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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 28)

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Posted: 13 August 2008 at 4:28am | IP Logged
really nice
Raj ke dad ki diary pad kar Naina emotional ho gayi aur confused bhi
i think vo dairy hi bhanda fodegi
plz update soon

yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 August 2008 at 5:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

really nice
Raj ke dad ki diary pad kar Naina emotional ho gayi aur confused bhi
i think vo dairy hi bhanda fodegi
plz update soon


keep reading...sab pata chal jaayega..Wink
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Posted: 22 August 2008 at 6:18am | IP Logged
hi,
     great ud.... n i not commented for last few ud's so sorry for that.... but u r great writer... b/c all ur ud are very nice n one thing for which i appreciate u is that u writing 3 fics together n ud thm regularly... n all r my fav...
bye kads

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Posted: 26 August 2008 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kads_8302

hi,
     great ud.... n i not commented for last few ud's so sorry for that.... but u r great writer... b/c all ur ud are very nice n one thing for which i appreciate u is that u writing 3 fics together n ud thm regularly... n all r my fav...
bye kads



thanks for the comment..keep reading
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Posted: 26 August 2008 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Natasha ki shaadi bahut dhoom dhaam se hui...

Naina gai thi..Raj kisi wajah se jaa nahi paya....

actually woh jaan boojh kar nahi gaya..kyonki Natasha aur uske Parents Raj ko pehchaan jaate..fir mushkil ho jaati...


Naina ne bahut masti ki...

Natasha ki Maa se baat hui..


"humne toh socha tha..k Natasha shaadi k lia maanegi hi nahi..Ranveer se mangni ki baat hui..par woh finally maan gai.."


Naina--jee..actually..Ranveer k kismat me main thi..Natasha is too good for Ranveer..uske lia main hi thik hoon..


"nahi..Rajveer shaadi karna chaahta tha Natasha se..humne bhi chaaha tha.. k Natasha Rajveer se shaadi kar le..par Natasha maani hi nahi...Rajveer India kab aayega
?"

Naina--usdin baat toh hui thi..Natasha maan jaati toh achha hota..I think Raj dukhi hai..isi lia India ana nahi chaahta..


"khair..Ranveer kyon nahi aya shaadi me?"

Naina--ata toh aap bahut khush hoti?Natasha usko dekh kar disturbed hoti..achha hai..waise bhi woh Delhi gaye hain..achanak kaam nikal aya..


"tumko bura nahi laga..jab tumko Natasha k bare me malum pada?"

Naina--bura kyon lagega..aisa toh hota hi hai..gharwale kai jagah par rishte ki baat chalate hain..toh...isme bura maannewali kyaa baat hai?


"kaafi samajhdar ho..kaash..Natasha bhi is baat ko pahle samajh jaati..."



Naina--nahi..woh samajhdar hai..isi lia toh zindagi me aage badh rahi hai..aur ek taraf se achha hi hai..Ranveer ko pasand karti thi..Rajveer se shaadi karti.. kuchh jhamela zaroor hota..yehi thik hai..Natasha ka Pati bhi..bahut achha hai...

"tum batao...tumko bura nahi laga tha..jab Malhotra Saab ne tumko apni Bahu maanne se inkaar kia tha..?"

Naina--aapko kaise pata?

"humare dost the..Ranveer k bare me bata rahe the..k kaise usne tumse achanak shaadi kar li.."

Naina--haa..actually..it was a sudden decision.its ok..Dady ab rahe nahi..so.. no hard feelings..aur jaha Ranveer..wahi main..wahi mera ghar..wahi mei duniya..Ranveer saath hai..toh..Mumbai..yaa Delhi..ya fir Banaras...I really don't mind..its doesn't make any difference to me..

"tum dono ki shaadi ko kitnne din hue?"

Naina--Banaras me ek baar shaadi ki thi..aur Mumbai me aakar Court Marriege bhi kia..Banaras me shaadi hui thi..Mandir me..pichhle saal k September me..aur Mumbai me party hui..December me...aap log toh aaye nahi...

