

Hey sorry Anu,SmileSmileSmile

Mujhe time nahi mil paa raha tha .OuchOuchOuch Pad to maine liya hi tha par ab mujhe time mila to mai reply de rahi hoon.

Naina ka sochna apni jagah par sahi hai. Mujhe lagta hai ek ladki ho kar us ko ye ehsaas hona obvious hai ki jis se us ne pyaar kiya ye vo insaan nahi hai ApproveApproveApprove par shayad Ranveer se jyada pyaar Raj ne us ko diya hai aur ye baat Naina bhi maanti hai.WinkWinkWink Naina ki maa bhi sahi keh rahi hain ki Naina ka bahut khayal rakhta hai Rajeev aur apne bete ka bhi.ApproveApprove ApproveRaj ne to itna jyada pyaar kiya tha ki aate hi apni saari property Naina k naam kar di thi ab is se jyada apne pyaar ka kya saboot de vo.UnhappyUnhappyUnhappy
Raj ki bhi aadat bahut gandi hai apni biwi aur saas ki baatein chip kar sun raha tha naughty nahi to.LOLLOLLOL Vaise ek baat to hai kam se kam Raj ko ye pata hai ab ki Naina bhi Raj se hi pyaar karti hai TongueTongueTongue ye alag baat hai ki bus gusse me kabhi kuch ka kuch kehti hai  aur is k saath hi saath bahut jyada confuse bhi rehti hai. LOLLOLLOL Tabhi apne bete ko Raj apni maa ki kahani suna raha tha aur sahi keh raha tha.TongueTongueTongue
Bus ab dekhna yahi hai ki madam Naina kab Raj ko apni zindagi me vo jagah deti hai jis ka Raj vaastav me hakdaar hai.ConfusedConfusedConfused
 
update soon darling.
 


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 January 2009 at 12:24am
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 3:06am | IP Logged
that was so good finally sab kuch teekh ho raha hain loved it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 January 2009 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
wonderful ud!!!!!!!!!Clap.....thnx dat u updated wid more of d present story as i really was missing it.....i m soooo happy dat naina doesnt hate rajveer and glad dat she even admitted it and last but not d least rajveer heard all of datClapbut naina will always remain nainaAngryafter knowing dat raj has heard everything she came back to her angry self and our poor raj as always was trying to maintain peaceLOLgandhiji would hv been really happy wid him...LOLand i luv appu....he is a sweetheart...i luved that scene in which appu spoilt raj's papers and raj was den too sooooo cool about it unlike naina ofcourse.....and dat scene when raj says dat appu dese behaves behaves like naina's son....was terrrrrrrrrriffiiiiiiiic!!!!!!!!! ud soon plzzzz dont take dis much time to ud...i really misssess ur frequent uds...Cry

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