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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 31)

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Posted: 06 October 2008 at 4:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rituka7

damn cool
update soon


thanks a lot..keep reading..


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Posted: 06 October 2008 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyaa_1985

Hi!!!Anu!!!
Hope u are fine dear....Smile== I am fine..thank you..
About the update........yaar main kya kahoon????LOL==Kuchh naa kahooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,kuchh naa kahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooLOL
It has always been a pleasure to read your updates...Thumbs Up==Pleasure is all mine..
Is baar bhi it was no exception...throughly loved the whole update...ClapClapClap==thanks  a lot..
Loved the concern Raj has for Naina....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed==Must be loved the love of Raj for his love Naina..
Hope Naina reciprocates the feelings Raj has for her on day.Smile==I also hope so..
Too Good.
Continue Soon.==After Vijaya Dashami..nor enjoy my Durga Puja special fic Safar..
Take care.
 
 
 
Love
Riya.Smile
 
 
 
 
Love
Riya.



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Posted: 06 October 2008 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!==Thank you..

Aditya bimar hai badalte mausam ke wajaye se!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchThats sad!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy==yes..very sad..

Usko hamesha Naina yaa Raj ki godh hi chahiye!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueKaafi nakre hai uske!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile==haa..Raj aur Naina k saare goon aaye hain ..jo chees chahie usko har haal me pana hai..aur nakhra bhi karna hai..

Raj hi raat ko sambhalta hai usse kyunki Naina nahi soyegi toh uski tabiyat kharab ho jayegi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap==Uski duty hai yeh..

Naina ki baaton ko toh Raj ignore kar deta hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLAccha hai isse Naina zyada jhagda nahi kar payegi!!!!!Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up ==yes..is maamle me Raj bahut samajhdar hai..

Naina ne Raj ko Aditya ke sar pe haath rakhne nahi diya!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchVery bad!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove ==Very bad indeed..

Raj ne sahi kaha ke Aditya ki wajah se unka rista nahi hai balke unke pyaar se Aditya aaya hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile==Raj is always right..Tongue

[Naina keh rahi hai magar woh naa hi kehti yeh usse bhi pata hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Raj ne finally keh hi diya ke Naina ne usse nahi pehchaana jisse pyaar karti thi!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Aur ab woh Rajveer ke pyaar ko nahi pehchaan rahi hai!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch]==hmm..Naina thodi si sarfiri hai..Ouchdimaag hai uske paas..par istemal nahi karti..

[Naina ka breast milk sukh raha hai aur yeh baat bhi woh Raj se chupa rahi thi!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAur woh davai nahi leti!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Naina bahut galat kar rahi hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove]==Yes.This time Naina is wrong. Very much wrong..

Aditya injection ke baad roh raha hai aur chup nahiho raha hai toh Naina bhi roh rahi hai!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry==Yes..She is feeling very much bad for her Darling Son..

Naina bachpan se hi aisi thi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueMy God!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL==haa..problem toh bachpan se hi shuru hoti hai..

[Raj hasne laga aur usse tease karne laga!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Sunitaji ne pucha toh Naina ne kaha zehar!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLAur usse phir daat padi!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL]==Raj toh tease karega hi.. Pujjyania sasooma hi uski madad kar rahi hai..Tongue

Raj ko baccho ke baare mein kaafi pata hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==Haa..ek bachcha pahle ho nahi saka..tab se Raj bahut savdhaan ho gaya hai..Confused

Raj is just the best dad!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ClapHe is so caring!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile==yes..he is the best Dad..Dady Cool..LOL

Raj Naina ko pakad kar soh raha tha aur Naina Aditya ko!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile SmileHow sweet!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed ==Yes..He is the best husband in town also..Tongue

I hope Naina reciprocates the feelings Raj has for her soon!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile==lage rahoWink

 
 
 
 
 



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Posted: 06 October 2008 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
hi anu,
         nice ud dear.... raj is such a loving husband .... uska tarika galat tha naina ko pane ka but he truly loves naina and his child.... i liked the last part where naina wakes up in the morning and see raj holding her.... that part was very sweet.... n do take ur time and enjoy  the festival .... and happy navratri to u....
kads



Edited by kads_8302 - 06 October 2008 at 12:52pm
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Posted: 21 October 2008 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kads_8302

hi anu,
         nice ud dear....
==thanks..raj is such a loving husband ..==indeed.. uska tarika galat tha naina ko pane ka but he truly loves naina and his child.... i liked the last part where naina wakes up in the morning and see raj holding her...==hmmEmbarrassed. that part was very sweet.... n do take ur time and enjoy  the festival .... and happy navratri to u....
kads




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Posted: 21 October 2008 at 3:20pm | IP Logged






Naina uthi...bina awaz kie uth gayi..par uska haath Raj ne pakad k rakha tha.. neend me hi.Naina kuchh der tak Raj ki taraf dekhti rahi,aise me Raj ki neend bhi toot gayi.Raj ne dekha Naina bistar me baithi hai..uski shakal se saaf pata chal raha hai ..k woh kuchh soch rahi hai...Raj ki neend puri nahi hui.. abhi tak..fir bhi Raj utha..Naina k kandhe par haath rakha usne..Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha...


