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Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 (Page 26)

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Posted: 05 August 2008 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
thats a nice a update............
 
the way they slowly overcame their misunderstanding............its very nicely written
and sahi pyaar mein ky akya karna parta hai.......ek banda ko double role karn parta hai, but jaise tumne kahan pang aliya hai toh uska nateeza bhi bhugatna parega......
 
 
really nice update

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Posted: 06 August 2008 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Hey Anu ,
Superb update.Clap
Raj kitna caring n sensiour hai na.Star
Vo bhi Naina se door nahi reh paa raha hai isiliye aisa behave kar raha hai.Wink
I just love him.Embarrassed
Naina bhi kitna tense thi Raj k behaviour se isiliye pata nahi kya kaya soch liya.Angry
Raj ko bhi na jaane kya kya karna padta hai Naina matlab apne pyaar ko bachane k liye.Cry
 
Meri ek shikayat hai Anu tujh se.Confused
Tu mere reply par comment nahi deti hai .Ouch
Agar aacha nahi lagta hai to bol.Shocked


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 06 August 2008 at 4:26am
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Posted: 06 August 2008 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hey Anu ,
Superb update.Clap
Raj kitna caring n sensiour hai na.Star
Vo bhi Naina se door nahi reh paa raha hai isiliye aisa behave kar raha hai.Wink
I just love him.Embarrassed
Naina bhi kitna tense thi Raj k behaviour se isiliye pata nahi kya kaya soch liya.Angry
Raj ko bhi na jaane kya kya karna padta hai Naina matlab apne pyaar ko bachane k liye.Cry
 
Meri ek shikayat hai Anu tujh se.Confused
Tu mere reply par comment nahi deti hai .Ouch
Agar aacha nahi lagta hai to bol.Shocked


honey..is forumm me..mere likhe ..5 fics hai..

TCM khatam ho chuka hai..baki hai Talaash...Shadi hui aur Fir..aur Mere Jeevan Saathi..aur Prince & His kohinoor..

readers ko chahie lamba lamba update..usime mera stamina chala jata hai..

any ways..maine aajkal sab k comments k reply dena shuru kia hai..Talaash me dia hai ..tumko reply..

thanks a lot for your comments.



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Posted: 06 August 2008 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by yakkudimag

Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Hey Anu ,
Superb update.Clap
Raj kitna caring n sensiour hai na.Star
Vo bhi Naina se door nahi reh paa raha hai isiliye aisa behave kar raha hai.Wink
I just love him.Embarrassed
Naina bhi kitna tense thi Raj k behaviour se isiliye pata nahi kya kaya soch liya.Angry
Raj ko bhi na jaane kya kya karna padta hai Naina matlab apne pyaar ko bachane k liye.Cry
 
Meri ek shikayat hai Anu tujh se.Confused
Tu mere reply par comment nahi deti hai .Ouch
Agar aacha nahi lagta hai to bol.Shocked


honey..is forumm me..mere likhe ..5 fics hai..

TCM khatam ho chuka hai..baki hai Talaash...Shadi hui aur Fir..aur Mere Jeevan Saathi..aur Prince & His kohinoor..

readers ko chahie lamba lamba update..usime mera stamina chala jata hai..

any ways..maine aajkal sab k comments k reply dena shuru kia hai..Talaash me dia hai ..tumko reply..

thanks a lot for your comments.


thanks Anu ki aapne apna keemati waqt nikal kar comment ka reply diya.Wink
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
pls cont soon
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 10:05am | IP Logged
intresting fic
great going
update asap
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Posted: 12 August 2008 at 4:38am | IP Logged
October,2005..

Raj apne Office k kaam se Nasik gaya hai..

Naina k paas koi kaam nahi..

usne socha..k Ranveer ko surprise dena hai..ghar ka decoration change kar k..jab Ranveer aayega..tab woh chauk jaayega...

painters ko bulaya Naina ne...bedroom..hall pura ghar paint karvana hai usko..


"Madam..woh kamra toh bandh hai..usko paint nahi karvana??'

Naina ne dekha..sach me..us kamre ki taraf kabhi uska dhyaan hi nahi gaya.. yeh kamra uske sasoorjee ka kamra hai..

Naina ne chaabi dhundhi..par mila nahi..usne tala tudva dia..

aur andar gai....


kamra kaafi bada hai..