"Ranveer ne humen nahi bulaya..."

Naina--kyon?

"actually..baat yeh thi ..k ..humne bahut bhala bura kaha tha..usko..jab usne Natasha se shaadi karne se inkaar kar dia tha..humen bhi samajhna chahie tha..pasand-napasand dotarfa hota hai..agar Ranveer ko Natasha pasand nahi..toh isme harj kyaa hai?zabardasti toh rishta jood nahi sakta..aur hum logo ki hi wajah se Malhotra Saab ne akhir tak Ranveer se rishta tode rakha.. we are very sorry about that..naa hum utni jali kati baatein sunate..naa unko itna gussa ata...."

Naina--ab jo hua so hua..unsab baaton ko bhool jaaiye..

"par agar Ranveer ata ..toh humen achha lagta..."

Naina--woh baad me mil lega aapse.......

"tum log kya do hi ho abhi tak?"


Naina--jee..ek baar..ho chuka hai..but..meri kismat kharab..accident hua..aur.. abhi..kuchh socha nahi iske bare me..

"oohhh..jaldi se doosra bachcha le lo..tumhare lia achha hai.."

Naina--nahi..Doctor ne hi mana kia hai..

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Natasha ki shaadi ho gai..Natasha shaadi kar k India se baahar hi chali gai..

Raj k lia bahut aasaan ho gaya sab kuchh...Natasha ka agar is ghar me ana jana rehta..toh mushkil ho jaati..Raj k lia..



Raj apne kaam me masroof ho gaya..Naina apne Cresh k bachcho me kho gai..par uske paas..ek chees thi..

woh thi Malhotra Saab ki diary ki photocopy..waqt milte hi padhti thi Naina..


"12th May,2001..

aaj laut aya Raj,MBA complete kar lia usne,main bahut khush hoon.. Ranveer se bhi yehi ummeed thi..par us ladke ko apni marzi k aage kuchh dikhta hi nahi..khoon paseena ek kar k..maine is Empire ko banaya,aur janab ko Music se foorsat nahi..maine hi bigaad k rakha hai..aur ek Raj hai... meri mehnat ko samajhta hai..mere naam ko aage badhane k lia..woh har mumkin koshish karta hai..MBA kar k aya hai..aur aate hi Office jaane laga hai..kabhi kabhi darr lagta hai..k kya Raj meri baatein bahut zyada maanta hai?

itna bhi aggyakaari hona thik nahi...Ranveer jo meri koi baat nahi maanta.. Rajveer..jo meri har baat bina kahe samajh jata hai..aur us baat pe fauran amal karta hai..Raj ka dil bahut naram hai...Nirmala k saare goon aaye hain.. Nirmala bhi bina kahe meri baat samajh jaati thi..Nirmala ne beta bahut achha dia hai mujhe..par is Ranveer ka main kyaa karoon?abhi inko jana hai Banaras..kyon?yeha par kyaa problem hai..Sangeet sikhne jana hai...mera dimaag kharab kar dega yeh ladka..."


Naina padh kar hansne lagi...

page Palta..


"2001,16th October..

pehli baar..Rajveer k saath Ranveer nahi hai..janamdin par..Rajveer kuchh kehta nahi hai..par usko bahut kharab lag raha hai,...main samajh raha hoon.. mujhe bhi kharab lag raha hai...Ranveer nahi hai mere paas..."


next Page..

"2004,15th October...

Ranveer gaya haath se...shaadi kar raha hai..pata nahi kisse..ghar ki izzat ka zara bhi khayaal nahi hai usko...main us ladki ko apni Bahu nahi maanta..."


Next page,

"2004,18th October..

ek nayi pareshaani,Ranveer ko kyaa zaroorat thi,apni Patni ki tasveer bhejne ki?us ladki ki tasveer dekh kar..Rajveer us par aashique ban gaya hai ...din raat usike khayaalon me khoya rehta hai..main samjhna chaahta hoon usko.. k yeh ghalat hai..par yeh ladka samajhta hi nahi,zid pe ada hai,humesha meri baat maanta tha Raj..par aaj itna belagaam ho jaayega.. mujhe malum nahi tha..mujhe Raj k junoon se darr lagta hai.."



is Page par Naina ki ankhe atak gai...