Raj--kyaa hua?

Naina ne sirf sar hilaya..

Raj--almost saari raat hum nahi soye..aur abhi sirf 6 hi baje hain..abhi neend toot gayi?Neend aadhi ho gayi hai tumhari..

Naina ne in saare sawalon ka jawab nahi dia..usne Raj se poochha,"Office kitne baje jaana hai ..?"


Raj--aaj mujh me dum nahi hai...I am too tired..aaj nahi jaana office..main bata doonga baad me phone kar k..achha..suno..tumhe kuchh cheques par sign karne hain...


Naina--hmm..Appu ka diper change karna hai..

Raj--ohh

Naina--main abhi aai..



Naina ne doosra diper nikala..Appu ko pehnaya..aur dustbin me used diper feka..Appu ne doodh raat ko ugal dia tha..usko doosra kapda pehnaya..aur gande kapdo ko laundry bag me feka Naina ne..Appu ko Raj k paas sula kar Naina bathroom gayi..fresh hokar nikli waha se...Raj utha..woh bhi bathroom gaya..bathroom se nikla ...dekha Naina khidki se baahar dekh rahi hai...Raj ko shak hua..Naina khadi hai..kyonki woh waha se hil nahi paa rahi hai..woh diwar par apna sara weight daal k khadi hai...Naina ko shaayad kumzori ki wajah se chakkar aa raha hai..aisa toh hona hi tha..raat raat bhar nahi soyegi ..toh aisa hi hoga..Raj ki aankhe bhi bhaari hai..uski bhi neend puri nahi ho paai hai..Raj ne Naina ka haath pakda..Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha...


Raj--chalo..sone chalo...

Naina--mujhe nahi sona..

Raj--Naina..hum kai raaton se nahi so rahe hain..aisa karenge..toh hum dono khud bimaar pad jaayenge..Appu k baare me socho...

Naina--hmmm...Veer..I feel too tired...

Raj--I know..ek minute ..main abhi aaya...



Naina baithe baithe hi so gayi thi...Raj aaya uske paas...usko leta dia bistar me..Appu Naina k paas hi leta hai..Raj ne Appu ko pillow se gaurd kia..taa k woh geer naa jaaye...subha subha Naina ka chehra bahut khila hua lag raha hai...so rahi hai..Raj ko bhi neend aa rahi hai..par woh sona nahi chaahta.. Naina ko dekh kar uska dil bharta hi nahi..




Ek aur wajah bhi hai..Raj k andar ka Pati..jo apni Patni se pyaar ki ummeed rakhta hai..jismani pyaar ki ummeed..the physical love..Naina doosri baar pregnant hai..yeh pata chalne k baad..Raj bahut zyada concious ho gaya tha..pregnancy k initial stage par hi..Raj Naina k kareeb nahi aata tha..just for her safety..Naina ki pregnancy ki baat saamne aai..tab se le kar aaj tak..Raj Naina k kareeb hi nahi aaya..kuchh haalaat aise ban gaye..aur Raj ka apna darr bhi tha..Bahut din ho gaye hain..Naina k saath..Raj ne socha tha..k waqt aane par Naina sab samajh jaayegi..par aaj kal itna jhagda hota hai..Raj bilkul irritated ho jata hai..aur aaj kal Raj bahut zyada chidhchidha ho gaya hai.. kaafi frustrated mehsoos karta hai..Raj ki apni zarooratein hain..his physical needs..par in haalaat me aisa kuchh sochna bhi bewakoofi k ilava aur kuchh

nahi..Naina par zor nahi azmana chaahta Raj..par..ab usse aur intezar nahi hota..Naina par zor daalne ki bhi zaroorat nahi..Raj  jo marzi kar sakta hai uske saath..par Raj ka zameer is baat ki ijazat nahi deta.. Naina is haalat me hain..Appu ko paida karte waqt Naina ko kaise mushkilon ka saamnaa karna pada..Naina kitni kumzor ho gayi hai..is waqt uske saath aisi harkat karna.. bahut hi sharm ki baat hai Raj k lia..


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Naina achanak se kuchh mehsoos kar rahi hai..Raj usko choo raha hai..par Naina apni aankhe kholna nahi chaahti..woh is kadar neend me hai..aur Raj ka uska itne kareeb hona..Naina muh se kuchh bhi kahe..usko achha hi lag raha hai..Raj k pyaar ki aadat pad gayi hai Naina ko..ab Naina chah kar bhi Raj ko nahi rok sakti..yaa fir woh rokna chaahti hi nahi..

Raj Naina k upar hai,uska pura weight Naina par hai,aur Raj Naina ko smootch kar raha hai..Naina k dono haathon ko..Raj ne apne haath me kaid kar k rakha hai..Raj ne kuchh der baad..Naina ko chhod  dia..Naina ki ankhe abhi tak bandh hi hai..aur uske honth abhi tak kaanp rahe hain..jaise uske hontho ko thoda aur pyaar chahie..Raj waapas Naina ki taraf jhoonka..is baar ka kiss aur bhi intense tha..



subha k 8 baj gaye the..Sunita ,Naina ko jagane aai...par darwaze par ek note chipka hua tha..Raj ki handwriting me..