"Bahujee...yeh kamra paint karna hoga?"


Naina--haa..karva do..

Naina ne diwar par ek photo dekhi....uske sasoorjee ki photo...life size photo ..usme haar chadha hua hai..kamra dekh kar aisa lagta hai..k saaf safai hoti hai  aur haar dekh kar lagta hai..k regularly haar bhi badla jata hai..kaun karta hai yeh sab?

almari bhi hai ek..Naina ne usi kamre me almari ki chabi dhundhi..aur bistar k niche mili chabi..

Naina ne almari kholi...waha se usko ek diary mili...


Diary hai 1976 ki..

Naina ne dekha bahut kuchh likha hua hai...


"16th February,1976..

main aaj bahut khush hoon..Doctor se abhi abhi pata chala k Nirmala Maa banne wali hai..meri khushi ki koi seema nahi hai..Main baap banne wala hoon..maine aur Nirmala ne yeh ummeed hi chhod di thi..k humare ghar kabhi koi bachcha hoga..Nirmala ne mujhse kaha k main dusri shaadi kar loon..par nahi..Nirmala k ilava ..kisi aur se main pyaar nahi kar sakta..akhir kaar woh din aa hi gaya..Nirmala bhi bahut khush hai..usko kaafi sukoon mila..varna ..andar hi andar usko yeh ghum khaaye jaa rahi thi ..k woh mujhe bachcha nahi de sakti..bas..ab aur kuchh nahi..mujhe parvaah nahi..k Beta ho ya Beti..jo bhi ho..thik thaak ho..aur Nirmala bhi sahi salamat rahe..shaadi k 8 saal baad Maa ban rahi hai..darr lag raha hai..par uski khushi dekh kar darr ghayab sa ho jata hai.."


Naina ne itna padha..ok..toh uski saas ka naam Nirmala tha..hmm..aur..

Naina ne next page dekha..


"20 July,1976

Nirmala ki haalat dekhi nahi jaati..zara sa chalne ki koshish karti hai..aur thak jaati hai..Doctor ne yeh bataya hai..k ho sakta hai..2 bachche ho..judwa..mere lia ek hi kaafi hai..Nirmala ki takleef..mujhse bardasht nahi hota..pata nahi ..woh kaise jhelti hai..."


Naina ki ankhe gol ho gai..JUDWA!!..

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"16th October,1976..

9 maheene guzar gaye..fir bhi Nirmala ko labour pain jab nahi hua..tab main darr gaya tha..par ab darr ki koi baat nahi..aaj subha hi Nirmala ne mere beto ko janam dia..haa..Judwa hi hai..they are twins..aur sab se achhi baat..koi abnormality nahi..aur Nirmala bhi thik hai..khushi k maare uski ankho me ansoon aa gaye the...sirf roye jaa rahi thi."


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"26th October,1976..

Nirmala aaj bachcho ko le kar ghar aai..ghar me ujala ho gaya..jo itna paisa maine kamaya..uske asli hakdaar aa gaye..mere dono bete..dono dekh dekh kar..man nahi bharta..itne pyaare hain..Nirmala ki shakal paai hai dono ne.. kahte hai..Bete ki shakal Maa jaisi ho toh..Beta lucky hota hai..ummeed hai.. yeh dono bhi bahut kismatwale honge..dono ka naam bhi soch lia hai.. RANVEER aur RAJVEER.Malhotra khandan k dono Waaris."



Naina ki ankho k saamne andhera ho gaya..Rajveer aur Ranveer Judwa hai!!!

usne page palta..


"1979,17th October..

bahut dino baad..almost 3 saal baad..main diary likh raha hoon..kal dono ka janamdin manaya..3 saal k ho gaye dono..bahut badmaash hain..par meri asli jaan inhime atki hui hai..Nirmala din raat inke pichhe bhaagti rehti hai.. kabhi dono kaanch ki shishi todte hai..kabhi kapdo par ink ki bottle fekte hain... Nirmala ko pareshan kar k chhoda hai..main dekhta hoon aur hansta hoon.. jab Nirmala pareshaan hokar..dono ko peetne aati hai..dono mere pichhe chhup jaate hain..pure ghar me afra tafri macha rakhi hai..mere dono beto ne.. pata nahi..jab bade honge ..toh yeh shaher bhi sahi salamat rahega k nahi..

  ek baat hai..Nirmala k lia shayad yeh dono hai..par..mere lia ek hi hain.. mere ek hi khoon k katre se bane hai dono..ek hi saath duniya me aayen.. chalna sikha..bolna sikha..ek hi pyaar k..nishani k dono roop hai..Ranveer aur Rajveer..dono ek hi hai.."