Raj usse pyaar karta hai?Ranveer ka Bhai hai woh..apne Bhai ki Patni se pyaar karta hai?!!


ab Naina soch me pad gayi...

kya yehi wajah hai..k Raj Mumbai se chala gaya hai?kya isi lia?Raj Naina se pyaar karta hai?isi lia..woh ghar ana nahi chaahta ?


Naina k hosh hi udh gaye..


Naina ghar aai...Veer tha ghar pe..


Veer--aaj ka din kaisa tha?

Naina--bahut achha..

Naina yeh soch rahi hai..k Ranveer ko pata hai..k ..Raj..Naina se pyaar karta hai?

Veer k sawaalon ka jawab nahi de paa rahi hai thik se...

udhar Raj soch raha hai..Naina k bare me..


Naina ko kyaa hua hai?


Naina apne khayaalon me ghoom si hoti jaa rahi hai..Raj se usne phone par hi baat ki hai..par Raj ki baaton se kabhi usko aisa nahi laga k..

yeh mamla kyaa hai?

Naina ko bura lagne laga..k woh wajah bani..itne saare baaton ki..Bete aur Baap k bich k tension ki...Bhai se Bhai door hua.


ab Rajveer ko waapas lana hai..usko samjhana hai...k ...kisi achhi ladki se shaadi kar k..apni zindagi ko ek sahi disha me le jaaye..

Raj soch raha hai..k Naina ko ab sach bata hi de..par sach sun kar Naina kaise react karegi isi baat ka darr hai Raj ko..usko kabhi maaf nahi karegi Naina..


2005 guzar gaya...2006 aa gaya..

par Naina ki bechaini khatam hi nahi hui..Rajveer ghar nahi lauta..diary se aur kuchh pata bhi toh nahi chal raha hai..jitna usne padha hai..wahi tak khatam...

shaayad uske baad..bahut bada bawaal hua hoga is ghar me..k Sasoorjee ko diary likhne ka waqt nahi mila hoga.


par aisa kyaa ho gaya tha..jis wajah se  Rajveer ghar chhod kar hi chala gaya..bahut kuchh sochna hai..

Naina soch rahi hai Ranveer se baat karegi is baare me..par kaha se huru kare..kuchh samajh me nahi aa raha hai..






Edited by yakkudimag - 20 September 2008 at 12:37am

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Posted: 26 August 2008 at 9:58am | IP Logged
that was supperb
plz continue
 
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Posted: 26 August 2008 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
wow
too good
great
what a update
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Posted: 27 August 2008 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!
 
Raj is clever!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileWoh bahana banake Natasha ki shaadi mein nahi gaya!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveWarna zaroor pakda jata!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy
 
Naina ko akhir uski sasoor ki diary ki photocopy se pata chal hi gaya ke Rajveer usse pyaar karta hai aur woh pareshan ho gayi!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch
 
Waise Raj wakai mein bahut aggyakaari beta tha!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWoh bhi apni maa ki tarah apne dad ki saari baatein bina kahe samaj jaata tha!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAur unhe puri bhi karta tha!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileJab ki Ranveer ne hamesha apni manmani ki hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove
 
Lekin jab baat Naina par aayi toh woh zidd pe adhda huya tha aur koi baat nahi man raha tha apne dad ki!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue
 
Naina ab Raj ko samjha kar wapas lana chahti hai!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedAur yeh bhi soch rahi hai ke kya yeh baat Veer ko pata hai yaa nahi!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused 
 
Raj bhi soch raha hai ke Naina ko ab sach bata de magar darr raha hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Smile Smile
 
Naina ki pareshani khatam hi nahi ho rahi hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused ConfusedPata nahi ab woh kya karegi!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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