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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 3)

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!

Kahani shruru hui!!!

Bechara Raj....uske saath hamesha galat hua!!!Uske papa ne bhi Ranveer ki shaadi karwani chahi Nattasha se!!!!!Poor him!!!!

Responsible beta banne ka kabhi usko koi faida nahi mila!!!! Cry Cry Cry

I hope Naina gets well and the baby too!!!!

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwwww
too good
tomar sab story amar favourite
darun story
different
u rocked
but poor Raj Cry Cry poor Naina Cry Cry Cry
excellent story
plz continue soon
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 1:44am | IP Logged
its 2 good.cont soon........
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 3:58am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!

Kahani shruru hui!!!

Bechara Raj....uske saath hamesha galat hua!!!Uske papa ne bhi Ranveer ki shaadi karwani chahi Nattasha se!!!!!Poor him!!!!

Responsible beta banne ka kabhi usko koi faida nahi mila!!!! Cry Cry Cry

I hope Naina gets well and the baby too!!!!

Raj ek baar hi selfish bana..jab usne Naina se shadi ki..Raj bahut dukhi hai..Naina ko samajhna hoga..

 

and Naina ki haalat thik nahi..dekhte hai doctors kyaa kahte hai..

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 10:00am | IP Logged

2001 me BHU ka annual function..

Banaras..Indian Culture ki prishtha bhumi..sangeet..aur sahitya ka shaher..

aaj is shaher ka dil ek naye Gayak ne jeet lia..

koi Ranveer Malhotra  hai...

awaz me woh jadoo..woh gehrai....hall me baithe ek ek admi ka dil jhoom utha....

Ranveer hall se bahar nikal raha tha..

aise me ek ladki ne autograph manga..

"hi..I am Naina Agnihotri..BHU me hi student hoon..Hindi ki..1st year.. autograph please,,,"

Ranveer ne dekha..ladki ko..umar maximum 18 baras..

baal khule hue..ek khadi ki kurti pahni hui..aur ek faded jeans..haath me rudraksh ki mala bangle jaise pahni hai ladki ne..gale me bhi rudraksh..

all over a girl..with a cool and hippie look..

Ranveer ne dekha kuchh der...

Naina--hello..autograph!!

Ranveer--yaa sure..

Naina--thank you..

Ranveer--Banaras ki rahniwali hain aap?

Naina--nahi..main hostel me rehti hoon..mera ghar hai Dehradun..

Ranveer--achha..ghar me kaun kaun hai?

Naina--mammi aur papa..

Ranveer--ok..here is your autograph..

Naina--thanks..bye..

Naina bhaag kar chali gai waha se..

1 hafte baad fir mulakat hui..library me..

Naina padhai kar rahi thi..

Ranveer--namaste..

Naina--namaste..baithite..

Ranveer--bahut dhyaan se padh rahi hai aap..

Naina--haa..aap to yeh par Music me Masters karne aye hai na?

Ranveer--hmm..

Naina--kaha se aye hai aap?

Ranveer--Mumbai se..

Naina--ghar me kaun kaun hai?

Ranveer--Meri maa jab hum 4 saal k the..tab chal basi..ab sirf dad hai..aur mera bhai hai.. ..Rajveer..

Naina--achha..woh kyaa karte hain?

Ranveer--usko business me zada interest hai..is lia dad ko assist karta hai..

Naina--aur aap yeha music sikhne aye hai..good..

 

Naina kuchh der baad boli..ab mujhe chalna chahie..dosto ne aaj ghumne ka plan banaya hai..

Ranveer--main aapko aapke hostel tak chhod doon?mujhe thoda walk karna hi..

Naina--ok..chalie..

Ranveer--aap humesha aisi Hippie ban k rahti hai?

Naina--it looks cool..you know..

Ranveer--yaa I know..well..achha hai..par yeh rudraksh ki mala..bas aapke haath me ek chhillam ki kamee hai..varna aap pura Zeenat Amaan lagti..Hare Krishna Hare Raama ki..