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"1980,23rd November..

ab main kyaa karoon?zindagi bhar ka saath dene ka wada kar k..Nirmala aise kaise jaa sakti hai?usko aisi kaun si jaldi thi?kyon jaldi me road cross karne gai?car se ek dhakka mara kisi ne..aur ek jhatke me..sab kuchh khatam.. hospital le jaane ka mauka tak nahi dia kisiko..woh itni kumzor kaise pad gai? main toh akela reh gaya..ab inko kaun samhaalega?main kaise bada karunga in dono ko..mujhe daantna nahi ata..mujhe khayaal rakhna nahi aataa..main Baap ban kar hi khush tha..ab yeh Nirmala ki jagah main kaise loon..mujhse hoga yeh kaam.??.dono sirf 4 saal k hain..inko kaise samjhaaonga ..k inki Maa kaha gai?..dono puchhte hain..k Maa ko kyon le gaye.?.kandhe par?.. aur Maa kyon nahi aati hai?..main kyon rota hoon?...kyaa jawab doon inko?"



Naina ki ankhe laal ho gai thi yeh sab padhte padhte..

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"22 September,1984

agle maheene inka janamdin hai..dono 8 saal complete karenge...par maine socha tha..k dono ek jaise hain..par ab inka fark mujhe samajh me aa raha hai..Ranveer..apne hi khayalon me khoya rehta hai..apni Maa ko yaad karta rehta hai..kaafi waqt laga indono ko ..yeh samajhne me..k ab inki Maa kabhi nahi aayegi..Ranveer apni Maa k tasveer k saamne khade ho kar rota hai..

par Rajveer alag hai..woh mere goad me aakar baith jata hai...mere ansoon pochhne k lia..mujhe nahi pata tha..jo din bhar school me Ghunda bana firta hai..jiske naam par har hafte complaint aati hai school se..woh itna sensitive bhi ho sakta hai..maine socha tha..Ranveer zyada sensitive hai..par main ghalat tha..Raj kisi k saamne apne ansoon dikhata nahi..par dard uske mann me bhi utna hi hai..anyways..dono hi mere hain..bas dono khush rahe..main yehi chaahta hoon..Bhaiyon k bich bahut pyaar hai..hona hi chahie..yeh pyaar rahe humesha..aur kyaa chahie mujhe?"




Naina ne diary bandh kar li...naukar bula raha tha..

Naina ne diary apne paas rakh li..

kamra paint kar dia gaya tha..Ranveer 3 din baad aayega..uske pahle yeh diary padh kar..Naina ko waapas almari me rakhna hai..ho na ho..Ranveer us kamre me jata hai..usko agar diary nahi milegi..toh pata nahi kyaa karega..



Naina ko itna toh pata chal gaya..k Rajveer Ranveer ka judwa bhai hai..par Ranveer ne yeh baat kyon nahi batai usko?

Ranveer k irade kyaa hai?

kyon nahi chaahta Ranveer k Rajveer India me aaye..usko Mumbai se door kyon rakhna chaahta hai?kyaa Ranveer akele hi Malhotra Empire pana chaahta hai?

Naina bahut zyada confused ho gai..


usko dusri baatein bhi pareshaan karti hai..

kamre k diwaro me ..jo uski tasveeren hai..woh toh Banaras ki hai..Ranveer ne kab li yeh tasveeren..aur agar usine khinche the..toh Naina ko kyon nahi bataya?




raat ko bistar me let kar..woh fir se..diary padhne lagi..par uska mann nahi lag raha hai..abhi diary padh kar kuchh samajh ne k haalat me woh nahi hai..

agle din subha woh uthkar..sab se pahle Market gai..puri diary ka xerox nikala usne..aur diary ko jakar usi kamre ki almari me waapas rakh aai..

itni jaldbaazi me woh diary nahi padh sakti..




Ranveer ne bataya..k  usko lautne me waqt lagega..aur 2 din..

ek ladki aai..ghar me..


Naina--yes..


"I am Natasha..."


Naina--kahiye..