"Hum dono puri raat nahi so paaye,Appu ki wajah se,isi lia..jab tak hum khud naa jaag jaaye..please..disturb mat kijiyega..aur zara mere office phone kar dena..k main nahi aa raha hoon aaj office..I am too tired.."


Sunita ne darwaze par knock nahi kia..vaakei me dono tired hain...aur Appu ko toh Naina hi doodh peelayegi..koi zaroorat nahi hai inko disturb karne ki..



kamre k andar..kuchh aur hi ho raha tha..Naina k bartav se bilkul samajh me nahi aa raha tha k itne dino tak Raj se woh kis tarha jhagadti aa rahi hai..Raj uske kareeb hai..usko pyaar  kar raha hai..Naina ko zara bhi aitraaz nahi hai is baat se..


Raj--I love you..Naina..

jawab me sirf..Naina ki ki tez dhadkan ko mehsoos kia Raj ne..aur kuchh der baad..sab kuchh shaant..Raj k honth Naina k gale se shuru ho kar kandho tak..aur fir..uske neeche..Naina  khud apne nighty k buttons khol rahi hai.. raat ko..Naina sirf nighty pahen kar soyi thi..Appu k aane k baad..Naina bina inner k hi kapde pahenti hai..Appu ko doodh peelane me aasaani hoti hai usko..

thodi der baad.. "Nahi..aaah.. Raj..nahi...please.. ab..nahi..ohh.. Maa..Raj.." ..Naina k zuban se yehi saari baatein nikalne lagi..

Raj--hmm..mm..Naina..please...I am hungry..let me satisfy myself..my hunger..

bas..Naina ne aur kuchh nahi kaha..

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dopaher k 12 baj gaye the...is bich Naina ne do baar Appu ko doodh pilaya hai...aur fir se sula dia..par ab bistar se uthna hi hoga..bahut der ho gayi hai..


Naina ko ab bahut bura lag raha hai..Raj par fir se gussa aa raha hai..is baar Raj par ilzaam yeh hai,
"Raj ne mera faida uthaya hai..delivery ki wajah se main kumzor ho gayi hoon..Raj ne usi kumzori ka faida uthaya hai.."

Raj--fir se sar pe bhoot sawaar ho gaya?abhi tak toh sab bahut achha lag raha tha..dobara,yaar,chalo..tumhare brain ka treatment sab se pahle karana hoga...

Naina--You raped me...

Raj--lage raho..


Naina--khud ko kyaa samajhte ho..?

Raj--tumse shaadi karne k pahle..is shaher ka Eligible bachelor..aur ab..main sochne samajhne k bahut upar uth chuka hoon..mera sar mat khaao..

Naina--mujhe Dehradun jaana hai..

Raj--dekh..ab main tera Pati hoon,main hi tera sab kuchh hoon..yeh tera ghar hai..aur woh tera beta ..jo maine tujhko dia hai..samhaal..zyada sar mat khaa ..already..bahut khaa chuki tu..tujhe rehna hai..toh yehi rehna hai..nahi rehna hai toh yehi rehna hai..


Naina--khabardar..mujhse tu tadaak se baat mat karna..main koi kamwaali bai nahi..tumhari Biwi hoon...

Raj--arre haan..aap toh humari Biwi hain..thanks for the information Mrs. Malhotra..aap nahi batati..toh..mujhe kaise malum hota?Thanks..

Naina--very funny..

Raj--OK..cease fire..abhi chalo..khana khaate hain..bahut bhook lagi hai..

Naina--mujhe nahi jaana..

Raj--Naina..not again..tum zid karogi..aur Appu ko bhugatna hoga..Doctor ne jo kaha..bhool gayi tum?


Naina--tum jaao..main Appu ko lekar aati hoon..

Raj--hmm..


Naina ka nature hai yaa London ka weather..kabhi baadal..kabhi beejli..kabhi dhoop..kabhi chhaaon..kabhi baarish..Raj ne socha tha Appu thoda bada ho jaaye..fir Naina ko London ghoomane le jaayega..par..Naina khud hi London ko saath lie ghoom rahi hai..Raj..tera kyaa hoga?Yaar..aaj kal Mumbai k kai businessman k ghar par phone aate hain underworld don k..ransom.. hafta.. aur bahut kuchh..khabar bhi chhapti hai..Police protection bhi milti hai..yaar.. koi aakar dekhe..Rajveer Malhotra apne ghar me lia baitha hai..barood ka dher..aur yeh Appu..kitna achha hai..kaun kahega..k Naina iski Maa hai..ek Maa hai..jo Raj par ilzaam lagane k chakkar me hai..sara ghar sar me utha kar rakhti hai..aur beta...kitna shaant ..susheel..humesha doodh peeta hai..aur sota hai...koi jhamela nahi karta...bilkul Raj par gaya hai..uska Beta...



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Posted: 21 October 2008 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
awesome
too good
update was fabulous
update soon...........
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thnx for updting......

it was fabulous

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