Naina--thanks for the complement..actually..yeh malaye bahut bhaari hai.. bhagwan na kare..kabhi agar musibat me fansu..to dushman par waar karna asaan ho jata hai..

Ranveer--to fir mujhe aap se dushmani nahi karni..yeh mala se agar mujhe maar padi..to main gaya..

Naina hans padi....

Ranveer--friends?

Naina--yaa..friends..


"Raj,
     aaj meri dosti ek ladki se hui..bahut achhi hai..sab me hokar bhi sab se alag hai..bejhijhag sab bol deti hai..bahut saaf dil ki hai..Naina naam hai uska..Naina Agnihotri..B.A. ki student hai..1st year ki..umar yehi koi 18 baras..I know mujhse 7 saal chhoti hai..par kyaa fark padta hai..Raj..pahle kabhi maine aisa mehsoos nahi kia..aab jake maine jana k actually main kyaa chaahta tha..Naina ko jab dekhta hoon..to aam ladkion ki tarha lagti hai..par khaas hai woh..aisa nahi k main uske bare me biased hoon isi lia..nahi ..jab tu usse milega tab tu bhi samjhega k main kitna sahi tha..sach kahoon to ghar chhod k mera bhi dil nahi lag raha tha Banaras me..par ab dil lagane ki wajah mil gai hai mujhe..Naina..uske dil ka haal janne me waqt lagega..par main jaan lunga zaroor..
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            With lots of Love,Ranveer."


Raj ne yeh khat padha..hmm..bhai saab aaj kal dil lagane me busy hai..achha hai..aur sirf Naina ki baatein..kyaa hai yeh Naina..actually jab insaan pyar me hota hai na..tab chudail bhi pari lagti hai..Ranveer ka haal bhi kuchh aisa hai.. bull shit.

Raj ko aur bhi kaam hai..Banaras jane k ilava..Raj ko agle hafte Bristle jana hai business k silsile me..


dheere dheere Naina aur Ranveer ki baatein bhadhi..aur mulakatein bhi...

Ranveer khush tha Naina k sath..

Naina khush thi..kyonki is shaher me koi aisa tha..jo kabhi bhi uski madad k lia aa sakta tha..

dekhte dekhte 3 saal beet gaye...

Ranveer Mumbai nahi lauta..par in 3 saalon me..Rajveer ko bahut letters aur email bheje..har mail me Naina..

Rajveer pareshaan ho jata tha..adhe mail to bina padhe hi delete kar deta tha..

ek din Ranveer ne puchha.."Naina..ab padhai to puri ho gai..ghar jaogi to kisko miss karogi sab se zada.."

Naina--naturally...tumko..

Ranveer--I don't want to miss you..

Naina--to?

Ranveer--mujhe yehi par Music Teacher ki naukri mil rahi hai..saath me fellowship bhi..kyon na tum bhi mere saath raho..

Naina ne sar jhuka lia.."kaise?"

Ranveer--shadi karogi mujhse?

Naina chup..

Ranveer--kyaa hua..jawab do..

Naina chup..

Ranveer---tumne haa nahi kaha..ok..no problem..

Naina--maine naa bhi nahi bola..

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Rajveer ne bataya k Ranveer Banaras me hi Music k lecturer k post me naukri karega..aur wahi pe ek ladki se shadi kar k rahega..

yeh sunkar uske dad aag bababoola ho gaye..itni badi himmat..itna bada faisla akele kar lia Ranveer ne..

Nahi..agar Ranveer aisa karta hai to uske lia is ghar me koi jagah nahi..ladki k ghar walo se nahi mila..aise kaise shadi kar lega??

 



Edited by yakkudimag - 12 August 2008 at 2:39am

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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 11:02am | IP Logged
aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesum one indeed...naina ka character sketch bhaut accha hai.. Tongue really a amaaazing update..thanks di for this sweet part...
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
intresting
too good
update asap
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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