Natasha--jee aap?

Naina--main..Mrs. Ranveer Malhotra..

Natasha--ohh..Ranveer ne aap se shaadi ki hai?

Naina--jee..aap ki taarif?


Natasha--main,I am a family friend,mere dad aur Malhotra Uncle bahut achhe dost the..actually main itne din thi Paris me,mujhe khabar mili..k Uncle is no more..main isi lia aai hoon..

Naina--ap khadi kyon hai?baithiye..

Natasha--thanks..Rajveer kaha hai?

Naina--woh toh abhi Canada me hai..Dad ki maut se upset hai..isi lia..woh business Ranveer k hawale kar k..ghumne gaya hai..

Natasha--well..Raj se meri  shaadi ho jaaye..aisa humare gharwale chaahte the..par ho nahi paai...

Naina ko case interesting laga...

Naina--khul kar bataiye..

Natasha--actually..mujhe Ranveer zyada pasand tha..par..


Naina--okk..

Natasha--I hope you don't mind..

Naina--not at all..Ranveer hai hi itna dashing..koi bhi fida ho sakti hai..its cool..

Natasha--yaa..par..main Raj se maafi mangna chaahti thi..aur..meri shaadi ho rahi hai..main usika card dene aai hoon..

Naina--Raj shayad..nahi aa payega..but..main Ranveer zaroor aayenge.. promise..

Natasha--thanks..

Natasha se bahut saari baatein ki ..Naina ne..Rajveer ,Ranveer aur Natasha k bachpan k bare me..



Natasha niklane hi wali thi..achanak saamne Raj aa gaya..

Natasha--Raj..tum..kaise ho?


Raj bhi itne dino baad Natasha ko dekh kar..pareshaan aur hairan ho gaya..

Naina--helloo..yeh Raj nahi..yeh Ranveer hai...

Natasha--well..main get up se dhokha khaa gai thi..anyways..Ranveer...meri shaadi hai..tum dono ko ana hai..


Raj--ok..

Natasha chali gai...

Naina Ranveer k paas aai.."toh tum dono twins ho..Rajveer aur Ranveer.."

Raj--Natasha ne bhanda fodh dia?achha khasa surprise miss ho gaya...

Naina ne kuchh der socha..fir kaha.."hmm..bhanda toh bahut kuchh ka foot chuka hai..woh Natasha ne tumhare lia..Raj ko thukraya..hmm..Ranveer...tum kabab me haddi bane..Raj aur Natasha k bich...shayad isi dukh se Raj India chhod kar chala gaya..kyon?"

Raj--hmm..kuchh aisa hi hai,main bahut thak gaya hoon..main nahane chala..

bathroom me gaya Raj..shower k niche khada raha..baat toh Naina ne sahi kahi..

Ranveer hi humesha raaste ki rukavat bana..chaahe ..Natasha k mamle me ho..yaa Naina k mamle me...


 


Edited by yakkudimag - 13 August 2008 at 1:21am

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Posted: 12 August 2008 at 6:35am | IP Logged
I must say bahut majedaar update tha. Clap
Naina ko kaafi kuch pata chal gaya diary se Rajveer aur Ranveer k baare me.Wink
Abhi to main turning point baaki hi hai.Confused
Tab Raj kaise kya face karega.Shocked
Naina ne bhi Raj ko accha dilao maara ki bhaanda to bahut cheejon ka foot chuka hai.LOL
Raj k dad us ko hi jyada maante the, ye to tha hi.Big smile
Par mujhe nahi pata tha ki Raj gundagardi karta tha.Angry
Hota hai aisa ,jo dekhne me jitna seedha dikhta hai;vi vaisa hota nahi hai.Wink
Raj ab kya new plan sochega Naina ko ghumane k liye.Ouch
 
Natasha ko bhi abhi aana tha.Angry
Khair vo kahawat hai na ' Bakre ki mai kai din khai manai'.LOL
Sach to pata chalna hi hai kabhi na kabhi.Cry
aur pata chal bhi jaayega.Dead
Raj ne jo bhi soch kar aisa kiya.
Naina ka bhala ho gaya ye sach hai.Smile
Jab Natasha dhoka kha gayi to Naina kya hai?Shocked
Ranveer bhi bechara kabab me hadii ban jaata tha.LOL
 
update asap.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 12 August 2008 at 6:43am

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